Kaisa ye Pyar hai - part 16 page 60 16/05/2010 - Page 22

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Part 10

Here is the next update and this is specially for Faria (I hope i meet ur expectations)

As the party was over and gunjan was no mood to go home so her mother asked samrat to drop her and she ll catch the taxi ,samrat told he will drop her but SS said – koi bat nahi hai beta main chali jaungi

S to G : to madam aapko kaha jana hai abhi?

G : main bahut khush hu sam , mujhe juhu beach par jane ka man kar raha hai ,samundar ki lahro ke sath khelane ka man kar raha hai

S: Tum itni ajib si kyon ho?

G : kya kaha tumane ?

S : kuch nahi chalte hai na chalo meri itni majal ki main tumhe kuch kahu nahi gunjan ho hi nahi sakta aisa

They left together

MAYUR Scene :

Samrat has purchased sherwani for mayu but he did not wear and came in jeans and white shirt and as usual he was looking hot and girls were drooling on him

On the other side nupue was feeling shy ,she wore first time sleeveless and that to with his choice but she can't control herself she was not seeing mayank at all.She was looking very pretty and she was hiding her shoulder so that it should not be known that it is sleeveless

It was complete day that they did not speak (after that letter)

They both sat in the car

Silence in the car

But mayank broke it

M : tum aaj bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho?

N (Turned like the anar ka dana) : blushing and said ,thank you

M : nupur ek bat kahu agar tum thoda sa sharmana kam kar dogi to

N : to??

M : achha rahega na , jab tum sharmati ho to itni sweet lagti ho ki man karta hai ki tumhe dekhata hi rahu

N : To usme kuch kharabi hai kya (she was looking down)

M : nahi par car chalana possible nahi hai (Smile on his face )

N : aap bhi na mayank ?

M : aur ek bat please ye aap mat bola karo ,tum mujhe tum bhi bula sakti ho na vaise bhi main itna buda nahi hu nupur

N : par

M : koi par nahi tum mujhe aaj se tum blaogi,thik hai na,mujhe ek dost bhi chahiye sirf Biwi nahi aur tum jab bhi mujhe aap kahti ho to mujhe lagta hai ki main sirf tumhara hone wala pati hu.

N : thik hai mayank aap mera matlab hai abhi thoda time lagega na aapko tum kahne me

M : mayank was laughing on her innocence ,thik hai baba par aaj practise kar lo achha rahega

N : thik hai and she also smiled

They started

M(nupur ne abhi tak letter ke bare me bat nahi kari ,use bura to nahi laga hoga.nahi lag nahi raha hai par agar kuch kahti to shayad thik hota)

N (Mayank se kya kahu us letter ke bare me ,mere pas to shabd hi nahi hai ,kya soch rahe honge ki abhi tak kuch kaha hi nahi.par kaise kahu ki us letter ne mujhe unke aur karib la diya hai)

Suddenly it started raining and mayank saw nupur playing with the rain drops

He stopped the car and came out (he knew nupur loves rain)

Nupur bhi mayank ke sath bahar aa gayi and she was happy to get wet in rain

She came and sat next to mayank leaning her head on his shoulder

Where they stopped that was very good place it was a hill and they were feeling the fresh breeze

And more than that the closeness of each other. In the car romantic song started (guys it is ur dept to think which song you want to hear)

Mayank turned and looked to nupur and asked for dance

N placed her hand into his ,he pulled nupur close to him and now his hand was wrapped around her waist ,nupur was blushing badly as she could feel ,uske sharer me ek lahar si daud gayi aur wo uske sath shiver karne lagi.

Mayank was enjoying this moment he loved to nupur spl when she blushes

Slowly they started ,they were looking in each other's eye and feeling contentment.

Nupur's dupatta was disturbing as the wind was blowing and it was taking it away ,so mayank took it with her permission and placed it in the car

Nupur was blushing badly as her bare shoulder was seen and she was not able to gaze him

When he turned and looked at her ,he was amazed by the beauty which was in front

It was dark night and he could see her milky white skin which gave a spark to him but he does not want to discomfort nupur.

He went to her and kept his hand on her shoulder.

First the rain drops were making her crazy and when mayank touched her bare should she was going weak and more weak.

They were just dancing on the slow music ,mayank pulled her close and now her head was resting on his chest and his hands were covering her

Suddenly there was a wind storm and nupur hugged him very tightly

In response mayank too hugged her with his full strength

They broke apart but nupur's chain stucked into mayank's shirt they went inside the car.

They were very close ,it was very chilled so he closed the window glass.

Nupur koshish kar rahi thi ki chain nikal jaye par chain ko bhi chain kaha thaw o to atki hi isliye thi

At last M : nupur mujhe laga raha hai ki mujhe shirt nikalani padegi

N :hmmm [she didn't think as she was trying for the chain to come out]

M started unbutton the shirt

Nupur ne use roka aur kaha ki main kar deti hu.

