Sajan OS on the current track

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Ok here starts, its SAjan Os on the current track

The Gang were sitting in the bb court, all were talking, just then a guy comes there, he was surrounded by reporters, but his eyes was on one girl

Guy: ples ap log thori dair k liye mujhe akela chor den

His guards cover the reporters n the guy goes upto the gang

The gang was just looking at him, nobody knew who he was, the guy looked at gunji, who was busy reading her book, he went upto her

Guy: hi

Gunji looked up

G: ji, ap kon

Guy: bhool gayi

Sam felt a weird feeling

G: meine apko pehchana nahi

Guy: neil......neil obroi..

All the gang was shocked, the famous neil obroi, just came here to meet gunjan

G: oh

N: lagta hai, abhi bhi nahi pehchana

G: kya matlab

N: gunjan, hum morena mein ek sath parthe the, mein nupur ki class mein tha aur tumare se thori bohot hi hello bhi thi, ....................yaad aya

Gunjan remembered that he was her old class fellow, she smiled n stood up

G: oh han yaad agaya.....

Before gunjan could say more, he quickly hugged her,Sam was fuming in anger, he just wanted to pull him away from his chashmish, all were suprised, especially gunjan, he broke the hug

G: ah.....t.tum yahan kaise

N: tumse milne aya hon

Samrat felt like killing him for saying that, he came upto gunjan

S: chashmish chalo yahan se

G: kya howa samraat

S: kuch nahi bas chalo

N: ek mint, mujhe gunjan se koi baat karni hai

S: baad mein kar lena

Gunjan didint know, why sam waas beheving like that

G: samrat, kya howa hai

S: uh .....kuch nahi....bas chalo

G: acha baba, tum chalo, mein ayi, ok

Sam felt more anger

S: theek hai, behto yahan, mein jaraha hon!!

He went from there in anger

G: isse kya howa

N: aur sunao gunjan, kaisi chal rahi hain studies

G: ah theek, meinn chalti hon, bad mein milongi

Gunjan went from there to find sam

Neil to himself:
Yeh pehli larki hai, jo neil obroi se baat nahi karna chahti, isiliye to mujhe itni achi lagti hai, sweet n simple

He smiled at himself n went from there

Gunjan went upto sam

She sat next to him

G: samrat

He didnt reply

G: arre kya howa, itna gussa kyun ho, kisi ne kuch kaha kya

No reply

She moved his face to face her

G: meri taraf dekho

He looked at her

G: kya howa

Sam just hugged her, he felt like hes in a place where peace is allover, all his anger flew away

S: kuch nahi chashmish, bas aisi

G: tumhe aisi gussa aya?

S: han

G: samrat tum bhi na, pata hai mein kitna dar gayi thi, mujhe aisa laga k tum mujse naraz ho

He broke the hug n cupped her face

S: mein apni chashmish se kabhi naraz nahi hosakta

He kissed her forhead

S: i love u chashmish

Gunjan blushed, before she could answer, the gang came there

B: ahem ahem

Both moved away

D: yeh nupur kahan hai, kahin dikhai nahi derahi

M: nupur, princi k office mein hai, acha howa k nahi hai

S: kyun

M: neil obroi ko dekh k, wo to pagal hojati

Sam felt like killing this neil for coming here

S: guys choro na, lets go somewhere

D: kahan?

S: kahin bhi, somewhere fun

U: lets go to the beach

S: yeah, yeh sahi rehega, come on

Gunjan stopped them

G: ek mint

D: what happen doll

G: guys, hum neil ko bhi leker chalten hain

D: yes, i would love his company, hes dam hotttt

Benji looked at dia, in anger

D: what?

B: nothing, chalen

S: nahi, agar neil jaiyga to mein nahi jaonga

G: lekin samrat, wo yahan naya hai, aur mera dost bhi, to hum usse kyun nahi leke ja sakte

S: meine kaha na, to bas keh diya

Gunjan was shocked of his anger

G: lek....

S: chashmsih pless

G: acha theek hai, chalo😡

S: arre, ab tum kyun gussa horahi ho

G: kyunke tumne jo apni shakal pulai hui hai

S: acha baba sorry, bulalao apne neil ko

G: wo mere neil nahi hai

S: watever

Gunjan went from there

Sam to himself: yeh chashmish ko kya hogaya hai, pata nahi yeh neil yahan aya hi kyun, lekin mujhe kyun bura lagraha hai, lekin theek bhi to hai, chashmish meri gf hai aur mujhe poora haq banta hai usse sahi aur galat ka samjhane ko.........

