FF:A Love Story, CH 3- PG 6

KriYa: A Love Story❤️

Hey everyone. I'm not a new membor to India Forums. You may have seen me flying around other forums. I was on the Pyaar ka Bandhan Forum, but have always loved Pratigya, especially KriYa. So after such inspiration, from all our lovely FF writers, I've come up with my own story. Hope you like, and do comment/crtisize! And do say if you want a Pm list!
By the way, I'm Alishaa, but lovingly called Aluu by many.

Characters

Krishna Singh: A 24 years old, handsome man. Very Much like the actual character. Easily tempered, Angry, but also very sweet. He is however fully educated, and lives with his family.

The Singh Family: Exactly the same as the serial. Komal is also married to Adarsh, but is just not as mean. A loving character.

Pratigya Saxeena: 20 years old girl who is full of life. She still attends college and loves her family, modern but tradional girl, and knows never to embarass her family.

The Saxeena Family: Exactly the same as the serial. A loving family who share a complete bond together. They also treat Komal, their daughter in law, like their own daughter.

Index:
Chapter one- Page One
Chapter Two- Page Three
Chapter Three- Page Six

Pm List
*ShruthiR
*Vishid
*Sangat

Chapter One

'Pratigya, eh Pratigya!' shouted Naina, trying to wake her daughter up for college. Despite being 20, Prarigya still needed her mother to wake her up.
'Pratigya utho, varna college ke le late ho gee!' Naina screamed again!
'Maaaa, app bhi na, ajj Saturaday hain!' Prarigya whined entering the kitchen and sat on te table. Wearing the night clothers she looked absolutly adorable.
'Oh haan, mein toh bool gaye, sorry beta! Magar acha hai, adat daal lo jaalde uthne ke!' Naina explained.
'Kyon Maa?' Prarigya asked.
'Shaadi ki baad kya hoga phir?' Naina said. Pratigya got up and walked up toward her mother and gave her a hug from behind her back.
'Mein aapko aur papa ko chor kai nahin joygee!' Pratigya said.
'Haar ladke ko jaana parta. Tumhaari Bhabie beh aytee' Naina explained.
'Acha Maa, yeh topic chore na!' Pratigya said lettig go and grabbing an apple to eat. Just as she was going to say something they heard Komal enter the kitchen.
'Pratigya, tum ithar hoon! I've been looking all over for you! Chalo, humhe shopping jaana hain. Maa teek hai na?' Komal asked.
'Hmm, jao beta. But be careful!' Naina explained.
Pratigya and Komal left the kitchen, got dressed, and left, along with Arushi to go shopping!
'Toh, Bhabie, what's the special occasion?' Arushi asked.
'Hmm, humme ajj meri ghar jaana hai. Krishna is getting engaged today!' Komal said excitedly!
'Kyaa!' screamed Arushi and Pratigya simultainuously.
'Hmm, toh ajj shaam ke le kapre le ne hai!' Komal said. The three girls left the car and entered the shopping mall. They shopped for each of the girls and Komal bought some new clothes for Ardarsh! After a few hours, the girls decided to have lunch at a nearby restaurent. Walking out, with lots of bags with them, they decided to walk to the nearby restaurent.
'Toh Bhabie, Krishna Bhaia kiske saat saagi kar re hain?' Arushi asked.
'Woh toh babu gee nahin patiyaa, he said it is going to be suprise.' Komal said.
'Hmm, toh Dekhe geh, Krishna Bahia ki choice.' Arushi said excitdly. 'Aur bhabie, Kesar didi kaise hain?' Arushi continued.
'Good. Abhe abhe he paata chale ki woh maa banle wale hain. Toh Saab uska bait kyaal rak re hain!' Komal replied. Arushi and Komal continued talking on the way to the reastaurent whilst a quiet Prarigya was lost in her own thoughts.
'Chalo, aaygeeya restaurent. Bhaut book bhi lageee hain!' Komal said. The three girls entered inside, and sat down ordering lunch. Placing their bags beside them, Pratigya noticed one missing.
'Aree Bhabie ek laafa kam hain. Mein jaane dek ki aate hoon!' Pratigya said.
'Samhal ke!' Komal said, with Prarigya leaving to go check on the missing bag.
Walking back from where they came from she saw it a few metres back. Walking upto it slowly, she picked it up, and checked the contents of the bag. Seeing everything normal, she started to return back to the restaurent.
On the way back, a few guys stood on the side of te road staring at Pratigya. Feeling uncomfortable, she tried to cover herself more with the dupatta she had. With the comments getting more rude, Pratigya tried to ignore them, amd walked at a faster pace back. The four men decided to follow her, causing her to slighlty run. Looking back at too see how far the men where from her, she didn't see when she bumped into someone else in front of her.
'T..T...Tuu...Tum....'

That's it for know. If I get a good response I will definatly continue. Do comments and press the like button.
Aluu😳

Hey Alisha!! What a coincidence!!Even I am originally from the PKB forum.Then around mid Feb I started becoming a regular with the Pratigya forum as well😊 I must say I really like your ff a lot😊.Pls do continue soon and if you don't mind pls add me to your PM list😊

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Hey Alisha!! What a coincidence!!Even I am originally from the PKB forum.Then around mid Feb I started becoming a regular with the Pratigya forum as well😊
<div></div>I must say I really like your ff a lot😊.Pls do continue soon and if you don't mind pls add me to your PM list😊

Hey Shruthi!! Hmm it is a coincidence. I have a FF on the PKB forum as well, you might of seen it. But that serial got a bit silly, so I started watching Pratigya! Thanks for the liking the FF, and deffo will continue tonight. And sure thing about the Pm list 😊😳

Originally posted by: luv angel

Hey Shruthi!! Hmm it is a coincidence. I have a FF on the PKB forum as well, you might of seen it. But that serial got a bit silly, so I started watching Pratigya! Thanks for the liking the FF, and deffo will continue tonight. And sure thing about the Pm list 😊😳

yes it did start getting a bit silly in the middle and towards the end.BTW what's the name of your ff in tht forum?I might have read it.And thank you for adding me to your PM list😊

Hey it was so good 👏
Please continue 😃

Originally posted by: shruthiR

<div></div>yes it did start getting a bit silly in the middle and towards the end.BTW what's the name of your ff in tht forum?I might have read it.And thank you for adding me to your PM list😊

I know I loved the start of the serial, the PraSha scenes and everything. They just messed it up then. My FF name is Yeh Dil Hai Tumhara. It's still carrying on even though PKB has eneded. And no problem for the add to the Pm list. I'll put it up later. 😊

Originally posted by: vishid

Hey it was so good 👏
Please continue 😃

Hey, glad you liked it, will continue soon. By the way your name?
😊

Originally posted by: luv angel

I know I loved the start of the serial, the PraSha scenes and everything. They just messed it up then. My FF name is Yeh Dil Hai Tumhara. It's still carrying on even though PKB has eneded. And no problem for the add to the Pm list. I'll put it up later. 😊

Originally posted by: luv angel

Hey, glad you liked it, will continue soon. By the way your name?
😊

you can call me SD # 2 ( Krishna ki Supreme deewani No 2 ) 😆 😆 😆