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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
An update coming soon guys
Be ready:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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These two felt complete in each others arms it was a dream come true to be back with him armaan wanted to tell her why he left but riddhima was in no mood to listen.

Armaan :Riddhima I have to tell you why I went away

Riddhima trusted him and she dint need an explanation at the moment, she wanted to stay with him for the next couple of hours.. He understood what she wanted but he had to tell her now it was important she knew why.

Riddhima: Not now please armaan I want to spend the whole day with you and I don't want to upset my self

A:Riddhima now why are u getting upset fine I won't tell you but don't cry. Come lets go somewhere

Riddhima smiled he never wanted her to cry and even though he was dying to tell her he kept it inside him because she would get upset. They walked to the car and she held his hand refusing to let go of him even while he was driving the car he knew she was still insecure and that's why she was behaving like this.
Armaan: Whats wrong with you why are you so upset he asked.

She ignored the question and rested her head on his shoulder

Armaan: Sweety just tell me why you are so upset you know na i cant see u like this.

Riddhima looked up with tears in her eyes

Riddhima: Armaan you wont leave me again and go.

He stopped the car with a jerk and parked it on the side.

Armaan:Riddhima look at me and please stop crying, Aus waqt I had to go but now there is no reason and even if something comes up I promise to fight with everyone and everything that comes in the way.

She bursts into tears

A:That's why I want to tell u the truth else you'll fell insecure

Riddhima: I'm Sorry Armaan I promise I won't cry

Armaan sighed

He agreed and decided he won't tell her until she herself wanted to know

Wow This place is so nice I knew You'd like it that's why I brought you here, "Armaan but whose house is this"asked riddhima. "Of course mine and tumhara hone wala ghar"Said armaan. She blush. "Actually when we get married your needs will increase so I thought you would want a big house"Said Armaan. "You are the only one who thinks about me so much"She said with tears in her eyes. "Please Riddhima don't be to senti come let me show you around and our future room. She walked with him he had put their name on front Mr and Mrs Malik. Riddhima smiled he was so sweet "Armaan what if none of our dreams ever come true then what will happn"Said R. "R please don't say that we are one and will be together for sure we can never separate. She got slight tears in her eyes "Oye meri Jaan please mat ro" Said armaan. He cupped her face and kissed her forehead. He lay on the bed and she sat on his lap. She felt safe, protected and secure in his arms.He started to kiss her neck she desired to be his she turned around and passionately kissed his lips. Armaan was take aback and first but then returned it with the same passion. He entwined his fingers with her and kissed her check. He told her how much he loved her and they just stayed like that forever. Riddhima fell asleep in his arms; she looked so pretty like this he kissed her forehead. I missed you riddhima I missed you so much I'm so glad we are back together each minute without you was hell.

He let her lie on his bed and walked out to sleep in the other room life was back to normal again he just prayed nothing came in between them now. However this time he promised to fight all obstacles what so ever. Her phone had been on silent when she awoke she had 10 missed calls on her phone from Sid why had he been calling her shit she totally forgot that she was going to get married to him he had come to her place for dinner last night. She hated Sid but why had he agreed to marry her she thought he wanted to take over sanjeevani or something she felt disgusted at such guys and hoped more people like armaan existed in this world.

Armaan came into her room he was so sweet he had made her breakfast she was glad to have him in her life he loved her so much. "Armaan why are you son nice" Asked Riddhima. Armaan laughed "Madam ask less questions and please eat your breakfast" Said Armaan.

Being with Armaan was the world best thing she could ever have

Armaan had decided he would propose to her and he had to tell her everything before





Sorry for the delay i dint read over it so please mind my mistakes


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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
heyy di
awesome part
n wanna knoe the truth why armaan left
so plzzz cont soon
n thx for pm
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
alu: loved ur ff.......was really good......nicely written and different concept.......can't wait to read more of it.......add me to ur pm list.........update soon...... 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Beautiful part and such wonderful moments between AR ...❤️
Loved it I am waiting for Armaan to propose ..I am sure it will be special 😃
Beautuful update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
good waitiing for next part soon aliya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
woah dear its really a cute update plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
I was really not motivated to right after all they are separating Ar and Ahh it was hard.
So i asked my friend Komal to write this part
I just told her what she had to do and she wrote it all
So if you want to thank anyone thank her and call her part good because she put in a lot of effort


