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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
HAILA
ganga kia SR scene likha yaar
filled up with romance, and romance, and only ROMANCE
wow loved it sooooooooo much
it was just toooooooooooo good
how can u say u cant write something romantic
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here is some
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg i didn,t know that it was double post.....
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liked all the links superb work.... 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi people! Ganga's back! This time with AmBo remarriage part 8. I'm really happy that all my previous scenes were such big hits. Thank you for all the lovely comments. Like I said part 8. So sit and enjoy with your tea and popcorn. (Meaning you dunia!)

It's the morning of their suhaag raat. It's only 7:45am. Bebo wakes up and looks down at amrit who is sleeping on her chest with his arms around her. She carefully lifts his head nd puts it on the pillow. Bebo starts to get out of bed. Amrit suddenly says good morning to her. Bebo turns around. Amrit is awake smiling at her. Bebo smiles and says good morning. He looks at the clock and says, bebo why are you up so early? Bebo tells him she has to get dressed and tidy up. Amrit says cant she spend a little bit more time in bed. Bebo says maybe another day. At the current moment she is a newly wedded bride who is starting her first day at her in-laws. So she has to get up and make a good impression on everyone. Amrit smiles and says you don't need to impress anyone. The only person who you need to impress is me. After all I'm your husband, the one you're going to have to life your life with. Bebo laughs and gets out of bed.

She opens the cupboard takes a towel and some clothes and goes to the bathroom. Amrit is still in bed relaxing. He thinks to himself. Then the bathroom door opens and bebo comes out wearing a red anarkali dress. Wow she looks so pretty. Amrit is dazzled. She walks to the dressing table and puts on some jewellery. She tells amrit to quickly get up and get ready. Amrit takes his towel and trousers with him and tells bebo to choose a jacket and a shirt.

Bebo takes out a black jacket and a red shirt. She thinks, it's the first day we are a proper married couple. It will look nice if we wear the same colours. She leaves the clothes on the bed nd leaves the room. Amrit comes out and looks on the bed. He goes in front of the mirror he is about to put his shirt on when bebo comes and stops him. She takes the shirt in her hands and puts it on him herself. Bebo puts all the buttons on but then sees on of them is coming off. She tells him to just wait, she'll fix it. Bebo gets her little sewing box and fixes his button.

For this she comes very close to amrit. Bebo is nearly finished. She looks up at amrit and they have an eye locking session. Bebo accidentally pricks her finger with the needle. It is bleeding quite a bit. Amrit takes her finger and puts it in his mouth to stop the bleeding. Bebo looks up at him and smiles. Then amrit gets a plaster and puts it on her finger. Bebo hugs amrit.

He asks her if she was going to stop dressing him. Bebo parts from amrit and holds his collar. She pulls him a bit closer and finishes his entire buttons. Then the takes his jacket and puts it on him.

Bebo walks away. Amrit catches bebo's hand and pulls her back. He puts his hands around her waist. Bebo tells him to let go. Amrit say, bebo where do you want to go on honeymoon? Bebo blushes and says that she will go wherever he wants them to go. Amrit says there has to be a place she would like to go. Bebo says Shimla. Amrit says why. Bebo says it's really hot in Amritsar and she always wanted to see Shimla. Amrit says then that's where they will go. Amrit tells bebo to start packing again. Bebo says why do they need to hurry. Amrit says that they are already more than a year late. Bebo laughs. Amrit holds bebo close and moves bebo's hair away from her face. Bebo blushes. Amrit asks bebo for a favour. Bebo asks him, what favour? Amrit says I will kiss you every night but you will kiss me every morning. Bebo blushes and says so many kisses in one day? I'm fine with you giving me one every night. Amrit says, you might be ok with it, but I'm not. I love the taste of your sweet lips. If you kiss me, my entire day is filled with happiness. If you don't then everything goes wrong for me. Bebo blushes but she agrees. Then she tells amrit to let go. He gets her go and bebo leaves the room.

Bebo goes downstairs and goes to the kitchen. Suman tells her to leave. She says bebo is a newly wedded bride. Brides are not meant to be in the kitchen on their first day in their sasural's. Bebo says but this isn't her first day. Suman tells her to forget about before. Everyone is to start a new life. Bebo says ok. She leaves the kitchen. Suman leaves the kitchen. Geet calls suman for water but suman isn't there. Bebo goes to the kitchen to get her water. Bebo turns around.

Someone puts their hands on bebo's tummy. Bebo turns around. Amrit! Bebo tells him to let go. Amrit says, no ones around. A bit of romance wont kill anyone. He holds bebo nd comes towards her to kiss her. Both of them are lost in each other. Amrit and bebo are very close. About 2-centimetre gap between them. Just then someone coughs. It's geet! Opppps! Amrit lets bebo go. Bebo fixes her dupatta, which was slipping and tells geet that she will just be back. Amrit lowers his head. Geet looks sternly at amrit. He feels a bit uncomfortable with his sister's look. Then she laughs. She shakes her head and tells amrit that he should have seen his face. He was so scared. Amrit says that wasn't funny and you shouldn't have been watching bebo and me. Geet says, I shouldn't have but you both should have thought that romancing in the kitchen isn't really a good place. One person or another would have seen you. Amrit says, I didn't know that people in my family would actually want to stand and watch me and my wife being a bit romantic. Geet laughs and suman comes back. She asks what's so funny. Geet says its nothing. Just amrit being a bit careless.

Bebo is in her room. She feels shy and blushes. Amrit's mom comes and tells her to come down for breakfast. Bebo goes downstairs. Geet tells her to sit down. Suman pulls out the chair next to amrit for bebo. Harmeet, gursheel and pappi join them. Harmeet asks amrit how was his first night as someone's husband. Amrit says it was nice. Harmeet laughs. Gursheel is jealous of blushing bebo. Suman asks amrit where he and bebo have planned to go for their honeymoon. Amrit says they might go to Shimla. Geet says they got interesting taste.

Just then amrit's phone rings. It's ashok praji. Amrit answers the phone and says hello. Ashok asks amrit how everyone is. Amrit says everyone is well. Ashok asks amrit if he and bebo have chosen a honeymoon destination yet. Amrit says they have one place in mind but they still thinking about it. Ashok tells amrit to pack his bags and get ready. Amrit is confused. Ashok says amrit and bebo are going Agra for 3 weeks. Ashok gives amrit all the details. The name of the area, cabin number and so on. Amrit asks ashok if he wants to talk to bebo. Ashok says he wont talk to bebo now; he will talk to her later. Amrit says bye and he puts the phone down. Amrit explains to bebo. Bebo is very happy. Amrit says that they will be leaving that evening. Amrit tells bebo to finish her breakfast and then come upstairs so they can start packing. Amrit leaves and goes upstairs. Bebo is happy. She eats her food and then sits and thinks.

Suman tells bebo to get ready. After all she's to go on her honeymoon. Bebo sits and blushes. She asks suman and geet what she should wear. Suman says bebo should wear one of her nice new suits. Geet tells her to wear a sari for a change. Amrit would like the surprise. Bebo says that's a good idea. Bebo goes into deep thought…

That's all.

Hope you liked it.

I couldn't find a good way to end the whole scene.

Beware the honeymoon scene may take a while. It's very long. Please comment and criticize.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Hope everyone enjoyed part 8. I'm back with part 9. AmBo honeymoon! My job is nearly done. Then I can retire! Hope you like it. Warning this is going to be on of my longest scenes ever!

Bebo is in her room. She is fixing her sari. Amrit has taken their luggage downstairs. Amrit comes back to find bebo wearing a really nice red sari. It's made of very thin and light material. You can see bebo's tummy. Amrit is stunned. He walks behind bebo and puts his hands on her shoulders. Bebo looks at amrit and asks him how she looks. Amrit says she's looking beautiful. Bebo blushes and tells amrit that she ready. Amrit says everything is ready. They just have to leave. Bebo nd amrit close their bedroom door and then go downstairs. Everyone is waiting for them at the door. Ambo takes amrit's mom's blessing and then they leave.

Amrit starts driving. It's a long way to get to Agra. It's late in the afternoon and they are still driving. It's starting to get dark. Suddenly the tire punchers. They come to a stop. Amrit tells bebo to sit in the car while he changes the tire. Amrit gets out of the car. Then another car stops in front of them. The driver gets out and talks to amrit. The person and amrit embrace. Bebo can't see who the person is. He has his back towards the car. Then a second person comes out. This person is older than the first and amrit touches the man feet. Bebo thinks that it would be good for her to go and see who it is, after all it must be someone that's a part of amrit's family. Amrit and the other 2 men have their backs towards the car. Bebo goes up to amrit and puts her arm in his. Amrit turns to bebo and smiles. The younger man turns around. It's amrit's cousin, shavan! He is shocked to see bebo nd bebo is shocked to see him. Then the second man turns. It's amrit's uncle, shavan's dad. Both are shocked to see amrit and bebo together.

Amrit puts his hand on bebo and nods at her. He turns to shavan.

He says, shavan I think you already know bebo. But you have never met her with her new occupation. This is bebo, your sister-in-law. Shavan is shocked. Amrit says to his uncle that, bebo is the daughter-in-law of their family. Shavan's dad smiles at bebo. Bebo goes towards shavan's dad and gets his blessings. Shavan's dad asks amrit when he got married and how come he never even told them. Amrit says, well originally they got married a year ago. But for one reason or another, everyone decided that they should get married again. This time in a grand manner as the first time everything was done in a hurry. So they got married again yesterday evening. Amrit also says that he did call their house to attend this wedding but no one answered. Shavan then asks where they were going now. Amrit says he and bebo are going on their honeymoon. Bebo smiles and looks at amrit. Shavan asks amrit where they were going for their honeymoon. Amrit says they are going to Agra. Shavan says that sounds nice and romantic. Amrit smiles at bebo. Shavan's dad says then why doesn't shavan travel with amrit and bebo to Agra. Shavan says that he is going to Agra because he has some business to attend to. Amrit agrees and says that it would be a nice way for them to catch up.

