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just thought it would be easier for everyone to find my scene if i post it like this. so then all of them would be in the same place and in order.
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Hi people! I promised you all ages ago I would write a part of AmBo remarriage. So hope you like my idea. Might be long. By the way, I want to write the entire wedding scene from top to bottom. So this is part one.

This is engagement then I will post, haaldi, mehendi, sangeet, wedding, bidaai and welcoming (together), suhaag raat, first day after wedding, honeymoon and then a day 3 months after their wedding. So this is part 1 of 10!

The scene starts with Bebo back, with her memory. She is in her bedroom in the Narang house. Everyone is sitting around her. Bebo is still feeling a bit scared, after all that happened with her and rano. She is sitting up leaning on the pillow but she is holding on to amrit. Amrit is stroking her hair. Everyone is feeling bad that they didn't notice that their bebo was missing for so long. Everyone says sorry and bebo says it's not their fault. Amrit is sitting in silence. Then he has tears in his eyes. Bebo looks up and wipes his tears. She asks him what's wrong. He says he is very sorry he didn't recognise his wife. Bebo says it's not his fault. What was meant to happen happened. There's no point looking back at all that now. Bebo's mom says that all that matters is bebo is safe and back with them. They shouldn't look back and cry but look into the future and think how they will celebrate. Bebo's brothers look at each other and then say they will celebrate by getting amrit and bebo married again…

Two days later…

In bebo's house all arrangements are being made for bebo's wedding. Everyone is happy. New flowers are being put up. Saru and prabjot are looking through a catalogue and choosing dresses that bebo might like.

Bebo is sitting in her room all alone. She isn't sad or anything but she is feeling lonely. She understands what they are doing is for her but all she wants is to go home to her husband. Bebo wants to go back to her amrit. She doesn't really want this marriage to take place. Because of this she has to be away from amrit for a longer time. Bebo has got amrit's photo in her hand. She has also got her phone but she knows amrit wont call. This is because he has been forbidden to talk to her until the engagement.

Suddenly bebo's phone does ring. She looks at the number and it's a privet number. She thinks who it could be. The she answers it and says hello. Amrit says hello back. Bebo is shocked. She asks him why he's calling from a privet number. He says he didn't want anyone to see that he had called. Bebo asks him how he is. Amrit says he is fine. He also says this isn't the time for all this. Open the door to your balcony. I have left something for you there. Bebo is confused. But before she can say anything, amrit has put the phone down. Bebo walks to the door for her balcony and opens it…

Bebo is shocked. There in front of her was amrit. He had a big smile on his face. Bebo rubs her eyes just in case she isn't dreaming. Amrit smiles. Bebo flies into amrit's arms. Amrit hugs bebo. After a while they let go of each other and bebo asks him how he got up there. He tells her not to worry. He can do loads of things, which are shocking. Bebo says, amrit you should leave. Remember what papaji said. He said if he catches us together before the engagement he would cancel it for two days. So amrit please leave other wise we wont be able to meet for another two days. Amrit says to her not to worry. He has just come to ask her if she liked the ring. Amrit puts his hand in his pocket and takes out a ring box. He opens it and inside is a silver ring with a big diamond on it. Bebo is speechless. Amrit takes it out of the box and slips it on bebo's finger. It fits perfectly and it looks really nice on bebo's fair finger. Amrit takes her hand and kisses it. Bebo says it beautiful. Amrit was like I'm glad you liked it. Bebo takes the ring off and gives it back to amrit. She says I can't wait till this evening when you can put this on my finger with everyone around us. Amrit smiles. He asks bebo what was she wearing. She says that for her to know and him to find out in the evening. Amrit says he should leave now there were loads of arrangements to make at home. He kisses bebo's forehead and goes back down the ladder.

At 9 o'clock everything is ready in Narang house. Only the groom's family need to come. Saru, prabjot and mummyji are in bebo's room getting her ready. She is wearing a black lengha with silver jewellery. Her hair is open and straight. She has got a few clips in her hair, which looks like diamonds. Everyone steps back and looks at bebo. They all gasp. She looks so pretty. Saru says even we are flattened to see you looking so pretty, what will happen to poor amrit? He will faint! Prabjot says bebo is looking stunning. She also says that if the ring is silver then it will match your dress perfectly. But we don't know what kind of ring they have bought. Amrit said he didn't want to tell us. Before thinking bebo says that the ring is silver. All three of them look at bebo and ask her how she can be so sure. Bebo thinks. What was she going to say? But bebo makes up something. She says, amrit knows she likes silver jewellery. So he would have bought something silver. Everyone says ok.

The groom's family arrive and saru and prabjot go to get bebo. They come down and help bebo so she doesn't trip, as her lengha is very long. Suman nudges her brother. Amrit, who is wearing a black sharwani, looks up and sees bebo. He thinks to himself how pretty she is looking. Bebo is feeling shy so is not looking up. She hasn't noticed that amrit is staring at her with googly eyes. Saru nudges bebo and she looks up. She sees amrit staring at her and then she blushes. They come down the stairs and saru tells bebo to sit next to amrit. They look at each other and then look down again.

