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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: killerkinrul

aWWWWW Priya very nice chapter aise hi darr rahi thi its so beautifull written dear i just loved

my cute,Hottie Ranvir wow
And shy Ragini lovely these two make brilliant jodi
thanku for one more beautiful ff on our Awesome RAGVIR
Waiting for next chapter

hay sweety main nay kab yeh likha ha KAY tum aysay hi ro rahi thi.........let me think.....
anyways thanx 4 ur compliment.........
ranvir is really very nice but dont forget he is a boy😉😉
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wow can'tt wait , think a very sweet innocent lov story is going 2 com
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I LOVE BIDAAI PARIVAAR 🤗THEY R JUST MARVELLOUS ❤️
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Very sweet update dear. Very soon I will post my comment here😃
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Chapter 2

Ragini arrived at home and saw that everybody was getting ready for the party."Mom ap kahan ja rahi ho?",asked ragini surprisingly "beta main nahi hum ja rahay hain tumharay dad ki business party par",she replied."Main nahi chal rahi .....",ragini interrupted."Par kiyon beta?"Bus nahi jana dil nahi kar raha ...!Mom ap Dad ko bata dayne .Par tumhain jana ho ga ,kushi replied."Mom!u know mujhay parties achi nahi lagteen."Beta par yeh to business party hain ,anyways man keh doon gi!"kon nahi jana chahta party par n wo bhi maray saath ,ragini n kushi heard a voice from the back.They both turned and saw , it was Priya.Ragini was so happy to see her and ran to hug her.Tu nay mujhay kiyon nahi bataya kay tu aaj ah rahi hai,asked ragini.Kya sweetheart tujhay bata dayti to surprise ka maza kaysay ata.By the way aaj Hostel mein aik party thi jis ki waja say dari ho gai warna main to morning mein hi ah jati.Acha ab tum dono behnain wahan hi batain karo gi ya mujh say bhi mari Pari milay gi!Oh Mom !priya ran to hug her mom.She kissed her on her cheek and asked her where her dad was?Tumharay Dad !!!wo rahay apnay room mein jao mil lo.She was so excited .Priya jumped and went to the room . YEh kabhi nahi sudhray gi,kushi said to Ragini.But Mom is ka yehi bachpan hi to isay itna innocent and sweet banata hai. Haan ,kushi replied.Acha ragini tum chal rahi ho na?Nahi MOm !Kiyon kya hoa ?University mein kuch hoa hai kya?Itni bojhi bojhi si lag rahi ho!Nahi Mom uni mein to much nahi hoa bus waysay hi thak gai hoon !Tori dair rest karoon gi to frsh ho jaoon gi!Agar tu nah gai to is ka matlab hai kay Priya bhi nahi jai gi is ka matlab tumharay Dad aur mujhay hi jana paray ga !Anyways Agar ap chahin to app Priya ko lay kar ja sakti hain Mom!Na baba na!tumharay baghair to wo kahin nahi jai gi!Yaad hai jab usay Hostel bhayja tha to kaysay roti thi taray liyeh!Logoon ko un ki Ma ki yaad ati hai par yeh larki taray bina .....ji hi nahi sakti.Ragini smiled.Main chahti hoon kay tum dono ka pyaar aysa hi rahay,kushi had her hand on ragini's head and blessed her.They both smiled.Acha Mom agar ap ko kuch chahiyeh to batayeh ya koi help main abhi kar dayti hoon !Nahi beta to ja kar aram kar main kar loon gi,she replied.Acha main nay taray liyeh khana bana diya hai mujhay lag raha tha kay tu nahi jai gi...kiyon kay mostly tu nahi ati hamaray saath isi liyeh.Agar kuch aur khana hoa to Ramo kaka say keh kay banwa layna,Theek hain.Main khud hi bana loon gi MOm kya is choti si cheez kay liyeh kaka ko kahoon gi.Thori kam mujhay bhi karnay diya karain.OKay jaysi tumhari parzi.Ragini and kUshi walked towards their room.

Pc was knoting his Tie infront of the Mirror.SUna tha larkiyaan ready honay kay liyeh time lagati hain par yahan to sab kuch ulta hai.Pc recognised priya'S voice.Bhai larkoon ko bhi to handsome lagnay ka shook hota hai kay nahi ?He turned and saw Priya. They both laughed.Daddy !she shouted .Pc was so astonished when he saw her jumping (in the excitement)and coming towards him.She hugged her dad tightly.Tum kabhi bari nahi ho gi na?nAhi,priya smiled.Acha tum Ragini say mili ?YA dad usay to main bahir hi mil kar ah rahi hoon.Okay!,pc replied.ACha jao fresh ho jao party pay nahi jana kya?Nahi agar mari sweetheart nahi jai gi ti main bhi nahi jaoon gi!Wo tu mujhay pehlay hi pata tha .Ap ko nahi hamain,kushi interrupted.Acha theek hai jaysi tumhari marzi ,pc replied!Acha DAD main ragini kay pass ja rahi hoon us say dhair sari batain karni hain!OKay,pc replied.Priya left their room! But hamain to jana hai JI,ji kushaliya ji.Main abhi driver ko kehta hoon gari nikalnay kay liyeh.Ji ,ap jayeh main abhi ati hoon.Ji!,pc replied.