Shavan's dad leaves and gets into their car and drives off. Amrit tells shavan to come. They walk to amrit's car both brothers talking happily. Bebo opens the door at the back. Shavan stops her and says, bhabi why are you sitting at the back. I will sit at the back you sit with amrit. Bebo says its ok. She will sit at the back. Shavan disagrees and amrit too tells bebo just to sit at the front with him. Bebo sits down and then they drive off.

It's a really long journey. Bebo is really tired. She hasn't slept well in days. Bebo puts her arm in amrit's nd puts her head on his arm nd closes her eyes. Amrit looks at bebo who has her eyes closed and kisses her forehead. Shavan is sitting and watching.

Amrit is still driving. He asks shavan how everything is for him. Shavan says everything is fine. He has met someone and they are getting engaged soon. Amrit says congratulations. Shavan tells him that him, bebo and the rest of the family will have to go. Amrit says they will surly come.

Shavan asks amrit, how come he married bebo. Amrit asks him what does he mean? Shavan says after all that happened between me nd bebo, how could you marry her? Amrit says, he has a crazy heart, which only beats for bebo. He looks at his sleeping beauty. Shavan says, so you really love bebo? Amrit says, of course. He says he can do anything for her. Shavan says, amrit have you met that girl who you always dreamed of? Amrit says yes. He says he has got more than what he dreamed of. Shavan says he's glad that it all worked out for amrit in the end. Shavan also says that amrit and bebo make a perfect couple. Amrit says thanks and looks at bebo. Shavan adds that when amrit nd bebo's children come along, they would be so cute. Amrit feels shy and says that's a bit advance. I don't think bebo and me are ready to take on the responsibilities of parents.

They stop talking for a while then shavan says to amrit that he should forgive him. Amrit is confused. He asks what for. Shavan says, the way I humiliated bebo and left the mandap. He says that amrit always told him not to but he never listened to him and left bebo hurt for that. Amrit says, you shouldn't ask me for forgiveness. You should ask bebo. In fact I should thank you. If you didn't leave bebo heartbroken, I would never have become such a close friend for her. If I didn't become her friend, I would never have fallen in love with her. If I didn't fall in love with her, this moment would never come for me. I wouldn't be who I am today. I wouldn't have bebo on my shoulder. So for that I thank you.

Shavan tells amrit to stop the car as his stop has arrived. Shavan jumps out and tells amrit that he and bebo must attend his wedding. Amrit agrees and tells shavan to stay in touch.

Bebo cuddles up closer to amrit. He looks at her. Bebo is looking up at him with her eyes open. Amrit asks bebo if she had a nice nap. Bebo says not really. A person can't have a nap unless they are asleep. Amrit doesn't understand. Bebo says you thought I was a sleep but I wasn't. I wanted you and your brother to talk peacefully. So with you thinking me asleep, you both talked openly, but I was listening.

Amrit says, bebo I can understand what you must be going through. Today your past was in front of you, that too with your present and hopefully future. Bebo I can understand the pain. Today you were face to face with your first love that is also your younger brother-in-law. Bebo looks at amrit, shocked.

She says, amrit what are you saying? First love? Amrit you're wrong. It's true I liked shavan. But amrit, it wasn't love. Love is when you understand someone. Like how you understand me and I understand you. I never understood him. Love is when you feel like dying when that person leaves you. He left me. I was sad. But I moved on. When I was apart from you, I wanted to end my life. Amrit it wasn't love. I simply liked him. Amrit you are my first and last love. There are many things, which you don't know about. Things, which are related to you but I never, said anything. Things right from the moment we met. Amrit you are my first and last love. Not only for this lifetime but also for the next six. Amrit smiles. He kisses her forehead.

Bebo looks at the time. She tells amrit that they should get a move on. They should reach their cabin soon, so that their honeymoon can really start. Amrit smiles and they start driving again.

After another 15 minutes of driving they reach a place called Honeymoon Deluxe Plazas. Amrit parks the car in the car park. Amrit sees the reception and tells bebo to come. Amrit and bebo reach the reception. Amrit gives the receptionist all their details. She gives amrit the key to cabin number 2. The cabin boy takes amrit and bebo to their cabin and then offers to get their luggage. Amrit opens the door and offers bebo to go in first. Bebo enters. In front of them is a small hall. To their left hand side there is a bedroom. There's a room ahead, there's a plaque on top of the door that says living room and a room on the right hand side that has a plaque saying kitchen. Amrit closes the door behind them. Amrit lifts bebo up. Bebo asks amrit what he's doing. He says bebo why do you need to worry. We are here alone. Just you and me. We don't have to worry. Amrit holds bebo close. He carries bebo towards the living room. Bebo says, amrit the bedroom's over there. Amrit says for the next three weeks we wont have to worry about bedrooms. Like I said just you and me. Bebo blushes, she says, romance isn't comfortable anywhere else. Amrit laughs. He says, fine then. Romancing will happen in the bedroom. But he still walks towards the living room. Bebo looks at him questioningly. Amrit says they might as well have a look around and go to the other bedroom, which is meant to be a bit bigger. Amrit opens the living room door with bebo still in his arms.

Amrit opens the door nd they both gasp...

Ashok, daljeet, saru and prabjot are beaming at amrit and bebo who are still shocked. Bebo coughs and amrit puts her down. Ashok gets up for the sofa and asks amrit if he's shocked. Amrit nods his head. Daljeet join them and say, well this is your honeymoon but we thought we would join you. Bebo feels uncomfortable with the fact that her brothers are there and they saw her and amrit in one of their romantic moods. Bebo fixes her sari. Saru comes to bebo and says she's looks very beautiful. Bebo says thank you. Daljeet says to bebo and amrit that they should come in. They walk into the room and sit on the sofa. Amrit asks them how come they too are here. Ashok says, prabjot wanted to go somewhere nice and so did saru so we all thought we would have our second honeymoons and join you two. After all you would get bored to, being here alone, just the two of you. Amrit says that they did a good job by joining them.

Bebo is sitting and grumbling. She isn't very happy. She shows that she's happy, but she isn't. She thinks to herself, what a honeymoon! My brothers want to join amrit and me, that too on our honeymoon. Bebo thinks she was waiting for this so eagerly when she and amrit would be alone, just the two of them.

Prabjot looks at the time and says they should all go to bed. It's very late they will talk in the morning. Amrit and bebo stand up. Saru then point out that there are six of them and only two rooms. Ashok says, so? Saru says, six of us, two bedroom and three couples. Only four of us will get a bedroom. The other two will have to sleep in the living room. Bebo grabs amrit's arm. He understands what she means. Prabjot then says, there's not much of a problem. I mean six of us and two rooms. Us girls in one room and the boys in the other. Bebo squeezes amrit's arm. Amrit knows she isn't happy with this arrangement. But amrit knows there's nothing he can really do. Amrit gives bebo an understanding look. Bebo's brothers and bhabi's are discussing who was going to get what room. In the end it's settled that the girls would get the master bedroom and the boys would share the smaller one on the side.

Bebo's brothers and parchiji's leave for the rooms. Bebo and amrit stay back. Bebo tells amrit to do something. Amrit says he sorry but there's nothing he can do. He can't be disrespectful to her brothers. After all they do have true and sincere minds. Amrit lifts bebo's chin and tells her not to worry. Everything would surly work out in the end for them. Bebo comes closer to amrit to give him a hug. Amrit takes bebo into his arms and he gives her a nice long squeeze. He tells bebo that she should go and take rest now.

Bebo reaches the room she's staying in. Then sees prabjot and saru sitting and talking. The room is very pretty. It's light pink in colour with a super king size bed with curtains around it. Bebo joins and sits with them on the bed and they talk for a while. Then they all lie down and try to go to sleep. Although it's three of them in a bed, all of them have a bit of their own space. Bebo lies down and sighs.

Amrit is sitting and talking to bebo's brothers in the boy's room. Their room isn't as nice as the girls. It is small, much smaller than the girls. Again the walls are a soft pink. The bed is a double sized bed. Not big enough for three people. They decide that they will take it in turns to sleep on the bed. First night, ashok, then daljeet and then amrit. Daljeet and amrit are sleeping on two separate sofas in the same room. It is not comfortable at all. Ashok says to amrit he doesn't mind sleeping on a sofa, he's used to it. Daljeet asks why, because bebo wouldn't let him sleep on the bed. Ashok and daljeet laugh. Amrit says, praji, you have a sister who likes her space. She hogs the entire bed. Ashok and daljeet just laugh. Amrit is missing bebo. He has an idea'

Beep! Beep! Beep! Bebo's phone suddenly goes off. She looks. It's a text message from amrit. Bebo smiles and read it. It says, bebo hope I haven't disturbed you. I can't get to sleep without you. Sleeping on a sofa isn't comfortable any more. But maybe it would be a bit better if you were here. You and me squashed together on a tiny sofa trying to get some sleep' Goodnight bebo. Will see you in the morning. Amrit. XXXX

Bebo smiles to herself. She can't help by laughing a bit. Saru asks sleepily what's wrong. Bebo says nothing. She thinks what she's going to say. Then she replies.

Amrit, you are silly. You can't sleep because the sofa is small. If I come, how will we sleep? We would be very squashed! No you didn't disturb me. To tell you the truth; I am missing you very much. Every little thing about you. Your hugs, your touch, your hold, your kisses'

Bebo reads the message over and then sends it.

Amrit reads it and smiles to himself. He thinks, boy bebo is strange. When she is apart from me, she can be so romantic and yet when I come close she tries to push me away. He thinks what he's going to write. Then he writes.

Bebo I'm glad that you still remember me. You took so long to reply thought you forgot whom amrit was and so you didn't want to reply. Well bebo, what can I say? I am missing you too. I miss holding you, hugging you, touching you and kissing you. So lets say we are even. But bebo I promise, tonight when you are least expecting me, I will come and I will do all these things and then I will go again.

He sends the message. Bebo can't help but laugh. She replies.

