MN OS- Future- 2 perspectives

Hi guys this a one shot i tried.


Mayank : Mera bhi ek dream thi nupur. Mein ek succeessful aadmi banu, Maa ko khush rakhoon.Magar is pyaar, shaadi aur roj roj ki struggle mein kahin na kahin us dream se mein ne focus kho di hein.

Nupur: Nahin Mayank aisa kuch nahin hein. Tumne focus nahin khoya hein.

Mayank: Meine khoya hein nupur. Mein apne padai pe concentrate nahin kar rahan hoon. Meine apne dream ko kahin door chod diya hein. Meine khoya hein nupur.

Nupur: Magar hamare paas hamara pyaar hein mayank. Hum issey kuch bhi jeet lenge. tum paresham math ho.

Mayank: Pyaar bahut kuch hotha hein nupur par sab kuch nahin. Sirf pyaar ke saath hum zindagi nahin gujaar sakthe.


He left leaving nupur behind without knowing the effect of his words on her. Nupur sat back thinking about the words mayank said.

EVERY POINT HAS TWO PERSPECTIVES TO LOOK AT. NOW LETS SEE THOSE 2

PERSPECTIVES AND HOW NUPUR CAN REACT TO EACH ONE.

PERSPECTIVE-1

Nupur is deeply hurt by the words of Mayank. His words kept ringing....

"Magar is pyaar ......... focus kho di hein."
" apne padai pe concentrate nahin kar rahan hoon"
" pyaar ke saath hum zindagi nahin gujaar sakthe."

Nupur: Kya meri wajay se mayank ne apne dream ko bhoola hein. Kya

mayank is shaadi ko regret kar rahan hein.

Suddenly a kind of fear crept in Nupur. She felt like she is loosing something. She thought for a while

Nupur: Nahin mayank mein tumhein meri tarah apne dream ko khone nahin doongi. Mein aisa kuch hone nahin doongi. Woh mera pyaar hi kyon na ho. Ab ye pyaar aur shaadi tumhare dream ke beech nahin aayenge.

Nupur takes a firm decision. She moves towards her house their house ( Its no more a home for some years she thought)

She freshens up and went to kitchen to prepare dinner. Once done she went to bedroom and shifted her clothes and things to other room

By the time mayank came home she is done with everything. Mayank is still thinking on the same issue and didnt notice the change in nupur and the room. He placed himself on bed and dozzed to sleep.

Nupur was waiting at the table expecting mayank to come. He didnt come. She didnt want to call him as she decided on something. She slept there on the couch.

Early next morning mayank wokeup and didnt find nupur next to him.He came out looking for nupur. He saw her sleeping on couch with a frown on her face. He felt it different.

He came to nupur and gave her a good morning kiss and woke up nupur.

mayank: Good Morning Nupur ( with a smile on his face)
Nupur: Good Morning Mayank ( Without any emotion)

Mayank was confused

She went to the other room freshen up and went to kitchen to prepare BF.

Mayank came to kitchen and saw nupur making BF. He came from behind and was about to hug her. She backed off. Mayank looked with a questioning face.

Nupur: Mayank shower leke aajavo. BF ready hojayega tab tak.mayank finished his bath and came back. he didnt find nupur. By the time he came she left.

She left a note for Mayank.

Mayank,
Tum meri baat dhyaan se suno aur samjho. Dekho mayank mein tho apna sapna poora nahin kar paayi. par meri wajah se tum apne sapne se kabhi door nahin ho jaana.

Mein meri pyaar ya yeh shaadi kko tum aur tumhare future ke beech mein nahin aane doongi. aaj se tum sirf apne padai pe concentrate karo. Hum ek hi ghar mein rahenge par ajnabee dost bankar. jab tum apne future ko apne sapne ki tarah poora karoge us waqt mein tumhare saath tumhare patni ki tarah rahungi.

Mein nahin chaahthi ki tum kabhi bhi is shaadi keliye regret karo. Aur yeh tumhe karna hoga. tumhe meri kasam.

---Nupur

Mayank was shocked after reading the letter. usey samajh mein nahin aata.

He remembered the words he said yesterday. He even understood to which extent they hurt nupur. He silently left to college as he know if nupur decided on something she will not turn back.

Here we can see nupur entering a fashion technology institute. She decided to have a backup career. She even managed to get a part time job in same institute. As she is in last year they had classes only till afternoon. So she joined fashion institute in evening batch. She became busy with both career and job.


Mayank also became busy with studies and job. Now he became more focused as now its not only his dream but also he cannot let down the sacrifice made by nupur.

