FF llPriceless Moments 2ll Epilogue pg 87 - Page 43

Originally posted by: premeer4rever

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OMG i'm ready to burst any moment.....🤣
kya baat hai aaj bohut pyaar lutaaya jaa raha hai..😆

mai tu Hamisha se he aise thi........Hyy i am missing my gang....😒

Hey Mehak! 🤗 How are u dear? the update was really great dear! why is Heer hiding so many things from Prem?? I hope nothing is wrong and u left us at a cliff hanger! 😡😆 well i am loving the way things are proceeding! its definitely very interesting for me! 😳 the way u wrote each and every dilemma of Premeer! the way Prem is so upset and angry at her but is still hiding his emotions from her just to keep her happy and content as he doesnt want her to be too upset... and you know the most endearing part was when Heer was standing near the window and Prem came up behind her and the movie one too .... at both of dose times it clearly reflected how much he loved her .. and this is what that happens in true love... no matter how much u are angry and upset wid tht person for doing this to dem .. there are moments in which you cant just help staying away from them.. all of this was very natural.. 😳 the way u understood their characters was very apt and wonderful so 👍🏼 to u.. i have read many wonderful character sketches and this is one of dem 😃 other than tht Prem's worry and the discription of everything was mindblowingly done sweetie! ⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏 Hat's off to you for making everything so beleivable to the eye! the update was a wonderful read😳 keep i up and i think i know wat would happen in the next update but wont spoil ur suspense 😉 take care!

aaiigghh!!

hey mehak sorry for late comments busy with examz awsome part meet scenes were cute

tat was fantastically fabulous update......⭐️...
nd on top of tat preet confessed....it was really cute....😊.....
bt dont really like premmer fight..y doesnt heer tell him wats bothering her😡.....bt jst hp tat everything is fine ...at da end......

great update as usual.....

awesome update
thanks for the pm

hey mehak how ru dear??

i just loved this part of priceless...going to be pappa in gr8 tension....loved the description of prems dilemma....i guess heer is having hormonal changes thts why her behavior towards prem weird...why is she hiding it from prem?

i specially loved the part where heers water broke...the way u depicted prems tension while rolling down from bed was great girl...

and when preet complained about not giving caramel to him......lol.....heer in that particulur situation :O...lol great bhabi devarship depiction.........


again u left on a cliffhanger.......kab sudhrogi tum mehak??mana ke humlog comment dene mein todhi kanjoosi karte hai par tum toh achhi bachchi ho na??phir aisa kyun.......bohot maar parne wali hai abhi tumhe agar sumthing wrong came up with heer....lol......


overall great part......i know uve got xms...par phir bhi try to update soon......yeah I know im devil
*muhahahaha*

lol

love alisha:-)...oh gud luck for ur xams

Hey my dumbo D.Q🤗

I m here, finally i am but i m here just for this update for the comment on the whole you have to wait i'll put it after the epilogue so you better update soon as your exams are bit far and taking time out as relaxation period from your study hours won't be a bad thing😃 did I sound logical🤔 hmmm yes,I am always😳.

Anyways moving to your update very touchy update, I could connect to it and you know from day 1 when I read your Fic I wanted to tell you that I guess your Prem in Pri is the most romantic Prem I have ever read even I guess more romantic from the show, my god this being is so impatient always to kiss her, I know she must be irresistible but even in anger his lips never forget to touch her skin, I know that was to cam himself and soothe her but I loved it always☺️. I have long long things to say and to applaud you for your brilliant work and that will take and since i don't wanted you to wait more...........dekha how much generous I am *batting eyelashes*.
Chalo moving to this Prem's pain literally was so natural, the thing that was intolerable his life, his love, his Heer hiding things from him and I guess he has figured it that it is because of their new arrival but he is helpless to do anything between why he didn't consult to her doctor himself to know actual situation😉
why he didn't run his mind there?

Then awww Prem is so sad, not able to concentrate either in his work or to anything wherever he goes on thought of Heer well being hover him and yet he is helpless to find its reason as Heer has become so stubborn to divulge real reason for her worry and then their argument, Prem lost his temper he tried every possible way with love,care,anger but still couldn't move Heer an inch now that is so mean of Heer, doesn't she know how much he love off course she know but if she is playing with his life then she better remember that her Prem will die with her and if she thinks that seeing his baby in front of him he'll forget everything then she is on the wrong track, for him the only word matter is Heer, the only being matter is his Wife, the reason for his survival is the beating of her heart.

But yet poyring out her anger and yelling made no change even mover her to tears which made him to regret over his attitude and then kissing on forehead was magical, I remember when Prem kissed Heer before leaving him a letter early morning and then their meet at Shiv Manir, what Glorious days they were😍.
Back from dream world, That was all the happenings that haunted his mind and doesn't allow him to concentrate and then moving to the living room, again his eyes perfect destination her rosy lips, this guy is still the same whether on show or in fic😆 and awww picking her up in his arms how sweet, and I love his outrageous behaviour always never care about world when it comes to love his wife, kaasshh Show mein bhi hota toh that meheer and Kul di would have got an amazing lesson *remembering how may times they disturbed them😡*. And they can never drift to sleep without their goodnight kiss and Prem knew it so as the custom he gave her what she urge for and he wanted to do more but still his behavior and ignorant attitude has become a barrier, you know the time you mentioned about it, I thought another ☺️ but thank god you didn't gave, your writing becomes a threat for my sanity as yours when you reads of Hiba but that doesn't I mean I m not looking for it, by the end I want one whole update on it and thats an order I don't know how will you fit but you have no and I will not compromise in less than an update😃, ohhh God I m being extreme naughty😳.

Then for the first time in months Heer had a sound sleep in his arms, who holds her caress her and is always there for here.

Finally the most awaited moment Heer is in hospital and ahhh can understand his feelings seeing his love in so much pain between that organs comment was bit 😲 for me I didn't expected such thing actually its not wrong in it but such things don't register me well, hope you don't mind, you are my greatest buddy so I put it. But why the hell that doctor was so late, he pain is unbearable for everybody even Preet rushed out.

Well unlike others I won't dhamkify you because I know you will give it a sad ending and if you have such a thing then for readers you will change and if not for them then on my request you will definitely, that much I know my friend D. Q and writer Mehak

Flawless job👏
Lots of Love

Ashlesha


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plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ntg shd happen to Heer and the baby, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee!!!