Written Update 21/05/10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1
Its a new day.
Teepri is helping Panditji.
She looks at Bhairon & recalls Masa telling her dat she wil get Jagya married 2 dat girl on Akha Teej itself.
Sumitra cms der wid a plate full of sm pooja ingredient.
She & Bhairon smile at each odr.😊
Panditji says dat da arrangements r done,nw v can start da pooja.Plz call ur fmly.
Bhairon calls JaAn.
Da couple cums down,lukin really cute together!
Dey touch Sumitra's feet,who says:Jeete raho!
Den cms Bhairon's turn who says:Jeete raho aur hamesha sath raho!
Teepri gets tensed hearing dat.
Sugna says:Aur har saal apni salgirah dhoom-dhaam se manate raho!😊
SS cm der & Sugna hugs Anandi while Shyam hugs Jagya & den ice-versa.
Shyam says:Meri behna aur mere dost bahut-bahut badhai hp tum dono ko!
Anandi says:Aaj kitna achcha-achcha lag raha hai naa!
Sugna gifts Anandi a jewellery set & 2 bangles while Shyam gifts Jagya a gold chain wid an OM locket.
Shyam says dat u both wer tied wid gatbandhan earlier also,bt today da bandhan has got only stronger.
Anandi shows da set to Sumitra & says dat it is so beuatiful!
Sumitra agrees & praises SS 4 gettin a brilliant gift!šŸ‘
She adds dat she wil gift wot she has got in da evening only.
Gehna cms der wid Nandu & JaAn seek her blessings.
Gehna says:Khush raho!Bhagwan kare har salgirah tum dono k liye dher sari khushiyan lekar aaye!
Sugna tells Sumitra dat da rest of hetr fmly wil cm in da evening only.
She says dat I told dem dat v r gonna hav a lot of fun in da evening!
Sumitra tells her dat she did da right thing!
Teepri says I'll call Kannimaa.
Sumitra asks every1 to sit for pooja.
She says Gehna...
Gehna says aa rahe hain(Basant).
Bhairon is happy 2 hear dat.
JaAn sit for pooja & Bhairon tells Panditji dat since its der anniversary,dey wil do da pooja.
Panditji agrees & starts reciting da mantras.
Masa is watching all dis from da first floor.
Part 2
Panditji ties a thread around Jagya's wrist.
Teepri & Masa cm der,followed by Basant(who is lukin disturbed)
Da whole family sits around JaAn as Panditji starts da katha.
Masa & Teepri look worried & Gehna's eyes r fixed on Basant.
Da rest of da family is listening attentively to wot Panditji's saying.
Panditji completes da katha,blows da conch & requests every1 to stand for aarti.
JaAn do da aarti & den panditji passes da aarti ki thali to evry1.
After takin arti,Basant asks Masa if he can leave.
Masa says go,bt remember wotever I told u dis morning.
Basant nods & leaves.
JaAn go 2 seek Dadisa's blessings.
She jst keeps her hands on der heads widout sayin anythin.
Masa tells Bhairon dat sm very big saint has cm in da nearby village,so I wanted to tk Jagdish der so dat he can listen to his pravachan.
Sumitra says dats a very nice idea!
She tells Anandi dat u dnt need 2 change ur clothes,u can go wearing dis only.
Masa says no,I wanna tk only Jagdish wid me.I dont wanna tk any risks wid da chori.
She adds dat its a small village,der r no drs. no hospital,if smtyn happens to her who wil tk cr of her?
Bhairon says today is DER day,so dey shud stay 2gedr only.
He says if u want,I can join u all.
Masa asks if he is a dr.?She says if u cm,hw wil it benefit us if smtyn happens 2 her health?
She adds dat wen a husband is blessed,da wife automatically gets da blessings.
She says let her stay at home.😔
Bhairon agrees bt asks her to b back b4 evening.
Teepri is relieved.
Masa is irritated & says I know,I knw u've kept a party at home,v wil cm back b4 eve.
Sumitra tells Jagdish dat she has kept his new sherwani on da bed.
He says no,I wont go alone!Anandi wil also go wid me!šŸ‘
So sayin he walks off to his room.
Dadisa calls him back,bt he doesnt listen 2 her.
Part 3
Masa & da odrs r shocked at Jagya leaving like dat.
Masa says look Bhairon!V need 2 go 4 an auspicious occasion & he refused already!
Bhairon tells Masa to agree to takin Anandi wid dem.
He assures her dat nothing wil happen.
Masa says again u r sayin da same thing!
I explained to u jst now why I cant her wid me?
Anandi says u r right,dadisa!
She tells Bhairon dat wot if I fall sick der?
She says let it be,I wont go wd dem.I'll pacify Jagya & bring him here.
After assuring Dadisa dat Jagya wil go wid her,she leaves 2 pacify him.
Dadisa nods slightly & makes wierd faces!😔
Part 4
Anandi stands at da door of JaAn's room.
Jagya puts da sherwani in da cupboard & sits dejected on da bed.
Anandi takes out da sherwani from da cupboard & keeps it on the bed,beside him.
Jagya looks very angry.
Anandi tells him 2 get ready fast since dadisa is waitin 4 him.
He keeps da sherwani back in da cupboard & says I'm not goin 2 wear it b4 eve.
Anandi tells him 2 wear it again in da evening.
She tells him dat he has to go 2 get Guruji's ashirwad.
Jagya says ridr we both wl go or none of us wil go!šŸ‘
Anandi says everyday u go 2 school alone right?
Dis is jst a matter of 2day & dadisa is right,wot if smtyn happens to me on da way.
She says:Dekh Jagya zid mat kar na...
He turns his face away.