"Janoo!Janoo!",priya shouted.Kya HOA janoo ki jaan?Kuch nahi tujhay hi dhoond rahi thi!Acha chal kuch kha laytay hain mujhay bohat bhook lagi hai.aCHA ruk main ati hoon,jaldi kar na.Mom Dad bhi chalay gai hain.Ab hum free hain...kya ?,ased ragini.Kuch nahi ma!Priya to nay kuch to kaha hai yaar kuch nahi kaha chal ab chalain kitchen mein ya nahi?YA chal!,ragini replied.

Janoo tu abhi waysay ki waysi hai...innocent n shy!Haan tu nahi hai kya?HOOn kiyon?InnoCENT hi hoon maray pechay koi police nahi lagi okay!,priya replied smilingly.BOTH ARE IN KITCHEN.acha chal bol kya khai gi?Tu jo bhi banai gi!main khal loon gi,sweety!Okay pasta khai gi kya?WAt tujhay pata hai main nahi khati !Yaar isi liyeh hi to pocha hai kay kya khana hai!hehehe.Very funny,priya replied !Acha chal toast bana lay...oKay Boss!They both laughed.Priya said,Dekh to smile kartay hoay kiti hot lagti hai.YA i know par yeh smile hamesha to hi la sakti hain maray face par.YA i know i am the Best,priya nodded.Acha chal!yeh lay kha lay.Yummmy yeh to bohot delicious hain janoo,kaysay banai hain.Taray samnay hi to terrace pay gai wahan say kudi ,nichay ai to banay hoay tha!Wat ?priya asked !taray samnay hi to banay hain yaar,she smiled.Acha tu maray mazak bana rahi thi kya?,priya asked .Nahi yaar tara mazak bana kay kya main zinda rah sakti hoon kya?Nahi na!CHaal agar khal liya hai to chalain?ya chal!

Both are in ragini's room.Ragini is preparing her lesson.

ACHA janoo aaj tara uni mein pehla din tha na?kaysa tha?,priya asked her when she was highlighting a sentence with a yellow hightlighter in her book.

Bata na?Ragini thought for a while and said ya bohot acha tha.Priya noticed that ragini had a sad expression on his Face,when she replied her.Dekh tujhay pata hai kay t mujh say jhoot nahi bol sakti bata kya hoa aaj?Aur agar na bataya ana to phir dekhiyo main ki kardi....!

priyaaaaaaaa!, ragini said irritatingly. chal bata!!!!,she ordered her.

The scene is justed shifted to RAjvansh Mansion.

"Ranvir Ranvir",vasu shouted.Ranvir baba ghar par nahi hain bari malkin!,one of their servants replied.Kahan gaya hai?Ap ko kuch bataya hai kya us nay?Nahi malkin wo to jaldi jaldi mein nikal gai hain!Acha theek hai ap jayeh!Ji malkin.

"Ranvirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Ranvirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr", girls were shouting.It was a bike race.Ranvir was one of them.He had a black sports bike. All the girls were shouting and encourging him......Ranvir,who was having a helmet ,saw girls shouting.He saw the girls mischeviously .He looked at his competitors...!He was wearing black leather jacket and black toursers ,which all the bike racers use to wear.

They all were ready to start the race.As soon as he heard the voice of a whistle,he started (his bike) to the full race.He was so fast, that his bike was talking to the air, better than the other competitors.He increased the speed of his bike and crossed the finish line. HE finished his race, all the girls ran towards him...to hug him.But as he saw (that) a crowd of girls,which was coming towards him.He took his helmet off and started to shake his head ,in order to move his wet hairs and to give them air🤢🤢.He was drenched with sweat.Sweat was coming(down) along his neck.He saw the girls n winked😉😉 .All the girls were like....fainted😕😕.He moved towards the stage to get his trophy.He kissed it.Girls were dying to hg him but he took his white mercedes car n left the ground.

