song sequence on sajan..:)

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hi i m avi..this is my first topic on forums.

After watching the first confrontation of sajan after 3 years..i heard this song and decided to write a song sequence on sajan…..the song is bin tere from I hate love stories….i hope all like my sall attempt…its not tht gud but my frend aashi(aashizin) told me its gud and told me to post it on forums so I m doing tht…thanks ashi for considering this gud.

After confrontation…..samrat is very sad and devastated after hearing from his chashmish tht her chashmish whom he loved and the chashmish who loved him...died when nupur took last breath….those words were ringing in his mind like church bell and paining him a lot…and the song starts in background.

Lusty lonely coz you're the only

One that knows me and I can't be without you

Lusty lonely coz you're the only

One that knows me and I can't be without you

(he is walking on the road completely lifeless...he is feeling nothing remained in his life for which he can live now...his chashmish for which is is craving for long 3 years is angry on him and dont wanna be with him…..and he is walking by lake and sam sings song....watching at the two love birds sitting in the bench...and thinking abt gunjan.)

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai

Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai

Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

(he is walking and remembering his times with chashmish...how he first met her in pool...how they became frends..they broke friendship bcs of bet...thn he becoming her secret frend...thn on valentine day they give their frendship the new name...as best frends...how they shared best freindship....everytime anyone in trouble other one is always thr to help her or him...how they fall in love...how blissful was their love...full of pure...thy dont need to tell their feelings to each others...only their eyes can say many words...they can feel their feelings for each other.)

Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali

Hai meri lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali (lusty lonely)

(but after the confromtation...he is feeling the void in his life...like his life support is taken away by someone,,,his chashmish...doesnt even wanna look at him...without chashmish how he lived these 3long years..only he knows how painful is to away from his love)

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)

Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)

Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)

(without chashmish...this life is empty...he is craving for his love to come bsck to him...who is away bcs of the mistake he made 3 years ago...he wanna share her grief...her pain..wanna share his pain with her...but now no noe is thr...he is alone on his path of life.)

Ajnabi se huye kyun pal saare

Yeh nazar se nazar yeh milaate hi nahin

Ik gani dehaayi cha gayi hai

Manzilein raaston mein hi gum hone lagi

Ho gayi ansuni har dua ab meri

Reh gayi ankahi bin tere (lusty lonely)

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)

Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)

Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)

(why god done this to him...he know he done the big mistake and hurt his loved ones...but wht punishment he got is not wise...he lost all his loved ones..who were his life...now everything feels new to him...like he got some new life whr thr is loneliness...anger..guilt..pain...but no love...his chashmish dont want to meet him..dont wanna see him..whn he asked did she ever loved him thn she will turn...but she didnt...did she has no love in her for him...tht feeling is hurting him...and even though he seen his chashmish after so long time...but instead of happiness he is sad....whtever he says...even though he pleads to her..she not wanna hear anything from him...he is walking and crying remembering the memories of him with chashmish...he comes to accident place and stands near the cliff and remembers tht fatal accident...which snatched everything from his life....he falls on his knees and crying remembering the past.)

(here on other side in one room someone is crying with photoframe in her hand...who is she...its gunjan...looking at portrait of all the four...sajan and mayur....she is keeping tht frame close to her heart and remembering the confrontation...and sings)

Raah mein roshni ni hai kyun haath choda

Iss taraf shaam ne kyun hai apna muh moda

Yun ke har subah ik bereham si raat ban gayi

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai

Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali khaali

Lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali (lusty lonely)

(she is thinking why destiny has done this to her...why tht accident happened...why her di left her...she was the only one whi was close to her heart...she was like her mother...bcs of this accident she lost her...and she hated samrat...she told this to him today but telling tht also she was feeling inside very pain...how can she say those harsh words to sam...her true love...whom he loves more thn anything....why this all accident happen...she was happy with her love...she engaged to her soulmate...but this accident snatched everything...)

(now both sings at different places…samrat sitting their near accident place and gunjan in her room.)

