MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
superb concept just loved it
congrats for ur new ff
love all ur ffs
the song was just amazing
thanks for the pm



for giving us one more mayur ff" />
Edited by kirti123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Yeah great Daksha I really love it honey so keep it going !!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Nupur is making tea in the kitchen of her house......she lives with her brother and sister-in-law......Adhiraj and Suhaani....

"Garma garam chai ready" Nupur brings three cups of tea and snacks to the dining hall.....

"Bhabhi chai" she gives the cup to Suhaani

Suhaani snatched the cup from Nupur's hand and said "Kapde sukha diye toone"

Nupur looked at her "Sorry bhabhi bas jaa rahi hoon"

And leaving her cup of tea she went upstairs to dry up the clothes on terrace......

"Main keh rahi hoon.....Nupur ki shaadi kara do aur ye jald se jald iss ghar se jaaye.......kab tak hum isse khilaate rahenge" Suhaani said to Adhiraj.....

"Itni jaldi kya hai.....abhi toh bacchi hai" Adhiraj said

"Tumhein toh ye bacchi hi lagegei....tumhaari behen jo hai.....main toh kehti hoon koi ladka dhoond kar isski shaadi karwa do" she said to Adhiraj

"Theek hai main dekhta hoon" Adhiraj said and started doing his work again.....

Suhaani loves her husband but does not like Nupur she thinks she is a burden over them "Isske maa baap toh mar gayye aur issko chod gayye humaare sar pe.....shaadi karaao, padhaao likhaao kitna kharcha pehle se hi hai humaare sar pe....ek baar isski shaadi ho jaaye toh jaan choote" Suhaani was thinking in her mind.....

Mayank with some of his gang members were sitting in a pub drinking alcohol and talking.....

Samrat said "Kyun be.....boss ka order hai.....Mumbai mein humein apni acchi identity bana kar rakhni hogi taaki koi hum par shak na kare"

"Kya saala kaisi identity.....bekaar ki baat hai.....gunde kab se insaan banne lage" Mayank said

"Boss ne kaha hai......police or public records mein humein ek wo kya kehte hain.....haan....accha nagrik dikhna hoga.....issliye shaadi wagarah karke ek accha status dikhaana hoga"

Everyone laughs.....

"Shaadi???....chokri zindagi barbaad kar deti hai.....sir par chadh kar dimag ka dahi karti hai.....aur uss se shaadi karo" Mayank laughs......

Then Mayank's phone rang.....he saw that Boss is calling him.....

"Abe shaant ho jaao sab.....Boss ka phone hai" Mayank said

"Mayank.....Tumhaara flat ready ho gaya hai....details jaldi mill jaayengi....aur ab humaare plan ke agle step ke baare mein Samrat ne bata diya hoga tujhko.....ek ladki dhoond aur sabki nazron mein ek accha aadmi dikhna hai...... samajh gaya" DD replied

DD is contriving for a big plan.....his main men are Mayank and Samrat.....what is his plan even Samrat and Mayank don't know about it....they just follow his orders....he was the one who picked them roadside and brought them up for his use....

"Ab yaar chokri kahaan se dhoondoo" Mayank said.....

"Abe aajkal wo kya kehte hain.....abe wo shaadi karaane waale agent hote hain na bas kissiko pakad lenge" Samrat said "Ab tension lena chod"

Next day Mayank and Samrat reached a Marriage Bureau..... they went straight to the manager and held him by his collar and placed revolver on his head.....

Manager became frightened "Kaun hain aap log....kya chahte hain....yahaan kyun aaye hain"

Samrat patted on his cheeks "Kuch nahin bacche.....ladki chahiye shaadi ke liye"

"Toh ye kya tareeka hai.....tameez se baat nahin kar sakte aap" he said

"Bacche wahi toh nahin aati.....aati toh apun bhi tameez se aate na......ab chup chaap ek acchi si item dikha de" Samrat said while Mayank was still holding the revolver on his head.....

Manager became frightened and he gave the album of photos to Mayank....

Samrat said "Tu dekh Mayank......jo pasand ho ab ye chikna hi karaayega teri shaadi"

Mayank started turning the pages and stopped at Nupur's photo.....

Samrat sneaked from back of Mayank "Kaunsi pasnad ki" and he looked at the photo "Mast hai"

And he placed the album in front of the manager.....

"Ye waali......samajh gaya.....ab tujhse seedhe shaadi ke din milenge......aur ye shaadi jaldi honi chahiye......samjh gaya na......warna" and he showed revolver to him "Samajh hi jaayega"

Saying this Samrat and Mayank left from there......

Manager took out hankerchief from his pocket and started wiping off his forehead......and he picked up the phone to call police......he was about to dial the number when Samrat and Mayank came back......

Samrat said "Oye chooze..... mujhe pata hai tu kisi ko nahin bataayega ki hum kaun hain.....warnaaaaa.........." He took out the gun and showed it to him.....and they left from there......

Manager became very tensed......

He called up Suhaani.....

Manager: Hello main Marriage Bureau se bol raha hoon..... Nupur ke liye ek rishta aaya hai....aap aakar mujhse mil leejiye.....

Suhaani: Arre waah.....main abhi aati hoon......

Suhaani then puts off the phone and went to the marriage bureau......

M: Dekhiye.....ek rishta hai.....lekin humaari koi guarantee nahin hogi behtar hoga ki aap khud ladke ke baare mein acche se chaan been kar lein......

S: Mujhe ye bataaiye unhone koi dahej wageraah ki demand toh nahin rakhi hai.....

M: Ji nahin...par...

S: Par war chodiye aur ye samajh leejiye ki ye rishta pakka.....

M: Aap ek baar.....

S: Main keh rahi hoon na.....bas.....

M: Ok jaisa aap theek samjhein....par unhein shaadi jaldi karni hai.....

S: Haan humein kaunsa Nupur apne ghar mein rakhna hai.....mera matlab jab wo kahein tab hum tayaar hain....bas wo koi paise waise na maangein.....

After the conversation Suhaani went back to her house...

How you liked this update.... I am very excited about this FF.... actually Mayank is so different here.....
I am waiting eagerly to know your response....so please comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

fantastic update

loved it
continue soon
Edited by wind453 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

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Daksha🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣........mujhe bohot hassi aa rahi hain......no no no!!....problem is not with your ff.😉.........i liked the start....infact, i loved it!!!.....but na....mere sayank ko tapoori goons jaise imagine karne mein mujhe hassi aa rahi hain😆😆😆😆.... i loved the start.... n the animated blood stuff you have used to separate the different para's is making this ff more scary!!!.........continue soon.........love it gal!!!.😛😛😛
Shweta
Edited by cool_shwets - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

i am third to comment..... yay

3rd is good as your ff is very famous to competitio tough hota hai na
daksha the update was perfect
nupur is so nice.............. 😊
par woh suhani....... 😡
adhiraj bechara phas gaya...... ek taraf behen toh dusri taraf wife.......
wife ki baat mananni hi padi
samrat and mayank's intro was nice
mayank didn't want to marry but boss ka order tha kya karta
mujhe toh uss manager ki halat par hassi aa rahi hai 😆
samrat and mayank's language was well written......... you showed exactly how goons speak
aab toh bas next update ka intezaar hai
continue soon
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
superb start daksha.......... mayank is sooooo different in this ff... he is almost like in lrl... would love to read more..... do continue sooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
lovely update....
continue soon....
i loved samrat and mayank.....beautiful dialogues ya......
and thnks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
wow its a nice one ... mayank is so different and tht suhani shez a ........i hate her....
keep going nice!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
hay its very nic n intstng 👏
do cnt soon

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