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Posted: 15 years ago
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Alright, I've noticed so many of you out there coming up with wonderful, creative scenes for Karan and Abha's reconciliation. And it's fun to read them.

So, I thought let's write some happy things about our favorite couple. How would you like to see them get back together? Some detail in scenario is a must! 😆

Here is mine:


Prior to Abha's wedding, she and Karan will undoubtedly meet. She'll deny their marriage and love, and Karan is going to have a very hard time accepting it. On A's wedding day, Karan breaks into where Abha is getting ready (I'm sure I've seen this in many Hindi movies) and forces her to once again say she does not love him. She can't say it convincingly, and is in tears--hardly something you'd expect from someone who's happily getting married. Lata's voice can be heard as she is coming to the room to help A. Once Lata is in the room, a crying Abha throws Karan out, he leaves. Lata tries to help A act in a way that ensures her happiness, with someone SHE loves and is loved back by.

Karan walks away despondent, in thought, in memories. As he enters Swaran Bhawan, Veer runs towards him and shows him some papers he did not expect to come across. A huge fight occurs as Karan angrily rushes AT his father, questioning how can you hurt his own son, or someone who loves his son so much. Jagmohan will say you are my son and you will do what I say. Dadi, at the stairs, hears the commotion, comes down slowly. She walks up to Jagmohan's face and says what type of human are you? What type of son? There has been no love and happiness in this house/family for so long since his wife died. When she died, so did all the light and all the goodness and joy. And noone living here now has that in their hearts...only greed and pride...for what? She tells Karan to go after Abha and bring her back to SB, as that is her kismat. To be THE bahu of the house, giving a disappointed look to Shelly.

Karan gets to the wedding place. Pheras are coming up shortly, Abha and Sanskar stand, a knot is about to be tied to tie them together for life. Abha remains in tears, in shock, and numb that this is happening. She remembers her times with Karan, she wonders why God brought them together, only to break their hearts. As the pheras start (the first one), Karan comes to the place, walks in fast and angry. Second phera starts, Abha's out of it. Karan is about to enter the room. You see his feet walking down the aisle, he sees them still walking around. All of a sudden you hear, "Woh shaadi nahi ho sakti." Everyone looks around, Karan passing them as he walks towards the mandap. Abha hears Karan with her heart more than her ears, but is still forelorn. Karan walks up to the mandap, pulls apart the knot, and grabs Abha's arm. She's still crying, as she looks at her father and family. Karan says "Abha meri patni hai." Surprisingly, Thakur does not have chest pains or a heart attack but does get livid, and abuses Karan verbally. Karan looks at Sanskar, Sanskar at him, and they know. Sanskar always had sensed Abha's sadness when she should have been happy.

Karan grabs Abha, is about to drag her down from the mandap. Thakur stops them, says you really are Jagmohan's son, stealing, no honor. Now you want to destroy Abha's life? She is marrying a good man, they will live happily. And then says to Karan, and "with a person like you, Abha would never marry a man like you. You have nothing good and kind to give her. Sanskar will. Sanskar tries to gently make Thakur stop, but it does not work.

Thakur grabs at Abha's hand, trying to get her out of Karan's grip. But she refuses to budge. Everyone sees this. Karan feels it. He knows he was right about their relationship and love. Thakur tells Karan to let her go, but Karan does not. Karan works his hand down Abha's arm and they both holds hands. Thakur says this is impossible, that no daughter would do this. Karan says she did everything for you, explaining the sacrifice she was about to make. Thakur is still pissed. That Abha has chosen Thakur's son. Abha finally says, while she grips K's hand harder, that she is his wife...that she loves him. Thakur is still mad, a horrible scene erupts. Abha begs for her father's and mother's forgiveness, but Thakur says nothing. Karan has tears in his own eyes. He pulls Abha up the aisle to leave, Abha looks back at her family and cries more.

Karan brings Abha to Swarn Bhawan, and that night gives her her mangalsutra, puts sindhoor on her.


