MAYUR OS..curnt track...happy ending!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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DEDICATED to all mayurians and artians!!! and my very close buddies on IF.,i wont start writting down the names cux the lisrt wud go on!!!!


...nupur at bhushan house......
gunjan went to slepp...after such a long time both had such a long talk..

nupur standing outside the window starring at the sky...

nupur waS hurt..heart broken ...for two reasons..mayank wasnt happy for her....and secondly she cudnt see mayank so upset and heart broken too.....this was sumthing new to her.....a new phase in her life..she had to deal with it....

nupur dialed up frm her cell phone

nupur.: hello...umm yeah....i was wondering if i can join the training a lil late ..lyk after a day.i need to prepare........hmm.yaa dont worry i will cover up thanks....

nupur took her purse and silently left from bhushan house..

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mayank was sooo confused...he dint know wat to do ..how to react......what to decide....whts wrong .whts right.....and he wasnt happy tht nupur left early..the food was on the table......but he went to bed without eating it.....twisiting and turning on the bed....sumthing was bothering her .but his ego dint let him accept the truth....finally he fell a bit sleepy..nupurs duppata was lying on the bed he stook it and hugged it close to himself and fell asleep.
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nupur quietly entered her house......she saw the dinning table..nuthing moved.as it is as she left.
nupur to herself : mayank nay khana bhi nahi khaya..pata tha mujhay ....aur ab jub nahi honge tou ......itna naraz hai .....she went to the kitchen and started cooking...she knew mayank dint lyk eating outside ,,,thats why she decided to come back and cook and freez the food...while cooking she was wondering how and whn things come bak to normal.........she just hoped soon....mayank will have to understand.
nupur tried to evaluate whthr if she did anything wrong....but her heart and mind both said that she wasnt wrong this time....

nupur cleaned the house ironed mayanks cloth.....kept the food in the freezer....worked all night so that mayank dosnt have any problem while shez not here....

she looked at the clook it was 5 in the morning...she packed her bag.and was abt to leave the room whn she turned back saw mayank sleeping............she could tell by his face that it wasnt a peaceful sleep.the frown and lines on his forehead... the way he was clutching on to er duppat........no doubt that he loved her...but as he once said..love is not evrything.........she stepped back lightly kissed his forehead.......and mayanks face relaxed.nupur smiled..........silently said take care and see u soon......

she left for bhushan house again....
gunajn woke up to find nupur ready.....
gunjan : di tum gaee nahi abhi......kahin flight tou nahi nikul gae........di sorry pata nahi mere ankh kaisay nahi khuli..
nupur: array gunjan kuch nahi howa!!!! by god tu tu bilkul meri turhan non stop bol rahi hai!!!...meeri flight aaj raat ki hai..aur haan ziyada baat nahi kur meri baat sun......ye teen din tum samrat or benji mayank kay saath lunch aur dinner kurlena........kul raat bhi usnay khana nahi kahaya.tum sab saath hoge to khalega..plz.
gunjan: pur di..
nupur: plz gunjan....aur uska khayal rukhna..
tears in her eyes she got up to leave.......
gunjan: acha di kahan jaa rahee ho college.......
nupur: nahi college se tou mujha off mil gaya hai.bus thoree dai ke liey bahir jaa rahee hon.....acha sun mai airport direct chalee jaoongee theekay..
gunjan: di flight raat ki hai.abhi se nikul rahe hoo and direct airport...
nupur:. gunajan mujhse sawal na pooch.mujha kuch dair ke leiy akela rehna hai...
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mayank running towards gunjan...
mayank: gunjan.......wo nupur...gaee
gunjan: nahi di ki flight aaj raat ki hai....
mayank: tou wo college kyun naho aayee..
gunajn tld mayank how nupur was said that she will directly go the airport and how shes was going somwhr in the morning but dint tell her......

mayank: acha...
mayank was lost............aisa bhi kiya hoagya.......humari pehlay bhi tou itne lareee hui hai........kyun nupur apni galti acceot nahi kurna chatii ........theekay agar usko mujhse nahi baat kurni tou theekay mai bhi nai karoonga......hmph!!!!!

