Written Update:- 24 May 10; New Beginnings.ENDINGS

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Okay am gonna put it as MN part and SG part. MN first

Mayank-Nupur scenes
Nupur gives the divorce papers in his hands. Mayank is shocked. She says now both of them will be free. She thrusts it into Mayank's hands. Mayank has tears in his eyes. When she leaves he stops falls to the ground and tells her not to go. She asks him to sign it and bring it to the terrace. Mayank wipes his tears and looks at the paper.

Nupur is sitting in the terrace saying it is the test of their love. She has belief that he will come to the terrace. She hears a sound but it is not Mayank. She has beautifully decorated the terrace. She falls to the ground and thinks she should never have waited for him. She starts crying badly. She wipes off her tears and throws some of the decorations away. She again cries.

Nupur cries she is all alone. She says since she came to Mumbai every step was towards darkness. And now when she is fully in darkness she is all alone. She says even if she dies no one will be there. She slips and Mayank catches her. Their BG plays. They stay like that in each others' arms. Mayank wipes of her tears and blows it away. Nupur smiles through her tears and asks him whether it is him. He says it is him, who else will it be. He says he was born to protect her from falling. Nupur smiles and says he came back. He says he never went away. He says he waited to tell her if even death comes to take her, he will stand in front of it and say "take my life (himself) but don't take my life (Nupur)." Nupur hugs him. His words are repeated. Mayank says it's all in filmy way. They touch their foreheads.

They walk hand in hand and he asks her whether he did all this for her. She says this was where she fell in love. He says her anger is too much. She says what else could she do? He just went off. She says sorry and they sit on the swing. She tells him to say something romantic. She repeats it in SRK way. Mayank says he is not SRK and that was not a dialogue. He says he really means it. She says she knows that. And talks about the 7 vows in shaadi ke phere. THe memory is remnisced. Mayank is like vow? And he says without thinking he was repeating them. She says she was waiting with him and thinking with pride that he is her's. Mayank says he didn't know whether he was breathing or not. She says so they didn't mean anything. Mayank says if someone asks him he will not remember. Nupur says she has been cheated. Mayank says he now knows the meaning of the promises he gave her. Nupur says no, what she heard during the wedding was wrong. He pulls her closer.

He tells her to stop. He says he has lost her once, he wont let it happen again. He will make the husband-wife relationship stronger. He says he wants to start over with understanding the meaning of the vows. She asks him whether he is going to take the vows again. He takes her hand. She smiles.

Samrat-Gunjan scenes

Samrat and Gunjan are sitting together. She says she doesn't want to do all this. She says she thought she had lost him forever. If he had not come what she would've done. Sam stops her, makes her stand up and says he also can't go far away from her. He gets on his knees and proposes to her.

Gunjan asks him if he is sure. She asks him if he knows the meaning of it. He says he didn't know until now. Before meeting her he didn't know what love is. Meaning of wedding was taught by her. He says he wants to be so close to her that there wont be any distance. She tells him that the last time he proposed it was because of her wheelchair. She asks him whether today Neil is the reason.

She asks him whether he feels that if they don't get married he will lose her forever. She says that she loves only him and will not leave him and go anywhere. She asks him whether he still wants to marry her. Samrat says he knows that when he wakes up he just wants to see her so every morning will be beautiful. He says he wants to freeze this moment. He wants to capture it in his heart. She sees a lot of people and says people will see. Samrat holds he close and says he is not scared of anything. SHe shies away and goes from there.

Samrat follows her and both of them are smiling. He gets on top of his car and calls her. All the cars stop 😆 They all scold him and ask him to get down. Samrat says he loves Gunjan. Everyone smiles. Samrat asks her whether she will marry him. He says he is mad in her love. He says if she says no he will stay on the car forever. If she says yes he will marry her right there. Gunjan says she is ready to marry him and asks him to come down. He gets on his knees and asks for her hand. When she gives it he puts a twig ring around her hand.