Now actually she was feeling too shy while unbutton the shirt and she could feel his gaze on her

He was staring her and looking her hairs which were stuck on her face.her feminine curves were c;ear;y visible to him.He was mesmerised by her beauty

He was lost in her beauty but came in the sense as she called his name.

When she did it he removed his shirt and he was looking hot in his white west (Nupur has not seen him like this before,she was staring him,actually she was lost in his well built physique)

By then mayank ne chain nikali thi and he said nupur ,no response she was staring him without even blinking.

He shaked her : kya hua?

N Blushing : kuch nahi ,tum?

M : tum ,kya bat hai nupur tum to badi jaldi bate man leti ho.

M : kya kah rahi thi

N : Kuch nahi.

M : kuch bhi nahi?

N : nahi

Coming closer M : kuch bhi nahi

N : nahi

Very close

M : ab bhi nahi

N : stammering nann nahi.......

M leaned half body on nupur's and they were very close.

M was looking nupur very closely her face was shining in the dark ,rain drops on her face and on her body was enhancing her beauty. He went close to nupur and holder her by shoulder ,and she closed her eyes.

She knew what will be next and she gave a acceptance by closing her eyes.

Mayank was sucking all the raindrop on her body and she was feeling his heat overall her body

He went all over on her face, he kissed her palm then he was kissing on her hand not then to her bare shoulder and her neck line, then he moved towards her neck.she was loosing her self and felt happy that she is in safe hands,her face had a satisfactory smile.

On the other side mayank was loosing himself and wanted to loose ,no control.

He accepted that he loved nupur from her inner beauty but today that outer beauty was attracting him more. He was attracted with the force of love and affection which he was receiving from nupur.

He was close to her her face even mm distance was not there ,he whispered into her ear – I love you nupur

N : I love you too mayank

Nupur opened her eyes and could feel his breath as he was very close to her, mayank kissed her forehead ,then her eyes and then cheeks. She was holding mayank from his west and her grip was mpre tight with the closeness of mayank.

Mayank moved towards her lips and he could feel nupur's heart beat.it was faster than ever and same was happening with him also.

She was getting more close and mayank could feel her grip on his back.

He cupped her face and running one hand on her waist,it m gave her the tingling sensation and she felt hot breath making crazy to her also , he just rubbed her lips very softly and when she responded he made it passionate ,they were lost totally and nupur bites mayank's lips but no one is aware with the pain.they are feeling there self in each other.mayank broke it and saw nupur her face was still has the same smile.

He didn't know what was forcing him to cross the limit today but he knew that he loves her more than himself.

He was moving towards her shoulder and made her sleeve to slip the shoulder ,sudden there was a lightening and mayank came in the sense that what he was suppose to do now ,that sound took nupur also back in her sense and she just hugged mayank.

Mayank holded her in his arm and was at guilt thinking what would have happen ?

They broke off after some time and mayank covered nupur with her chunni.

He was in guilt and nupur can feel it he was not looking at her

She broke the silence ,she asked mayank

N : kya hua mayank?

M : nupur sorry main aaj khud ko rok nahi paya aur shayad apmi limit hi bhul gaya tha

She hugged mayank (she would not be able to say anything if she looks at mayank)

N : sorry kyon mayank? Tum guilt me isliye aa gaye kyonki tumhe lag raha hai ki tum galat ho.par sach ye hai ki aisa nahi hai.tum kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakte mayank.main janti hu tumane khud ko kitna control kiya hoga mujhase dur rakhane me.par mayank main tum hi to kahte ho ki main tumhari hu to phir mere sath aisa karne ka haq hai na tumhe.aur sach ye hai ki akele tum galat ho hi nahi sakte ho maine bhi to khud ko control nahi kiya.mere liye tumhari khushi se badkar aur kuch nahi hai mayank.tumhara pas aana mujhe achha lagta hai,tum mujh par haq dikhate ho to aur bhi achha lagta hai.aaj hum dono hi nahi chahte the ki khud ko roke.

She pause for a min and then.......

maine aaj subah jab wo letter pada tab tak main khud nahi janti thi ki tum meri kitni respect karte ho aur pyar bhi.main shabdo me bayan nahi kar sakti hu apni feelings ko.par shayad hamari ye najdiki tumhe mahsus kara sakti thi ki main bhi tumase utna hi pyar karti hu.tumane hamesha se mera sath diya hai.aur main bhi wahi karna chahti hu.tum pahle insan ho jisane mere andar ki us nupur ko dekha jise shayad main kab se bhul gayi thi,mom dad ke jane ke bad main sapne dekhana bhul gayi thi.mera ek hi sapna ki meri shadi aise ladke se ho jo bhale hi rich na ho par uska dil bada ho.jo mujhase sirf meri sundarata ke liye nahi meri inner beuty ki wajah se pyar kare.use rishto ki parvah ho aur sabse badi bat wo honest ho.aur main khush hu ki meri sagai tut gayi warna meri jindagi tumhare bina adhuri rah jati thi.

