Mayur OS Silence That Spoke Volume

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Hey every1!!!My name is Hina😊....Some of you might know me and some might not......m a Mayur fan and love to read nething on them.I have written an OS on mayur out of inspiration by the people around me.Its the first time in my life that i have written something....and it turned out to be kinda weird😆....m so nervous posting it as writers in this forum are so perfect and are no less than professionals...but now that i have wrote the OS m posting it out here and let it on you to comment wat did u feel about it...seriously m not so sure about it it dint came out the way i thought of but newaxs here it goes....plz bear with it........😆

SILENCE THAT SPOKE VOLUME

Loud music of the pub made me regret my decision of coming here with Suhaani who literally dragged me into this pub despite my headache.I was not a social queen.Interacting with new people was very difficult for me yet once i was friends with someone i showed them my inside out.According to Suhaani i was to the extreme end,either best friends or strangers.For the
past few years my social circle had been limited to Suhaani,Samrat her brother,Gunjan,Adhiraj,Benji and Uday.However,they had unending list of friends and everytime they'l arrange a gathering or a party il find myself in a corner sulking while all of them vil be enjoying,dancing and partying with full spirits with their friends.My gang was now used to
my introvert nature so they never introduce any of their friends to me as they understood it vil be of no use.Tonight was one of all the other evenings where il be sulking yet once again.Little did i know that a new chapter vil start in my life very soon.

As i was sitting with my gang and their friends,whom i recognize only by faces as i was not interested in their names,listening to them,Samrat showed up with one of his another friends.Everyone greeted them and seemed to know his friend also from where i noticed his name Mayank.They started talking to them enquiring about life and work whilst i was still sitting unintroduced to him as per tradition.I got up and came back with a drink.Sippin my drink i noticed that Mayank was staring at me.I looked back at him and for the first time that
evening i actually looked at him properly,he was wearing black shirt with top 2 buttons undone and dark blue jeans and I confess i had not seen such a masculine person before.He
was indeed handsome with passionate eyes.I kept on staring at him...the heat of intensity with which we were gazing at each other cud be felt as i felt my heartbeat going crazy while
the gang around us was busy in their own lives.Suhaani saved me from drowning into his eyes by shouting my name which actually brought me back to world.He seemed to have noticed my name and i started feeling uncomfortable.She was asking me to join her at the dance floor.I refused and got up to leave the pub,she tried stopping me but i was adamant as i was feeling so irritated by the fact that i was behaving so unlike me,Nupur Bhushan,i was seriously eyeing a man out.Before any further quiz by the gang i found myself outside the pub.I
was wondering how to return as i came with Suhaani when a car stopped by me,i looked in and found Mayank there.I started walking ahead without turning and pretending i dint noticed
him.I heard him got out of the car and silently walking besides me.I still dint looked towards him nor did he.Surprisingly i wasnt feeling afraid but my heartbeat was dancing to the tune of silence which was speaking volume.After walking a few distance i heard Suhaani calling my name.We both turned and i left with Suhaani for home.All this while he kept looking at me and bid good-bye to Suhaani.In the car,Suhaani tried teasing me about being with Mayank but all in vain as i was not responding.I dint understand the whole of the situation.Why was he staring at me???Why he intended to drop me home???Why he dint left when i wasnt interested???AND WHY IN THE WORLD AM I THINKING ABOUT HIM,HIM AND ONLY HIM???Why actually i wanted to go vid him...thanks to my mind for stopping me from doing something foolish like that..HELL!!!I only know his name and this person has already taken over my mind and heart....Later Nupur dismissed all her thoughts by convincing herself that she'l get over it in a few days but that never happened.

A MONTH LATER


Rushing out of my apartment i hurried to the elevator as i was getting late.I had to reach the hotel where our company had arranged the conference for modern business techniques.
People from all over India vil be attending the conference.I tried to luk my best wearing a lemon coloured anarkali with half of my hair pinned up.As i reached there i found many
people bustling through the lounge.I hurried to my team when i tripped and was about to fall when someone took me in his arms.I clutched to his collars with both my hands and sighed
when it dawned upon me that i was being saved from the embarassment i was about to go through.I opened my eyes to find Mayank there lukin pasionately at me.He was wearing sky
blue shirt with black suit and lukin dashing enough to make my heart dance to his beats.He straigtened me and we kept on lukin at each other without the traditional hi's and
hello's.Suddenly someone called me and i came back to earth and within a second turned around and ran towards my team.Infact running from the reality,running from facing him and my feelings which were betraying me.FOR GOD'S SAKE HOW CAN I FELL IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE I DONT KNOW!!!During the whole conference i kept lukin at him from the corner of my eyes and surprisingly he was lukin straight into my eyes confidently and tried delivering the message,my mind refused to accept.This was so not happening i certainly cant love a stranger to whom i havent even talked yet!!!

The conference came to an end and lunch was announced.I made my way out of the lounge to have some peace of mind and distarcting my thoughts from Mayank.I felt someone behind and i did not have to turn to look who it was i kept on walking through the corridor.I dint kno where was i going but i certainly dint have the courage to turn and face music.Not that it was difficult for me to push him aside and get him out of here but the fact that i know my feelings werent going to support me and il end up doing something which i dont intend
to do.Suddenly the world around me,my heart,my body came to an abrupt stop as i felt he got hold of my dupatta in his strong grip.I gasped and he pulled me closer to him,taking
hold of my wrist he pulled me inside a room,probably it was his room as the guests were supposed to stay in the same hotel,he looked into my eyes and closed the door shut.That
moment i knew there was no turning back now ,i have to confess wat i feel.I have to confess that i have fallen crazily and madly in love with him at first sight.Before i could speak
nething i felt his lips on mine.I responded to his kiss which was sweet enough to answer the question running thru my mind.He did feel the same about me all of this time.This was
no infatuation or attraction it was pure love and it dint need any words to confess.He lifted me off my feet and kissed me again with an urge,a pledge to be mine forever.Pulling
out of the kiss softly he whispered "I love you so much".That did it i hugged him tight never to leave............


NOTE:Sorry for mistakes as i dint proofread it....

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rose.mn thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Woww Hina.........your OS
great............ its just fabulous, amazing writing
i can't believe its your first yaar.............way to go.............😊
do write more and more yaar..............as you are awesum writer
waiting for your ff now.............😉
Edited by rose.mn - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG Hina
I didn't know you were so good!
I really loved this os!
It was simply awesome!
One of the best I read :)
Keep writing
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very interesting hina,,,
the FF took an unexpected turn but loved it :)
sizzysehrish thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey its just awesum yr
mindblowing
really m love in it
do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it ws awesome.....fabulous....mindblowin OS Hina...uff...no words to describe.......Silence indeed spoke highhhhhhh highhhh volumes here yaar......truly truly beautiful n wonderful.......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.........

plzzz start writin mayur ffs ....u hv vry much potential to do tht....so plzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow dear........
too good..................
loved it .....................
it was awesome.....................
thanks for the pm.........😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow dear..u wrote it amazingly..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Speclacular OS Hina...
Loved it dear!! Do write more and do pm me...
Love
Mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow! that was a rocking start Hina! uff....total Mills & Boon kind! loved it yaar.....do write more & add me 2 ur PM list.....

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