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The scene is in the sets of CB where shooting is going on regarding Vaishalis punishment for hiding the truth regarding Shantanus birth.........


The ashram is the same one as before the only difference is that the Mahant has a big moustache.


Mahant looking at Vaishali- Devi welcome.........I don't like that you have to do so much hard work for your punishment............your soft hands are not used to hard labour, but you have to live up to your choti bahus standards and so unfortunately you will have to do what I tell you to do.


Vaishali wearing her soft pink colourd chiffon sari with a matching pearl necklace around her neck.........matching pearl earings dangling from her white ears........perfectly manicured finger nails..........silver coloured sandles heaves a big sigh..........and a drop of tear falls from the corner of her eye.........muttering to herself she says..this is all because of maaji..........I did tell her repeatedly not to bring in Radhika as the daughter-in-law.........who asked her to plough the field? And now for that I have to do this........but she puts on a brave face and tells the mahant.........I am ready for whatever punishment you have chosen for me.......


The Mahant looks at this lady......this soft sweet lass......whose chest is heaving.......whose lips are quivering.......and whose eyes have a sheen of tears.......this brave lady who is trying her best to control herself and not fall apart......he feels like going to this lady and just envelope her in a big hug and comfort her patting her back......and speaks....Devi! Since you have withhold a truth for such a long time.....your brain must be very tired due to this exertion .......it needs to be purified and it needs to be cooled down and for this you have to keep a pot filled with water on your head and plough the field the entire day......if the pot dislodges from your head then you will have to repeat it again....but if some water falls on you then it is ok.....just be careful that the pot does not fall off.


Vaishali heaving her boosom, with eyes filled with water nods her head and accepts the punishment. So a pot of water is placed on her head and she walks to the plough wearing her silver coloured sandles.


Nearby, the ghost of senior purohit and Kanha are sitting on a branch of a tree and watching all this with extreme interest.


Vaishali walks up to the plough and picks it up....she carefully picks up the plough so as to not disturb the pot of water sitting on her head......her pallu slips down and bit....the mahants moustache starts quivering and chachoo comes running....he pulls out a safety pin from his pocket that has been attached to a red handkerchief and pins the pallu back in position....a bead of sweat falls from Vaishalis forehead.......Chachoo takes out his red silk handkerchief and wipes his forehead.....seeing this one of senior Purohits eyebrow almost reached the top of his forehead and Kanha starts studying his flute .....Vaishali heaves another sigh and flutters her eyelids at chachoo, blushes bit and says.....Susheel....I don't know what I will do without you.....you are always looking out for me....


Chachoo gulps and says- No no....its my duty......after bhaisahab went away it is now my duty to look after you....hearing this Senior Purohits other eyebrow goes up......and Kanah starts cleaning his flute......


Mahant suddenly booms- Susheel babu you are not supposed to help the Devi....and mutters to himself....you are also blocking my view.....everyone is worried when others block their view of Dev, but now the creative are not worried that this chachoo is blocking my view!


So Chachoo comes back to his position...and Vaishali swinging her rear side, wearing he shiffon sari, with dangling ear rings and silver sandals continues her ploughing...the sun slowly rises in the sky......and Vaishlai starts getting more and more tired...she starts panting....both chachoo and the mahant are mesmerized by the action.....and start singing to themselves....

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(chandan saa badan chanchal chitawan

Hole hole se teraa ye kamar matkana)2

Mujhe dosh naa denaa duniyawaalon

ho jaau agar main deewaanaa

chandan saa badan chanchal chitawan

(ye kaam kamaan bhawe teree
palako ke kinaare kajaraare)2
maathe par chamkti chamkti jwala
hothhon pe dahakate angaare
(saayaa bhee jo teraa pad jaaye)2
aabaad ho dil kaa wiraanaa

chandan saa badan chanchal chitawan

(tan bhee sundar, man bhee sundar

too sundarataa kee murat hai)2

Sr. Purohitr ko shaayad kam hogee

muze teree bahot jarurat hai

pahale bhee main tarasaa hu

too aaur naa dil ko tarasaanaa

chandan saa badan chanchal chitawan

Hole hole se teraa ye kamar matkana)2

(Mujhe dosh naa denaa duniyawaalon)2

ho jaau agar main deewaanaa

chandan saa badan chanchal chitawan

Vaishali starts looking up to check where the sun is ....and her pot tilts....at the last moment she manages to save the pot from falling on the ground but in the process most of the water falls on her .....her lips start quivering and she looks at chachoo fluttering her eyelids.....both chachoo and mahant jump up from where they were standing and do a fifty metre dash to Vaishali and reach her at the same time.


