MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143 - Page 33

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey just read the ff at a go...... awesome concept!!.......really loved it!!...... the story so far is amazing!!.....do update soon!!
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Mayank was sitting on the bed........ he was doing his work on laptop.....

Nupur entered from the door.....tears were still coming out of her eyes.....she looked at Mayank.....

Mayank looked up at Nupur......

As Mayank looked up.....Nupur looked down and started wiping her tears.....

Mayank didn't noticed that Nupur was crying or she was hurt.......

Nupur quietly came and sat on one side of the bed.....her back was towards Mayank.....she was upset with what happened few minutes before.....she moved back to comfort herself on the bed.....while doing this her arm brushed with Mayank's arm but she didn't realized that......

Mayank turned to Nupur and held her arm softly and pulled her towards himself.....he cupped her face within his hands and brought his face closer to her and was about to kiss her when Nupur remembered Mayank's rude behaviour towards her and flicked his hands......

Nupur wanted an apology from Mayank on the other hand Mayank only "wanted" Nupur......

This time he held her arm tightly and again pulled her. Nupur this time fell over Mayank's chest and Mayank lied back on the bed.......

Nupur was looking into Mayank's eyes.....she wanted to get lost in them. Her heart was saying yes and her mind was reluctant to respond to this situation.....

Mayank's hand reached to Nupur's back.....Nupur was still looking into Mayank's eyes....her heart was trying to make her believe that Mayank is SORRY for what he had done and Nupur was a girl who would first listen to her heart and then to anything else........

The song is from Nupur's POV......if you want you can listen as lyrics go very well with the situation......

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,

Mayank moved his face closer to Nupur and placed his lips over hers and kissed them…..Nupur closed her eyes…….this time her heart over ruled her mind……she thought "Yes Mayank loves me"(Pyar hai shayad)


Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..

Nupur was completely lost in Mayank's grip……she was gasping, Mayank's grip became more passionate and warm…..

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..

Mayank turned Nupur over on the bed. his fingers were running through the curves of Nupur's body…Nupur held Mayank's shoulder more tightly……

Kuch saaz hai jaage se jo the soye,
Alfaaz hai, chup se nashe mein khoye,
Nazrein hi samjhe yeh guftagu saari,
Koi arzoo ne hai angdayi li pyaari,

Each and every touch of Mayank was letting Nupur believe that Mayank loves her more than anything but this was her misunderstanding, Mayank didn't loved her, he only wanted to satisfy his lust…….


Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,
Naa inkaar hai, naa iqraar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad…

Nupur was losing her senses within Mayank's grip…..his grip was getting tighter and tighter….

Kehna hi kya, mera dhakal naa koi,
Dil ko dikha, dil ki shakal ka koi,
Dil se thi meri ek shart yeh aisi,
Lage jeet si mujhko, yeh haar hai kaisi,
Bukhaar hai, kyun beqraar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,

Lights were closed and two different people with two different intentions were there together because they were bound in the relation of matrimony…….


Jadoo sawar hai, naa ifteyaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,
Pyaar hai shayad..

Ooo..
Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Haii..
Ra ra re…na na na
Ra ra ra ra..
Na re na..
Pyaar hai shayad
Pyaar hai shayad
Yahi….

Next morning……

Nupur was there in Mayank's grip…..she slowly opened her eyes….in front of her eyes she saw Mayank sleeping calmly……she slowly got up from the bed and placed a pillow below Mayank's arm….

She smiled remembering the last night and then went from there…..

In evening when Nupur was all alone in the house…..

Nupur went to open the door when door-bell rang….to her shock instead of Mayank, RV was standing on the door…..