Amrit, my jaan, how can I forget you? Sorry I took a long time. I was recovering from all the laughing. Amrit you naughty boy, how will you come and romance with me? I don't think you know but there isn't much space in the bed nd next to me is saru parchiji. It would be a bit hard. Not to mention the room is so dark. Just imagine you come and romance with the wrong girl. That wouldn't be nice! Praji would kill you, parchiji would kill you and then to top it off, I would kill you!

Bebo sends the message.

Amrit reads it and laughs. He replies.

My darling wife, I am not that dumb! If I come I am sure I would be able to tell which one you are. Bebo you would be surprised how much space we need. Good thing you didn't forget me otherwise...

He sends the message. Bebo reads it and replies.

Otherwise what? What would you do? Tell me. Amrit you know and I know that you can never stay angry with me for too long.

Bebo sends the message. Amrit reads it nd thinks about what he's going to say. He replies.

Ok, ok. I get the point. I'm not to good with the threats. But bebo one thing' Come to my room and give me a kiss. I can't get to sleep. At least if I taste your lips I will get to sleep. Eventually'

Bebo reads it and blushes. She shakes her head. She replies.

Amrit... How do I make you understand? My big brothers are in that room with you. I want to come to you, but I cant. Just imagine if one of them see me! As for the kiss' I promise I will kiss you tomorrow morning. I will put my new cherry lip-gloss on so you can keep the taste of me with you for longer.

Bebo sends the message. Amrit reads it. He sighs. He replies.

Fine then. Don't come. But I wont let you escape me tomorrow. Bebo it's really late. We should get some sleep now. Goodnight my darling. Hope to see you in my dreams.

Bebo gets the message, reads it and replies.

Goodnight my jaan. Will see you tomorrow morning. I hope you don't come and haunt my dreams. But for now I will leave you with something... XXX. Three small kisses on your lips from me'

Amrit gets the message, reads it and falls asleep.

The next morning, saru wakes up first in the girls' room and sees bebo is still asleep with her mobile close to her. Saru wakes prabjot up. She doesn't wake bebo up because she knows bebo got to sleep really late at night. Saru is a light sleeper and every time bebo got a new text it disturbed her so she knows what time bebo got to sleep. Also bebo was tossing and turning all night.

Saru nd prabjot wake up and get ready. They tell bebo to wake up. Bebo gets up and freshens up. She comes out and looks through her suitcase and decides what she will wear. Bebo pulls out one of her everyday kameezes. It's blue with very light embroidery. Saru asks bebo if she was going to wear that. Bebo says yes. Saru looks at her solemnly and say no, no, no, no, no! She asks bebo who old she is. Bebo says she's only 20. Saru tells her to dress like a 20 year old. Saru tells prabjot to please give her the gift they got for bebo. She gives a box to bebo and tells her to wear all of the contents inside the box and then come out. Bebo goes to the bathroom again and gets dressed.

She comes out wearing a pink anarkali dress. It's got silver work on it and very done up. It is also sleeveless. Bebo has got the dupatta big around her neck and it covers her arms but because it's see through you can still see her arms. Saru walks towards bebo and tells her to fix the dupatta. Bebo asks how? Saru takes the dupatta and pins it on one of bebo's shoulders and leaves it down. She says bebo looks nice like that. Prabjot then comes with a smaller box. Bebo asks what's in this one. She opens it. Inside are loads of pretty pink bangles. She really likes them but she tells saru she isn't aloud to wear them. She says no one from her in-laws have told her to stop wearing her wedding bangles. Prabjot tells her she's been married for more than a year so she start wearing different bangles. Bebo takes her red ones off and puts her new pink ones on.

Bebo looks really pretty. They all leave and find the boys in the kitchen. All three of them are surprised to see ashok, daljeet and amrit cooking! The girls walk over to their foolish husbands. They are trying to cook but are not getting to far. Amrit is not so bad. He can cook a bit. Bebo walks to bebo. Amrit is mixing like crazy. She places her hand on his shoulder. He turns around and sees bebo. He is mesmerized by bebo's new look. Amrit looks from her head to her feet and then up again. Bebo blushes.

Saru asks them what they are up to. Ashok says they saw that the girls where still asleep and then amrit had the idea for us to cook for you guys. So here we are. I am cooking waffles. Amrit is making pancakes and daljeet is experimenting! They laugh. Amrit tells ashok that the pancakes are done. He takes his apron off and asks to be excused. Amrit takes bebo's hand and pulls her. She says she'll be back. They both leave and go to the small room. Amrit closes the door behind them and then locks it.

Amrit holds bebo and tells her she looks really nice. Bebo says thank you and tells him that saru and prabjot gifted all this to her. Amrit asks bebo for his gift they were talking about last night. Bebo blushes. Amrit asks her if she's got her cherry lip-gloss on. Bebo smiles nd says she does. Amrit pulls her closer. Bebo puts her arms around his neck. Bebo brings herself closer too. Then all we see is amrit and bebo very close and then we zoom out.

In the kitchen the "chiefs" have finished cooking. Saru says that it isn't really fair for amrit and bebo. It's their honeymoon and they aren't getting the privacy they deserve. Saru explains that even until really late bebo was texting amrit. Ashok says that saru is right. Amrit too didn't sleep all night. Daljeet says we should give amrit and bebo the privacy they deserve, but how? There are only two bedrooms. There's no space. Prabjot says, well we could let them have the small bedroom for themselves and we could share the big bedroom. It would be a bit uncomfortable but it would be ok. Ashok says that the matter is settled. They would tell amrit and bebo later in the night.

In the bedroom amrit and bebo are just parting. Amrit has got his hand on bebo's back and bebo's got her hands around amrit's neck. Bebo is blushing. She tells amrit to let go. He says no. Bebo says that she wants to go and taste his pancakes. Amrit says, bebo they will be delicious! I made them with love just for you. Bebo says so should we go. Amrit says come on. Amrit unlocks the door and they go.

When they reach the kitchen everyone is still talking. AmBo come and start eating. Bebo says to ashok that the waffles are really nice and she says to daljeet, praji I like this milkshake it tastes really nice. Daljeet says it isn't milkshake. It's tea with chocolate milk and ice cream. Everyone laughs. Bebo tastes amrit's pancakes and says that they are really nice. Amrit's pancakes are a big hit.

After everyone finish eating, they all go into the living room and talk. Ashok asks amrit why they arrived so late. Amrit explains what happened on the way. Prabjot asks if they met shavan, her and amrit's cousin. Amrit says yes. Prabjot is happy to know that he is getting married soon and she says that they will all go just like the old times.
Saru turns to bebo and asks if she's ok. Bebo says of course. Ashok says, bebo you are ok from last night. After all meeting your first love in such a way must have been a bit awkward. Bebo feels a bit annoyed. Why does everyone keep saying shavan is her first love? Bebo says, he wasn't my first love. I LIKED him. It wasn't love. Bebo says I really liked him and maybe if I spent more time with him my feelings might have turned into love but when he left I still only liked him. She takes amrit's arm and says I wouldn't lie about such a thing. She also says, shavan wasn't my first love, amrit was or should I say, is my first love. Bebo blushes nd everyone coos. Ashok has tears in his eyes and says that his little sister isn't as little as he thought. She's grown up. Prabjot looks at the clock and says that her and daljeet wanted to go to see the Taj Mahal. Amrit says that's where he and bebo are going next. Saru and ashok say they are coming too.
all six of them have reached the site of the Taj Mahal. They split up and go in different directions. Amrit and bebo go towards the Taj Mahal. There is a photographer. The man sees amrit and bebo and calls them over for them to take their picture near the Taj Mahal. AmBo stand together with amrit's arm around bebo and they take their picture. They look really nice. Then they walk towards the stalls. There is a bangle stall. Amrit sees some really nice light blue bangles. He picks them up and puts them on bebo. She likes them. Amrit buys them for her. He also likes some green and purple ones and buys them too.

Amrit and bebo look around and soon they meet up with ashok, saru, daljeet and prabjot, who are buying ice cream. Amrit and bebo buy one ice cream between the two of them. Amrit offers it to bebo. She takes a few licks and then gives it back to amrit. Then he passes it back. They keep doing this until the ice cream is finished. Bebo's brothers and sister-in-laws watch the love between amrit and bebo in all the little things they do together.

That evening back in the cabin, bebo's brothers tells her and amrit that they are going out to watch a movie. They say they are going to watch My Name Is Khan. They also say that if amrit and bebo want to join them, they are more than welcome. Amrit says it's ok. He and bebo have got a DVD to watch, so they will stay at home and watch that. Ashok is fine with that.

After about 10 minutes all four of them leave. Amrit and bebo see them to the door. Amrit closes the door and bebo is walking away. Then he grabs her hand and pulls her back. Bebo nearly falls but amrit catches her. Bebo's hair flies all over the place. Amrit moves her hair away and lifts her up. He moves his finger down her face. Bebo blushes. Amrit whispers in her eyes, where were we last night, before we found out there were other people in the house. Bebo blushes even more. She puts her arms around his neck. Amrit walks through the living room and into the big, master bedroom. He closes the door but doesn't lock it. Amrit puts bebo down in the middle of the bed. Then he stands up and takes the curtains that are around the bed down and draws them. Bebo is sitting in the middle of the bed. Her breathing is getting faster every minute. Amrit comes back and sits down. He puts his hands on bebo shoulder and pushes her back and goes down after her.

We are takes out of the curtains. We can see movement from behind the curtains.

In the car, ashok, daljeet, saru and prabjot have nearly reached the cinema. Daljeet tells prabjot to check if she has the tickets. She opens her bag and says she left them at home. Ashok turns the car around and heads back towards their honeymoon estate.

In amrit and bebo's bedroom, they are lying in bed with their arms around each other. Amrit kisses bebo's forehead. She holds him close.

