STORY -Case of hidden diamonds - By VISROM

cadbury123 welcome to the forum. Myself Sunny. As far as story is concerned nice effort first up. There was mystery in story but more mystery was in the house rather that one room. Hats of to that architect who made.
Very well and precisely written keep up good work waiting for your next story

hii welcome here! nice story!! very unusual... and u seem to be a vivek fan, ain? 😃 keep it up....

WOW very interesting. I would really love to see this one on screen. What a wonderful episode it would be if they get the setting right. I could actually see that house, room by room, the passage, the staircase. Very well written, easy to read. Good to see Vivek getting an opportunity to shine. Great going, looking forward to more stuff from you.

Originally posted by: cadbury123

Fredricks : Daya sir, Abhijeet sir humesha mujhe daante hai...lekin unhone Vivek ko kuch nahin kaha...

Daya : Freddie, Vivek saal mein ek baar late aata hai...tum hafte mein chaar din late aate ho aur baaki ek din bohot late aate ho.

This has to be the dialog of the day. Awesome dialog, I can see Daya Sir say that for Freddie

Hi friends,

So what's your original/old username? Now I wonder what was the story you deleted, I think we missed out on something interesting.

I can understand what you are saying about the emotional drama. Actually CID is an episodic series, once case is over nothing is taken forward from it. It's the bonding within the team that binds all these 12 years. Hence we enjoy those emotional moments. Once the case is over these are moments that stay with us.

I am glad your story had no injuries. Imagining Abhi Sir on the Hospital bed so often was painful. Also I am glad you gave Vivek something to do. You thought of the house really well and described it so well that we could see it. Great work, keep it going.

Now only if someone could weave a really good story around Freddie keeping his character intact without indulging in buffoonery n stupid humor and something around Tasha as well. That will be wonderful.

Wonderful story!! I loved it!!👏

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WONDERFUL STORY

@ cadbury123
since you are old member here. Everyone really liked your story now you can disclose your name because I want you to write more of these kind and under which name you will continue your stories.

There are least chances that you from your other account have commented on your story. So person before this post commented cannot be there after this I don't know