Papaji talks to amrit's mom. He asks them are they waiting for anyone. They say no. Papaji then says why are they waiting, lets get this ceremony over and done with, then the children can talk to each other. Amrit puts the ring on bebo's finger. Everyone claps. Then saru gives bebo a ring to put on amrit. Everyone cheers and claps.

Then omi says, what do we do now? Now that bebo and amrit are engaged they wont be able to stay apart. Everyone laughs and amrit and bebo blush. Then mummyji say that they should all go into the back room and discuss what they are going to do and bebo and amrit should stay in that room and talk to each other. Everyone leaves them alone.

Amrit takes bebo into his arms. Bebo panics a bit and asks amrit to let go of her. If anyone sees they would be in trouble. Amrit says no one can say anything. We are now engaged and we have the right to be together. You belong to me now. Bebo says actually I still belong to my family and until we don't get married I don't belong to you. Amrit let's her go and tells her that he will let her go now but there will be no escape on their suhaag raat. Bebo blushes. Amrit smiles at her. Bebo says she will be waiting.

Just then everyone comes back. Papaji says I hope you both have had a short chat. After all you will need to know more about each other. Because in a few days you will have to live together. Then mummyji says that bebo, amrit we all have decided when each ceremony will take place. Tomorrow morning bebo you will have your haaldi. Then in the afternoon your mehendi and then in the evening they will have the sangeet. The day after that we will have no ceremonies because the day before so much happened and everyone will have arrangements to make. The day after that we will have the wedding. Then in the evening we will let go of our daughter. Bebo feels a bit sad but then saru says, bebo why are you looking so sad. After the bidaai you will go to your prince charming. Bebo blushes and everyone laughs. Then everyone sits down to eat.

After that amrit's family is leaving but then geet asks bebo's dad if amrit can take bebo's number. Papaji agrees and they take bebo's number. Then they leave.

Everyone sits down in the living room and talk about all the arrangements.

Everyone is getting ready to go to bed then bebo's phone buzzes. She looks at it and sees she has got a message. She opens it. It's from amrit. In the message he says, bebo you looked beautiful today. Cant wait to see you tomorrow evening at the sangeet. Hope you have fun during the day with the haaldi and mehendi. I will see you in the evening. Remember one thing until then, I love you. Love you always, amrit.

Bebo blushes. Prabjot notices this and nudges bebo and asks her what happened. Bebo says its nothing. Saru notices this as well and asks bebo who messaged her. Bebo hesitates but then notices that she can't get away with it. She whispers in their ears that it was amrit. Then she blushes. Saru and prabjot nudge bebo and tease her that amrit only met her 2 hours ago and he already was missing her. Bebo blushes badly and runs up the stairs to her room.

Bebo gets changed and wears something more comfortable. She gets into bed and looks at her ring and remembers amrit. She smiles to herself. Then she says, let this wedding be over and done with, and then I can go to you. Bebo closes her eyes and falls asleep.

Hope you like my idea.

It's the first part. This was the engagement. I will post part two soon. Part two is about bebo's haaldi.

Please comment and criticize. Hope you didn't get too bored!

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Hi guys! Glad everyone liked part 1 of amrit and bebo remarriage. Thanks for all the really sweet comments. Well I'm back now with...

PART 2!

It the morning after the engagement. Bebo is still asleep. It 7 in the morning. Everyone else n the house is already awake and making all the arrangements for bebo's haaldi. Saru and prabjot go to wake bebo up. She wakes up to find her sister-in-laws looking down at her with gleaming eyes. They tell her to quickly freshen up and then come and get ready. The haaldi ceremony starts at 8am so they can start the mehendi as soon as its 3pm. Then they can start the sangeet, which starts at 7pm and could last all night. So she needed to get a good breakfast. Bebo goes to the bathroom and freshens up. When she comes out she finds her brothers with loads of toast and cereal and tea and juice. Bebo asks them what was the need to bring all this up she could have gone down and eaten. They tell her she can't go downstairs until the haaldi starts. They want her to be totally surprised.

All of bebo's brothers leave for amrit's house. Saru and prabjot get bebo ready and then take her down stairs. Bebo is wearing a yellow dress, which has loads of work on it.

The entire room is decorated with fresh flowers and lights. It's looking really nice. Loads of bebo's old friends are there, including naintara. She has been specially invited and she comes just for the sake of her friend's happiness. Bebo is over the moon when she sees her friend. She runs up to her and hugs her. Both of them cry, as they haven't seen each other in a while. Bebo asks naintara how she is these days. She says that she's fine and that she will soon be getting married. Bebo is a bit disappointed and thinks that it would have been so good if omi and naintara got together. But naintara doesn't give bebo the chance to say anything and tells bebo to sit down and get this over and done with. Everyone puts haaldi on bebo.