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the entire day nupur spent sitting on a bench near the seashore.........thinking how lil lil things can make huge differences............how she got married.how mayank had to adjust......how her father still dint speak to er....she never told anyone........but she always silently cried....she missed her father....suddenly she realised it was dark.....chkd the time it was already seven...
nupur stopped a rickshaw and headed to the airport....
**********************************************************************************mayank was pacing in his room...he was losing it!!!!...he was feeling bad.after all wht happened ..nupur made him food ironed his clothes..asked the gang to stay with him so he dznt feel lonely...how can he be so harsh on her!!! wht if it was her fault cant he forgive her( the idea was still tht nupur was at fault)...this was it !!!!!!!! he dialed nupurs number.....the phone was turned off.......
mayank: iska matlab hai nupur ki flight......

**********************************************************************************nupur reached dehli.....she wasnt feeling well.....hadnt slept properly..all the stress......her training was very tiring....nupur was constantly running on high fever.....she wud hardly talk to mayank and gunjan for more thn a mint fearing they wud fig out shes not well....

nupur was at the airport waiting to board her flight back to mumbai...



the same day gunjan cudnt resist and tolld mayank evrything she and nupur talked abt ...and how nupur just wanted to help and she expected mayank to be happy....mayank realised his mistake and was feeling guilty to the core...but as gunjan told her di that jeeju was different .he was.............he quickly made up his mind that he will apologize and make up for it....
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mayank told that only he is going to airport to receive nupur.and no one objected to it......


nupur came out to find mayank waiting for her......

nupur: mayank mai aajati tum kyun ayee.......tum thakay hoye hoge na.
mayank: nahi mai thak a howa nahi hoon...chalo......
he took her luggage and took hold of her hand and started walking....he suddenly realised nupurs hand was warm..no it was hot.........he quickly chkd for fever.
mayank: nupur utmko tou bukhaar ho raha hai itna taiz.......
nupur: nahi mayank aisay he .thakan se hoagaya hoga.
mayank : bus nupur.......hum log dr kehan jayege pehlay....aur mai iskay aagay ek lafz bhi nahi sunoo ga!!!
nupur dint have the will or the strength to debate......


the doctor scolded nupur for such careless behavior and questioned mayank that how can stress her out soo much!!!!


********************************************************************************** both reached home .....as nupur entered her room.......she saw candels.......a table set for two.the room was smelling full of roses........she cudnt hold her tears for long..she turned back.....before she said anything mayank hugged came and hugged............it was as if somone filled her wid life again.....she cried her heart out.and mayank kept saying sorry.........is voice was choked as if he was crying tooo..........nupur hugged him tighter......after all the crying slowed down .mayank cupped her face .kissed her forehead.
mayank: mujhse kabhi naraz nahi howa karo nupur....
nupur(in her nautanki style repeating his lines ) : kyun kay tum kehtay nahi ho pur tum bhi bahut hurt hotay ho..
mayank:smiling.........han......ims o sorry nupur meri wajah se..
nupur: bus mayank jo hogaya so hogaya......abhi mjhay bhook bhi lagi hai..aur .......
myanak...aur.....
nupur: mera ma kar raha hai tumharay saath dance kurnay ka....itna romantic scene hai by god......
mayank: jee nahi...khana khaa kay bed....tumhai rest ki zarorat hai
nupur: mayank.nahi dance...
mayank: shushed her by placing his finger on her lips.....
mayank: no dance....
nupur.......mhmhmhmmmmm
mayank moved forward placed a light peck on hrer lips.
nupur melted in his arms right thr............

ignore all the errors..dint have time to chk it again!!!
i hope u guyz like it!!!

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mohseena thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i know its not good....but its like.....im liking the track but i want it to end really happily and romantically......this is just like a summarize version of wht i actually want.......
thanks



an di know it is sorta incomplete bhi.as in the romantic part but im running out of time!!!
sorry guyz
Edited by mohseena - 15 years ago
-afsha- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It ws nice one
Liked it
PureBliss thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice OS....it was lovely 😃 do write more.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum OS dear.👏.
luvd it....
do pm me wenever u write🤗..
-supriya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice os dear.
i loved it
thanks for sharing it with us
dynamic_doll thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice OS dear!

thnx 4 the pm 😊

Mrina-PMs thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oye hoyye Ana jaan!
Itne dino baad aapke PM aaya... Main to bohot khush ho gayi!
Aur ye OS padhke to aur bhi zyada khush ho gayi!
Fabulous OS! Kaash MJHT mein bhi aisa ho!
Love
Mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
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luved it 😃 i hope it would end like this,keep writing and........yes, do edit the romantic part we need some more from mayur😉
ramsha.aslam thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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but i have one question is rati's dehli stay going to be shown or not? because i assume rati has also gone somewhere like Arjun went,few days back........as there were no promos of rati's track!!

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