"Tu Nupur hi hai na" RV said breaking the gap…

Nupur didn't knew him so she narrowed the opening of the door and asked him "Aap kaun"

"Arre mere ko andar toh aane de….main Mayank ka dost hoon…wo aa hi raha hoga" RV said

Nupur didn't wanted to believe him so she said "Wo abhi hain nahin aap baad mein aaiyega"

"Tumhaare hi kaam ki baat hai….tumhaare uss pati ki sacchayi hi bataani hai" RV said arrogantly

"Kya bakwaas hai…mujhe unke bare mein sab pata hai" saying this Nupur tried to shut the door but RV stopped her to do so….he pushed the door and entered inside

Nupur became a bit afraid "Aap….aap andar kaise aa rahe hain…..aap bahar jaaiye"

But RV was adamant, he wanted to bring Mayank's identity in front of Nupur….

"Tera pati….wo Mayank…..saala sabse bada gunda hai…..underworld ke liye kaam karta hai….."

Nupur interrupted in between with her trembling voice "Aap job hi keh rahe hain mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha….aap please jaaiye yahaan se"

RV stepped towards Nupur "Main bakwaas nahin sach keh raha hoon"

Nupur stepped back due to fear…..her hand striked with a flower vase at the table…..Nupur gained some confidence and tightened her grip over the vase, then she brought it in front and tried to warn RV "Yahaan se jaaiye….mujhe kuch nahin sunna"

And in fear she bumped the vase onto RVs head….some blood started coming out from his forehead…..he became more arrogant "Saali…..itni der se tamee se samjha raha hoon samajh mein nahin aata…ab dekh main kya karta hoon"

Saying this RV stepped towards Nupur and ripped off the sleeve "Ab samjah mein aayega"

He tried to molest Nupur…..

Nupur was crying in fear "Please mujhe chod do….yahaan se jaao"

Nupur was completely frightened she was feeling helpless, crying for help……

There was no one to listen to her…not even a single bird was there to hear Nupur's cry…..

But there was someone for Nupur's rescue……

In a moment there was Mayank who pulled RV by his collar and punched him hard on his face….

He saw Nupur who was there shattered, scared and was crying…..

He was too protective for her….he pulled RV from the floor and again punched him "Bhaag jaa yahaan se…main tera moonh nahin dekhna chahta….teri himmat kaise hui yahaan aane ki"

Mayank threw him out of the house and closed the door and came inside….

Nupur ran towards Mayank and hugged him tightly….she felt very protected within her husband's grip….

For Mayank this was a different feeling…..this time he felt something different….this hug had a different feeling…..Mayank responded to the hug and embraced Nupur slowly and caressed her hairs and he just said "Ab sab theek hai….main hoon na"

Bohot late ho gaya na update karne mein....par main kaam se bahar gayi thi aur aaj 1 July ki tayaari bhi karni thi.....koi baat nahin ab update kar diya hai bataana kaisa laga.....waiting for ur comments
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Posted: 15 years ago

yipee i m the first one to comment 😃

superb update Daksha!
finally mayank has started feeling something
its becoming more interesting
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
Edited by Favouriteofall - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
i was so lost in the part
awesome
i loved tht Mayank has started feeling differently
thanks for the pm

love
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow. Im so glad i saw this FF. Coz its really amazing. Its very different. I read this part twice already..:P Loved every bit you know..their love-making scene..Nupur under false beliefs and Mayank very cruel. And the RV part was a shocker. God. But my Mayank...awww! 😍 So nice! And im so glad hes feeling the feeling of LOVE! ❤️
Pls jus write longer parts! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Amazing update Daksha....
I'm so glad you updated this FF
its getting interesting ...
do cont soon
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
hmmm ... very interesting ... this was beautiful and yet very scary ... frankly i am very scared of this mayank ..... but waiting for the next part ... finally he has started feeling something ....

p.s - do update 'kyun' as well .... :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
i was so waiting for this!

Awesome awesome update!

Enjoyed it...finally mayank feels something for her!

Eagerly waiting for the next update..ye dil maange more!

Akansha
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update Daksha :) finally Mayank felt smethin different!!!

waitin for the nxt update to cme soon :D

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Shruti :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Goodness Daksha....This Mayank is getting on my nerves and Nupur is so damn innocent... but atleast now, she will come to know of Mayank's true nature.. hopefully...
Dhasu update!!!!

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