hi i m avi..this is my first topic on forums.
After watching the first confrontation of sajan after 3 years..i heard this song and decided to write a song sequence on sajan…..the song is bin tere from I hate love stories….i hope all like my sall attempt…its not tht gud but my frend aashi(aashizin) told me its gud and told me to post it on forums so I m doing tht…thanks ashi for considering this gud.
After confrontation…..samrat is very sad and devastated after hearing from his chashmish tht her chashmish whom he loved and the chashmish who loved him...died when nupur took last breath….those words were ringing in his mind like church bell and paining him a lot…and the song starts in background.
Lusty lonely coz you're the only
One that knows me and I can't be without you
Lusty lonely coz you're the only
One that knows me and I can't be without you
(he is walking on the road completely lifeless...he is feeling nothing remained in his life for which he can live now...his chashmish for which is is craving for long 3 years is angry on him and dont wanna be with him…..and he is walking by lake and sam sings song....watching at the two love birds sitting in the bench...and thinking abt gunjan.)
Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
(he is walking and remembering his times with chashmish...how he first met her in pool...how they became frends..they broke friendship bcs of bet...thn he becoming her secret frend...thn on valentine day they give their frendship the new name...as best frends...how they shared best freindship....everytime anyone in trouble other one is always thr to help her or him...how they fall in love...how blissful was their love...full of pure...thy dont need to tell their feelings to each others...only their eyes can say many words...they can feel their feelings for each other.)
Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali
Hai meri lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali (lusty lonely)
(but after the confromtation...he is feeling the void in his life...like his life support is taken away by someone,,,his chashmish...doesnt even wanna look at him...without chashmish how he lived these 3long years..only he knows how painful is to away from his love)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)
(without chashmish...this life is empty...he is craving for his love to come bsck to him...who is away bcs of the mistake he made 3 years ago...he wanna share her grief...her pain..wanna share his pain with her...but now no noe is thr...he is alone on his path of life.)
Ajnabi se huye kyun pal saare
Yeh nazar se nazar yeh milaate hi nahin
Ik gani dehaayi cha gayi hai
Manzilein raaston mein hi gum hone lagi
Ho gayi ansuni har dua ab meri
Reh gayi ankahi bin tere (lusty lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)
(why god done this to him...he know he done the big mistake and hurt his loved ones...but wht punishment he got is not wise...he lost all his loved ones..who were his life...now everything feels new to him...like he got some new life whr thr is loneliness...anger..guilt..pain...but no love...his chashmish dont want to meet him..dont wanna see him..whn he asked did she ever loved him thn she will turn...but she didnt...did she has no love in her for him...tht feeling is hurting him...and even though he seen his chashmish after so long time...but instead of happiness he is sad....whtever he says...even though he pleads to her..she not wanna hear anything from him...he is walking and crying remembering the memories of him with chashmish...he comes to accident place and stands near the cliff and remembers tht fatal accident...which snatched everything from his life....he falls on his knees and crying remembering the past.)
(here on other side in one room someone is crying with photoframe in her hand...who is she...its gunjan...looking at portrait of all the four...sajan and mayur....she is keeping tht frame close to her heart and remembering the confrontation...and sings)
Raah mein roshni ni hai kyun haath choda
Iss taraf shaam ne kyun hai apna muh moda
Yun ke har subah ik bereham si raat ban gayi
Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali khaali
Lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali (lusty lonely)
(she is thinking why destiny has done this to her...why tht accident happened...why her di left her...she was the only one whi was close to her heart...she was like her mother...bcs of this accident she lost her...and she hated samrat...she told this to him today but telling tht also she was feeling inside very pain...how can she say those harsh words to sam...her true love...whom he loves more thn anything....why this all accident happen...she was happy with her love...she engaged to her soulmate...but this accident snatched everything...)
(now both sings at different places…samrat sitting their near accident place and gunjan in her room.)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere .. lusty lonely ..
(can this broken parted souls will be together….we just hope they come together soon.)
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