Just then the door open' Prabjot walks in. she walks towards the bedside table and sees the tickets and picks them up. Bebo is really scared. She holds amrit really, really tightly. They both pray that prabjot doesn't notice anything. Prabjot is leaving the room when she sees that the curtains around the bed are down. She walks back towards the bed. Just then amrit and bebo are saved. Ashok honks the horn for prabjot to hurry up. She leaves the room in a hurry.

Amrit and bebo are relived. Amrit lifts his head up and starts to get out of bed. Bebo catches his arm. She asks him where he's going. He says that they should get a move on. After all praji's might be back soon and next time they might not be so lucky. But isn't happy at all. She says, but amrit' we have had to stay away from each other for so long. Today after so long we have got this chance to spend time with each other. Amrit comes back and sits down with her again. Amrit takes bebo's hand and tells her he knows how she's feeling but they have a weakness. Bebo hugs amrit. Amrit gets out of bed and tells bebo to come quickly he is setting up the DVD. Amrit leaves the room. Bebo feels bad. She says, after so long, just amrit and me. Just us, alone and yet... Oh well don't matter. This time maybe we can't stay together for so long but next time I'm sure he and me can spend more time together.

Amrit is sitting on the sofa and is waiting for bebo. Bebo comes and sits down next to amrit. Amrit extends his arm nd bebo sits down and cuddles up next to him. The film starts. Bebo isn't watching the film as eagerly as amrit. Bebo turns towards amrit. She holds his face and turns it towards her. Amrit looks at bebo. Bebo lets go and puts her hands around his neck. Amrit understands bebo. Bebo brings herself close and amrit does too. He puts his hands on her back and pushes her even closer. Their lips are just about to touch. Saru and prabjot come home. They see amrit and bebo. Ambo haven't noticed them yet. Prabjot nudges saru to do something. Saru goes back out side into the hall and she call that they are home. Amrit and bebo part and then sigh. They all come in.

After eating everyone is going to bed. Ashok tells amrit and bebo the new arrangements. Amrit and bebo are grateful.

Amrit and bebo are standing in the small room by the door. Amrit is locking it and bebo is standing and thinking. She doesn't notice amrit staring at her. Amrit walks towards bebo. She is happy but feeling shy. Bebo walks backwards and amrit keeps walking towards her. Bebo reaches the wall. Amrit tells her that she can't go any further back. Bebo's breathing gets faster. Amrit slides his hand down bebo's arm. He brings himself closer to her. Bebo tries to escape him by going to a side. Amrit puts his arm out. Bebo goes towards the other side. Amrit does the same again. Bebo is trapped between amrit's arms. Amrit kisses bebo's neck. He moves her dupatta and it falls to the ground. Amrit kisses bebo's chest. Amrit puts his hands on her back. He pulls her closer. Bebo keeps her hands down and doesn't hold amrit. He understands she is feeling nervous. They haven't been so close for so long. She's bound to fell a bit nervous. Amrit moves his hands off her back and finds the stings of her dress. He slowly takes them off. Bebo closes her eyes. Amrit lets her go. He puts his hands on her shoulders and brings the straps of her dress down slightly. Bebo is feeling very shy and nervous. She's redder then red. Amrit takes his hands off her and parts. Bebo notices no movement and opens her eyes. Amrit looks at her lovingly and asks her if she's ok with all this. Bebo shakes her head and says, amrit I have been waiting for this moment for so long. When you will hold me, hug me, touch me and kiss me. Also when you and I would' Bebo looks down and blushes. Amrit smiles. He brings her dress straps lower. Amrit lifts her up and takes her to the bed'

In the big room bebo's brothers and sister-in-laws are sitting and talking. Saru says they should get some sleep. Prabjot says amrit and bebo are probably already asleep. Ashok says, they might be. Saru says that they won't be asleep just yet. Amrit and bebo are alone after so long. Rano split them up so badly they couldn't even talk to each other properly for 2 months. Then when all the problems cleared up we pulled them apart by getting them married again. They spent their suhaag raat together but both would have been exhausted after such a long week. Then when they finally got together, again because of us they had to stay away from each other. Tonight after so long there is no one between them. I don't think they will be sleeping yet.

In the small bedroom amrit and bebo are lying next to each other smiling. Amrit pulls the covers over himself and bebo. Bebo pulls the covers right up to her neck. Amrit strokes bebo's cheeks. Bebo gives him a happy and confident smile. Amrit slowly comes closer. He gets on top of bebo and presses on her gently. Bebo puts her hands around his neck. Bebo pulls amrit closer. Amrit is all over bebo, literally. Bebo is feeling shy but she is very happy. She pulls her husband closer. After a while amrit slides off bebo and sees her happy. He gives her a kiss on her cheek. Bebo is happy. She doesn't want this moment and night to end. Bebo makes her first ever proper move on amrit. She slowly and carefully gets on top of amrit. Amrit is over the moon to see her in a new way. He loves the way she kisses him. Amrit is happy that bebo has changed so much and she can show her love so openly. Amrit holds her close and presses her closer to him. Bebo kisses amrit's chest and his neck. Soon bebo gets a bit tired and slides off amrit. He looks at her and she blushes. Amrit extends his arm and bebo cuddles up close to him. Then they zoom out and the night comes to an end.

It's the next morning. Bebo wakes up and looks around. She sits up in bed and pulls the covers up to her chin. She looks at the end of the bed. There she sees her kameez lying next to amrit's shirt. Bebo blushes. She thinks, after so long amrit and me. No one between us, no one around us. Bebo has a flashback of the night before nd blushes to herself. She leans over and kisses amrit's bare chest. Amrit wakes up and bebo blushes. He holds her close and says good morning. Bebo doesn't say anything, she sits and blushes. Amrit says he knows she wouldn't say anything because of what happened between them last night. Bebo can't say anything. She can only mumble and stumble over her word. Amrit pulls bebo and she lands on his chest. Bebo hugs amrit and whispers that she loves him. Amrit strokes her hair. It's tangled and got knots everywhere. Amrit says he loves her too. Amrit looks at the clock and says they should get a move on. Bebo says she can't get out of bed. Amrit is confused and asks her why. Bebo looks at herself and then at her clothes at the end of the bed. Amrit reaches over for his shirt. Bebo holds the blanket. Bebo gives amrit an arm and he puts the shirt on her. Then he does the same with the other arm. Amrit starts to do the buttons up. Bebo carefully moves the blanket away. Amrit smiles at bebo. He leaves the bed nd goes to the bathroom. Bebo looks at amrit's shirt on her and hugs herself.

After this day, amrit and bebo spend 2 more weeks together at the honeymoon estate. Love, romance and even more love. Amrit and bebo depend on these 3 things and enjoy their honeymoon. But after these days are over they have to go back home. But their romancing doesn't end...

OMG finally! I'm done! God that took me more than a week. Hope you liked the scene. Hope you don't mind it's so long. Please tell me what you think. Comments are wanted along with criticisms. Please don't add the fact that it's long as a criticism because I know it far toooooo long. Hope you enjoyed the scene. I enjoyed writing it.

Edited by ganga16tr - 16 years ago
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After a long part 9, I'm back with part 10. My job is nearly done! Hope everyone enjoyed part 9. Thank you for all the lovely comments. They always help me and encourage me to go on and write more for you people. So now sit back and relax and feast yourself on part 10! One thing just before we start the story. Keep your eyes peeled for a "pyar wali jagda!"

This part might be long. It's got a very complex story line. Enjoy!

It three months after amrit and bebo's wedding. Everything has been going well for them, until now...

Bebo and amrit are getting ready to go to shavan's wedding. But then amrit can't go with bebo as he has a meeting to attend to. He tells bebo to go with her brothers and they will meet at Jalhandar station. Bebo isn't happy with amrit's decision. She tells him that she won't go at all if he doesn't go with her. Amrit is getting frustrated he says to her she wont be going alone, she'd be going with her family. Bebo says she doesn't want to go with her family. She wants to go with him. Amrit tells her that she can't have everything her way all the time. Bebo says, he could have said he couldn't attend the meeting moment he could do it a week later. Amrit tells her to stop being so childish. Bebo is hurt and tells him that she's not being childish. Bebo has tears in her eyes. Amrit goes down on his knees and holds his ears and says he's sorry. He didn't want to go all of a sudden but it's important. Bebo says its ok. Bebo is still a bit sad. She's got tears in her eyes. Amrit wipes her tears and tells her he will meet her at Jalhandar station. Bebo nods. Amrit hugs her. Suman is standing at the door. She laughs. AmBo turn around. Suman says she sorry but that was too funny. One minute they are angry at each other and then so much love. She says today something new has been created. Its called a "pyar wali jagda." Amrit and bebo laugh too. Suman tells bebo that her brothers have arrived.

Bebo picks up her suitcase. Amrit takes it from her nd takes it downstairs for her. Downstairs bebo's brothers are waiting for bebo. Ashok takes bebo's suitcase and puts it in the car. Bebo sits down and looks at amrit with sad eyes. Amrit blows her a kiss.

Soon bebo, ashok, daljeet, omi, prabjot and saru reach Amritsar train station. Bebo asks why they can't travel by car why by train. Ashok says the roads are really bad and it's hard travelling but car. They park the car and then go to find the train. The train has arrived. They take their luggage and go into the train. They find their compartment and sit down. Bebo asks how long will it take to get to Jalhandar. Ashok says 3 hours. Bebo is shocked. She asks why. Ashok says there is work going on so everything is a bit slow. Then she asks how long it'll take to reach Delhi. Ashok says 5 hours. Bebo is shocked.