Gunjan saw neil n went upto him

G: hi

N: hey

G: wo hum sab beach pe jarahe the, to meine socha k tum bhi chalo

N: tumhe lagta haai k yeh reporters mujhe jaane denge

G: nahi

N: lekin mein tumara dil nahi torunga, tum log jao, mein thori dair mein pounch jaonga ok

G: ok

Gunjan was about to go, when her duppata got stuck in neils watch n by chance sam also came there to call gunjan, but when he saw her duppata stuck in his watch, he got angry

N: oh im sorry

gunjan came close to neil to take out her duppata, the more close she came, the more angry sam got, she took her duppata out n moved back

G: bye

N: bye

Sam came out to gunjan n caught her hand n took her in a dark classroom n pinned her aginst the wall

G: s...sam..samrat, kya karahe ho

Sam without repling, just started to kiss her on the lips, passionately, gunjan was suprised, she stood there shocked of sams sudden move, after sometime, sam finally broke the kiss n hugged her tight

G: sa....samra...

S:shhhh, ples chashmsi, mujhse ek promise karo

G: kya.....

S: k tum kabhi mujhe chor k nahin jaogi, hamesha mere sath rahogi

Gunjan was suprised to see sam like this

She broke the hug

G: kya howa samrat

S: pehle tum mujhe promise karo

G: i promise, mein hamesha tumare sath rahongi, marte dam tak

Sam again hugged her

S: thanks

He felt like sleeping in a fairy's shoulder, who gives him peace, llove n his world, he just didnt want to let her go, he was feeling so nice in her, he just wanted to stay like this forever, but gunji broke the hug

G: ab batou, kya baat hai

Sam didnt wanted to

S: ah...kuch nahi....bas mujhe ajeeb feel horaha tha, ab chalen, sab hamara wait karahe honge

G: chalo

Gunjan knew there was a problem, she thought of asking him later as they were getting late, all went to the beach, the gang was playing in the water, gunjan was sitting on the sand, sam came there n lyied down n putted his head on her laps

S: chashmish, tum kyun nahi khel rahi

G: aisi,.....samrat.....

S: hmm

G:...ek baat pouchon...

S: poucho na....

G: tumhe koi tension hai kya

Sam knew that she can see his feelings, it wasnt his fault he couldnt hid his feelings

S: ah....na...nahi..to

G: jhoot mat bolo, ab tum mujse chupane lage

Sam sat up

S: chashmish....

G: han bolo samrat

He faced her

S: chashimsh....mujhe...pasand nahi hai...k tum.....

G: han bolo

S: k tum...

Before he could say further, neil came there

N: hey gunjan

Both turned around n saw neil

G: oh hi, aou na

Niel came ther n sat with them, sam didnt like him sitting with them

N: hey guys, having fun

S: abhi tak to fun tha, lekin ab nahi hai ( in a low voice)

N: kuch kaha kya

S: ahm nahi, tumne kuch sunna kya

N: nahi

S: good, aur sunao, yahan kaise aana howa

G: samrat bhool gayi ,humne hi to bulaya

S: oh han( pretending) mein to bhool hi gaya tha

The gang came there

Nupur saw neil, she was so happy

Nu: oh my gid, the famous neil obroi, tum yahan kaise

N: hey nupur, mein yahan apni nai film ki herion dhundne aya hon

Nu: oh wow really

N: han

Nu:waise mein bohot achi acting karleti hon

N: ahm....sorry, lekin meine apni herion dhundli hai

Nu: kon?

N: GUNJAN!!!

All were shocked, especially sam n gunji

S: yeh kya bakwas hai

N: bakwas nahi sach hai, mein chahta hon k gunjan meri film ki herion baane

S: gunjan nahi banegi

All were shocked to see sam like this

N: lekin kyun

S: kyunke meine kaha hai

N: lekin ek dafa gunjan se to pouchlo

S: meine keh diya na, mera faisla aur gunjan ka faisla ek hai, kyun gunjan

Gunjan nodded

S: sunn liye apna jawab, now u can go

N: lekin tum kon hote ho, gunjan ko mana karne wale

S: mein tumhe batana zaroori nahi samjhta

He caught gunjans hand n left from there

Sajan on bike

G: samrat tum aise kyun behave karahe ho

S: chashmish, pless, mujhe wo neil bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai

G: lekin kyun

S: bas, mujhe nahi acha lagta jab wo tumse baat karta hai

G: lekin kyun

S: pata nahi...lekin jab wo tumse baat karta hai to mujhe boht bura lagta hai, mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise wo tumhe mujse cheena raha hai

They reached the house, gunnjan got off

G: samrat, mujhe tumse koi nahi cheen sakta, humhe koi alag nahi karsakta, hum hamesha sath rahenge, ok, aur agar tumhe mera neil se baat karna nahi pasand to mein usse nahi baat karungi ok

Sam smiled

S: thanks chashmish

He hugged her

G: acha ab choro mujhe, mujhe jaan hai, bauji ne dekh liya na to kya sochenge

He broke the hug

S: bauji ko jo sochna hai sochne do,

G: acha baba, ab mein chalti hon aur tum...

