My first OS - yours forever - Page 2

Originally posted by: mahnaz_00

Awesome work dear........
Totally luved the OS
Verry Verrry well described
Do write more of them

TC
Mahnaz😊

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

completely loved the way you narrated the entire story ... very well-written...

the twist of the Bhaskar-payal sub-plot has been very nicely knitted with the main plot ...

completely loved the way it eventually merged ..

great work dear 👏

Originally posted by: naley4ever

wow girl i was waiting for this Gr8 work girl loving it
love ArBi childhood scene sooooooooooo cute 🤗
just got the time read ur one shot is Awesome 👏
hope ur feeling better now
Continue soooooooon girl
take care
Naley

Originally posted by: jassie_17

Awwww...it's a cute OS dear....

I'm so sorry to write my comments..i just read it...there's some error with my inbox!!Not been able to read the messages....

It's really cute..What took me by surprise was the coincidental deaths of Bhaskar and Payal and how ArBi wrote letters to each other using different names....

Really cute!!Do write more....

Cheers,

Jassie