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)

Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)

Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere (lusty lonely)

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere (lusty lonely)

Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere .. lusty lonely ..

(can this broken parted souls will be together….we just hope they come together soon.)


i hope u like my work...if not sorry for disturbing.....if u like tell me hows it by commenting..

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Contradiction01 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yay !!
me first..!!
teri ff mein ya kisi bhi cheez mein shayad main pehli baar first aa rahi hongi..
lol..
mera gud luck aaj !!
haan toh aaj zayada bakwwas nahi..
bahut kaam kiya hai maine..2nd thread post kiya hai..n all..
so direct aaj short song seq..
it was so touching..
so luved it..
i like more of the sad n romantic pieces so..
i'm jus speecehless..
the song wich u used..
so gud..
kaun si movie ya album ka hai..bata dena..
i wanna download it !!
okay !!
plzz do write more n more like this types !!
thanks for giving me the link first !!
tc..
*radz*
Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey avi first of all superb yar loved it u deserve standing ovation for this 👏 👏 wow you made me santy with ur this topic the way you portrayed pain of sajan was marvellous loved it to the core yar and song suits so much in this situation while reading this i was visualizing this scene u rock keep it up and thanks for pm 😃 😃
Edited by aashizin - 15 years ago
lucario thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx

res

edited=)
yay !!
me first..!!
teri ff mein ya kisi bhi cheez mein shayad main pehli baar first aa rahi hongi..
lol..
mera gud luck aaj !!
haan toh aaj zayada bakwwas nahi..
bahut kaam kiya hai maine..2nd thread post kiya hai..n all..
so direct aaj short song seq..
it was so touching..
so luved it..
i like more of the sad n romantic pieces so..
i'm jus speecehless..
the song wich u used..
so gud..
kaun si movie ya album ka hai..bata dena..
i wanna download it !!
okay !!
plzz do write more n more like this types !!
thanks for giving me the link first !!
tc..
*radz*

hehehe...acha hai tuzhe mera chota creative work acha laga...and u come second time first in any of my creations...waise tuzhe yaad nahi ye song..tune to uss film ka poster bhi laga diya hai tere dp mai...its bin tere song from i hate love stories...listen to it and read it again...u will love it more.😊😊😊...b/w commented on ur second thread.....waise bohot achi baate kahi hai mere bare mai tune....😊😊😊😊...dekh lunga kabhi to tuzhe....😛😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey the song was amazinggggggggg and it really suited sajan👏👏👏 too good and really fantastic!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing song selection and well described
really amazing😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Avi!
LoVeD the OS!
Could Imagine it all...n yeah the song is beautiful..suits our SaJan and their current situation...
I so wanted to read a sad OS or plain angst!
thanx for the PM.

Keep Writing!

Luv
ZeeJay!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WoW 👏 👏 👏 .
Bohot jiyada achcha tha Bhai.
I am feeling proud ki mera bhai itna achcha likhta hai . [:D/]
Aap ne song bohot achcha chuna hai.
Loved it . 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb song selection and it was really very touching.......
loved it..... 😊
Contradiction01 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucario

hehehe...acha hai tuzhe mera chota creative work acha laga...and u come second time first in any of my creations...waise tuzhe yaad nahi ye song..tune to uss film ka poster bhi laga diya hai tere dp mai...its bin tere song from i hate love stories...listen to it and read it again...u will love it more.😊😊😊...b/w commented on ur second thread.....waise bohot achi baate kahi hai mere bare mai tune....😊😊😊😊...dekh lunga kabhi to tuzhe....😛😛

lol,..
ab ahcha hai toh taarif bhi toh karungi..😃
lol..i don't remeber yaar..
i'm getting forgetful !!😆
actuaaly maine abhi tak yeh song suna hi nahi hai..
so i dunno..
n download bhi nahi kiye gaane..
lol..😆
yeah..i'll listen it sum day !!
waitng fior the movie !!😃
lol..haan haan dekh lena..
ek toh achchi baatein likho..
upar se dekho toh iss ladke ko..
uff..tera kuch nahi ho sakta !! 😆

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