Soon the train starts moving nd they are on the move. Bebo sits and looks out of the window. Bebo's brothers and sister-in-laws are sitting and talking. Saru asks bebo something but bebo isn't listening she's immersed in her own thoughts. Saru nudges prabjot. Prabjot asks bebo what the matter is. Bebo isn't concentrating she says everything is fine. Saru asks her whom she is thinking about. Bebo says amrit. Prabjot asks if she's missing him. Bebo nods her head. Then they all laugh. Bebo comes out of her dreams and says what happened. Saru says, so even though you're with us bebo, your desire is to be with your husband. Bebo says no, it's nothing like that. Prabjot says bebo you said it yourself you were missing him. Bebo blushes and hides her face in her hands. Saru lifts bebo's face and teases her. Bebo says for them to stop teasing her. Saru says sorry. Ashok tells prabjot and saru to leave their little sister alone. Bebo looks at her phone. It hasn't got any reception. She sighs. Just then ashok's phone buzzes he looks at it. It's a message from amrit. He reads it. Amrit is just texting to know if bebo is ok. Ashok asks bebo if she ok. She says yes and asks why. Ashok says amrit's been trying your phone for a while but it's not connecting. He just wanted to know if you were ok. Bebo blushes. Prabjot teases bebo and says that amrit takes such good care of bebo, even when she's with her brothers he is still worried about her. She says to daljeet he should be like amrit. Daljeet is confused and asks her what she means. Prabjot says, amrit takes such good care of his wife and he loves her so much. She says, when daljeet goes to work he forgets that she exists. Prabjot says that every husband should be like amrit saru agrees to this too. Saru tells bebo that her husband is an inspiration to other husbands. Bebo laughs and blushes.

After 3 hours of travelling they reach Jalhandar station. They don't have to change over trains or anything. Bebo looks out of the window. She remembers that on the station she met amrit for the first time. Saru tells her that they will get out for a little while just to get some fresh air. Bebo stays she will sit inside, as she doesn't want to be left behind again as she wont have a hero to save her this time. Prabjot says she should come outside, as amrit would be waiting eagerly to see her. Bebo says she will see him on the train.

Everyone leaves the train but bebo stays on. She looks out of the window and sees amrit coming up to her brothers. Bebo is happy to see him. With amrit is shavan. Bebo remembers the time she was left behind on the station and then she met amrit. Amrit is talking to bebo's brothers and asking them where bebo is. They say she's on the train she didn't want to come out because she didn't want to miss the train like last time. Prabjot asks amrit how come shavan is with him. Amrit explains that shavan too was at the meeting and he was travelling by the same train as them. Shavan was going home so he could get married. Amrit is in a hurry. He says they should get on the train and go to bebo. Everyone teases him and say he's just eager to see his wife. Amrit blushes and shavan tells everyone to leave his brother alone. Suddenly the train starts moving. Bebo is sitting inside. When she notices this everyone is still outside and they haven't noticed the train has started to move. Bebo gets scared and jumps up. She calls out to amrit. He looks and sees the train on the move. Everyone looks and sees the train moving.

The train is picking up speed. Bebo is very scared. She runs to the door and jumps out. She lands on the station. Bebo's brothers, sister-in-laws and amrit are still running after the train. In the end all of them get on. Or do they...

Bebo is sitting on a bench and crying. An old man is passing and sees her crying. He asks her what the matter is. Bebo says she's been left behind on the station. She asks the man if she saw 5 men and 2 women standing on the platform a little while ago. The man says he did. They nearly missed their train but in the end they all got on. Bebo says thanks. Then she sits and cries. Suddenly a second man comes and asks her what the matter is. Bebo doesn't look up and says she's been left behind. The man says her name. Bebo looks up. It's amrit! Bebo is very happy. She jumps up from the bench and hugs him. Amrit asks her what the matter is. Bebo says she thought everyone left her behind again. She also says she was scared that she wouldn't find anyone. Amrit says, that he would have surly come for her. Bebo says this is how we met the first time. Amrit says, oh yes. We met on this station over a year ago. We were complete strangers but we trusted each other so much, friendship grew between us and then that friendship turned into love. Bebo blushes. Amrit says they should look around and see the site around. After all the train comes after 3 hours. This time she can trust him after all he's her husband now. So' Amrit gives bebo his arm and she takes it. They leave the station. They get a rickshaw. Amrit asks bebo if she can remember how she reacted when he sat on the rickshaw the first time when they met. She said, he thought she didn't know how to sit on a rickshaw. Amrit laughs.

They stop in front of the temple. Bebo says she wants to go inside. Amrit jumps down and helps bebo down. They go inside and pray together...

Deviki aunty (bebo's real mother) is in the temple and praying that wherever her daughter is she should be happy and safe. She turns around and sees bebo. Bebo sees her to and calls her name happily. Bebo walks towards her. She says hello. Deviki is shocked to see bebo. She asks bebo how she is. Bebo says she's fine. Deviki asks her how come she's here so late at night, that too in Jalhandar. Bebo says she's going to a wedding but she got left behind so she just came to pray. Deviki tells bebo to come home with her. She's in an unknown city, in the middle of the night all alone isn't good for a young girl. Bebo says she's not alone, amrit's with her. Deviki whispers to bebo and says that she shouldn't trust any man even if he's a good friend. Bebo laughs and takes amrit's arm. She tells deviki that amrit is her husband. Amrit takes deviki's blessings. Deviki is shocked and questions bebo about her marriage and so on. Bebo tells deviki all about her and amrit and how they got married and so on. Bebo asks deviki if she ever found her daughter. Deviki tells her that she has. She then stops and says to bebo, this might sound strange but I want to tell you something bebo. You are my daughter. Maybe you don't know but the narang family isn't your own. Bebo says, oh. She looks at amrit. Bebo says, I know that my family isn't my own, but' Deviki tells bebo that she is telling the truth. Bebo says that she believes her. Deviki hugs bebo. Then she asks bebo to come home with her. Bebo says she cant. Deviki asks why. Bebo says, even if I hadn't got married I still wouldn't be able to come with you. The point is even though they are not my blood relatives, they brought me up as their own and I cant deceive them like that. But now I am married. I live the life of a wife and daughter-in-law. I can't come anyhow. I don't even belong to the narang family any more. I belong to amrit's family and I am very happy with this. Deviki tells bebo that she should always be happy. Deviki takes her purse out and gives bebo and amrit some money. She tells amrit to bring bebo to her home some times. Amrit agrees. Then deviki leaves. Amrit and bebo look at each other still not believing what just happened.

They go back to the station. AmBo sit on a bench and wait for the train to come. Bebo is feeling cold. Amrit takes his jacket off and puts it on bebo. Bebo tells him to leave it and for him to wear it as then he would feel cold. Amrit says he's got a jumper so it's ok. Bebo cuddles up next to amrit and falls asleep. Soon the train arrives. Amrit wakes bebo up and they go on to the train. There all of bebo's brothers and sister-in-laws are happy to see them. Shavan too is with them. Bebo and amrit sit down opposite shavan and omi. They all ask AmBo if they are ok. Bebo says that they are fine. Bebo is feeling really tired. Saru tells bebo to sleep. Bebo puts her head on amrit's shoulder. They tell her to lie down. Bebo says she can't. There's not enough space. Prabjot says, you have a husband and you have his lap. You can put your head on his lap and sleep. Bebo says it's ok. Omi tells her not to feel shy. Bebo looks at amrit. He sits comfortably and gestures for her to lie down. Bebo puts her head on amrit's lap and turns to face him. She puts her hands around his waist and closes her eyes. Amrit strokes bebo hair. Everyone asks amrit if they enjoyed their time together. Amrit says they enjoyed their time. So many memories are linked to this station. For example their first ever meeting. Daljeet says to amrit, god has strange ways of making sole mates meet. Daljeet continues and says, amrit and bebo are sole mates and they had a very interesting way of meeting each other. They meet on a train station in the middle of the night when they are all alone. Amrit smiles and looks at bebo. Amrit tells them all what happened at the "mandir" with deviki aunty. They are all shocked to know the truth. Saru asks amrit how bebo reacted. Amrit tells her what bebo says and how she reacts. Ashok has a tear and says their little sister is so mature. They all agree. Everyone is feeling tired. Omi falls asleep and so do ashok, prabjot and daljeet. Only saru, amrit and shavan are awake. Amrit asks shavan who he's getting married to. Shavan says that he doesn't know her to well. All her knows is that she's the daughter of his father's cousin brother. Amrit is talking to shavan but stroking bebo's hair and her face at the same time. Shavan tells amrit that he can stop stroking bebo. Amrit blushes nd puts his hands down by his side. Saru enters the conversation and asks shavan what's so bad about amrit taking care of his wife whilst she's sleeping. Us girls like to served by our husbands every moment of your lives. But not all husbands are the same and bother to hold their wives. She looks at ashok who's sleeping and sighs. Suddenly he puts his arm around her. Saru looks at him but he's still asleep. Saru blushes and amrit tells her she's got what she wanted. Saru puts her head on ashok's shoulder and falls asleep too.

Only amrit and shavan are awake. Bebo wakes up suddenly. She's feeling scared. She cries and searches for amrit. He tells her that he's there. Bebo gets up and hugs him. Bebo cries. Amrit asks her what the matter is. Bebo says she dreamed that rano came back and this time she took amrit away from her. So far bebo never found him again. Bebo cries and amrit comforts her. He says that can't happen. Rano's in jail and she's going to stay there for the next 15 years. Amrit kisses bebo's forehead and tells her to sleep. She says she's not tired any more. Bebo asks if amrit is going to sleep. He says he's not tired. Shavan is watching amrit and bebo and he is feeling envious.

