Fan Fiction : Oneshot - Moment in time

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Moment in time


She couldn't help but stare at his side view. The side view that she has probably blindly seen many times but somehow this time it was different, the whole atmosphere was and the aura that they both were giving off was deviant.

Even though it was another stuffy night she couldn't help but to shiver. Shiver because of this unknown fondness inside her that she was unable to fathom. She was thrown of guard with his lenient behaviour towards her, somewhere in the back of her head she knew this wasn't the first time and somehow he had always been cautious of his behaviour towards her. But she was too blinded by hatred to acknowledge this and yet it still made no sense to her why his words had such an impact on her, that it made the corner of her mouth twitch, into a small smile.

He too was somewhat feeling a mixed of emotions, but his were truly stronger and more open than hers. In that moment he could have sworn that his heart completely stopped as he noticed her shy smile from the corner of his eye. Was that why he could feel his palms getting sweaty or maybe it was the weather.

Heck, he knew why, all of a sudden it had gotten harder to breath and why he could sense the sweat on the back of his neck sliding down his back. He was in deep, real deep now. This moment right now said it all. That was why he couldn't help but take quick sheepish glances at her.

She wasn't in the best of state today and he could tell, her hair was tangled from the countless times she had tried slaying it, her eyes were swollen and bloodshot from all the crying she had done but right know they had a spark and Krishna was unable to describe what it was as it made him speechless and content, which was what mattered. He lowered his eyes and noticed her pink, thin lips were trembling, surely not from the cold he thought, noticing how dry her lips were.

"Is she that depressed that she had to take it out on her lips," he thought to himself not being able to imagine how much her lips must sting.

She had caught him, caught him staring at her. Krishna embarrassed that he was caught instantly turned to the other side not even bothering to notice that she was doing the same thing as him right now. Staring at his side view and somehow noticing things that she never had before.

Pratigya's eyes started to examine Krishna ever so shamelessly. She wondered why she had never noticed that he had quite long, thick, hair that actually suited him pretty well as not many men are able to pull that style off, lowering her eyes she came across his eyes which were a deep brown, she didn't even know that his eyes were such a brown that you can get lost in. Continuing down and noticing his small sharp nose and full, plum lips, which made her quite jealous as her lips were rather thin and any girl would be content with such beautiful lips but what she couldn't help staring at was his fine, sharp jaw line that was very sleek and..

He had caught her, caught her staring at him this time, both of them guiltily tried to avert their eyes as a slight blush crept on both of their cheeks. This just showed that tonight somehow both of them found themselves closer to each other than they ever had since their wedding and right know words weren't necessary to explain their feelings at that moment in time.





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After watching last weeks episode I couldn't help but writing this, though I started it on Friday I almost gave up on but today I was all set to finish this which is why its very shot for a oneshot. Criticism is welcomed, I hope you guys enjoy this fanfic. Please excuse the grammar mistakes.

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Shabz. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww, loved the one shot.😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was superb and awesome. u did a very good job. i like it very much.u have very well explained he whole situation and their feelings .plz docontinue with some more one shots.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey sweeta... U just described dem in the best way... loved it yaar... awesome...⭐️⭐️ Please do continue with some more OS s. loveeeeeeed it..rather lubbbbed it 👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg i absolutely luved it...u shud write some more chapters 2 this 😍 xxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh wow!!That was beautifully written👏👏👏.Lovely one shot.It expressed pretty much everything tht KriYa would have felt that night😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you all for the nice comments, will surely, try, and write more one shots. 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This was so amazing, lubbed it 🤗👍🏼

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