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Posted: 15 years ago
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As we all know we might not get to see Simib's first night i thought to pen it out.
i am not a wirter and i know whatever i have written isnt the best.
Still enjoy the imaginary First Night of simi and Abhi 😆😆😆
Simbi's First Night

Rajiv Balla calls Abhi regarding his conditions to return 12/24 KB back. Abhi was fuming with anger. His eyes became red, his body shivering with temper and tears were flwoing from his eyes.

How could RB think of such pathetic thing. Simi is my wife and I will go to any extent to save her dignity and honour. RB has to pay for his deeds.

Abi brust outs with anger and punches his hand on the glass window. His hand was bleeding but he wasn't feeling the pain. The pain he was suffering because of RB was more than his wound.

So many days have passed away since their marriage and he was still not able to consummate their marriage. He loves Simi but is unable to show her what she means for him.

Simi enters the room and is shocked to see abhi's hand bleeding.

Simi: abhi What happened? How did u get hurt? And why are you crying?

Tears were flowing from his eyes. The anger, the helplessness and the sudden feeling of losing his Simi were driving him insane.

Simi then goes and brings first aid box to tie bandage on his hands.

While she was tying the bandage Abhi just keeps looking at her.

Simi: now tell me what happened?

Abhi Wo RB ka call aya tha and he said…

Suddenly Simi puts her hand on his mouth.

Abhi u don't need to say anything. We will teach him a lesson for his disgusting conditions.😡

Abhi hugs Simi tightly as if he would lose her. Simi tries to console him and ensures him that they will be always together.

Simi takes his face in her hands and kisses on his both wet eyes. Abhi gives her gentle kisses on her face till he reaches his lips.

Both see into each others eyes passionately. Abhi then kisses on her lips and after sometime the soft wet kiss converts into a long passionate kiss. Simi puts her hands on his hairs and was just enjyoing the every bit their being together. Her hands curled against his chest. Abhi starts to put soft wet kisses downwards, all over her body. Finally they both ended up making a gentle love and Abhi made smi his forver………

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: steffroc

As we all know we might not get to see Simib's first night i thought to pen it out.
i am not a wirter and i know whatever i have written isnt the best.
Still enjoy the imaginary First Night of simi and Abhi 😆😆😆
Simbi's First Night

Rajiv Balla calls Abhi regarding his conditions to return 12/24 KB back. Abhi was fuming with anger. His eyes became red, his body shivering with temper and tears were flwoing from his eyes.

How could RB think of such pathetic thing. Simi is my wife and I will go to any extent to save her dignity and honour. RB has to pay for his deeds.

Abi brust outs with anger and punches his hand on the glass window. His hand was bleeding but he wasn't feeling the pain. The pain he was suffering because of RB was more than his wound.

So many days have passed away since their marriage and he was still not able to consummate their marriage. He loves Simi but is unable to show her what she means for him.

Simi enters the room and is shocked to see abhi's hand bleeding.

Simi: abhi What happened? How did u get hurt? And why are you crying?

Tears were flowing from his eyes. The anger, the helplessness and the sudden feeling of losing his Simi were driving him insane.

Simi then goes and brings first aid box to tie bandage on his hands.

While she was tying the bandage Abhi just keeps looking at her.

Simi: now tell me what happened?

Abhi Wo RB ka call aya tha and he said'

Suddenly Simi puts her hand on his mouth.

Abhi u don't need to say anything. We will teach him a lesson for his disgusting conditions.😡

Abhi hugs Simi tightly as if he would lose her. Simi tries to console him and ensures him that they will be always together.

Simi takes his face in her hands and kisses on his both wet eyes. Abhi gives her gentle kisses on her face till he reaches his lips.

Both see into each others eyes passionately. Abhi then kisses on her lips and after sometime the soft wet kiss converts into a long passionate kiss. Simi puts her hands on his hairs and was just enjyoing the every bit their being together. Her hands curled against his chest. Abhi starts to put soft wet kisses downwards, all over her body. Finally they both ended up making a gentle love and Abhi made smi his forver'''

I don't know what you are talking about!!! You not being a writer. If you can come up with such a good scene for SimBhi and not be a writer than who are those writing for the show? I think you could teach them a thing or two. The scene you described was very romantic..I don't want Abhi to cry but at least we get to see SimBhi joined together forever........ I like you scenerio and hope we all get to see it soon.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i meant i am very bad in writing anything about CV. i myself dont know for what do they get paid.
🤣 we can open a school for KB writers🤣
i cant wait to see their real FN.
lets get our fingers crossed
Edited by steffroc - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kya yaar keeping your fingers crossed you will end up with arthritist 😆but the CV's won't show what we want to see😡
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣then no need to keep fingers crossed
i mean i like my hand with proper fingers😆
About CV's i really had bad experience with Zeetv and CV's of a show
they suck big time😡
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Steffroc.. Its really beautiful what u wrote.. Sach mein u are a great writer.. Who says u cannot write.. Sach mein kassh CVs kuch dekha deen pls.. Atleast inko tu SR ab mana hi leni chaiyee,,,,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey steffroc,
very beautifully written..u r very imaginative..a perfect SR for perfect couple..'sikho kuch sikho CVs' !!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@KBfanNo1 thankf for appreciating i will also happy if they just show a tiny miny kiss @ -NEETU- thanks for liking
really siko kuch humse CV's 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really this is great storyline! you really are a good writer. CV's really need to look into this story line... Tum ne to dil khus kar diya. kaash aisa hi kuch ho jaye.
Edited by KRIVISHU123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ KRIVISHU123 glad u are khush now CR need to open their eyes ia m sure lurkers are seeing all these posts

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