It's really early in the morning. Everyone is still on the train and they are all awake. Bebo gives amrit a big bear hug and says good morning. Amrit says good morning. Everyone turn to the couple and shout good morning at them. Amrit and bebo are startled. Prabjot says, say good morning to each other but forget about us. Amrit says sorry and says good morning to everyone individually. Shavan says to amrit, amrit you always used to say to me, there should be a lot of love and romance in a relationship and tonight I have seen that you were right. I saw you and bhabi, how close you are. Even though ashok, daljeet, omi, saru didi and prabjot didi are here you both were so immersed in yourselves. Amrit looks at bebo and gives her a cuddle. Amrit says, that's how love works. There will be that one person in your life, which means everything to you. No matter who else is there, as long as that person is with you, you don't need anyone else. Shavan says, it's interesting how you were trying to patch me up with bebo and then you go and get hooked up with her instead. Amrit says, that was before I realized my feeling for bebo. But now, shavan even though you're my brother you can't even look at my bebo the way you used to before. Bebo blushes and looks lovingly at amrit. Ashok says, amrit you are absolutely right. Sometime we have to be possessive over our wives and that your love is the most important person in your life. Shavan turns to bebo and says, bhabi tell us, and how romantic is amrit. Bebo says what. Shavan says don't get me wrong. When we were in collage amrit was one of the most eligible bachelors and yet he never got himself a girlfriend. He used to tell us that he's going to save his love and romance for the right girl. The one he wants to spend his life with. We all wanted to know what kind of a girl he meant. But he never told us. All he would say was that, the girl that's for him would be the one that he can understand just by looking into her eyes. She would be the one that would make his stop breathing for a second. It used to be so funny to see the girls in collage trying to impress him. But no matter how hard they tried amrit kept pushing them away. So amrit tell us is bebo bhabi that girl you always dreamed about the right one for you. Amrit looks into bebo's eyes and says yes. Bebo smiles. Amrit says, bebo is the girl I have been waiting for to enter my life. It took me a bit of time to realise she was the one but I worked it out in the end. Bebo smiles and hugs amrit.

Saru asks bebo about a prince she once dreamed about. Bebo blushes and pretends that she doesn't understand what saru means. Saru says, you know bebo, that prince you dreamed about. The one that would sweep you off your feet and take you away one day. Bebo blushes and says she doesn't remember. Prabjot says, oh I know which one your talking about now. Bebo how can you forget. This is something so special that we can never forget. Bebo admits that she does remember. Saru tells her to tell them. Bebo feels dreamy and says, my dream prince' He's the one that would enter my life suddenly and be there forever. He would love more than anything on earth. Even without me saying anything, he understands me. No matter how many girls he meets he would always turn back and look at me. His eyes tell me everything. He's the one that cares about me so much, even if he wants something, he thinks about me first. Saru tells bebo that's enough for now. Prabjot says, bebo tell us now, is amrit that prince charming. Sometime we get patched up with someone who isn't our dream prince and there's nothing wrong with that. So bebo tell us.

Bebo says it's true. Sometimes, after amrit and me got married I felt that maybe I haven't got the person I dreamed about. Things started off quite tough. But then it got better. Slowly our relationship changed. I accepted him as my husband, but I felt he's not the prince of my dreams. Amrit feels nervous. Bebo continues. But then I started to change me decision. I remember that day clearly when I realised his love and care for me. It was the night bablu was misbehaving with me and amrit got very angry. He beat bablu a lot. Even bablu beat amrit, but amrit never stopped. He beat bablu black and blue. Only when bablu stopped fighting did he stop. Praji, parchiji, he didn't do it because he likes fighting. He did it because he cares about me and' Bebo blushes and looks at amrit. She continues. And he loves me. Everyone coos and amrit cuddles bebo. Bebo makes amrit let go. That night I realised he cares about me a lot and loves me even more. I thought and though about everything he's done for me and then I realised that I love him more than I thought and he was the person I have been waiting for all me life. My dream prince. My amrit. Everyone coos and claps and cheers. Amrit hugs bebo. He tells her he loves her very much.

Shavan is feeling really jealous. How could amrit do that to him? Get married to the girl that his brother loved. Shavan promises himself that he will talk to amrit, no matter what happens.

Everyone is tiding, as they would have to get off the train soon. Amrit opens his bag. He takes out a gift with gold wrapping paper. Amrit gives it to bebo. She asks what it is. Amrit says its not really new, it belongs to you but it was taken away from you. Today I am returning it to you. Bebo is confused but she opens it. It's her diary. Bebo looks at it shocked and opens it. It's her diary all right. Bebo asks amrit how come he has it after all rano burnt it. Amrit says she burnt the copy of your diary I made. I kept the original with me so I can give it back to you. I've been trying to give it for so long but I never get a good chance or I forget. Bebo says thanks and she gives him a hug. Bebo looks suspiciously and asks amrit if he read it. Amrit says he accidentally read one entry from the 3rd of October 2009. Bebo turns to that page. Prabjot takes it and starts to read. Bebo begs her to give it back. Prabjot says, bebo we won't laugh. Let us read this page. Bebo sighs but she agrees. Prabjot starts reading. Bebo realises which page it is and she tries to take it back, but it's to late.

Prabjot is reading: Dear diary today must have been one of the most beautiful days of my life. Where should I start? Every girl dreams of true loves first kiss. They dream about how beautiful the moment would be. I too have been waiting. Today my wait was over! That's right. I experienced my first kiss! Amrit kissed me for the first time! What a beautiful moment it was. I can't tell any one how I felt. So I am writing it here. Oh god, it was so beautiful, so romantic and so passionate! I'm melting just thinking about it. Oh god, how will I face him again! I feel so shy! But I will have to; after all I have to spend my life with him. How we started with a normal day and it changed to such a beautiful one! I was simply giving him his tea. He caught my hand so lovingly and pulled me back. He says thanks to me for entering his life and taking such good care of him. He tells me he loves me very much. How I wanted to express my feelings but I felt so shy and my tongue felt as though it was in a knot. Then he stood up and came closer to me. Then it happened... he let me go and I ran away. For the rest of the day I couldn't face him again. Everything looks so colourful! Oh god, I still can't believe it! I experienced my first ever kiss. Amrit kissed me! Ok I should stop now, I'm blabbering on. But I still think I'm dreaming. Oh my god he KISSED ME! Wow!

Prabjot finishes reading. She feels really guilty. Bebo stands up and she runs off crying to another compartment. Everyone calls out to her. Amrit feels a bit uncomfortable. Daljeet says to prabjot, why did you have to do that? Why read a page of bebo's diary, especially a page from after her wedding? It was obvious it would be about something like this. Something personal that she wouldn't want us to know about. It may have been privet or just something she doesn't want us to know. You know how bebo is; she writes everything in her diary. If she and amrit had an argument she would have wrote it, that's something she wouldn't want us to know about. As for romance I'm certain she wouldn't want us to know about. Prabjot just think if that entry was about something really privet and you read it out. Would you like it if your brothers heard an entry from your diary? Prabjot says she's really sorry. Daljeet says he's ashamed of her. Prabjot hangs her head in shame. Saru goes after bebo. Bebo is sitting with her knees to her chest and she is crying. Saru comes and tells bebo to stop crying. Bebo says she feels so embarrassed. Saru says she understands. She tells bebo to come back. Bebo says everyone will tease me. Saru says no one will tease you. Everyone understands how special a first kiss is. Bebo says still. It feels wrong when her brothers hear her express her feelings about her first kiss. Saru says prabjot didn't mean any harm. She was being how she always is. She is really sorry. Saru tells bebo to come on. Bebo wipes her tears and stands up. She feels shy and goes back to their compartment. Bebo sits down next to amrit but feels very uncomfortable. Amrit too isn't feeling himself. Prabjot apologises. Bebo says it's ok. All the while shavan is burning inside. He remembers lines from bebo's diary. What he saw the night before between amrit and bebo...

They finally reach their destination. Shavan's sister neelam is waiting for them at the door. She says hello to everyone. She sees bebo and remembers that bebo was once met to marry shavan. Bebo goes up to her and they embrace. Bebo asks neelam how she is. Neelam says she's fine. Then neelam sees amrit and says hi to him. Amrit is happy to see his cousin sister. Neelam says she's very angry at amrit. Amrit asks why. Neelam says he left their house to work somewhere else and then he never came back. Amrit says he did want to come back but then he got married and' Neelam is shocked and asks amrit when he got married and who to. Amrit calls bebo over. Bebo comes and amrit takes her hand. Amrit says, I got married to bebo. Neelam asks how come. Bebo feels a bit uncomfortable with this question and knows why it is being asked. Amrit says well, I liked bebo more than a friend and papaji agreed that it would be good if we got married so' neelam congratulates amrit and bebo and wishes them a happy married life. Then shavan's mom and dad come. Everyone takes their blessings. Amrit and bebo take their blessings together. Shavan's mom sees bebo and feels a bit awkward. Amrit says, chachiji you already know bebo, but you don't know that bebo is my wife and the daughter-in-law of your family. Shavan's mom is shocked. Shavan's dads says, oh yes I forgot to tell you. Amrit and bebo got married to each other over a year ago. He blesses them for a happy future. Shavan's mom says to bebo, I am sorry dear. Because of me your marriage with shavan broke off. I got so hyped up about your ego I forgot that even though your not the narang families real daughter you still get their culture. For that forgive me dear. Bebo says, auntyji why are you saying sorry to me? What ever happened was meant to happen. It was my destiny. In fact I should thank you. If you hadn't refused for me and shavan to get married I would have never been able to marry amrit. Shavan's mom tells bebo to always remain happy with amrit. Neelam says there's no need to pray, we know bebo will be happy with amrit praji. After all you can tell that he is the type that would love his wife more than anything else.

That evening everyone is having dinner. Shavan's dad tells that the wedding is in 4 days time and that tomorrow night they will have a little BBQ. Just family and close friends.

It's the morning of the BBQ. Amrit is still asleep and bebo is pulling one dress after another out of the cupboard. Amrit wakes up to find a dupatta on top of his head. He moves it away and sits up. He asks bebo what the matter was. Bebo turns around and says good morning. Then she says she doesn't know what to wear. She wants to wear a nice suit in the morning and then in the evening for the BBQ she wants to wear a nice sari but she doesn't know which one. Amrit gets out of bed and says that's easy. He takes out a teal green dress and tells bebo to wear that now and then to wear a baby pink sari in the evening. Bebo says that's perfect and gives him a big hug.