Everyone is busy dancing and singing. Bebo is sitting and looking and smiling at everything going on around her.

Bebo starts thinking about amrit. She thinks what he must be doing.

Amrit walks over to bebo. He holds her hand and makes her stand up. Bebo is shocked to see him and asks him how he got in and no one noticed him. Amrit says he has a secret way to reach her without anyone saying. Bebo smiles. Amrit takes bebo into his arms. Bebo tells him to let go. Amrit lets bebo go. He then sees she has haaldi on her. Amrit takes a bit of haaldi and puts it on bebo's cheeks. She blushes. Then she takes some and puts it on amrit. Then amrit hugs her and she hugs him back. Then amrit starts calling her but she isn't listening. He calls her again.

Suddenly amrit's voice changes.

Bebo opens her eyes. She sees saru calling her.

Saru asks her in whose thought was she lost in. Bebo blushes. Naintara tells saru to leave bebo alone. She was thinking about her prince. She looks at bebo and asks her if she was right or not. Bebo just blushes.

That's all people.

Will post bebo's mehendi another time.

Hope you liked it. I got the idea of dream sequence from my lovely friend Afreen!

Edited by ganga16tr - 16 years ago
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Hi people!

I'm back with my 3rd instalment for AmBo remarriage. Hope you like it!

Bebo's haaldi has finished and everyone is getting ready for the mehendi. Bebo's brothers are back from amrit's house and have made the final preparations.

Bebo walks out of her bathroom, fresh and haaldi free. She walks into her bedroom only to find someone grabbing her arm. Bebo is about to scream but someone buts their hand over her mouth. Bebo is scared. Then the person turns her around. AMRIT! Bebo is shocked. She looks at him speechless. She asks him what he's doing in her bedroom. Amrit says that's for me to know and you to work out. Bebo then says, oh I get it. I'm dreaming again. But mister dream amrit you cant fool me twice in one day. I maybe crazy for you but I'm not totally mad. Bebo pinches herself and blinks. She opens her eyes to find she's still in amrit's arms. Bebo is really, really lost. Amrit says, bebo what are you going on about? I am here because praji brought me here. I am to be present at the mehendi. They said that I was to get ready in my old room. But I thought I'd come and see you. What are you going on about dream amrit? Bebo blushes. Amrit understands what she meant. He holds her and says you're missing me so much that you dream about me all the time. Am I right? Bebo blushes. Then someone knocks on bebo's door. Amrit and bebo don't know what to do. They shouldn't meet each other in privet until they get married. They would both be in big trouble if anyone sees them. Then the door open...

Saru comes in, she calls bebo's name. But bebo and amrit are not in the room. Saru looks around. Amrit and bebo are hiding behind the curtains. Both of them very, very close to each other. Bebo is look at amrit who is holding her tightly. Then they hear saru coming forward towards the curtains. Bebo is scared she holds amrit tightly. They look at each other in tension. Then ashok comes in and asks saru if she had seen amrit. He was meant to be in his room but he's not there. Saru says she hasn't seen amrit. She asks if ashok had seen bebo. He says he hadn't. Then both of them look at each other and say where ever amrit and bebo are they are probably together somewhere. Bebo and amrit can't help but giggle at each other. Saru says she will go and check on the roof. Ashok says he will check all the balconies. Saru closes the door behind her and then goes.

Behind the curtains, amrit and bebo are having an eye locking session. Then bebo comes to her senses and tells amrit to let go. He says no. Bebo says why. Amrit says, he can't wait any longer. He can't wait till their suhaag raat. It's too long of a wait. Bebo says it's only a matter of 2 days. Amrit says 2 days means 48 hours. Meaning 2880 minutes. Meaning 172800 seconds! Bebo is impressed. She asks him since when he's to so good at maths. Amrit says, bebo you wouldn't believe what I know and what I'm good at. Bebo tells him to go away and work out how many strands of hair he has on his head. Bebo laughs. Amrit laughs sarcastically. Bebo is still laughing. Amrit scoops her up and takes her into his arms. Bebo tells him to put her down. Amrit is lost in bebo's eyes. Amrit says he will only let go when she gives him a kiss. Bebo says no. Not until we get married again. She will only give him a kiss after their suhaag raat. Amrit says if you don't kiss me, I wont let you go. Bebo can hear someone coming. She tells amrit. But he refuses to let her go. Bebo can't help herself. She comes closer to amrit and gives him a peck on the cheek. She blushes. Amrit smiles and puts her down on her bed. Then he walks over to the door and goes.

Bebo sits on the bed thinking. Then saru comes in. She asks bebo where she had been all this time. Bebo pretends she doesn't know anything. Saru explains. Bebo says she was in the bathroom. Saru says ok. She also says she thought bebo was with amrit. Bebo pretends she still doesn't understand anything. Saru tells bebo that amrit is in the house so he can be present at the mehendi and sangeet.