S: gari tez mat chalana aur ghar jake time pe dinner karlena, right, yeh to tum roz kehti ho, chashmish kuch naya bolo

G: jaise k.....

S: jaise k..i love u......

Gunjan blushed

S: ab bol bhi do

G: i...i love u

Sam smiled

S: i love u too

G: ab mein jaon

S: mera bas chale to tumhe apne samne hi hamesha rakh lon

G: samrat.....ab jao

S: ok bye

G: bye

Sam went from there

As Weeks passed by gunjan was avoiding neil but neil was always upto talking with gunjan, one day neil came upto gunjan

N: hi gunjan

G: h..hi

The gang also came there, sam felt like killing him for following gunjan everywhere

N:: ah gunjan...mein kuch kehna chahta hon

Gunjan looked at sam, the she looked back at him

G: ah bolo

Neil bent down on his knees infront of gunjan n took out a ring, the whole college gathered around

N: gunjan, morena se leke mumbai tak, mein sirf tumare liye aya hon, jab morena k college mein tum chup chap akeli beht k books parti thi to mujhe bohot achi lagti thi, aur ab bhi lagti ho, jab tum logon se door bhagti thi, tab mein tumare kareeb ana chahta tha, jab tum logon se nazarein churati thi, tab mein tumse nazarein milana chahta tha, jab tum chup rehti thi, tab mein tumse baten karna chahta tha, aur tabse leke ab tak meine sirf aur sirf tumhi se pyar kiya hai, lekin kabhi bol nahi paya shahid k kahin tum NA, na kardo, aur aaj jab himat ayi to meine apni dil ki baat kehdi, KYA TUM MUJHSE SHAADI KAROGI, WILL U MARRY ME!!!

The whole gang was shocked, especially sam, he got tears in his eyes, he just couldnt control his anger, he went upto them n started to beat neil

S: gunjan se shaadi karega ( punch)

N: dekho samrat

S: door reh gunajn se( ounch) uske aas paas bhi dikha na, to mujhs bura koi nahi hoga( punch)....gunjan SIRF MERI HAI, SAMJHA, SIRF MERI( pushed him)

Neil fell on the ground, his guards picked him up n took him away

Sam went upto gunjan, she was scared of what sam just did now, she ran from there

S: chashmish........

The gang came there

B: sam tune ek dam theek kiya, he deserved that

N: no, he didnt deserve that

All were shocked

D: nupur yeh tum kya kehrahi ho

N: mein bilkul theek kehrahi hon

M: matlab

N: matlab yeh k meri behen koi khilona nahi hai, k jo chahe usse cheen le, mein janti hon k wo samrat se pyar karti hai, lekin kya wo samrat ka poori zindagi intezaar karti rahegi, neil usse sacha pyar karta tha isliye ussne gunjan k sath apni life imagine kari, lekin samrat, wo to shaadi k nam se hi door bhagta hai, meri behen ko bhi poora haq hai apni zindagi jeene ka, lekin samrat ko yeh baat samjh nahi aati na, wo to har married life sirf apne parents k baare mein sochta hai

S: to tum kya chahti ho k mein gunjan ko rpropose karun usse shaadi karun, aga chashmish yehi chahti hai to theek hai mein usse shaadi karonga

N: yeh to tum usse paane k liye karahe hon, kya tum nahi chahte k tum aur gunjan ek bhandhan mein jor jayi, kya tum nahi chahte k tumare ghar tumari dhulhan ayi, kya tum nahi chahte k gunjan apni saari zindagi tumare sath rahe, kya tum nahi chahte k tum gunjan ko pehli baar ek dhulhan k kapro mein dekho, samrat agar tum gunjan se pyar karte na to tum ye sab zaroor imagine karte, kyunke apne pyar ko hasil karna to asan hai lekin uske bad kya tum khush rahoge..................................meri baaton pe zaroor ghaor karna, tum khud samjh jaoge k mein kya kehna chahti hon

B: shes right u know

D: yeah sammy, i think tumhe iss bare mein sochna chaiye

They all went from there

Sam sat down on the bench, he got tears in his eyes

S to himself: kya mein itna selfish hon k meine chashmish ki khushi nahi dekhi, meine aajtak chashmish k baare mein aisa kabhi.......................