Hope you liked my "little" story here. 😆 I'm looking forward to reading yours.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i liked ur story...there was drama and everything...but i don't want it to get that far with sanskar and abha...sanskar seems like a nice guy, so i don't want him to be left at the alter..
this is how i would have it:

abha decides to sign the papers and she is going to hand them into jagmohan...at swarn bhawan gate, abha remembers karan grabbing her hand and getting married...and she remembers their intimate- bedroom scene...she is about to take a step forward towards the house when she hears her name...she turns around and sees karan...he says, abha? and she looks down and starts to walk towards the house...karan grabs her arm and abha looks at him...he lets go and starts to apologize and promises her that he will get her rights as choti bahu...abha says that she can't accept this marriage and she can't betray her family...karan continues to try to convince her...and reaches out to her hand again, when she pulls it back...as she does so, the papers fall out and karan picks them up and reads them...he looks at abha...and he pulls out the mangalsutra from his pocket...and tells her that he was feeling bad about how close they got and he was going a way...but he realized that he has to get her her rights, and he is glad that he came back before she made this mistake...he says abha, u love me and i you...so y would u sign these papers?...abha begins tries to stay tough...but karan holds her face...and she confesses wut happened with jagmohan and thakur...and the car set on fire, and the mental hospital...and jagmohan calling her, returning her payal...and then karan says abha, do u love me?...do u accept me as ur husband?...and they stare at one another for a long time, and abha finally says yes...then karan puts the mangalsutra around her neck...and grabs her hand and takes her inside the house...jagmohan is in his office...and sees the two of them...and sees the mangalsutra around abhas neck...and starts badmouthing her...about how she is coming between him and his son...and how he'll never accept her as his bahu...and then karan speaks up and says she is not coming between us, ur hatred for thakur is separating me from u...and if u can't accept abha, then I'm taking her with me and leaving...jagmohan starts to tell him how he can't handle the real world, etc...but karan just tells him that he will face everything as long as abha is with him...
saniya is shown in the corner listening to everything, and watches karan and abha leave together, hand in hand...
karan and abha are now walking and thinking where they can go, and wut to do now...and karan tells her that right now, they have to save her dad...they both go to the hospital...karan somehow manages to stop the treatment and get thakur released...abha is so happy and she calls her mom...all are going to come to the hospital now to bring him home...abha then happily goes in to see her father (karan stays outside the room) and abha is talking to her father and giving him the good news...and he sees the mangalsutar and is about to ask her about it when the whole family comes in...and they express their happiness, but he can't stop looking at abha...and then asks in front of everyones presence about the mangalsutar...thats when karan comes in and walks towards thakur to take his blessings and he starts yelling about how he is jagmohans son, etc...but then abha speaks up and says that karan is sweet and kind and he has always helped them and even today, because of karan he was released...and that he is her husband...everyone is shocked...thakur starts yelling about everything, and abha cries...karan speaks up, but thakur shuns him and then asks for both to immediately get out of his face and for abha never to show her face again...abha looks around the room, but everyone is still in shock...karan takes her hand and both leave...
they go to that house that abha was going to rent...and begin to live there...and both conclude that they will erase their families hatred together with love...even though their families are upset right now, they will eventually win them over...

i'm no serial writer...but thats how i would have it...karan and abha working together to end their families hatred...i rather them both on one side, then both being forcefully separated...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Why all of you create stories. Just wait for this week. Everything will become alright. But today Abha will sign the papers but still she loves Karan lot. At this moment, Thakur's life is important. By friday thakur's will comes to know about K & A marriage secret. Just wait. Karan will change this track.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww....that was lovely Uzma and gp00...sorry i dont know ur name....couldnt think of anything else
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Marthaa,

Call it a creative exercise or outlet. It's just for fun -- we all genuinely enjoy the show and the jodi. It's actually quite common for forum members (of all shows) to create fan fiction.

You're right in that we all will have to take the ride first.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The creatives' work today was soooo much better than my story. I'm so happy to see how they've moved things along so beautifully.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow nice thinking dear....welll even i was thinking the same but a little different...hope fully something really happens like this then it would be really nice to see Abha confessing her love for Karan to the whole world......

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