Everyday morning mayank and nupur used to meet at dining table. Discuss their day and left for their individual works.

Whenever there is a show of nupur mayank used to be there. when ever there is an important competition or exam nupur used to be there. They just used to smile at eachother.That smile gave them the strength needed. As usual their eyes conveyed the unspoken words.

2 years passed and these 2 years just increased the love and understanding between mayank and nupur. Now mayank is head of reputed company and nupur just entered the fashion field.

After 2 years on the same day they were together in same room.
Both cuddling up in bed just feling eachothers presence.

They are happy with their career and life.

Mayank: Nupur meine do saal pehle yeh kahan tha ki pyaar sabkuch nahin hotha par nupur tum mere sab kuch ho. aaj ke baadh tum mujhe ek second keliye bhi chod ke math jaana

Nupur : She just cried her heart out washing out all the loneliness and fears of those 2 years.

PERSPECTIVE 2:

Nupur : Deeply hurt by the words.
Kya mayank is shaadi ko regret kar rahan hein. Kya mein uske aur uske sapne ke beech aa rahin hoon.
Ek baar mayank se baath karke dekhthi hoon.


Nupur went in search of mayank.She found him sitting in an empty class.
Nupur went near mayank sat beside him.

Nupur: Mayank kya hua. Itna pareshan kyun ho

Mayank: Kuch nahin nupur. Bas apne future ke baare mein soch rahan hoon.

She felt a bit of pain by hearing the word " apne future"

Nupur: Mayank mujhe poora vishwas hein tum apna future bahut acche tareeke se handle karoge. Bas apne aapko kam math samajhna.U can do it mayank.

Mayank laid his head on nupurs shoulder and closed his eyes. Nupur kept ruffling his hair with left hand.

After sometime
Nupur: Mayank mein tumse ek baath poochu
Mayank: Poocho Nupur.

Nupur: Mayank kya tum ... kya tum ... hamari shaadi ko regret kar rahein ho.

Mayank suddenly got up and faced nupur.

Nupur: (bent her head down)
Mayank agar tumhein lagta hein ki meri pyaar, yeh shaadi tumhare career aur dreams ko spoil kar rahan hein toh bata do. Mein tumse door rahungi. Mein nahin chaahthi ki meri wajah se tum life mein kabhi bhi ye socho ki mein aur meri pyaar tumhare career ke beech aagaye.

Mayank: yeh tum kya bol rahin ho nupur.
Nupur: Mayank mein ghar jaa rahin hoon.

Nupur left the room. Mayank was confused and remembered the words he said. Suddenly it striked him that it was his fault. He too came home.

Nupur is lying on the bed deep in thought.

Mayank came near nupur and kissed her forehead, then eyes, moving towards her cheecks and sealing her lips with his. He kissed her passionately. He wanted to show her that he is not regretting their marriage. Nupur responded back showing him all the fears she has. He made love to her tonight just to show her that he will never leave her at any cost.

Next morning both wokeup with different feelings.

Nupur determined herself that she will support mayank at anycost and will step into new dreams.

mayank woke up with clear vision of future.

mayank looked at nupur expecting to see only love on her face. Nupur smiled at him and gave a cheek peck assuring him

She laid her head in his lap.

Nupur: Mayank i want to pursue my career in fashion designing.
Mayank: (happy and smiling) ye tho acchi baath hein nupur
Nupur: Mayank aaj tum mujhe do promises doge
Mayank: Haan nupur

Nupur: 1) Mayank mein bhi parttime job karungi
2) jab tak tum apne dream tak nahin pahunchoge hum sirf dosth rahenge... U know what i mean.

Mayank tried to say something but then kept quiet.

Mayank: Theek hein nupur jaise tum chaaho waisa hi hoga.

After 2 years we can see nupur as fashion designer and Mayank as a successful youngest businessman.




Note: There is nothing wrong in both perspectives.... In first one nupur and mayank found the next level of understanding....Understanding the unsaid words and standingup whenever needed

In second they reached the next level of Life


If u guys can find anyother perspective i would love to know. Do write

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both perspectives are awesome.......

both the persectives writen by you are amazing prerna...................just loved it .............it deeply touched me .................do keep writing more ............

both were very beutifully written ...u r very smart writter i should say...u totally made very different perspectives seem very realistic nice job girl👏

hey awesome perspectives!!!

both the perspectives are awesome..!!!

prerana............they were just awesome................
i cant tell u how much i loved them.........................
they were really fantastic.................................
adhurs..............