Mayur n shilpa aunty os 2nd&last prt..plzz do read

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Haey frndz....
This is ma first oneshot...this os z on Mayur n Shilpa aunty....
It has been very long that we didnt got 2 see shilpa aunty in d show..so 1 idea stuck to my mind abt her comebck..so thoght 2 share wid u guys..

Mayur n shilpa aunty os.
It is 8a.m in d morning..nupur is preparing breakfast for her n mayank just then mayank came n hug her from behind.
N:mayank chorona parathe jal jaenge.
M:jalne do.,dusre bana dena..mayank was about to kiss nupur just then they heard d call bell..mayank bcame furious by hearing d bell..nupur giggled by seeing dis.
N:mayank jake dekho kaun aaya hai.?tab tak mein nashta laga leti hun.
Mayank went outside to open d door.mayank opend d door in much anger..but when he saw d person who was standing at d door his anger vanishes in seconds.
S:mayank aise kyun dekh raha hai.
M:maa aap yahaan.?
S:kyun tujhe bura laga ke mein itni subah subah aake tum logon ko disturb kiya.?hmm?
M:maa aap bhi na..
Just then nupur came outside to see what mayank z doing outside 4 so long.when she came outside she was hell shocked & was very happy 2 see who was standing wid mayank
N:maa aap..!nupur came forward &hug shilpa aunty.
N:maa aap yahan achanak kaise.?
S:kyun mein apne bete aur bahu se milne k liye nai aasakti kya.?
N:nai maa aisi baat nai mera matlab hai aap aane se pehle phone pe batadete..
S:actually mein tum dono ko surprise dena chahti thi.agar mein tum dono ko bata deti to mujhe utna mazaa nai aata jo ab tum dono ke expression dekhke araha hai.
Mayank who was standing siliently while listening to both convo said..
M:aap dono yahaan khade rehkar hi baatein karenge kya andar bhi aayenge..?
S:haan kyun nai..
N:acha maa aap fresh hokar aaye tab tak mein nashta laga leti hun,.by saying this three of them went inside.

Wel guys i know dis os not dat good.i was just trying to write it...plzz feel free 2 comments n critize..

Kulsum.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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its nice dear continue soon ................
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cont soon.....cant wait for sum grreat family scenes
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hey nice!!!
pls cont n pm me wen u upd8!!
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wah ji wah
kya baat hai
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hey its nice... i hpe ki aisi hi ho shilpa aunty ki ntry... n ha plz make it a ff n continue sun...😊
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Originally posted by: get_jasneet

hey its nice... i hpe ki aisi hi ho shilpa aunty ki ntry... n ha plz make it a ff n continue sun...😊

thanx dear...ya i also hope k aisa hi ho.. 😛
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nice os dear do pm me when u write more
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Originally posted by: ashmayur

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome dear...pls update soon</font>

thanx dear 😊
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Originally posted by: mayurian-artian

nice os dear do pm me when u write more

thanx dear 😊

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