Pre-cap:- Mayank-Nupur and Samrat-Gunjan on Zindaggi Ek Pal Ki from Kites. 😍 Mayank Nupur in bridal wear and Samrat-Gunjan rain dance.

My Rating:- WONDERFUl! Now let me go and cry😭


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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnx. MN divorce?? me heartbrokenđŸ„ș
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hey nidzy that was very beautifully written! Thank you so much. Your update on MN brought tears to my eyes!
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thanks Nidz....lovely update..though loved watching the flash backs...but they scare me ...if track records of different shows followed...flash back spells doom...sigh...sorry me pessimistic right now😭
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thaaaaanx alot 4 d update..awsum
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ok this story sound really really awesome. i don't get it how one of the foursome will going to die?
but thank u so much for ur review. it was really nice. i like the way u end it. "now let me go cry" 😆.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dear Nidz...sorry how would you like me to call you...?
Thanks for update, can't download until tonight, I have been thinking in those pauses of words about MN throughout the day..I am sure people realized my heart was somewhere else...It is going to be a LONG week!
Thanks once again!

at this..."Now let me go and cry😭" Dear girl, it is heartbreaking, but that beauty that lit up your heart, that will always be a part of you...I too wanted a grand end to MN, something to cherish, however, that is where your heart comes in...for you may give them a fitting and deserving end, one that they are worthy of...carry their inspirational light in your heart always....

Wouldn't we gladly live through this fleeting pain, for for that love that they engendered is eternal...

As in DCH, and Nupur quotes...for ONE moment of this love, we would be willing to suffer ten thousand deaths...

Sorry if i spoke out of line...😳

Love your friend,
Sabah
Edited by a little faith - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: a little faith

Dear Nidz...sorry how would you like me to call you...?
Thanks for update, can't download until tonight, I have been thinking in those pauses of words about MN throughout the day..I am sure people realized my heart was somewhere else...It is going to be a LONG week!
Thanks once again!

at this..."Now let me go and cry😭" Dear girl, it is heartbreaking, but that beauty that lit up your heart, that will always be a part of you...I too wanted a grand end to MN, something to cherish, however, that is where your heart comes in...for you may give them a fitting and deserving end, one that they are worthy of...carry their inspirational light in your heart always....

Wouldn't we gladly live through this fleeting pain, for for that love that they engendered is eternal...

As in DCH, and Nupur quotes...for ONE moment of this love, we would be willing to suffer ten thousand deaths...

Sorry if i spoke out of line...😳

Love your friend,
Sabah



Thanks for the detailed comment Sabah đŸ€—
After reading your comment am crying more :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for the update..

You have beautifully written MN part... Today's Episode was heart breaking and i felt as if they are giving us the hints of the future through MN dialogues...Hope nothing happens to MN
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: NidzCole_ArTi



Thanks for the detailed comment Sabah đŸ€—
After reading your comment am crying more :(Then I failed, in my intention and as a would-be- friend. Nidz, I have been a 'fan' of your updates, since I joined MJHT forum! You have a way to whitewash the non essential and linger over those beautifully vital details, that we are all eager to know...

SOmetimes you said things, that put a new spin on things for me...
for example, in one update, where Nupur pretends to be a ghost, i read it as to mean that she was trying to scare something..some bug away, Mayank seeing this gets perturbed...and tells her 'please don't ever try to scare me away like this...😆😆😆

Whole new funny angle, then when i watched it I realized I misunderstood, HOWEVER I preferred my original interpretations thanks to your update, and when I watch that scene, I imagine it that way too...

Nidz, know that what ever happens, you have many, many good friends here who will help you through the grief, so that you may once again risk your heart to love...this is the resilience of the human heart....there is none like it! ...if there don't then you can try plan b...me...😳

As Gunjan told Samrat, true love is that most precious thing that RARELY is found...WHY...for you need pure hearts to achieve it, don't let this crook taint yours....

Love sabah

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