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ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

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thore dar bad raj bhi neeche aata haai raj dekhta haai n dia se baat kar rahe haai raj bhi n aur dia ke pass jaata haai to join them par raj ko dekhte n waha se chali jaate haai n ka is tara se jaana dia ko kuch ajeeb laagte haai she asks raj"jiju aapne dekha didi na kitne ajeeb ho gaye haai pahele toh kitne baate karte the par ab bilkul chup chap raj mann he mann samajh jaata haai n ke is tara behave karne ke picche ke baaja woh haai uske jo n ko dard diya haai dukh diya haai usse ke baaja se n is tara ghum sum ho gaye haai raj inhe baato mein khoya hua tha when dia shakes his hand and says"are jiju ab aap ko kya ho gaya haai aap kaha kho gaye ?"

raj-woh kuch nahin dia main bas aase he aacha toh kya bol rahe the tum

dia-woh main toh aase he aap boliye aap aur didi mumbai wapis kab aa rahe haai

raj-bohot jald

raj aur dia dono baate karne laagte haai

dekhte dekhte shayam ho jaate haai mehemanno ka jaane ka waqt ho jaate haai sab guests ek ek kar ke aapne aapne ghar wapis jaa rahe haai n ke maa aur dia bhi ghar wapis jaa rahe the n ka mann bilkul nahin kar raha tha aapne maa ko chorne ka

n-maa aap aur dia thore rukh jaao naa

maa-are nahin beta hume ghar bhi pahuchna hoga naa

n-hmm

maa aur dia bhi baki mahemanno ke tara chale jaate haai

madhuri-n beta

n-jee mama

madhuri-beta ab jaa jaake thore dar aram kar lee

n-jee maa

n kamre mein jate haai toh dekhte haai raj adi ke saath khel raha haai n raj ko ek dam ignore kar ke mirrior ke pass jaake khare ho jaate haai aur aapne jewellery uttharne laagte haai n dekhta haai that raj is looking at her n just ignore his gaze and continues to do what she was doing suddenly n ka necklasce the string n ke blouse ke saath ek dam se phas jaata haai n bohot koshish karte haai to untie it but usse nahin hota ab raj n ke pass aata haai and says"main kar du"

n baare rudely raj se kaheta haai"koi zarurat nahin haai main khud kar lunge"

n do teen bar aur try karta haai usse untie karne ko par she fails so now raj bina n ke permission liye n ka necklace ke string ko n ke blouse se aalag kar deta haai

raj-dekha ho gaya naa

n-hmm thanks

raj -n woh tumne baat ke dr se kab admit karana hoga tumhe kuch baataya dr ne

n-tumhe uske fikar karne ke zarurat nahin haai ghar mein bohot log haai they will admit me(yeh bol ke n washroom mein chali jaate haai change karne ke liye idher raj ko n ka is tara behaviour dekh ke bura laagta haai par woh samjh bhi jaata haai ke jis tara usne n ke saath behave kiya usse dukh diye yeh us ke aage kuch bhi nahin haai )

agle din

sab log nasta kar rahe haai when amar asks madhuri"yeh raj aur n kaha haai abhie tak nasta karne nahin aaye ?"

madhuri-woh aaj raj n ko n ke ghar chorne jaa raha haai naa isliye sayed packing mein dar ho rahe haai

amar-oh

kuch dar bad raj aur n neeche aate haai

madhuri-are aa gaye tum dono aao aao nasta kar lo

raj-jee chachi

dadi-n beta aaj tu maiyke jaa rahe haai par yaad rakhna yahaan hum sab khush khabre ka besavre se intezar kar rahe honge samjhe

n bas muskurake aapna sar hilaate haai

after having breakfast raj aur n sab ka ahirbad leeke n ko uske ghar chor ne nikal jaata haai

raj aur n car mein baithte haai raj drive kar raha haai aur adi ke godh mein khel raha haai when their car gets struck in the trafic jam adi toh jam dekh kar he rone laagta haai n adi ko chup karna ke koshish karte haai but adi toh chup he ho raha haai when raj ke nazar ek khelo ke dukan ke parta haai raj jhat se car se uthar jaata haai n ko kuch samajh mein nahin aate haai ke raj yun achanaak kaha chala she gets really worried about raj

after some time raj comes back tab tak jam chut chuke the raj ko dekhte he n us par barasne laagte haai "tumhe koi aakal bhi ya nahin "

raj-n kya hua

n-kya hua yeh tum mujhse pucch rahe ho raj tum samjhte kya ho aapne aapko koi is tara car se utthar jaata haai kya bolo agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh (n hugs raj as if she might lose him anytime raj ko n ka is tara dekh ke bohot aacha laagta haai woh mann he mann samajh jaata haai ke bhalle he aaj n usse gussa haai par abhie bhi n ke dil mein raj ke liye pyaar haai

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 15 years ago

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Suhana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Hi Ria

How r u??

Update was gud..I hope Naina Raj ko maaf kar de..

Continue soon

Bye

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amrutha,akhila

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

nice part dear

loved it

cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Congratulations on the third thread Ria...finished reading all the parts...very nice update... continue soon...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina was talking to Dia but seeing Raj Naina moved away!!!!!

Raj understands that he is the reason for Naina's behaviour aur usne Naina ko jo dukh diye hai uski wajah se Naina aisi ho gayi hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina's mom and Dia went though Naina did not want to let them go!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's necklace got tangled with her blouse and Raj offered to help but Naina refused him rudely!!!!!

Naina ka gussa bhi jayaz hai!!!!!!

When Naina fails, Raj necklace ko Naina ke blouse se alag kar deta hai without Naina's permission and Naina said thanks!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj asked Naina about her due date but Naina answered him back rudely!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj was sad but knew that this was nothing in front of the way he had behaved with Naina!!!!!

Raj Naina ko uske maike chhodne jaa raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Jab Raj car se utarta hai Naina gets really worried about him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina is very angry at Raj when he returned magar Naina ke gusse mein bhi pyaar hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

She hugged him as if she might lose him anytime!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Raj ko yeh bahut accha lagta hai!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj understood that even though Naina is angry at him magar abhi bhi Naina ke dil mein uske liye pyaar hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I hope Naina Raj ko jaldi maaf karde par yeh tabhi hoga jab Raj tells her the reason for his rude behaviour!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Heyy

Great part

So RN are getting betta (:

cont.soon

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Nisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

nice part

I hope naina raj ko jaldi se maaf karde.

Par yeh tabhi hoga jab she will find out the reason behind raj's rude beahviour.

please continue soon

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Rani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

the up is nice raj n ko leekar uske maiye chorne jaa raha haai

raaste mein raj ko car se uttharta dekh ke n gets worried

plz cont soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

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nice update.

naina ka gussa bhipyaar hai. aur raj got what he wanted his naina back.

raj should tell her yaar why was he behaving like that because bechaari naina ko koi bhi baat jaldi samajh nahi aati aur wo dono bina waje ladte rehte hai.

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ria

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