MOm Mom!!!!!,ranvir shouted.Kahan gai thay batana bhi zaroori nahi samjha,vasu asked in a very friendly mood.Mom sunay to sahi ...aaj mari bike race thi .!Mujhay pata tha kuch aysi hi baat ho gi,vasu replied.Acha aaj tumhara uni mein pehla din tha kaysa tha?,vasu asked him.Acha tha....Pata hai Mom aaj...,ranir stopped becaz he thought it would not be good to talk about ragini.HAn kya hoa?,vas asked surprisingly.Kuch nahi!,he replied .Acha khana banaya hai kya?,he asked.Haan tumhara hi wait kar rahay thay hum!Acha chaliyeh!

At the dining table:-

Mom khana to bohat tasty hai..Acha yeh buttering karna band kar yeh bata kay uni achi to lagi na?,vas asked him.Ya Mom bohot achi hai,he replied.hMMM ,theek hai,vasu nodded.

Ranvir's room:-

Ranvir was in a white towel 🤢🤢🤢,getting ready to take a shaver, looking very hot.Mom mari White shirt nahi mil rahi,he shouted.Beta wahan par hi hai,vasu shouted.Nahi hai!!!!!,he answered.Hai main kya karoon is larkay ka?Kabhi nahi sudhray ga!Acha ai,vasu replied.

MOM see yahan pay kuch nahi hai,he made an innocent disappointed face.Vasu saw him in the towel and started to laugh.RAnvi yeh kya ,tum nay room ki kya halat bana li hai n apni bhi...Beta tum ab baray ho gai ho!Kya yeh bhi mujhay hi samjhana paray ga,vasu replied in a sweet angry way.Mom ap is tarah, ghusay mein aur bhi cute n sweet lagti hain !kya dad nay kabhi nahi kaha?,ranvir replied sweetly.Shut up ranvi okay let me see kay wo shirt kahan hai..!,vasu interrupted.SHe moved/pushed him slightly to the left side,to take a way to his cupboard.Mom wahan nahi hai main nay dekha hai,he said .Tum nay dekha hai na isi liyeh to dekh rahi hoon,tumhara dekhna na dekhna aik hi barabar hai...,vasu replied sweetly.Acha ranvi yeh kya hai?he turned to see, what she was showing him.Mom yeh.. yeh to mari shirt hai,ranvir replied cutely.ACHA mujhay laga mari hai,she replied .Nahi Mom yeh mari hi hai...! he replied in an interrupting way.Acha yeh lo main kaka to bhayjti hoon tumhara room saf karwanay kay liyeh uthi dair mein tum ready ho jao humain tumharay Dad kay saath kahin jana hai.Not again MOm,he interrupted.Kya matlab?,she asked him.Mom main nahi jaoon ga us boring party mein,he replied.Boring?

ya mom wahan sirf business hi ki batain hoti hain mujhay business ki ABC bhi nahi ati main kya karoon ga!,he replied irritatingly!Beta aaj jai ga nahi to baad mein business ko sanbhalay ga?,he questioned him.Of course main hi sanbhaloon ga ,but...!,he replied .Acha theek hai is bar nahi but next time u have to come with us!okay!,she said.Okay promise mOM,he replied happily.

The scene was just shifted to KHaushaliyah Mansion:-

Acha to yeh baat hai...tu bas un ka nam bata day main us larkoon ko khud poch loon gi aur waysay bhi main ab permanently idhar ah gai hoon.MaRA hostel wala course hatam ho gaya hai..Ab hum dono mil ka bohat maza karain gay.Theek hai na janoo!,priya said to Ragini,who was very depressed.Acha janoo tum nay us larkay ka name kya bataya hai?,she askeh her.Us ka name tha....Wait let me think....His name was Ranvir Rajvansh.He was very nice.Hie was a single guy who made me comfortable and to forget that disgusted happening!!!!,ragini replied.

Acha theek hai...Chal ab bohat raat ho gai hai sotay hain,ragini said to priya.YAAr mara to abhi ji hi nahi bhara.Anyways ab to main yahan hi hoon sab kuch handle kar lain gay hum dono.Priya winked.YA kiyon nahi?U know priya u r my strenght...U are more than a sister for me,ragini replied very sweetly.I know jaan isi liyeh to tu mari jaan hai .Tujhay pata hai main nay jab bhi hostel mein masti ki na to mujhay tari itni ziyada yaad ai kay kya bataoon,priya said to ragini ,who was seeing priya's reactions very sweetly.I love priyu!Me too my sweetheart,priya replied.Priya and ragini were in their bed.Ragini had her head on her hand ,her elbow was supporting her hand, and was seeing priyu,who had her head on the pillow.You know i am very lucky to have u as my sister,ragini said her.NOOOO!,she interrupted.Kiyon?,she asked priya.Bcaz we r lucky to have each other as sisters.Rite?,ragini smiled n said ya!ChAL SO JA janoo,priya said.chalo Good nite !Same to u my sweetheart,priya greeted her.