He closes his eyes n imagines gunjan in a bridal dress, he imagines gunajn with him all his life, he imagines gunjan with him taking care of him, he imagines gunjan, loving him, he opens his eyes

S: kya jo nupur ne kaha tha wo sach hai hai, han sach hai, chashmish be ready, kyunke ab mein tumhe propose karunga, tumhe apna lie partner baonga, tumhe apna baonga

He got up n left

On the otherside gunjan was crying her heart out, nupur n dia came there

N: gunjan please tu mat ro

G: di, wo sab jo hua

D: we understand gunjan, ples dont cry

N: gunjan dekkh, tu ro mat, samrat ne jo kuch bhi kiya wo sirf tere liye kiya, wo tujse pyar karta hai

G: mein janti hon di, lekinaise kisiko marna..............

Nupur hugged gunjan

N: acha ab tu rona band kar, chal ghar chalen

Just then dias phone started to ring

D: one mint guys

Dia started to talk on the phone, we cant hear , she cutted the call

N: chalo

They went home, as they reached home, they sw the boys already there, except sam

N: arre tum log yahan kya karahe ho

B: wo hameh sam ne yahan call kar k bulaya

N: lekin kyun

M: pata nahi, ussne kaha k kuch important baat hai, isliye hum sab yahan agayi

Just then sam came there

S: meine hi sabko yahan bulaya hai

N: lekin kyun

S: abhi bata hon

He went upto gunjan n bent down infront of her

S: chashmish aaj agar nupur mujhe shaadi ka matlab nahisamjhti to mein shahid yahan kabhi nahi hota, agar aaj mujhe yeh ehsaas nahi hota k mein tumse shaadi na kar k kitne haseen pal kho raha hon to shahid mere mein yeh himmat nahi aati, chashimish, kya tum gunjan bhusion se, GUNJAN SHERGILL BANNA CHAHOGI, KYA TUM MUJSE SHAADI KAROGI, WILL U MARRY ME

Gunjan was shocked, but all wre happy, gunjan was suprised of sams sudden change, she looked up n saw her bauji, bauji nodded his head in a yes, gunjan looked at sam n smiled n nodded, sam was so happy, he took a ring out n putted it on her finger

S: i love u chashmish

G: i love u too samrat

Both hugged, bauji came there, they broke the hug

S; bauji, kya ap apni beti ka hath mere hath mein denge

Bauji smiiled

B: beta, mein ankehn bnad kar k bhi gunjan ka hath tumhe dedon, gunjan aajse tumari hui

Sam was soo happy, both touched baujis feet

B: khush raho

Bauji went from there

N: chalo meri baton ka kuch to asar huwa

S: thanks nupur, agar aaj tum mujhe na samjhati to mein......

N: its ok samrat, akhir baat tumare samjh mein to agayi

D: congrats guys

G: thanks

B: wah bhai, ab hamari gunjan bhusion, jald gunjan shergill bane wali hai

Gunjan blushed

M: congratulations guys

S: thanks dude

D: guys, humhe in sweetg couple ko thora privacy deni chaiye

B: yeah ur right, come on guys

All went from there

S: im sorry chashmish, meine tumhe rulaya

G: its ok samrat

Sam kissed her cheek

G: sa...samrat

S: i love u

Gunjan blushed

G:i love u too

Both hugged

End

Finally the two souls became one





Ok guys, hope u all like it, its very long
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEYY SONAL DI
AWESOME SHOT
loved samrat's insecurities
loved it
thx for pm
lu dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow it was amazing
i hope that niel makes sam relize that marrige isnt bad
because his dosnt seem to be wanting to come
so niel can do it
so even samrat can dreem of marrige
loved ur os
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeee OS dear..
mindblowingggggg..
luved it to d core..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww... I'm 4th...

O... My...GOD!!! Sonaaaa!!! It making me go crazyyyyy!! But poor Neil yaar! He didn't deserve to get punched so much! But u have shown his possesive side very well jaan!!! Love it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWESOME OS Sonal,
You portrayed Samrats possesive and insecurities wonderfully
Thanks for the PM, it was a delight to read
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7
wah wah wah sam propose gunji


jst live the part lagta hai real me bhi aisa hi hone wala hai agar aisa hua to tumharew muh me choco cake ok


really its a vry sweet os yaaarrrrrr choco cake se bi jyada....


jst loved it awesum yaaarrrrrr

n also thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwww...... so adorable.. so ojanubale amazing./... sahi main us meil urf CKD( chand ka daag) ki pitai kani chahiya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ckd ki pitai toh honi hi chahiye
nice one
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
it was lovely os.....
very well written.....
i hope wat u have written becomes true in mjht.....
thanks for the pm!!

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