She adds dat u also want nothing bad 2 happen 2day,u also want 2 hav fun ryt?
Den plz dont disappoint dadisa.
She asks him 2 go wid her.
She takes out da kurta & says:Jagya maan na meri baat!Chala ja na dadisa k saath!
Now Jagya looks at her in anger.
She adds:Tu toh achcha wala bheend hai naa?Jaldi se taiyyar ho jaa.
Finally Jagya calms down on hearing dat & wears dat sherwani.
He smiles at himself in da mirror.
Anandi also smiles.😊
He asks her if he is lukin good.
Anandi says yes u r lukin luk lyk a bridegroom!šŸ‘
She sprays sm perfume on him & says ab toh khushboo bhi achchi ayegi!
Sumitra cms der & says da groom is ready bt wen wil da bride b ready?
She tells Jagya dat u go,meanwhile I'll decorate ur bride & keep her ready.
JaAn luk at each odr & smile.
Sumitra tells Anandi dat she has got a new dress 4 her as well!
She takes der 'balaiyyan' & says dat v wil celebrate ur anniversary wid gr8 pomp & joy in da evening.
Anandi asks if her parents would cm as well?
Sumitra tells her dat Bhairon has invited dem over da phone.
Part 5
Khajan is instructing da workers to put all da gift items carefully in da truck.😲
Bhago cms der & Khajan says dat watever I cud not giv 2 Anandi during her wedding I wil giv it 2 her 2day.
He adds dat I wil shower dem wid jewels,clothes,fruits,etc.
He shows him a bike & says look I got dis 4 Kanwar-sa!Lado wil b v. happy!
Bhago says:Bachcho ki asli khushi ma-bap k ashish me hove hain Anandi k bapu!šŸ‘
She says if u also came wid me 2 bless dem,it wud hav been better!
He says hav u taken a vow dat u wil not let me live peacefully e1 4 a second?
After watever happened on r griha-pravesh,do u think I wil even step on da road dat leads to dat village?😔
He says dat dey had sent an invitatn,so m sending dese gifts.Besides u r also goin,so bless Anandi from my side.
Bhago says til u dont keep ur hand on her head,ur blessings wont reach her heart.
He tries 2 avoid her by askin da workers to load da bike carefully on da truck.
Bhago tells him 2 think again.
She says:Kisi or k liye naa,bas apni laado ka man rakhne k liye chalo naa...
Khajan looks at her bt doesnt say anythin.
Part 6
Govind cms der & greets dem.
Khajan asks how he is?
He says m fine,sm guests had cm 2 my houz 2 search 4 a groom 4 der daughter.
He says dey wanna go 2 Jodhpur & havnt got any conveyance since a long tym.
He says if u allow,I want 2 drop dem 2 da bus depot.
Khajan asks how many ppl r der?
He says husband,wife & der daughter.Dey r cumin wid Krishna.
Da girl(Meera) whose parents had given masa a mouthful cum der wid Krishna.
Khajan says ok,let dem cum,I wil drop dem.
Govind introduces dem 2 Khajan & Bhago & tells dem dat dey wil drop dem 2 da depot.
Dey thank Khajan.
Krishna asks Bhago if she is goin smwer?
She says dat its JaAn's marriage anniversary so m goin 2 Jetsar.
Krishna congratulates her & asks her to convey her blessings 2 Anandi.
Govind congratulates Khajan.
Meera's father says v had gone 2 Jetsar a few days back.We had got a proposal for r daughter from a very well 2 do family,bt good dat v refused dem!
Khajan asks y dey refused?
Meera's mother says dat v got 2 know dat da guy was already married.
She says:Itne bade log aur kartoot dekho!Naam toh bahut suna tha KALYANI DEVI ka.. par jaise hi pata chala apne pote ka DOOSRA BYAH rachane k liye bheendi dhoondh rahi hai,humne toh saaf mana kar diya!
KG & KB r shell shocked.😲
Khajan asks her whose name she took?
Meera's dad says Kalyani devi.We got da proposal of her grandson Jagdish.
Khajan cant believe wot he jst heard.
Moral:Virtuousness doesnt allow a man to forget da sacrifices made by his wife & marry 4 da second time using her illness as an excuse.
Precap:Dadisa tells Jagya dat she wants 2 ask for smtyn.
Jagya asks her wot da matter is?
Teepri looks worried.
Dadisa says u r seeing Anandi's condition.U cannot spend ur lyf wid dis kinda wife.
She tells dat I've selected an excellent girl 4 u & I want u to get married 2 her,2day itself!😔
Jagya looks at her in disbelief.
Edited by aparakshitij - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i really appreciate dat u r doing so detailed updates.....dats great....šŸ‘

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks a lot!I include all da details,even dialogues so dat da readers can actually imagine wot happens in da serial.I want u all 2 feel as though u r watching da serial & not reading an update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thx for the update... :)
I hate this old lady honestly..how can she be soooo mean to someone when that person had saved his grandsons life...grrrrrrrrrr had enuf of her...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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massa is destroying jaggyas life she should understand that he is too young she has brains or no ???????she is selfish. Putting her life in danger Anandi saved jaggya's life massa should atleast remember her sacrifice, behaving in this way she is playing with their life.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aparakshitij excellent update with details as alwayz. gr8 job!!!šŸ‘šŸ¼ i guess next week will b exciting. that teepri tupri taapri has brainwashed dadisa completely but hey can't kalyani devi use her brains...just following teepri blindly! i just want that teepri's truth 2 come out as soon as possible!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks a lot friends 4 ur wonderful comments!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great update..thanx..and i have no comments on maasa...coz swearing is not allowed..lol..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx for the wonderful update dear. daadisa is getting on my nerves now.

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