Mahant- Devi ......are you ok?....Chachoo also chimes in and again bring out his red handkerchief. The manaht's moustache starts quivering as if it has a life of its own...and he pushes chachoo away and with his own handerchief helps Vaishali wipe away the water from her shoulder and hands....chachoo with hands on his lips looks at what is going on in front of him and tells Mahant not to rub Vaishalis hands so roughly.....red marks will develop......she is very delicate....Suddenly they hear a loud scream....all three turn around to see that both dadima and Dev have fainted.....and Radhika is desperately trying to wake them up....chachoo and Mahant realize what has happened and they come back to Dev and dadima....all try to wake up dadima and dev.......the latter first wakes up and says DADI......Dadi wakes up and says Dev...did you bring that bal gopal that I gave you....because I think bahu will give the fourth grandchild much before you and Radhika will give me my first great grandchild......Radhika looks around and tells Dev......I knew it......I told you yesterday that let me plough the field.....but now look what you have done! Kanha where are you!


As soon as Kanha heard Radhika calling his name he almost fell from the tree....the senior purohit started laughing and suddenly they heard a voice saying......"I am not going"....hey looked everywhere and saw that the gendwa phool was sitting on the branch. With a big frown on his face and was looking very angrily at Kanha. ......Kanha tries his best to control the Gendwa phool who is now close to mutiny.


Suddenly all hear a loud wail and tuning around they see......Vaishali sitting on the ground.....with the pot on her head wailing loudly......I am doing such hard work and all of you are interested in maaji....hearing this the Mahant and chachoo get very concerned and mahant tells both Dev and daima for fainting when the devi is working so hard.


The sun rises more up in the sky and Vaishali raises herself from the ground and starts her ploughing......heaving her chest, swinging her rear end like a pendulum and all the time spilling water on herself...........suddenly she hits a stone lying in the field......she tries her best to pull the plough over the stone.....seeing her condition again chachoo and mahant starts running.....the mahanta oushes chachoo aside and reaches Vaishali first......he bends down and picks up the stone and throws it away......Radhika jumps up and tells Mahant.......you cannot do that, no one supposed to help maaji in this work....


All the people in the ashram start shouting that Radhika is right.....Mahanta has broken the law......so that means that Vaishalis punishment is not complete....By this time big drops of tears have started falling from Vaishalis eyes......she has started hiccupping....Mahant looks at her .....gulps and tells everyone......since he has broken the law he will plough the entire land......Vaishali faints.....the Mahant cathes her and says.......Devi!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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misti i just loved it dear,,wow no words to express but lets try,,,after radhika its her param pujyaniya saasumaa,,,oh my god seeing her plough the field the senior purohit's bhoot will come and help her out as dev helped rad,,,but as he wont be visible,,right so he will enter his dearest bro's body or the mahant's body....

and the song u selected "chandan sa badan "is my fav song but after knowing ur side of the story when i will hear the song the viashali scene will come to my mind and the beautiful romantic song will turn into a hilarious song,,,

misti i have another song for thi ssituation,,if u dont mind let me add ,,,the song is "kamariya lachke re babu zara bachke re solah jaise bhadkere dil mera dhadke re"
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Posted: 15 years ago
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misiti thankyou so much...i always love your posts
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!
I just can't stop laughing!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣
Thanks for the wonderful post!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was a pleasant surprise to read "Vaish ploughing field" early in the morning ... thanks for the vivid descriptions ... i could almost picturize it 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Just loved... Beautiful as always.... haha...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinyclassic

misti i just loved it dear,,wow no words to express but lets try,,,after radhika its her param pujyaniya saasumaa,,,oh my god seeing her plough the field the senior purohit's bhoot will come and help her out as dev helped rad,,,but as he wont be visible,,right so he will enter his dearest bro's body or the mahant's body....

and the song u selected "chandan sa badan "is my fav song but after knowing ur side of the story when i will hear the song the viashali scene will come to my mind and the beautiful romantic song will turn into a hilarious song,,,

misti i have another song for thi ssituation,,if u dont mind let me add ,,,the song is "kamariya lachke re babu zara bachke re solah jaise bhadkere dil mera dhadke re"



Thanks Shiney.........I loved your version too..........Sr purohits bhoot in mahants body.😆😆😆😆.....I Iike your song..will remember it for future use........😉😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajsri

🤣 🤣 🤣

It was a pleasant surprise to read "Vaish ploughing field" early in the morning ... thanks for the vivid descriptions ... i could almost picturize it 😆




Rajsri this has been my dream since yesterday........😆😆😆.......and you are welcome.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ani_gr

Just loved... Beautiful as always.... haha...



Thank you.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Misti ur an humourous idea bank and the minute the idea comes ur hands start clicking away and post it and all the forumers are 🤣🤣🤣 reading it.We all wait when the updaters will update so that we can get our daily dose of ur istyle and humour.😆When I was young I used to read a humourous magazine lotpot dont know whether it is stlii there or not but used to eagarly wait for it just like now for ur istyle.But some times we get an extra sweet like today .Indeed Vaishalis backside and Chachu and Mahant following and running to her to help her😆😆😉
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