Saru tells bebo to quickly get dressed so she can do bebo's make up and jewellery. Bebo goes to the bathroom. She comes out wearing a mehendi green lengha. Its got gold work on it. She sits in front of her big mirror. Saru tells bebo to choose some jewellery. Bebo picks a green necklace with gold outlining, matching earrings and green and gold bangles. Bebo gets ready.

Then prabjot and naintara come. They come and are stunned at how bebo is looking. Prabjot says that bebo should put a bit of make up on, just so she looks extra nice. Bebo refuses. She tells them that amrit doesn't really like it when she puts make up on. He says that she's naturally beautiful and by applying make up all she is doing is killing her natural beauty.

They laugh. Bebo blushes a bit.

Then geet and suman come. They knock on the door. Prabjot tells them to come in. Bebo turns to them and smiles. Saru does the official introductions.

Naintara tells them all bebo is ready to go down. Saru, prabjot and naintara go and take bebo downstairs. Suman and geet go to get their brother.

Amrit is still in his room. Stroking his cheek where bebo kissed him. He smiles to himself. Suman and geet nudge each other. They go into the room. Amrit hasn't noticed them yet. Suman goes and sits next to him. She calls his name twice. Then she shouts his name in his ear. Poor amrit jumps holding his ears. Suman and geet laugh. He asks them why didn't they just call him. They didn't have to shout. Suman tells amrit she was calling him, but he wasn't listening. Geet says he was too busy stroking his cheek. Suman asks him what was wrong. Did bebo slap him?!?! Both sisters laugh. Amrit says, laugh if you want but you wouldn't understand. Geet says fine.

Amrit, suman and geet go downstairs. Amrit is wearing a black sharwani. Bebo is already downstairs. They were waiting for suman who was going to do bebo's mehendi.

Everyone takes a seat. Amrit goes and sits on a chair near ashok.

They're people dancing and singing. Naintara writes amrit's name on bebo's right hand. Suman is just doing patterns on the other hand. Saru comes over when naintara is done and says, all they have to do is wait and see how dark bebo's mehendi gets. The darker it gets, the more love amrit has for her. Bebo blushes. Prabjot says they should cheat a bit. If they get a lemon juice and water mixture the mehendi gets darker when you spread it on top. Bebo says not to do this. They ask her why. She says she would like to see how much her to-be husband loved her. Everyone laughs and tells her that they too want to see how much amrit love her. Bebo blushes.

After a while bebo's mehendi is dry and it looks really nice. Its really, really dark as well. Prabjot tells naintara to tell amrit to come and sit next to bebo. She goes and gets him and tells him to sit with bebo. Amrit sits down and bebo show amrit her mehendi. She explains that, the darker it gets the more you love me. Amrit says, beware the mehendi might turn black! Bebo laughs and blushes. Amrit takes bebo's left and kisses it. Amrit says, bebo this hands mehendi will turn blacker than black.

Everyone is dancing and singing. Bebo and amrit are watching from their seats. But while no one is looking, a lot is happening between amrit and bebo'

Hope you all like my idea for bebo's mehendi.

There isn't much to do with mehendi. It's more about amrit and bebo. Hope you all liked it.

Please feel free to comment and criticize any bits you didn't like.

I will post part four soon. Part four is about amrit and bebo's sangeet.
Edited by ganga16tr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow ganga great idea
it will be great to keep all the parts in one place
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I'm so glad everyone liked my part 3 of AmBo remarriage. Well I'm back again and this time with part 4. Bebo and amrit's sangeet! Hope everyone likes this just as much as part 3.

It's still the same day. The mehendi has finished and everything is ready for the sangeet. Bebo is dressed. She is wearing a blue lengha this time. Its got silver work. She's got a diamond necklace on with shines really nicely in the light and matching earrings. Her engagement ring goes perfectly with all this. Saru and prabjot step back and look at bebo who is looking at the floor. Saru tells her that she is looking like a princess. Just then naintara comes in and asks everyone if bebo is ready, because the groom's side are all ready and sitting down stairs. Saru tells naintara that the princess is ready. Prabjot tells bebo to be prepared to do loads of dancing and she may need to sing a song, so everything should be ready in her head. Bebo looks up and says she wont sing or dance. Saru says that she has to. It's traditional for the bride to dance with her future husband at their sangeet. Bebo says whatever traditions there maybe she will not dance with amrit. Saru tells her fine, she doesn't have to dance with amrit but she can still dance. Bebo still disagrees. They take her downstairs.

The hall has been changed again. This time there are blue fairy lights and blue curtains. Amrit too is wearing a blue sharwani to match is bride. Bebo goes down the stairs carefully. Saru and naintara sit bebo down next to amrit. Amrit whispers in her ear that she is looking very beautiful. Bebo blushes and thanks him. Then she says he doesn't look that bad himself. Amrit smiles at her.

