If only.......A MayUr OS....!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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HI guys,saw yesterday's Mayank scenes on YT.my sis said dat Mayu has stopped drinking coffee n hence thought of watching.after d scene wid Gunjan just thought 2 write dis OS.itz a sad one basically.do give ur precious comments.they mean a lot. 😊

Mayank had come back from college quite earlier today.after dat incident wid dat girl Riya,he felt choked n cud not stay at Excel nemore then.Gunjan had told him 2 forget it n relax,but he simply cudn't.It had been a direct accusation,a direct insult 2 his love,his Nupur.how cud dat girl evn think of it.it may b just a prank for her,but,for him, it tore at his heart.IF ONLY Nupur wud hav been wid him,he wud have got nothing 2 do wid all these,the students,Excel
they won't let me live wid my memories too nowHe thought.he thought of their love,their pain,their small moments of togetherness,their Paradise,nd now-the paradise was lost.!!!

he had been so lost in his thoughts that he didn't realize that he was hungry,n thirsty too.he wud make some tea n then will cook the dinner.
he got up n went 2 d kitchen to make tea.LO,d tea container was empty!!oh..he remembered,last night only he finished wht was left.so,chai not possible.He remembered,how had Nupur said it-dodh ubal raha tha,ubalte-ubalte gir gaya,so,chai not possible!!!how ironic was all dat.evrything,evry single thing,trivial ones brought her back.well,she has never left him actually.his heart knows it.something fell into d tea container.he looked down-his tears.He never stopped them.he had never done dat for d past 3 years.for d world he had moved on,for d college,for d ppl outside,but for his Nupur,he knew,he can never.

He wavered off his thoughts. what was there then??COFFEE.well,he dredged up wht was left of d tea container to make tea.he wud never touch coffee now.NEVER IN HIS LIFE.he went back 2 his room wid wht he called as tea n was rummaging thru his study table when he saw a Mayapari.he sat wid dat.it was nt d magazine.it was d one he had gifted her-d one having their pictures pasted over film stars.how she had loved it!!it had been his first gift 2 her.
His house echoed wid her memories.True,she kept her word.she didn't let Death come near him.she fulfilled her promise,like d true spirited Morena girl she had been always.he felt he had failed miserably.oh..d pain was excruciating.


The whole gamut of emotions went thru him-the bitter regret of lost happiness,the irresistible desire 2 possess his Nupur,d immediate despair at knowing dat he cannot do so nemore now and d struggle in his heart between passion n loss,desire n reason.it was too tough for him.IF ONLY,he cud just hold her once n tell her how much did he loved her.!!!

IF ONLY,by a miracle,she wud come back!!
He listened 2 his heart, remembered her words n let her voice,her memories wash over him.

He fell asleep.





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guys,plzz do comment....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yeah me the first

it was touching yaar
lovely
loved it to the core
awesome
do write more of such os
i really love your work
love
sneha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was amazing
it was so cute
i loved it like anything
mayank's pain was so clear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its very touching deblina well done u have dn a gr8 job and thx alot for the pm love u for that
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww, Debz.... It is beautifully written. I loved how you described how every little thing reminds him of her. She truly is everywhere.
i is very well written Debz, it brought tears to my eyes.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnxx sneha for liking.actually-duno why-was sitting n studying n suddenly i just remembered d pain n it made me cry-hence dis pain.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@mahima n zarfishan di-thnxx for loving it..will write agian.

daania,of course nupur is everywhere!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was really too good.............
it is very touching.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alini-mayur

it was really too good.............

it is very touching.............



thnxx alini fr liking it... 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was very much touching dear..........

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