After having breakfast Armaan and Riddhima decided to go to Sanjeevani since Sid had called Riddhima 10 times but she didn't pick it up and Armaan had to finish his pending work. After they reached Sanjeevani both of them decided that they won't go in together as Sid will be suspicious and he will create a big scene. So Riddhima went in first and as soon as she enter she saw angry Sid standing at the nurse station, as Riddhima was walking towards the nurse station Sid walked up to her and asked her where she was the whole night and why wasn't she at her parent's place for dinner. Riddhima was uncomfortable as she couldn't find any excuse, Armaan who was walking towards Nurse Station notice Riddhima and came there and told Sid to go back to his duty. "Who are you to tell me?" said Sid. Quickly Riddhima said "He is the new senior doctor and you have to follow what he says". After Sid left Riddhima told Armaan go resume his duty and meet her during his lunch in the fire escape. During lunch Riddhima was waiting for Armaan in the fire escape and suddenly she noticed the door opened and Armaan had cup of coffee and sandwich in his hand as he knew that Riddhima wouldn't have eaten anything since morning…As Armaan was walking down the steps, Riddhima ran into him and hugged him tightly with her hand on his chest, suddenly Armaan felt his shirt getting wet so he put the coffee cup and sandwich on side and then cupped Riddhima's face and wipe her tears asking her why was she crying? "Armaan promise me you won't ever leave me alone, you will always be there with me forever and forever not only in this life but next all births" said Riddhima between her sobbing. Hearing Riddhima Armaan said "I promise you I will never even think of leaving you again". To cheer Riddhima up Armaan said "Sweetheart, I have a surprise for you, right after your duty is done meet me in the parking lot". Riddhima got all excited and asked him what was the surprise, suddenly Armaan said "Baby if I tell you right now what the surprise is then it won't be a surprise any more" hearing this Riddhima started smiling. "That's like my Basket" Armaan said. Couple hours later, Armaan was the first one to finish his duty so he thought of waiting for Riddhima in the parking lot, after waiting for half an hour Riddhima came to the Parking lot.
A: Bohot jaldi aai ho tum.
R: Woh kyat ha na Armaan, main aa hi rahi thi ki Dr. Keerti ne mujhe bula liya.
A: thik hai, Ab chale
R: Chalo
Armaan was driving and suddenly he notices that Riddhima fell asleep after the hectic day at Sanjeevani. Armaan starts staring at her, thinking to himself how pretty Riddhima looks when she is sleeping just like a baby. After couple minutes of driving they are at their destination. A beautiful place decorated with lightning all around. Armaan tries to wake Riddhima up but instead Riddhima hits him in her sleep.
Armaan: Riddhima get up, we are at our destination. Don't you want to see your surprise?
Riddhima: Armaan please muhje thodi der sone do na please.
Armaan: Riddhima let me remind you we are on a date. Remember. Okay if you don't get up in a minute we are going back.
Riddhima: No no please. Look I am awake.
Then Armaan blindfold Riddhima and takes her to a villa on a beach.

Riddhima: Armaan where are you taking me?
Armaan: Don't worry basket I am not going to kidnap you. Riddhima slightly hits her hand on his shoulder and smiles. Alright basket now it's time for you to see your surprise and he open the blindfold. Riddhima starts looking around and ask Armaan where are we? And whose villa is this? Why are we here?
Armaan: Can you ask one question at time? Okay so we are in a Beach Villa which was mine now it is ours. And we are here because today is a special day and soon you will find out why it is a special day.
Riddhima: I want to know right now. What is so special about today?
Armaan: Sabar ka fal mitha hota hai Basket. Ab chale and then they go inside the villa. The lights are off and suddenly when they enter and Armaan says Lights the lights are on and full house is decorated with lightning, Riddhima's favorite roses and candles. Riddhima gets emotionally and suddenly tears fell out of her eyes.
Armaan: Riddhima what happen now? What are these tears for?
Riddhima: Armaan yeh khushi kay ansoo hai. Jab kisiko bohot sari khushiyan ek saath milti hai toh woh khushi ankho se ansoo banke jalakti hai.
Armaan: you know what Riddhima, humara ghar mein kabhi pani ki tangi nahi hogi.
Riddhima: Kyun?
Armaan: kyuki tumhare ansoon hai na, kabhi pani ki tangi nahi hone denge. Then Riddhima slightly hits armaan with her hand on his chest and then both of them start laughing.
Riddhima: Okay now tell me where is my surprise? I can't wait any longer.
Armaan: Okay let's go, your surprise is waiting for you outside. So they go outside to a beautiful tents fully decorated.