Bebo's dad walks next to bebo and amrit and gets everyone's attention. He welcomes all the guests and tells them to dance and sing as much as they want and enjoy the evening.

Everyone dance and sing. Then ashok goes to the middle of the room. He starts to sing "Mahi ve" from Kal Ho Na Ho. He sings towards saru. Saru blushes.

(Imagine it as ashok singing aman's lines, amrit singing rohit's lines, bebo singing naina's, kuku narang singing the loud bits in the middle and bebo's mom singing the mom from the films lines)

Ashok starts singing, saru blushes. Then he pulls amrit. Then amrit joins in and sings for bebo. Poor girl she can't help but blush. Then saru pulls bebo and bebo too starts to sing. Whilst they are all singing mummyji comes in and sings for bebo. Everyone dances and sings and then the song finishes.

Before anyone had the time to get their breathe back for all the dancing and singing. Amrit creaks another song. This time he is singing Mein agar kaho from Om Shanti Om. Amrit sings and walks around bebo a bit. Then bebo too sings. But only a few lines.

Then the song ends.

Everyone sits down and laughs. Just then the lights go out. Everyone is worried but then a spot light turns on and bebo is standing. Then bebo starts to sing! She sings Bhole chooriya from Kabhi Kushi Khabi Ghum.

(Imagine this one as, bebo singing pooh's lines, amrit singing rohan's, daljeet singing rahul's lines, prabjot singing, anjili's lines kuku singing the dad's lines and amro singing the mom's lines.)

Bebo sings towards amrit. He is really surprised. Then he too joins in with bebo. Then prabjot comes in along with daljeet. They ALL sing and dance together then kuku and amro come and sing with their children. Everyone sings and dances. Then the song finishes.

Everyone gathers around bebo. They are all so surprised that she can sing so well. Saru asks her what the matter was. Bebo said she wasn't going to sing so what happened all of a sudden. Bebo says she didn't want to sing, but she thought it would be a bit of fun. Everyone praises bebo.

Bebo and amrit sit on their chairs again and everyone else is dancing.

Amrit asks bebo how was his singing. Bebo tells him it was excellent. Amrit says those were words that express how I felt for you before. Before we got married the first time. I tried to tell you how I felt but I couldn't. I know a few languages, Hindi, Punjabi and even English but yet in none of these languages could he express himself. Bebo blushes and looks the other way.

Then bebo asks amrit if he liked bebo's dancing and singing. Amrit says it was so good. He never thought she could dance and sing in that manner. Bebo says that song I sang, I just didn't sing the words because I know them. Those words show how I feel about you. I didn't pick that song because I like it. I picked it because the words from the song are words that are in my heart for you. There is no fun in my life without you. My bangles, if they could speak, would be able to tell you how much I love you. So this song is perfect for my love for you. Amrit is flattered.

Everyone continue to dance and sing the entire night. But the party has to finish sometime. Everyone is very tired by the time it is 1am in the night. Most o the guests have gone. Just close family and friends left. Then they leave.

The bride's family and grooms family sit together and talk for a little while more. Its now nearly 1:30am. So amrit's family decide to take their leave. They say that they will all meet again in two days for the wedding. Everyone greets each other and then they go.

Hope you liked my scene! I used two of my all time favourites, bhole chooriya and mahi ve.


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Hi! I'm glad everyone enjoyed my sangeet scene. I enjoyed writing it too. This is part 5. Amrit and bebo's wedding! Please note I'm not too good with Indian weddings. So if of my bits are wrong please don't feel bad or anything.

Its wedding day!

Everyone is ready for the wedding after dancing and singing all night 2 nights ago. Everyone has had plenty of rest. The house is very busy. Bebo's stuff is packed. There is only an hour left until the groom's family arrive.

Bebo is in her room. Saru and prabjot have dressed bebo up. She's looking GORGOUS! She's got a red lengha, which has got like antique work on it. She's got loads of gold jewellery on. Bebo fixes her dupatta, which is on her head. She tells her sister-in-laws that she can hardly move! They say not to worry.

When bebo is fully ready her entire family come to see her. They say that today they will send their laadli off to start her new life. Everyone is feeling sad. Omi says why is everyone sad. If bebo was sad then they should be too. But bebo is happy. She is going to go and live with the prince she has always dreamed of. Ashok says omi is right. We don't need to be sad. We know our bebo will be very happy there. She will be living with someone who loves her more than any of us. He is also someone who we all trust and will surly look after our sister. Bebo's dad says, you are all right but I cant bare to let go of my darling daughter again.

Bebo rushes into her father arms and cries for a while. Then she wipes her eyes and says I will miss everyone very much.

