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ashu

@ashluvdmg

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

js nw done wid the story....!!bright n new concept...!1

u deserve 2 win....n luvd the song...!!its beautiful...!

gr8 work gal

hope 2 c more 4rm u...!

crazy ashu

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg
js nw done wid the story....!!bright n new concept...!1
u deserve 2 win....n luvd the song...!!its beautiful...!

gr8 work gal

hope 2 c more 4rm u...!

crazy ashu

Glad to know u felt like reading and enjoyed reading it.. u liked the concept and felt it deserve dthe prize makes me feel happy.. yup actually its a a r rehman song. and i love it too.. thanks for ur kind words of encouragment.. 😊

Bhoomi

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

heyyy bhoomi
another amazing short story
really liked the way girl made the guy understand that life can not always be perfect
ur stories always give some message
nd after reading ur story m so much impressed that ur thoughts have made their way in my thoughts too

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
heyyy bhoomi
another amazing short story
really liked the way girl made the guy understand that life can not always be perfect
ur stories always give some message
nd after reading ur story m so much impressed that ur thoughts have made their way in my thoughts too

Hi Seema,

This is oneof the best compliment i could ever get. I always felt my skill my writign may nto be very good i still feel i am immature in my work but I alwyas write as i want to share my thoguhts with other s and how i look at charcters havign certian situations and their way fo dealgin when readers liek u appreciate those thoguhts make sme feel very very good.. my thoguhts paved way itno ur thoguhts make sme feel so special now.. thanks for appreciating my thoguhts and feelgin they were good enoguh to be shared..

yes this story came in a moment time and am glad u all enjoyed this small piece.. tc

Bhoomi

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palak

@pluks

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

heya!!

awsum story!! really!! loved it :)

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: pluks
heya!!

awsum story!! really!! loved it :)

Hi ,

glad that u liked this story.. thanks for commenting.. tc

Bhoomi

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

hey i loved ths story.......it really deserved to win....awesome storyline n very very romantic ..!!.. truly loved it 😊

Edited by charming.angel - 15 years ago

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: charming.angel
hey i loved ths story.......it really deserved to win....awesome storyline n very very romantic ..!!.. truly loved it 😊

HI Fatima,

glad that u liked this story..this story always make me feel i should write a short story like this one.. but dont know when i will .. aww u feel i deserved to win for this story.. thats so sweet of u.. glad u felt reading this romantic.. it had moments in it..simple n sweet.. feels nice it touched u.. tc

Bhoomi