Riddhima: Armaan this place is so pretty. Don't give me all this surprise on one day, I will get used to them. Don't spoil me.
Armaan: Don't worry Basket. Get used to this as from now onwards you will get surprises every day. You are everything for me. You are my world. My life roams around you.
They walked towards a table that is set up for them and Armaan makes Riddhima sit and he sings a song for her. Then later she joins me and they do a slow romantic dance.
Armaan: tu jahan main wahan
sang sang yuhn chaloon tere
jaise tera aasmaan
jo dhoop nikli
chaaya ban jaaonga
jo ho tu akeli
saaya ban jaaonga
jo uljhan mein ho mann
main behlaoonga

Riddhima: tum aa gaye ho
to jeena aaya hai
khushiyon ka tumne
yeh jaal bichaya hai
khoya hai khudko ya
sabh kuch paaya hai

Armaan: tu jahan main wahan
sang sang yuhn chaloon tere
jaise tera aasmaan
ho ghum ke badal
mujhpe tham jaane de
bechainiyo ko
mujhse takraane de
dukhti ho koi baat
mujhpe aane de

Riddhima: dil sochta tha
ke koi apna ho
koi raaz na ho
jo usse rakhna ho
aankhein na kholoon main
shayad sapna ho

Armaan: tu jahan main wahan
sang sang yuhn chaloon tere
jaise tera aasmaan

They go back and sit at the table and a servant enters with a lovely heart shape cake. That says "Be Mine".

So Armaan and Riddhima cuts the cake and feed each other, then Riddhima takes some cake in her hand and puts it on Armaan face. As Armaan tries to put cake on Riddhima's face she runs away and Armaan starts chasing her. Finally Armaan gets hold of Riddhima and puts cake on her face. Both of them burst out in a laugh. Suddenly Riddhima sees Armaan putting his hand in his pocket and trying to get something out of his pocket.
Riddhima: What are you looking for Armaan?
Armaan: A beautiful and most precious surprise that will completely change your life and after this you will be mine. No one can separate us. We will be together forever and ever.

Armaan takes out a diamond ring and goes on his knees.
Armaan: Riddhima 6 mahine pehle main tum jaisi khobsurat larki ko chor ke chala gaya but that was a majboori. But now I promise to always stand besides you and love you. I promise you that I will never leave you alone. I promise you that I will always make sure that you lovely smile never goes away. I promise you that everything will have to go through me before it reaches you. I promise you that I will love you forever and ever. Will you please marry me?
Riddhima was so happy that she couldn't talk so only thing she did was she nodded. Armaan got up and put the ring in Riddhima's finger. Riddhima hugged Armaan like never before, she didn't want to come out of the hug, she felt protected in his arms. Then both the love birds when to the beach for a walk and then sat on a rock. Riddhima put her head on Armaan's shoulder and Armaan had his hand around Riddhima's waist. Suddenly he notices that Riddhima is in a deep thought.
Armaan: Riddhima Riddhima Riddhima
Riddhima: huh
Armaan: kya hua? Kya soch rahi thi?
Riddhima: Armaan I was thinking how my life completely changed. Now I have a reason to live, to be with you my entire life. How my life suddenly became beautiful and love of my life, my Armaan is back and is next to me. I feel protected and secured with you.
Armaan: Jo hua, acha nahi hua. Ek bura sapna samajne hame us sab yado ko bhul jana chahiya. We should start a new life leaving all those bad memories back. A life that is going to be full of happiness and love. They talk about their future plans and suddenly Armaan notices that Riddhima fell asleep on his shoulder so he carried her inside and made her sleep on a bed and close the door and went to the other room to sleep.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
heyyy dear,,
mind blowing part
continue soon
thanks for PM.



love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
hey aliya n komal..nice part..
armaan rescued ridz from sid..n he had called her in the fire escape..
she started crying as she didn't want him to leave her..aww..n im sure he won't this time!
he took her to a beach villla..which was really pretty..n he proposed to her..she obv accepted..thats amazing..n armaan promised he will neva leave her now..sweet.
thnx 4 d pm
update soon
-aish

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