Just then they can hear drums and a band. Saru rushes to the window and shouts the groom is here! Prabjot also goes over and sees. The tell bebo to come and see. Bebo slowly and carefully walks to the window. Saru opens the door to the balcony and step out. Everyone else goes downstairs to welcome the guests.

Bebo, saru and prabjot are looking down at the groom's side of the family. There's music, dancing and amrit on top of a horse! Poor amrit he can't control the horse at all. It keeps going in different directions. The girls laugh.

Downstairs everyone is standing at the door for amrit to come. Some of bebo's friends are there. They don't let him in. They say they want money from the to-be brother-in-law. Some of amrit's friends ask them what will they do if he doesn't pay them. They say they wont let him in and then he wont be able to marry bebo. The girls say ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! They call over bebo's dad and tell him that amrit isn't giving them any money. Kuku says then don't let him in. amrit's friends say, but uncle ji if you don't let him in, how will he get married to your daughter and sweep her off her feet. Amrit nudges them. Then bebo's dad says, are you trying to say my daughter isn't good enough for anyone else? Amrit's friends say, no we didn't mean that, we meant she is too good for anyone else! Amrit says leave it. He takes is wallet out and give the entire thing to bebo's friends. They say thank you and take it. They go to bebo's room and show her what they got. They open it nd find a picture of bebo and amrit both together. They show bebo.

Just then mummyji comes up and tells the girls to take bebo down. There is like 15 girls around bebo. They bring her down the stairs, slowly and carefully. Amrit looks at bebo. She looks so pretty. One of bebo's friends sees this and they whisper to bebo that someone is casting an evil eye on her. Bebo asks who. She says its her, "Hone wale jiju!" Bebo blushes and tells her friend to be quite. They go down stairs and they sit bebo down on the mandap.

Amrit is sitting down too. Amrit looks at bebo. Bebo looks at amrit. They smile at each other. Then the "pandit" starts all the rituals. Everyone is happy because amrit and bebo are both happy. The 7 rounds are about to begin. Amrit holds bebo's hand and they go around the fire. After they are done they sit down again. Amrit takes the mangalsootra and puts it on bebo, then the sindoor. Everyone cheers and claps for the newly wedded couple. Amrit and bebo smile and look at each other.

That's it. Not long. But hope you people liked it. I'm not good at weddings.

But the next bit is the bidaai and welcoming of bebo.

Please comment and criticize.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#8
wow ganga awesome part dear
loved it......uffff i want ambo wedding just like this one in the show
par pata nahi hamein ambo re-marriage dikhne ko bhi milega ya nahi😕
😆uffffff ye amrit bhi na paise ki jagah apni-aur bebo ki pic liye ghoomta hai
poor bebo's frds fool ban gaye......
can't wait to read the next part
uffffffffff SR part ke beech mein ek aur part hai
waiting for the big night part.......
🤗


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello! I'm back for the 6th time. This time I'm writing bebo's bidaai and her welcoming to her in-laws house. Hope you like it!

It's been 2 hours since amrit and bebo have been married. Most of the guests have left, only close friends and family are still around. Amrit's family have left so they can get everything ready in their house. At 9pm bebo's family think its time they let bebo go.

Everyone is sad that bebo will be leaving soon.

The time has come. Everyone is standing at the door around amrit and bebo. They take everyone blessing and the exit the house. Bebo is sad. She does all the rituals. Amrit and bebo sit in the car. Bebo is crying. Bebo's brothers push the car and they are off. Everyone in bebo's family is sad. Inside the car bebo is crying. Amrit comes a bit closer and wipes bebo's tears. Bebo puts her head on amrit's chest.

There is a lot of traffic. They have to stop the car, as they can't move any further because of the traffic. Amrit asks the driver what the matter is. He says that there is loads of traffic, which isn't clearing up. It's getting really late. Both, amrit and bebo are tired. Bebo is feeling really sleepy. Bebo wraps her arms around amrit's neck and falls asleep. After a while the traffic starts moving again. Amrit watches bebo sleep. It's been ages since amrit has seen bebo sleep. He had forgotten how beautiful his wife looked whilst sleeping. They almost reach the house. Amrit wakes bebo up. She asks if they have reached home yet. Amrit says they are nearly home. Bebo asks what time it is. Amrit says its nearly half 10. Bebo looks out of the window and sees that they are home. Bebo tells amrit that they are home. Amrit notices and the car stops. Amrit gets out of the car and walks to bebo's side and opens the door for her.

Bebo slowly gets out. There are a lot of guests. Bebo looks around. She hasn't seen her house in ages. Amrit takes bebo's hand and they walk to the house. Bebo's mother-in-law is waiting. She is happy to see her son and daughter-in-law. Amrit's mom completes all the rituals. Bebo pushes the pot of rice with her right foot. Everyone cheers and claps for the newly wedded bride. Bebo steps into the house. Suman asks her brother why he took so long to bring her sister-in-law. She teases amrit and asks him, if he was planning to take bebo for the honeymoon even before she was welcomed to her home properly. Amrit says it did come to his mind that him and bebo would leave for their honeymoon before bebo met anyone of her family.