Amrit, bebo, ashok, daljeet, omi, saru, prabjot, neelam, suman, harmeet and geet are all in the hall. Everyone is talking. Suddenly shavan calls out to bebo. She asks what the matter is. Shavan says that amrit said that she doesn't know how to be romantic. Bebo looks at amrit and he says that shavan is lying he didn't says anything of the type. Bebo stands up and walks over to amrit. She says I'm not romantic? I'll get you for that! Bebo starts chasing amrit like Tom and Jerry! She chases him around the living room and then he runs up the stairs. Bebo goes after him. Amrit goes into their bedroom and flops down on the bed. Bebo stands in front of him. He pulls her and she lands on top of him. Bebo blushes. Amrit makes her lie down next to him. They laugh. Amrit says that was fun. We should do that sometimes. Bebo looks at the clock and says that they should get ready, as the BBQ will start in a little while. Bebo jumps up and goes to get changed.

She comes out of the bathroom wearing the light pink sari amrit told her to wear. Like all of bebo's saris this one too was made of light material and you could see her tummy. Amrit is stunned and says she's looking very pretty. Bebo smiles and walks to the dressing table. She is ready. Amrit stands behind her and puts his hand on her tummy and chin on her shoulder. He says that she should wear such saris more often nd give him a treat. Bebo blushes. Shavan is standing at the door. He isn't happy. He thinks if I got married to bebo I could have been the one touching her instead of him.

The BBQ is taking place on the roof. Bebo is serving everyone. Shavan's mom tells bebo to sit down and enjoy but bebo says that she doesn't mind serving everyone. Auntyji says, bebo you have come to our house as a daughter-in-law for the first time and you are doing so much. Bebo says, chachiji just assume that your daughter is doing all this. Shavan's mom is touched by bebo's gesture. Amrit calls bebo over nd says, you feed everyone else but forget about me. Bebo says she will bring him something to eat. Bebo comes back with a plate of samosas, pakoras, parathas and different chutneys. Amrit says so much? Bebo says I got all the things I thought you would like. Amrit tells her to feed him. Bebo feeds amrit. He takes food off the plate and feeds her. Shavan sees all this and burns with jealously. Bebo brothers walk over and say, this is amazing, ever since she has got married she forgets her brothers. Omi says, bebo feed us for once. You can feed amrit all your life. Bebo blushes and amrit tells them to sit down. Ashok says they were joking. Bebo says, but you said the truth. Ever since I have got married I haven't been able to feed my brothers. One by one bebo gives them a bite of everything. Omi says, bebo there's magic in your hands. I ate this pakora and it didn't taste this good. When you fed me it, it tastes much better. Bebo laughs. Daljeet says enough bebo. You've fed us enough. Now it's amrit's turn. Poor guy didn't eat anything as he was waiting for his wife to feed him and when she finally makes time for him she starts feeding her brother. Amrit says he doesn't mind. He understands a brother's love for his sister and a sister's affection for her brother. Ashok is touched and says, bebo see, this is why we got you married to amrit. He understands the feelings of the girls' side of the family. You should be happy to have a husband like him. Bebo blushes and says, I am happy to have amrit as my life partner. Amrit is touched and bebo's brothers coo.

Soon it starts to rain...

Everyone rushes inside. Amrit doesn't want to go inside. Bebo goes and gets him and tells him to come inside. Amrit says he doesn't want to. Bebo says, fine don't come but I'm going. She starts to walk away but amrit catches her and pulls her back. It's raining really hard now. Bebo is completely wet. Her tummy is even more visible. Amrit turns her around and kisses her wet neck. Bebo closes her eyes and enjoys the moment. After a while amrit turns her around again. He looks at bebo's wet face. He moves his finger down her face. Amrit puts his hands around bebo's waist and brings her closer. Bebo closes her eyes again. Amrit comes closer to kiss her. The rain is falling hard. Both of them keep coming close. They almost kiss but then someone comes and coughs. Amrit and bebo part and look.

It's shavan! Shavan looks at bebo inappropriately. Bebo notices this and hides behind amrit and takes his arm. Amrit stands in front of bebo protectively so that shavan can't see her. Shavan says, what are you two still doing outside? It's raining cats and dogs! Amrit says, when it rains it's fun to spend time in the rain with the one you love. Bebo blushes and shavan says he knows. He's been watching them. Amrit and bebo are shocked. Amrit says, you've been watching us? Shavan thinks, oh god what do I say now. Shavan thinks fast and says he came to call them and saw all that. Amrit says, shavan you shouldn't have been watching us. There's something called privacy. Shavan says how can you get any privacy when you're romancing each other on the roof of someone else's house. Amrit says people respect the fact that a husband and a wife need their space and privacy no matter where they are. You won't understand this yet, you'll understand after you get married. Shavan grumbles and walks off. After he goes amrit turns to bebo and tells her they should go inside or they'll catch a cold.

Everyone has got changed and is sitting in the living room. Amrit and bebo come and join them. Papaji says to bebo and amrit that they are going to have a bebo quiz. Bebo is confused and says, what's a bebo quiz? Papaji chuckles and says a quiz all about you. Basically, I have thought of some questions, which I will ask. It will be ashok against amrit. We want to see who knows bebo better, her big brother or her husband. Bebo blushes. Daljeet says that it's obvious that ashok praji is going to win. Saru asks bebo who she thinks is going to win. Bebo doesn't say anything but looks at amrit. He gives her a wink. Prabjot sees this and says, look, look bebo is on her husband's side. Papaji says, there's nothing wrong with that. The quiz starts. The first question is what is bebo's favourite colour. Amrit answers first nd says pink. Papaji says that's correct. The next question is, who is bebo favourite big brother. Amrit again is first to answer and says ashok praji. He's correct. Who does bebo love the most? Amrit answers chaiji. Amrit is correct. Who does bebo love the most after chaiji? Amrit is stuck now. He is thinking between, bebo' parent, brothers and himself. Alas ashok answers first. He says amrit. He is correct. Amrit looks over to bebo who is blushing. The last question is, what is bebo's dream? Amrit answers, bebo's dream is for her family to be happy always. Papaji says, amrit you have half a mark. There is more to bebo's dream. Amrit thinks. Ashok answers, bebo wants her family to always be happy, no evil eye is ever cast upon them and she can be their daughter for all lifetimes. And that she can be amrit's suhaagan for all her lifetimes and she would like one day to have her own little family with amrit, their own children. Papaji says that's absolutely correct. Papaji adds up the score and says amrit has got, 3 and a half whilst ashok got 1 and a half. So this means amrit knows his wife better than bebo's big brother.

The game has ended and amrit goes to sit with bebo again. She is blushing a lot. Amrit takes her hand and says, bebo do you want us to have our own family one-day? Bebo blushes and nods her head. Amrit says why didn't you tell me this is what you want? Bebo says, I don't know it's just a plan for the future, not for tomorrow. Amrit smiles and tells her he understands.

Shavan is sitting and watching all the commotion. He envies his cousin.

That evening shavan asks bebo for her help. He wants to know what shoes to wear on his wedding. Bebo tells him what to wear. She is about to leave when she remembers she wants to see the picture of the bride. Shavan tells her that there's an album with the picture of the girl. Bebo sees an album with a picture of amrit on the front. She takes it out and sees it says, amrit's proposal album. Bebo asks shavan what this is. Shavan says that's an album with all the proposals that came for amrit. She says did he accept any of them. Shavan says no. He rejected all of them. Bebo looks through. Some of the girls are very pretty and highly educated. Bebo feels a bit, nothing compared to some of them. Amrit comes in and sees bebo looking through the album. He says that he was looking for her everywhere. Amrit asks shavan how come he's still got that album. Shavan says, some of the girls are really pretty and that they have got their numbers on the back of them. Amrit says, shavan you should get rid of my book and yours. What will your wife think when she comes and sees these. Shavan says he doesn't really care. Bebo interrupts the brothers and asks amrit why he rejected all these girls. Amrit says none of them where the right one for him. Bebo says, they are so educated they would have gone perfectly with you, why did you choose me and not one of them. Amrit says their egos don't matter to me or their beauty. It's who they are. I married you because your one of a kind and beautiful. Your loving, caring and so understanding. It's almost as though I have married a goddess not a human. Bebo blushes and hugs amrit tightly. She says she loves him very much. Amrit says he loves her too.

Shavan is feeling cold.

Later that evening, before bebo comes to bed, shavan goes to talk to amrit. He knocks on the door. Amrit tells shavan to come in. shavan looks around cautiously just to check if bebo was in the room. Amrit ask him what the matter was. Shavan is angry and says why did you marry bebo. Amrit stays cool and says you know why. I love her. Shavan says I love her too. How did you do that to me? Amrit says, you broke your ties with her and left her heartbroken. Shavan says he was helpless. Amrit says, sometimes no matter what happens, if you want something you go forward for it. You stepped back and left bebo. You didn't listen to me. Amrit says please shavan just leave I don't want to have this conversation. I don't see why I have to justify myself to you for a relationship I hold. Shavan says you could have told me what to do. You could have told me how I should have gone against my family. Amrit says, shavan you were meant to be marrying bebo. I don't see why I have to tell you how to do everything. What would you have done after your marriage? If you wanted to romance her, come to amrit and ask him how. If you wanted to touch her you would have asked me how. If you wanted to take your relationship forward still ask me. Shavan I can remember everything I helped you with, to try and patch you up with bebo. I helped you write that love letter. I help you how to meet her. What kind of life was that for me? What kind of life would it have been for you? Whenever you wanted to talk to bebo in privet I would have to be there. How would it have been for her? Bebo is standing at the door listening to the two brothers arguing over her. She feels bad. Bebo walks in and takes amrit's arm. She tells shavan and amrit to stop arguing. Amrit stop and looks at her. Bebo says to shavan, I know what was between us is hard to forget. We liked each other a lot. Shavan says I loved you. Bebo sighs. She says whatever happened is in the past. You have to look forward into the future. Shavan says I have a question for you. He says, bebo you loved me too, didn't you? Bebo looks at him and says no. I didn't love you. I LIKED you. There's a difference between the two. Love is what I feel for amrit. The desire to change yourself for someone. To always want to be with them. When you're with them, you forget about everything else. Shavan is feeling irritant. He says just be quite. Amrit says you can't speak to her like that. Remember bebo is your bhabi. You have to respect. Her shavan says, you're my older brother. If I don't respect you why should I respect your wife? Bebo joins her hands and says, please leave my husband and me alone. We are happy together. We don't need any problems because of you. Any way you are getting married in a few days. You have to put your whole into that relationship. Forget about everything in the past. That was my biggest mistake I made. Shavan looks at bebo questioningly and so does amrit. Bebo says today, shavan I will tell you something that's only between amrit and me. Well we got married happily, but we didn't have a proper husband-wife relationship to start with. The point is I couldn't accept him and love him as my husband. The problem was our friendship. Our friendship was so strong it felt so strange being married to him all of a sudden. If only then I knew that it's better to start a new relationship with a clean mind it's easier. If I had cleared all those thoughts nd emotions it would have been easier for me and I could have had a proper relationship with him sooner. But then when I found this out I took it took action and it really worked. I found that I understood amrit better and that my love for him was more blatant only then did we start having a proper husband wife relationship. I still remember that night clearly. Can you amrit? The first night we slept together and you touched me. Amrit says, how can I forget that night? It was the specialist life of my life. The 28th of September 2009. Bebo smiles and gives him a hug. Shavan still feels envious but says if you say so, I will give my life a new start. Bebo says thank you and he leave.

