ff salekh paint scene sadi's POV

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this is my 1st eva post ere so i hope u lyk it. this is the paint scene from sadhna's point of view.i know its not that good but i need to work on it.click the like button and comment plzz!
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i picked up the bucket of paint off the floor and set it on the table. it was suprisingly heavy and seeing as my every limb was aching from working on the new house all day it just added to the pressure. i looked at my hands and realised that they were covered in the paint. i couldnt wipe my hands here but my sari was coming undone i needed to fix up the knot i had made. i struggled to do anything, so defeated i worked on trying to clean my filthy hands. i looked over my shoulder to see alekh looking at me.he swiftly stood up and set down the paintbrush he was using. he started walking towards me, slowly.my heart raced and my mind whirred. instinctively i walked backwards. what would he do? we were alone in the room and i felt his eyes on me,scanning my expression. i felt my back touch the wooden staircase behind me and couldnt move any further.he approached me and i caught a gimpse of his amazing scent in the air.it smelled like nothing in this world ,so beautiful and sweet.it was intoxicating.my insides yelled at me and i had the urge to fling my arms around his neck nad pull him closer. i wanted to tell him all my feelings and how i always felt dizzy when he was near.my fantasy was interuppted as i felt his smooth,muscular hands slide around my waist. i jumped slightly and stared into his eyes.the molten brown made me want to melt in his arms but i had to stay in reality.i had never really thought about alekhs feelings towards me since he'd changed.he was a mystery to me now he wasnt the innocent ,mischievous alekh he used to be.i knew that he loved me because he gave his money and family for me.he had endured humiliation while finding us a roof to stay under and some cash to live on.he pulled me closer to him and i could feel the heat radiating off his body.it was comforting. i slid my eyes shut as he moved his hands down my waist and onto the knot . he tightened it and resumed with his hold on my waist.he pulled me closer and i felt his muscular chest against mine.our bodies almost one as our faces searched for the others.he was going to kiss me. i would die from the passion that i felt. my lips were centimetres from his as we neared..."put me down ranvir" ragini's voice yelled .me and alekh broke from the trance and turned to face the door.my cheeks burnt crimson as ranvir walked in carying ragini.once they caught sight of us they too blushed and ranvir set ragini on her feet. "err.." was all he managed.😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow fabulous kya baat hai har sa ff wonderful hai really amazinggggg gr8888
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thanks simran glad u liked it
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n e 1 have the link to the official saalekh thread so i cn post this ther

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