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Posted: 15 years ago

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The day of the party come since everyone are waiting for it ……..the lights are suspended in every part of the house as it starts from the gate to the hall of the house along with the stairs to the second floor …..The flower ….wonderful flowers of there favorite (sanraj) fixed in everywhere in every corners……the guests start to arrive …..DM welcomed them with the rest of his family but where is santo…..DM wonder as he look to the upstairs ……..

Santo stand alone in there room …stand near the window as her head lean on the iron bar and her eyes watch the light drops of the rains …….

She lost in her own world lost in her own thoughts …….. the light was turn off from such some time as she plan to go down but all what she do is to stand there in the dark ………she was just came back again to the room to take DM gift but as she holed the box ….she become too emotion ……..Santo just kept hold the gift in her hand as her eyes lost in the dark of the night as there no any sounds of the music or, the talked of the crowd in the down start ……… at all at all

In her lost she doesn't heard the sound of the steps that came behind her ………he stand there near the door wonder what is happen why she is so lost so strange ………..and so far

DM walk to where she is stand with his calm footsteps…..just stand near her as his eyes want to understand what is wrong …why she is so far why she is like a shadow in the most happiness day of them……..why???

DM want her eyes to catch him …….but no she like a statue which will remain stand there forever if no one care to removed…………with his calm voice DM call her but there is no reply……DM hand hold her shoulder and he call her a gain

DM: santo…….

In that moment as the rain fall in strong santo turn her face to him surprised ……

Santo: oh ….Dhramraj what u doing here? There is a party down star and we should be there……she talked faster and in same time she about to start walking to where the door is when DM hold her and say

DM: ha there is a party down stair for that I come to look for u but ………DM look at her ………but u stand here as there is nothing important ……nothing else waiting for u …..U just stands in the dark and lost why santoriii? Why????

Santo just rise her hand up to bring the box which is in her hand in the area of his eyes …..DM look at her and then look at the box …her eyes say take it …it is for u

DM take the box from her hand and opened to found two oval locket necklace of silver and he just take them in his hand to found that in first one as he open the oval santo pic with few words in the opposite :

WITH U FOREVER

U BANDINI

And he looks at her to reach agin to the other locket ……heopen it to found his pic and some few words:

SIMPLY ….LOVE U

In that moment DM eyes in a second be full of tears……his santori give him what he need as she give her self the strength that she look for …………she give them there self ……as they will be always together even if there will not be close….

Santo say in low voice…………….u gift …..Malik ….u gift…..Dhramraj

TBC
Edited by love2211 - 15 years ago
Mula thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow.....soooo beautiful and romantic.👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww sara how romantic i actually love the necklace pic OMG too cute keep it up hun Muahz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice sara...romantic...nice gifts...bt wht abt dm's response 2 her?post ur next soon dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks
priya......sheela................sam.................mula
for u reading and enjoy it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Ok this will be the last part of this FF ……so hope u will liked and sorry if it be boring or be so long or if it continue any mistake ……………….sara

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DM takes the locket the one whish is for him and wears it ……….he takes the other one which is for her and just he let it settle around her neck………

Then he just holds her face between his hand and told her ………

DM: this is the most beautiful gift I have got it in my life…ok not all my life….I kidding …….and he smile ….santo just say as she be emotional …..

Santo: Dhramraj ……..the gift is not just the locket the gift is that u will be a father again to our coming child

DM could not believe what santo say as his eyes become wide in a moment from this surprised news as the smile fade in the same time …………in a second his face features change to shine a big smile on his face along with dancing eyes ……DM just surprised santo with a crashing hug ……a hug that she lost in it and he told her everything on it …….

DM: that is the most wonderful news ever …….the most awesome gift ever ……he just pushes her in a soft to the back so he could see her face and continue……. U are sure when and how that happen we come close just from few days ……

Santo: u not remembers but I remembered what had happened it was almost before a month …..u was dreaming and screaming and I run to u to make u calm down ….just in the moment of my hand touch u and u become in my lap as I hug u to feel calm …..U just carries on ……being lost with me …..u were dreaming in u sleep and I was dreaming in u arms …………..then after some time I kept lie in the dark of u room and u just continue u slept ………..u know what had happen in next day u shouted in my face that I should not make a tea for u as u don't want me to serve u at all even if I was want to speak with u …….

DM : u just kept quiet ……..why u not told me ……what will happen if we were not come closer what will happen if I had lose u in that accident ………

Santo: just forget all what had happen and let us live our life from that moment …..Live for the coming child …..For the coming new life

And they hug each other along with the loud music from the down stairs …..He celebrates his birthday …..He celebrates his new life with his bandini……..

They just walk together to the party …..Walk together in the road of the life forever

THE END

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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks farah at lest u love the end 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
DM letter to his Bandini
santo

Always u will be my Bandini always even if I say it for u thousand times that u are

Not .........today my heart is……….


Bleeding too much.....my eyes keep the tears throttled in it.............my chest pain me

Too much.....

And u ....what I can say ....I wish that I shaking u in madness maybe u will come to u sense and u will told me

Everything maybe

Why santo????? Why?????? .........u keep push on the wound too much to finally it bleed again ......and u not care

To cover it at all.........at all

D.... ....M
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow my dear sara...so touchng end nd nice gift...bt im sad tat u end ur nice ff...sheela is sadddddddddddddddddddddd
and tat letter...Fabulous...Santu is his BANDINI 4ever...
luv u sara...waiting 4 ur next...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sara 🤗..truly amazing write up..👏⭐️👏 But was jus concerned u wldn't end it here right, i mean pls come up wit more of Sanraj...😛 Luking fwd for the next set...

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