Prida FF Love After Marriage Note Pg 92 - Page 65

will continue asap

thanks didi i am glad you liked it.

will continue asap and continue to pm you for sure

Prithvi was lying down peacefully, on the bed with Damini snuggling closely to him, it had been half an hour since he woke up and she didn't. And when he tried getting up a sleepy frown made its way to her forehead and he had to sit back, 'childish' this was the only word for her that came to his mind at that time. Ever since they had landed into Shimla she was behaving childishly as if lost her calm and composed self in Mumbai itself. She had not let him rest when they had reached here and taken him out to see around the place, even when they had two weeks to spend here still she was eager to view the place around. As it was winter time the snowfall was a must and hence she had been even more pressurizing him to take her to the mountains. Prithvi did not know that what were her plans and like an innocent lamb he took her there only to be beaten badly by snowballs. And when he threw one she started pretended to cry and then inserted one snowball in his jacket too. He had a tough time taking it out and she had been laughing on top of her lungs.

He tried to get back to her but then left it for the day as she said she was tired, and then leaving his revenge for later he took her for dinner in a restaurant and then carried a sleeping Damini home. Since then she had been sleeping like a baby angel in his arms, his baby angel he thought as he caressed her hair and stared at her lovingly. And then suddenly his mischievous side gave him an idea 'Mrs. Damini Saxena now you will know how childish your hubby dearest can be if you can' he smirked to himself.

Damini woke up with a shriek as she was doused in cold water she looked around to find herself lying in the bathtub and a shower overhead running on her at full speed. She turned around to see Prithvi laughing on top of his lungs, but stopped instantly when she stood up and glared daggers at him and then seeing her nose twitch he laughed out again, but the very next moment he was running for his life as fast as he could while Damini was hurling abuses "stupid, idiot, moron'''" at him "Prithvi just stop agar maine baad ne pakda toh you will get a worse punishment" but Prithvi didn't stop. After a while Damini just sat down on the edge of the bed angrily. Thinking now it was time to make it up for her as she was not keen on taking revenge but was angry now.

So he sat next to her but a little away from where she was sitting with a swollen face, pouting like a small angry baby and her face away from him. "Damini" he shifted a little closer to her but slowly afraid of what might come up suddenly, but no response came, not even a usual hmpf. He moved even closer so that now he was just sitting beside her, "Damini" he said softly tapping her shoulder. But the next moment he fell back on the bed with a thud and Damini was sitting on his stomach smirking and in her hand was'' A JUG full of cold water!!!!! 'You are so dead Prithvi' was the first thought that came to his mind as she gave him the mystery glint look. "Please Damini not water please dekho main bimaar pad jaunga naa" "no please wlease jab mujhe nahlaaya tha tab kahan gaya tha yeh bimaari waala excuse, aur shukar manao sirf ek hi jug laga hai mere haath" 'aur ab ise kisi bhi tarah mere haath lagaana ho hoga' "Damini tum kitni sweet ho, tum mere saath aisa nahi karogi naa" but she shook her head in a firm no and an evil grin took place on her pouting face as she began tilting the jug slowly towards his face, and he closed his eyes gulping waiting for the cold water to douse his face any moment now''''''

After 15 minutes

Damini was sitting in his lap her back on his chest and his head nuzzled in her neck and his arms holding her close by the waist. But to surprise and shock the jug was still filled with water and Prithvi was not wet. "Sorry Damini abse aisa kuch nahi karoonga" he said softly placing a kiss on her shoulder "theek hai maaf kiya par next time se aise nahi pyaar se uthana jaise ghar pe utha te ho" she said pouting.

Flashback

'It is now or never Prithvi' he said and opened his eyes determined , Damini was going to pour the water on him when he shouted "Damini tumhaare peeche cockroach" she suddenly panicked as she had not expected such a thing and looked back. With one swift moment he slid from beneath her and took hold of the jug from her hands and kept it back on the table, and holding her hands he turned her to face him. It was then she realized that he had tricked her and started banging his chest with her fists annoyed and frustrated but Prithvi made no attempt to stop her. When she calmed a little she kissed the same place on his chest where she had hit him and kept her head there "bas itna hi gussa ho mujhse?" he asked her and she moved back "nahi bahut gussa hoon tumse" "accha toh phir abhi mujhe maarne par tumhe dard kyon hua" "kyon agar apni saanson ko takleef ho toh dard to hoga hi na" she said softly "toh phir mujhse itna gussa kyon ho" he said cupping her face and making her look into his eyes "kyonki mujhe thand lag rahi hai" she said innocently and he felt like awe on her innocence "accha theek hai ab nahi lagegi" he said pulling her on his lap and holding her closer and cuddling her to himself.