A little while later ambo are not in their room. Shavan sneaks into the room and hides on the balcony behind the windows. Amrit and bebo come in. Bebo takes her nightclothes and goes into the bathroom. She comes out wearing a black silk dressing gown and nightdress. Wow she looks so nice. Amrit is already in bed. Bebo stands by the bed and takes the dressing gown off. The dress if quite short and has got a deep front and back. Amrit just smiles at her. He's used to seeing bebo like this. But shavan is beauty struck. Bebo gets into bed and cuddles up to amrit. He kisses her forehead. Amrit says, bebo you always look extra beautiful in this nightdress. Bebo says thanks. I like this one too. Amrit says this is my favourite one. Bebo asks why. Amrit holds her shoulders and says I can feel you better. Bebo blushes.

Amrit and bebo are really tired and nearly fall asleep when amrit starts tossing and turning like an elephant. Bebo asks him what the matter is. Amrit says he's feeling really hot. He asks if he can move the blanket off. Bebo nods and says she's ok with that. Amrit moves the blanket away. Bebo has cuddled up next to amrit. She's very close to him. She's got her knee on his leg and because of this her nightdress seems shorter just a tiny bit below her knee. Shavan can't bare to look at amrit and bebo. Amrit isn't really tired any more nd bebo is still wide-awake. Amrit think, maybe a bit of romance will put us both to sleep. Amrit puts his hand on bebo's knee and moves his hand up her leg. Bebo feels shy. He reaches her waist and gives her a bit of a

squeeze. Amrit doesn't stop he keeps going. He reaches her face. Amrit moves hair. Amrit brushes his lips on bebo's shoulder. It tickles bebo a bit and she giggles. Shavan cant bare this any more. He can't watch. Amrit's in the mood for some good old romance. He climbs on top of bebo and kisses her neck. She puts her hands around him nd then lets go again. Amrit climbs off her and asks what the matter is. Bebo says it's really hot tonight. Amrit agrees. He takes his t-shirt off. Bebo looks at him nd blushes. Amrit asks her why she's looking at him like that. Bebo says nothing just admiring my husband's good looks. Amrit smiles at bebo nd come down on her again. Bebo puts her hands around him. Amrit and bebo are just getting into their comfort zone.

Shavan has had enough. He tries to open the balcony door but it's locked. Oh god he's trapped and amrit and bebo are having one of their extra close romantic session. Shavan says, oh god what am I meant to do now. I only wanted to see if amrit and bebo were telling the truth if they had a proper relationship and now I'm stuck while their' He bangs the balcony door. Amrit and bebo are startled. Amrit is still on top of bebo. He looks up and then looks at bebo. He gets off of her and says, who there. Come out with your hands up. Shavan comes out slowly. Amrit and bebo are shocked. They jump out of bed. Shavan looks at bebo from top to bottom. Bebo hates it when he does that. She turns around and picks her dressing gown up and puts it on. She feels very uncomfortable with the way shavan is looking at her. Amrit tells shavan to stop looking at bebo like that. Shavan looks down. Amrit says, shavan what are you doing hiding in our bedroom. Shavan doesn't say anything. Amrit says, you have no right to be in here. Shavan says it's my house and I can be where ever I want. Amrit says I respect the fact it's your house but I am in this room and until I am here you have to knock and then enter. Not sneak in and out whenever you want to. Shavan says I just wanted to see what kind of relationship you and bebo have. Bebo is shocked and amrit is furious. Amrit says, how could you? You're my brother and yet. I'm disgusted. Shavan says you should be ashamed of yourself the way you were touching her. Amrit says I can touch my wife any way I like that's something you shouldn't worry about. Amrit says, I have had enough of this. Tomorrow evening after the wedding bebo and me are going to leave. We wont stay on for another 2 nights how we planned. Bebo agrees with amrit and says, you're right. I don't want to stay somewhere, where you have to justify every action you take amrit. Amrit pats bebo and asks shavan to leave. Amrit also says that he will tell chachiji about what he's been doing. Shavan grumbles and leaves the room. Amrit and bebo are to annoyed to have any more romance. Both lie in bed and fall asleep.

The next morning everyone is busy preparing for the wedding. Bebo is working hard helping everyone. The whole morning she keeps feeling a bit dizzy but she ignores it because she thinks it's because she didn't get any sleep the night before. The wedding goes on ahead in the evening and the bride enters her in-laws house. Her name is neha. She's very pretty, looks a bit like bebo nd she's a bit short as well. Everyone is sitting in the living room talking to the new couple. Neha asks her mother-in-law if she could talk to bebo alone. She agrees and tells bebo to take neha to her room. Bebo helps neha up the stairs and they sit together in bebo's room. Neha says, bhabi there is something bothering me and I can't say it to anyone apart from you. You will understand me as you have the same status as me in this family. You too are a daughter-in-law. Bebo says yes. We daughter-in-laws have to get together sometimes and talk about our husbands and back bite about them. Bebo giggles and asks neha what the matter is. Neha says that shavan said to her a few days ago that he doesn't want to have any relationship with me. He also said he is only marring me because this is what his family wants. Neha says that he loves someone else but she got married to someone else. Bebo is feeling guilty. Neha asks bebo if she knows anything. Bebo can't lie. She tells neha the whole truth about her and shavan. Bebo apologises and says that because of her shavan can't accept neha as his wife. Neha says, bhabi I'm sorry. I didn't mean to hurt you. I was just asking. Any way it's not your fault. Whatever happened was apart of your destiny. Suddenly someone knocks on the door. Bebo asks to be excused. It's amrit. Amrit comes in and says bebo are you ok? Saru parchiji just told me you were feeling a bit dizzy in the morning and throughout the entire ceremony. Bebo says she's fine. Bebo tells amrit about neha and her worries. Neha sees amrit and bebo whispering but she doesn't mind. Amrit comes and he sits down with bebo next to neha. Amrit says, neha you know who I am, shavan's cousin brother nd bebo's husband. Neha says yes I know. Amrit says, bebo has just told me what the matter is. I will talk to shavan for you before we leave tonight and try to make him understand the matter. Neha says thanks and amrit tells them that they should go downstairs now.

Downstairs everyone is sitting around the table. Bebo serves everyone. After every few minutes bebo feels very dizzy. She is severing her mother-in-law and she feels sick. Bebo runs to the kitchen and throws up. She comes out and looks really pale. Everyone is worried. Bebo says she's fine. Suman finishes eating nd tells bebo to sit with amrit ad eat. Bebo sits down but before she can eat anything the faints. Everyone is worried. Amrit leaves his food, lifts bebo up and takes her to their room. He asks shavan to call the family doctor.

The doctor comes and asks everyone to leave the room only amrit can stay with his wife. Whilst the doctor is checking bebo her consciousness come back.

Everyone is standing outside the room, waiting for amrit to come and tell them what the matter was of bebo. Saru says might be feeling a bit odd because she hasn't been sleeping to feel or she might have got food poisoning. Everyone is worried. Amrit comes out with the doctor. He tells amrit to take care of bebo.

The doctor leaves and amrit starts going a bit crazy. Papaji asks if bebo is ok. Amrit says, before I say anything I would like to take everyone's blessings. Amrit takes papaji's, mummyji's, chaiji's, chachaji's, chachiji's, his mother's and buaji's blessings.

Amrit comes back to papaji. Papaji says, amrit my boy our blessing are always with you. Just tell me what's wrong with my daughter. Amrit says, my wife, meaning your daughter, is going to give me my child in a few months. Everyone is shocked and surprised. Mummyji says, bebo's pregnant? Amrit nods his head. Everyone goes into the room and congratulates bebo. Bebo is sitting, cuddling a pillow. Amrit stands by her and smiles. Amrit's mom tells bebo that she should rest and not leave the bed. Bebo says she can't do that as she's got lots of work to do. Chachiji says bebo forget the work just think and look after yourself and your unborn child. Amrit's mom says for bebo to rest and everyone to leave. Amrit says he will stay with bebo.

Everyone leaves bebo puts her hand on her tummy and looks down smiling. Amrit comes and puts his hand on hers. He tells her he is very happy. He's going to be a father in a couple of months. A cute little baby is going to enter their lives. Bebo smiles and asks if he's ok with all this. They were planning for a baby but not so soon. Amrit says he's fine and he cant wait for the day his baby is born. He leans over and kisses bebo's forehead.

Finally! I'm done! I kept my promise. All 10 parts. Hope you enjoyed. I was thinking as I have mentioned a baby; why not bring him or her into the world. So just as a treat I will write part 11. Because after this part I will never write a scene again even if it's a paragraph long. So comment on this for now and I will write part 11 soon.

Please comment.
Edited by ganga16tr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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love it... ur doing a great job.. i feel happy everytime...they r such a gud couple

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