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Yeh hai Ranvir.????Priya asked ragini n laughed😆😆😆😆.

Edited by PriyaKinny4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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~*~INTRODUCTION~*~

Very nice intro 👏👏. Character sketch is leaving a good impact.
But friendship is which subject... I did not heard about it .
~*~ Chapter 1 ~*~
Very sweet and lovely update 😳😳. RAGI is presenting a very simple, shy and innocent lady😳
She was too nervous....Aur un ladko ko main chhodugi nahi 😡😡 How dare..how can they laugh upon my sweetie😕😕. But our RANVIR RAJWANSH .......was besttttttttttttt. He was trying to make her comfortable... But RAGI was too depressed😭😭 She awlked out leaving her baggg. But RAN was there to handle her.... RAGVIR's convo was bestt part of CHAP👏👏👏👏👏. RAN aws intelligent ang humble. He is gr888. I love him more...... Thanxx for sketching him more baeutifully. And RAGI...u made her most lovable girl........😳👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏. Well done. Brilliant job ⭐️👏👏.
~*~ Chapter 2 ~*~
Again super sweet FF dear. PRIYA's entry is simply good. And her vinnocence r making her real. She is really cute as younger sis😳😳. She is so attached with RAGI..And when KAUSHI said hostel jaanevke waqt bachchhe maan ko yaad karte hai par woh tujhe yaad kar rahi thi was magical⭐️. RAN's scne was aslo cute... VASU is so responsible and lovable mom. But RAN is too naughty with hsi mom. Kya dad ne kabhi aapse nahi akha ki aap gusse mein bahut sweet lagti hai.....😆😉.
Aur akise pareshhaan kiya shirt ke liye😆. He wasw nearabout to tell about RAGI but he stiopped himself 😲😆😳😳. i like this attitude👏⭐️.
And his BIKE SCENE..each and every word his perfect description of scenario
👏. Well edited and described👏👏👏. GIRLS were dying to hugh him..but he sat on his car and went away 👏☺️. Finally RAGI told to PRIYA about RAN.....⭐️ and RAGI- PRIYA's emotional convo was touchy. I like ur FF.
Simply outstanding👏👏👏. Keep posting.......👍🏼And sorry for late comment😳😃
Edited by pankhi - 15 years ago
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good work priya nice chapter waiting for next
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Originally posted by: pankhi

~*~INTRODUCTION~*~

Very nice intro 👏👏. Character sketch is leaving a good impact.
But friendship is which subject... I did not heard about it .
~*~ Chapter 1 ~*~
Very sweet and lovely update 😳😳. RAGI is presenting a very simple, shy and innocent lady😳
She was too nervous....Aur un ladko ko main chhodugi nahi 😡😡 How dare..how can they laugh upon my sweetie😕😕. But our RANVIR RAJWANSH .......was besttttttttttttt. He was trying to make her comfortable... But RAGI was too depressed😭😭 She awlked out leaving her baggg. But RAN was there to handle her.... RAGVIR's convo was bestt part of CHAP👏👏👏👏👏. RAN aws intelligent ang humble. He is gr888. I love him more...... Thanxx for sketching him more baeutifully. And RAGI...u made her most lovable girl........😳👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏. Well done. Brilliant job ⭐️👏👏.
~*~ Chapter 2 ~*~
Again super sweet FF dear. PRIYA's entry is simply good. And her vinnocence r making her real. She is really cute as younger sis😳😳. She is so attached with RAGI..And when KAUSHI said hostel jaanevke waqt bachchhe maan ko yaad karte hai par woh tujhe yaad kar rahi thi was magical⭐️. RAN's scne was aslo cute... VASU is so responsible and lovable mom. But RAN is too naughty with hsi mom. Kya dad ne kabhi aapse nahi akha ki aap gusse mein bahut sweet lagti hai.....😆😉.
Aur akise pareshhaan kiya shirt ke liye😆. He wasw nearabout to tell about RAGI but he stiopped himself 😲😆😳😳. i like this attitude👏⭐️.
And his BIKE SCENE..each and every word his perfect description of scenario
👏. Well edited and described👏👏👏. GIRLS were dying to hugh him..but he sat on his car and went away 👏☺️. Finally RAGI told to PRIYA about RAN.....⭐️ and RAGI- PRIYA's emotional convo was touchy. I like ur FF.
Simply outstanding👏👏👏. Keep posting.......👍🏼And sorry for late comment😳😃

thanx pankhi....!😃😃😃😃oh u liked it thanx once again dear.!
Edited by PriyaKinny4ever - 15 years ago
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i love bidaai n their cast

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