"accha ghar pe kaise uthata hoon" he asked her mischievously but she was far too serious "meri good morning kissie dekar aur phir aise hi hug karke" she said still pouting like a baby and his heart melted at this, he was beginning to just love this child like side of his baby angel. Actually he loved every side of her be it, shy, romantic, understanding, bossy, and now childish. He was so madly in love with her that he couldn't figure out anything about her that needed to be amended. In his thoughts he forgot that Damini was getting irritated for her so called 'kissie', she nudged him but he seemed lost somewhere. After waiting for some 10 minutes more she just turned and kissed him hard out of anticipation. But she left him angrily before he could respond as he was too shocked to see her so initiative for the first time and also she was very fierce and now angry with him as she gave him his back.

But one thing that amused him was that she still sat in his lap keeping him close to her, taking her feeling cold as a reason. "Good morning hogayi aapki?" he asked her softly keeping his chin on her shoulder and pulling her even closer if that was possible. But she shook her head in a disappointed no and sighed "kyon ab toh good morning kissie bhi mil gayi toh phir" "yeh roz waali jaisi nahi thi" " kyon roz waali kaise alag hoti hai?" he asked her "roz waali soft aur sweet hoti hai, tumhaare pyaar se bhari hui" she told him simply and he marveled at the thought that how much such small things mattered to her and how well she understood him. "theek hai toh abhi who waali kissie de deta hoon" he said and leaned in and gave her a soft and sweet kiss full of his love just as she had wished for.

When they broke apart he was smiling and so was she, "ab toh good morning hogayi na yaa phir...." he naughtily asked and she blushed "haan hogayi" and then kept her head on his shoulder and draped her arms around his neck "humesha mujhe aise hi pyaar karna Prithvi kabhi mat badalna" she said softly and he replied "jab tak meri saasen chalengi, dil dhadkega tab tak meri har saans par sirf tumhaara haq hoga aur meri are dhadkan sirf tumhaara naam legi, main chahu to bhi tumse pyaar karna nahi chod sakta" he hugged her more tightly promising their love with the security of his arms.

now for each and every part a comment, of appreciation.

Part 1: i loved this start of this FF in their new house, a new beginning to a journey of love.

then their disbelief of their marriage was pretty understandable for an arranged marriage.

loved the way you explained their characters even though breifly. in all very nice part.

Part 2: waah waah, ideas tak toh theek tha tune to mera routine hi chaap diya😕😆😆, never mind i fell in love with it in the way you described it😳. then their staring sessions ⭐️, his crashing ⭐️ , her concern 👏, then her shriek🤣 loved this part and dhakkan's thought fullness for his wifey. awesome start for the first day of the marriage.👏👏

Part 3: sensible prithvi took care of such small things, now you will make every wife wish for a hubby like prithvi and the high bar you have set of expectations makes it difficult for us boys to achieve and hence you will be the reason for anyone's dissatisfied marriage🤣🤣🤣 he came back home for lunch yaar he is a gem of a person, wanting to make it special for her, good good. then loved their denial for thinking about each other. they are wonderful liars😆. oh great so spending time with wife renews interest in work, wonder why i never knew this. maybe coz i ain't married yet🤣. the note, dinner, then cleaning the dishes was just fabulous, oh now he goes to his seclusion. i loved it until he began walking out

Part 4: so she wants to be with him hun? already falling for the gem, getting all bossy and possessive now that's damini😆 and you depicted her very well👏. now they are holding hands and eating icecream 😍 what could be better yaar. now she is scared of lightning slight change of side but in the better of the situation. she was clutching his shirt, she is really strong then😆, she blushed 😍😍 and then she took up all responsiblities of his on her shoulder⭐️ cool boss encounter and then the lunch thing.⭐️⭐️ she doing all wifey things for him and me likey👏

Part 5: loved their fight for just a stupid reason, awesome work. he stressing himself to avoid her. typical prithvi just like the show. their little confrontation just added fuel to the fire.

Part 6: waah now begins the concern for her, and anger has vanished. she feeling miserable as he was doing this for her was just fabulous, his collapsing and then his boss's funny lecture. i loved the line "aap kis ki side ho sir"🤣🤣 and acted like a can opener to his head🤣 you openly calling him dhakkan😆 she hugged him tight😳 they fed each other😳😳 i love this combo of yours, you seemed to have taken everything in proper quantity and blended them well.

Part 7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,........22. i just loved all of this but can't comment on all individually coz i am as lazy as you are😆😆😆 just love seeing their love blossoming and their kisses, things they do to make each other happy out of the way. in the parts containing savni and varni i just loved the drama, teasing and all. now honeymoon part was awesome too. just waiting for you to continue and thanks for the pm