My Cid Story (anyone can continue)

hi this is my first story....
ok it starts.......
it doesent contains sachin.....😆

Scene 1 only freddy and vivek are in the bureau.
freddy: kha fooo.. (sleeping)
vivek: freddy sir jug jao acp sir agaye...
freddy: kha phooo...
vivek: sir uthjao warna acp sir ajayenge...😆

suddeny acp, abhijit and daya sir comes

freddy: kha phoo...
acp: yeh kubhkaran abhi tak soo raha hai?!! ise jagao.....
daya: sir main jagata hoon.. freddy freddy tumhari wife ka phone hai....

freddy wakes up😆

freddy: wife ka phone
abhijit : haan wife ka phone, bolo toh unko bata dein ke tum bureau mein soo rahe the......
freddy: sir nahi sir please nahi sir warna woh ghur mein meri hajamat kur degi...........😭

suddenly phone rings
abhi: lugta hai sahi mein wife ka phone agaya..

daya ne phone uthaya
daya: hello senior inspector daya here ; kya laash mili hai ; zameen mein? ; construction site pur? ; accha hum abhi pahunchte hain.. (cuts the phone)
abhi: kya hua?
daya: laash mili hai hai construction site pur khodte hue.
abhi: chalo chalein.
They go to construction site.

any1 please continue.....
hope you all like it.
i made it too short coz i was thinking and writing i had not thinked a full story...😉

kya hua no reply till two hours kya story acchi nahi lagi??

kahani thoda suna suna laga..

Originally posted by: sarker1807

kahani thoda suna suna laga..

nahi maine khud hi banayi hai bhai😛

Originally posted by: sarker1807

(in site) d:sir, ye to laash nahin,skeleton hain a:haan.kam se kam 50 saal purana hoga f:bach gaye a:fredry,tum kaise bach gaye? f:ie to sir,purana murder hain.ise special beareau ke paas bej denge a:lekin.woh to kabhi bandh ho gaye.darwaje pe tala laga hain f:darwaje ka kya hai,daya sir tor denge a:fredy!!mera matlab hai.sb abhi nahi hain sab humehi karna hoga abhi:sir,ie skeleton dr. tarikaa pas bhej dete hain.woh jarur kuch nikalega a:thik hain.fredy aur vivek,lash ko forensic lekar jao.....

hi grear work...
but one problem.
plz edit it coz its hard to understand i mean each dialog in its each line so it will be great😆

@anantanni,i am making each dialogue in diff line,bt after submit it goes to one by one.

Originally posted by: sarker1807

@anantanni,i am making each dialogue in diff line,bt after submit it goes to one by one.

hey you need to press enter after every dialog.
it will work😃

koi reply nahi karta jao baat nahi karta...........😒