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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi you guys before i start to write the next part i would just like to say i am getting better, doc checked me out and he says i don't have to stay in bed all day and get outand about thats gr8 because i can use my computer again and not the lap top anyways where were we with the story:

Here is goes:

Dish is in her room brushing her hair, has her back to DK who has just sneaked in. (This is for you Princess_Mad!) he grabs her palo and pulls her close.

Dish: DK someone will see!!

DK: can't a husband romance with his wife.😉

Dish: Yes! but you know if mummy ji see's us.😕

Dk: Ok, i'll close the door!

Dish: DK you can't close the door mummy ji doesn't know we are husband and wife and if she catches us she will be upset.

Suddenly out of know where:

Pori: Your right dish if mummy ji catches you with my husband what will she think.😡

DK: get lost pori. You can never be my wife!!!😆

Dish is happy and is smiling, and grining at pori who leaves. Dk turns to face disha.

DK: disha what is that on your face?

Dish: what?

DK: that just there.

Dish: what is it DK?!

Suddenly DK grabs Disha and kisses her on the cheak!!😉

Dish: DK!!! If someone sees.

DK: I don't care!! I love you and i can tell the whole world this and if you say, to maa right now!!

Dish: no DK!

what do you think

love eran!!!!

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NEHA*S_JANO_JAI thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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very good 👏 👏 👏

keep it up eran 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow this is just awesome can't wait for ur next part plz post it asap thankssssssss a zillion for all those lovely lovey dovey scense wow its just spectacular 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi

keeop it going this is fab...so romantic.........😳😉 atleast we are getting some romance in your scences as td at present has too much Rona Dhona and Dk is suffering from cry baby syndrome..hope he recovers soon..😆

samy

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi you guys!

i need to think of some new ideas so i'll post the next story some time 2morrow!!!!

love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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WOWWWW Eran Thats really good 👏 i'm loving it .love how the storys flowing keep it up

glad 2 hear ure better

Take care

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago
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good one. online hee sahie. but atleast we can laugh /smile a little bit.

thax😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
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thats great eran
hey u should keep writin u do a very good job.
so what happens next?
cant wait...
hey would u mind if i put all the parts in one post so that if someone wants to read it they can look at all 8 parts together.
tell me yes or no
and then i shall do it accordingly.
great story
keep writing.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thats gr8. 👏

u should tell maa 😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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yeh i agree. tell sumitra 😊

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