Written Update - 3rd May...Complete

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doing on behalf of shini aka lilindiangurl13

Suraj's parents are talking.
father says he never thought he will ever live see a day like this.
mother says the people, around us, are changing their colors. people first respected us and now those same people are now talking about us and khanak in a way that its painful to hear. can't they see khanak's pain? since suraj left, the happiness left us.
father says that i keep wondering the same question. He says kismat has played quite a game with his life. In one moment(Suraj's death), it left him khokla. It left him weak and broken inside. He says how happily they married Suraj to Khanak..and today that same happiness turned into sadness. He felt he lost, everything. He couldn't do anything, earn money nor respect. He couldn't do anything for haveli. He couldn't stop suraj's death. He can't do anything to take away Khanak's sadness. Now Shaan is taking decision of khanak's life, and I can't do anything abt that either.
Khanak arrives outside the room.
father says chee, i should die. mother says you shouldn't talk like that.
Natasha comes to Shaan's home
her sis questions her. Nats tells her abt how she wants to go to Dhulwadi to support Shaan, how she tried to run away. Shaan's mom hears this. Her sis tells her not to be irresponsible and make decision like that. She reminds of the time when Shaan's dad was gonna go to Dhulwadi and how press came to their house. Nats argues that she loves him and how would she have reacted if she were in her shoes. Shaan's mom comes and says Nats I will help you, you will go to Dhulwadi, for now just relax and go get some rest. Nats sis is like why did you say that. Her dad won't let her go, you know she already tried to go. Shaan's mom says we can't go but she can, she should go to support Shaan, I will talk to Akshay(Shaaan's bro) to go have chat with your dad.

Khanak enters Suraj's parents room
They wipe their tears. Khanak says you shouldn't worry, even though Suraj is not here, im still here. I won't let you regret the fact that im the daughter in law of this house. mother says we didn't mean to say that. Khanak says I understand what you be thinking, because I always considered you my parents. I will fix everything, just be strong. Khanak leaves saying that. Mother says look at her strengh, she lost her husband and she's broken from inside and yet she is trying to remain strong for us. we should support her and stay strong.
Khanak runs away from Suraj's parents room.
She's crying and thinking enough is enough, I fought a lot with Shaan. I should think abt my family, must forget the past and think abt future and Shantunu you are the root of this problem. You started all this and you must end this. I will make sure you end this.
Shaan is thinking and Choksi comes there.
He remembers Suraj's falling, Sarpanch making the decision, people talking abt widows shaadi. Choksi comes. Shaan asks for any good news and Choksi says no one is ready to marry a widow. Every house is talking abt this. Shaan is mad and says stop it, I just want solution to this problem. Just look for a dulha, im sick and tired of being stuck here. You know next week is my wedding and now it has to be be postponed. I wish this factory would have never even started, at least I wouldn't be here. Choksi says don't say that, because of this factory this village's happiness is here. Shaan replies by saying but my happiness is gone. Nats calls. Shaan ignores the call and says to Choksi just hurry n find a guy for Khanak. Just buy him off, no matter at what cost. The helping guy(greedy dadi's pota lol) who was helping Shaan look dulha hears this at the door. He says this letter is for you, Shaan opens it and reads it and he says its from Khanak. The letter says for Shaan to meet Khanak at Kali Ghati to talk something important. Shaan is wondering why? She's mad, When I wanted to meet her, she wasn't ready to talk to me. Why should I go to meet her. Choksi says maybe she has a solution to this problem. Shaan replies by saying she is your Khanak, she is the biggest problem of my life as of now. There is only one solution to this problem, one dulha. What is your idea choksi, marry her off to me?? (I won't mind that😳 😉) Don't waste my time ok. The helping guy says wats the problem in meeting her once? Maybe she changed her mind abt money. Nats calls again and Shaan answers and excuses himself from Choksi and helping guy.
Akshay and Nats dad are talking.
Nats dad gets up saying no way Akshay, I wasn't expecting you to talk so immature. Wat do you want huh? Want me to send Nats to Dhulwadi? Akshay replies saying Nats wants to go there. Dad argues she is still a child. Akshay says I know Shaan is childish but he's a nice kid. To this dad gives Akshay a evil look. Shaan is just getting into more there. The question is not abt wats right and wrong for Shaan, never mind, Im sorry I over reacted. Akshay says its okay. Dad says wat do you think? I mean lets say Nats went to Dhulwadi and press finds out, the news will spread like fire. It will create more problems for Shaan. Akshay says you are right , its better if Nats doesn't go, I came here without giving it much a thought. Akshay leaves. Nats dad thinks abt increasing Shaan's problems and now he won't let him come back.😡

Shaan and Nats talking.
Nats says why won't you answer phone and give replies to my messages. Shaan starts to reply but then thinks abt if he should tell Nats abt Khanak's letter and then he just says I had a bad day. She asks your hiding something from me? and he tells her abt Khanak's letter, she encourages him to meet her and keep his cool when he meets her and she misses him.

Shaan is waiting at kali ghat.
Khanak comes. Shaan ask her abt she didn't want to talk him and now she's meeting him. So what have thought abt it? Do you want my help? Khanak replies by saying im here to help you escape from this village. Shaan's shocked and he 's like wat??? Just go from here. There's boat at the shore, just get in and leave. She folds her hands in front of him.


pre-cap: Shaan ask the boat guy when will they reach the shore? the guy replies in a while. Once Shaan gets down, villagers are coming and Shaan is face to face with Sarpanch, and Sarpanch slaps him. Khanak's FIL says his family respect of 300 years has been ruined. Khanak's MIL faints.

hit the like button whether you like or dont like the epi😆
Edited by rima791 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Waiting for ur full update.Thanxxx for updating.

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thanks for updatee rimsiee
awesome written :D
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thanks widsie!! shini was banned frm comp for oen day hehe
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Thanks gal....boring episode though.....poor shaan will get caught tomorrow....was that Khanak's revenge?
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you welcome n your right, it was boring epi....i don't think so...i mean she was trying to get rid of him so she wouldn't have to marry someone else....

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