Amrit explains to everyone about the traffic and all that. Geet says that if all the rituals have been fulfilled then amrit and bebo should go to bed, after all it is quite late. Amrit agrees and says that he is tired and wants to o to bed. He takes bebo's hand and tells her to come on. Bebo doesn't move. She just gives amrit a look. Suman says that amrit needs to calm down. He will get to bed. But first there is a ritual that they need to fulfil. Amrit says what's that. Suman tells bebo to sit down. Bebo and amrit sit down on the sofa. Suman goes and gets a big bowl of milk. Suman explains that inside the bowl are 9 plastic rings but only 1 gold one. Suman says that both of them will have to put theirs hands in and try to find the gold one. The one that finds the gold ring will be the one in charge of their lives forever. Geet says that bebo will surly find the ring. Harmeet says amrit will find it. Suman counts down from 3. Then amrit and bebo put their hands into the bowl. It's quite confusing but amrit isn't on the mission to find the ring…

Amrit grabs bebo's hand. She gives him a look meaning she wants him to let go. But amrit shakes his head so slightly that no one notices. Bebo moves her hand a bit and feels a ring. She takes the risk and gets it out of the bowl.

Suman is pleased. Bebo has found the right ring. Suman congratulates bebo and teases amrit that he will have to become his wife's pet. Everyone laughs. Amrit says, is that all? Was that the meaning of this game? I am my wife's pet anyhow. No matter what happens I always listen to what bebo says. Everyone blesses the happy couple and wishes that they always live happily.

That's all people. This was part 6 of AmBo remarriage. Bebo's bidaai and the welcoming to her sasural's house. I hope you enjoyed it. Please comment and criticize.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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AmBo remarriage part 7 is finally here. I know many of you have been waiting for amrit and bebo's suhaag raat. So sit down comfortably and enjoy!

It's really late at night. Amrit and bebo have finished playing the game of who would be in charge of their married life. Bebo had one and amrit had admitted that even if he had won bebo would still be in charge.

It's late and everything is ready for amrit and bebo's suhaag raat. Suman nd geet take bebo upstairs to her room. Everything is looking really beautiful. The entire room is covered in candles. The floor is covered with rose petals. The bed too is flooded with petals. Bebo thinks she is dreaming. Geet sits bebo down in the middle of the bed and puts bebo's veil over her face. Suman tells her to just sit and wait for her amrit. They leave the room. Bebo sits and waits. She thinks to herself that tonight she will start her life afresh with amrit. This time she will not start her new relationship with amrit with friendship but she will start her life amrit this time just with love and nothing more. Bebo thinks that this is her 3rd suhaag raat with amrit. This time she will not hurt her amrit. She will not waste this night. This time she will make her suhaag raat with amrit. This would definitely be the most beautiful night of their lives.

Amrit walks into the room. He sees bebo. Amrit has a cheeky grin on his face. He walks over to the bed. He sits down beside bebo. Bebo can feel her heart leaping. She is a bit nervous. Amrit sits down and lifts bebo's veil. He sees bebo, who is looking down. Bebo lifts bebo's chin. Bebo looks at amrit in a shy manner. Amrit looks at bebo and puts his hand on her cheek. Bebo smiles. Amrit says to bebo, tonight we have started a new life. This time we wont let a 3rd person come between us. Bebo says that their life will be filled with love. Amrit agrees.

Amrit comes closer to bebo. Bebo is both nervous and excited. Amrit comes very close to bebo. Bebo closes her eyes. Amrit gives bebo a peck on the cheek and then parts. Bebo opens her eyes. She sees amrit making himself comfortable. Bebo looks at him. He looks back and says, bebo I'm very tired. I know you are too. We should sleep now. Bebo nods her head in agreement. Amrit turns around and falls asleep. Bebo feels a wave of disappointment. She wanted to make this night romantic and memorable, but…

Bebo sits in an angle. Her back is towards amrit. She is feeling sad. Someone puts his hands around bebo's waist. Amrit is not asleep. He isn't even a tiny bit tired. In fact he is feeling even more romantic then usual. Amrit puts his chin on bebo's shoulder. Bebo looks at amrit and feels shy, but happy at the same time. Amrit asks bebo how did she think that he was going to let his 3rd suhaag raat go out of his grip so easily. He tells bebo, this is their 3rd suhaag raat and this time he will surly make it with her. Bebo blushes. Amrit puts his head on her lap. Bebo strokes amrit's hair. He smiles at her. Amrit asks bebo is he could ask her something. Bebo says yes. Amrit asks her if she loves him. Bebo blushes. Yes she loves him. But how was she meant to say it? Bebo tells him she doesn't love him. Bebo is joking but the way she says it amrit thinks that she is being serious. Amrit is shocked and sad. But he doesn't show it. He lifts his head off bebo's lap. He puts his back towards her and asks her if she doesn't love him why did she fight rano? Also if she didn't love him why did she let all those moments happen between them? Bebo says she did it so he didn't feel bad. Amrit feels let down. He gets up, takes his pillow and walks to the sofa. Bebo thinks that maybe it wasn't a good idea to do this. Amrit thinks she's serious. Amrit lies down on the sofa nd puts his back towards bebo and the bed. He has tears in his eyes.