Mayank was listening it very carefully and his eyes were moist .nupur broke the hug and saw his eyes.she kissed his forehead and said – thanks for being with me main tumhare bina jine ki soch bhi nahi sakti.

Sweet smile crept on there face and then nupur saw blood on his lips ,she felt shocked and second moment she was blushing.

She went close to him and suck the blood on his lips and kissed (she was feeling relived and was in comfort with mayank) and soon buried her head in his chest.

Mayank was shocked and happy thinking her comfort level with her.

M : ab chale ,ghar jana hai na

N : haan to maine kab mana kiya hai

M: they started but fuel was not there luckily there was a petrol pump

M : in his west only went out ,there were few girls they were trying to flirt with him and nupur can see it from window.

She came out and one girl was about to put her hand on his shoulder nupur came in middle.

N : hello miss main hu yaha

G : okey babe itna tension kyon le rahi hu ,waise tumhara hubby kafi sexy and hot hai

N was in anger ,she say something before that only mayank took her and they sat in the car

N : tumhe shirt pahane me taklif ho rahi thi kya?

M : par maine kya kiya?

N : kisane kaha tha aise jane,wo ladkiya tumpar to aise latak rahi thi jaise ki

M :jaise ki (teasing mode)

N : kuch nahi aur haan agli bar se aise bahar gaye to mujhase bura koi nahi hoga.

M was loving this nupur who is very possessive and protective

M : thik hai baba nahi januga ab to gussa mat ho.

N : she gave a cute smile and they went to home


In parallel SAJAN

Both are sitting on the beach on the sand

G: Aaj ka din kitna achha hai na samrat (she is looking at the waves)

S (looking at her) : haan gunjan

S : vaise tumhare sadu bhai ko dekhkar lagta to nahi hai ki itna romantic hoga

Gunjan gave him ?I will kill you look

S :aise kyon dekh rahi ho mera matlab tha ki wo itne romantic dikhate nahi hai na (Hey bhagwan bachale)

G : mera bhai sadu nahi hai aur haan agar agli bar phir se bhai ko kuch kaha to soch lena ,she was furming in anger.

S : Sorry gunjan ,aisa kabhi nahi hoga tumhara bhai duniya me sabse eklauta antique piece hai

G : smiled and said haan wo to sach hai ,I love bhai

S (Kya yaha hum gunjan ke bhai ki bat karne aaye hai ) he changed the topic

S : hello bhai ki bahna aga mayank ki aur meri family ki bat karni hai to hum tumhare ya mere ghar par bhi kar sakte hai yaha aane ki kya jarurat thi?

G : are main to tumhe thanku kahana chah rahi thi aaj tumhari wajah se hi to party ho pai hai sam.

And she was going on talking the random topics and samrat was looking at her innocent talk ,her childish act and her sweet voice.

G : kuch bologe bhi ya nahi?

S : kuch nahi main kya kahu mujhe sunana achha lagta hai?

G : par diya to kah rahi thi ki tumhe sunana pasand nahi hai

S (Ye diya bhi na ) a: are tumhari bate sunana achha lagta hai, ab koi bhi bakwas thode hi sun sakta hu main

G : SO sweet of you samrat and she pulled his cheek

G went into see and started playing with water

It was raining and she was enjoying it to fullest.sam was looking her very much adorable.

She was like a innocent kid and beauty from heaven.he loved her to see like this (thinking ye main kay soch raha hu main ,uski koi bhi bat ko mana nahi kar pata hu main par kyon)

After some time she pulled samrat also and then enjoyed it ,she felt tired so left for the home

Not much about adhini

ADHANI

Adhiraj proposed suhani as he was not knowing her so close till today

(I know they are engaged but he still wanted to tell her)

He sat on his knees and took one rose and said to suhani , main tumase bahu pyar karta hu kyat um bhi?

Suhani was blushing and she just whispered in his ear (Haan raj)

Adhiraj also loved it and she hugged him

After thet talk they both also left to home

Adhiraj dropped suhani.

Sorry guys aaj ki update itni hi hai

I hope ki koi naraj nahi hoga

Benia track shuru hone me thoda waqt hai ,

SAJAN will start soon but abhi ke liye itna hai

Sorry for typo 😛😛😛😛😛😛

So now time for comments ya compliments.

All izz Well buddy 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Hey Aruna.....
The update was really nice....
Oye Hoyye... MayUr inthe rain... The dance.. Then Nups unbuttoning his shirt... Then they loose control and.... ahem ahem...
*bows*
The way Nupur gets posessive when another girl hits on Mayank! hahaha.... Really cute... and Mayank telling Nups to call him TUM!!!!
SaJan and Adhaani scenes were also cute!
I'm still lost in MayUr Land!
Continue soon...
Eagerly waiting for the next part....
Hope the promo does not ruin MayUr Love Story!
Jaldi update karna please.....
I'm waiting!
Love
Mina
Edited by mina_18secret - 15 years ago
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mindblastting update
loved mayur to the core
sajan were sweet
adhian were hmm adorable
awesoe really awesome update
keep it up
plz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
lots of love
sana

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