Bebo feels bad. She walks to the sofa and kneels down. She puts her arms around him. Bebo says, amrit did you think I was serious? I was only joking. I thought you would understand that. But the truth is, I love you very much. Amrit wipes that tear and turns to face bebo. He is happy. Bebo hugs him.

Amrit stands up and bebo does to. Amrit lifts bebo up suddenly. Bebo feels shy. He turns towards the bed. But before he starts walking, he brings her face close to his. Bebo puts her arms around his neck. Amrit and bebo are nose on nose. Bebo closes her eyes. Amrit walks towards the bed. He tries to sit her down but bebo doesn't let him go. Amrit sits down with bebo in his arms. He's holding her like a baby. (No other way to explain it.) Bebo still has her eyes closed and is holding amrit tightly. She wants this moment to always stay. Amrit wants to kiss bebo but he doesn't know what to do. They are alone after so long. Is bebo ready to take things on like how she did before?

Bebo is holding on to amrit. She is thinking to herself. Why isn't amrit saying or doing anything. Bebo is in the mood for romance. She wants to feel her husband's presence better than she already is. After so long they are alone in their own bedroom. No matter how shy she is, she still wants to feel amrit's soft lips on her. The feeling she hasn't got for a long time. Bebo looks up at amrit. He is thinking whilst stroking her hair. Bebo calls his name. Amrit looks at bebo. He smiles at her. He asks her what's wrong. Bebo says nothings wrong but… Amrit asks her what the but was. Bebo lowers her voice a bit and she feels a bit shy but she asks amrit to kiss her. Amrit says "what?" is a really shocked way. Bebo looks down and blushes. She doesn't want to say it again. Amrit is happy. He lifts bebo's chin and kisses her! Wow what a kiss! So sweet and romantic and LONG! Then they part. Bebo looks down. She is happy and blushing. Amrit puts her down on the bed and stands up. Bebo looks up at him and asks him what happened. Amrit says to bebo that she should take her jewellery off. Its heavy and he says, he can't kiss her properly with all the jewellery on. He can't get a good "grip" of her. Bebo looks down and giggles. Then she says, amrit you know the rules I cant take my jewellery off myself, and my bangles have to stay on all night.

Amrit says fine. Then…

Amrit goes down on his knees and lifts bebo's lengha a bit. He takes her anklet off and puts it on the side. He does the same with the other one. He looks up at bebo. He gets up and sits on the bed next to bebo. First he takes her earring off the one on his side. Then he goes over her a bit to do the other one. Be is feeling really shy. Amrit takes bebo's necklace off. After taking it off he reaches over and kisses her neck. Bebo blushes. Amrit finds bebo's dupatta annoying. He carefully finds where the pins are nd takes it off her head. A bit of bebo's neck and chest was covered with it. Bebo's neckline of her top is REALLY low. Bebo feels a bit uncomfortable because of this. She doesn't show it though. Bebo's hair is in a plait; amrit takes the rubber band out of her hair so it's open. He runs his fingers down her hair. Amrit sits down again nd puts one hand on her tummy and the other one on her chest. He pulls her backwards on to the bed.

A little bit of him is under her. He slides out and lies beside bebo. Bebo has her eyes open and looks at amrit who is lying beside her. She stares at him. He asks her what happened. She says nothing. I'm waiting for something to happen. Amrit kisses her forehead. He then gets on top of bebo and kisses her neck. Then we are transported to behind the curtains. We can now only see two shadows moving very slightly. The window is own and the wind is blowing. One by one the candles blow out and soon only the moonlight is there.

After a while we see amrit and bebo again properly. For once its amrit whose got his head on bebo's chest. She is stroking his hair whilst he has got his arms around her.

Amrit looks up at bebo. She is feeling really sleepy. Bebo tells amrit they should go to sleep. Amrit says it's not that late. Can't they stay up a bit longer, just for the sake of a bit more romance? Bebo blushes. She looks at the clock. It's nearly 2am. She tells amrit this. He looks at the clock to and says, 2am! Wow we have been awake a long time! He looks at bebo and tells her to go to sleep. Bebo laughs. Amrit still has his head on her chest. He holds her more tightly and snuggles up closer. Bebo holds amrit tightly then pulls the covers over them.

Bebo says goodnight and kisses amrit on his forehead. He kisses her back and says goodnight. They hold each other tightly and fall asleep.

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