!!Bandini bani Sherni!! FINAL PARTS pg 69 & 72 - Page 55

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: priyankapatwa

u r joking......right.......

Am not.. I am ready with the last 3 parts and you can expect the the final part any time😊
Edited by ammoos - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

gr8 job uma keep it up...

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Epi # 29 PAWAGAD!!

PART 1

DM comes down in search of Santu, Baa was sitting there and she asks him to sit there. She tells him she never could imagine this much would happen here. Poor Santu, she suffered the most. whatever happened there in a span of few hours will be forgot easily but it will take more time for Santu to forgot whatever she went through. She says Dharamraj, why don't you both go somewhere for a few days. DM says he is thinking of taking her to Pawagad, she wanted to do the darshan at the temple there, she will be happy and will get some mann ki shaanthi. Baa says yes that's a nice idea and this wa you can have your lost honeymoon. DM asks her if she gone insane, Ab iss umar mein main honeymoon pe jaoonga. What are you saying". She replies whats wrong in that. DM says bacchein sunege tho kya sochenge. Baa says why would they think anthinh wrong there. Ati patni gong somewhere to spend some time alone whats wrong there. DM still frustrated. Baa calls for Santu and ask her to pack things to go. Santu asks her where she is going. Baa replies DM is taking her to Pawagad. Santu gets the hint, she looks at DM angry and makes excuses that how can she go leaving Toral behind. Baa tells her Toral is not alone and they all are there and Bansuri is there to take care of her and ask Santu to think for herself.

PART 2

Hiten comes down with some files and ask who is going where. Toral and Bansuri enter the house after her walk and Toral is tired. Santu helps her sit. Bansuri tells Hiten that Toral's medicines are over. Hiten says he wil get it in the evening. DM ask him what is that file. Hiten replies he need to discuss something with him and asks him if he can come to factory now, DM says ok. He and DM says bye and and they both leave. Santu tells she will get Toral's juice. Toral asks what talk was going on about someone going. Baa replies, Sanraj are going to Pawagad tomorrow. Toral seems happy and asks really. She says Santu need some break after all what she has done. Santu comes there with the juice. Toral teases her for going for the honeymoon. Santu shoos it away and she see Toral's legs swollen and says she will get hot water bag and leaves. Baa watch her going and tells Toral that she can feel her pain. Santu is trying hard to cover her sadnees with a smiling mask. Baa feels bad for her and pryas to god that Santu ki godh jaldi se bhar jaaye.

PART 3

Its night and Hiten and DM comes home for the time of dinner. They finish the dinner and have a little talk in the hall and later everyone retreat to their rooms. DM enter their room and he gets a call and go out to talk. Santu makes the bed and goes to put on the Subhi song. She takes the CD and remembers her old time with DM. DM comes back and see Santu standing like a statue there. He closes the door and calls her hey chokri. What is she doing??? She is still upset and doesn't reply. DM asks her if she still is angry and he apologises and says he didn't mean it. He tells her not to waste time and do the packing fast. He got the tickets and they need to leave early next morning. She just stares at him and go to the cupboard and takes a towel and turns to him to say she will not do the packing.

PART 4

DM is surprised. He gets angry and asks her what she means will not do the packing. She says she will not do it. It was his plan to go, so he has to do with the packing. He says she has married him and she has some responsibilities. She says excuse me, its not just she married him but he too did the same and he too has some responsibilities. He has no answer. He comes near her and says he didn't mean to say that but it just happened. She says whatever, but she will not do the packing and go and takes a towel and go to washroom. After a while she comes out and see that he has not moved from where he was sitting. She goes and takes a suitcase from the cupborad and place it on the bed and asks him to do the packing. She has done her part of duty and asks him to do his. He still doesn't move. She go to do her hair. DM is fuming and goes to the cupboard and takes out a few kurtas and some sarees opens the suitcase while looking angry at Santu. He looks down and shocked to see the suitcase well packed with their clothes. He looks angry at Santu who is smiling. DM is more angry and thrown the kurts and sarees with him on the bed and storms out of the room.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Epi # 30 Hamari Beti

PART 1

DM walks out of and go to the balcony and stand there still angry. Santu comes after him and see him. She goes near to him and keeps looking at him. DM turns his head towards there and stares at her. There is a small eyelock, DM angry and Santu victorious, suddenly they burst into laughing. DM holds his one hand out and Santu goes to him and hug. They both go and sit on the swing. Santu puts her hands around his left arm and rest her head on his shoulder. She asks him if she can ask for something. He tells her she need not ASK for something but can just TELL him what she wants. She tells him, he is still the maalik of Dharampur and he might have stepped down but his responsibilities are not over. He looks at her. She looks up at him and says he need to make sure that no child is left uneducated and hungry in Dharampur. He nods yes. She says she has another request. DM asks what. She says she need his support to help the daughters of Dharampur and to fulfil their dreams. DM says ok, and asks why only daughters. She takes her head off from his shoulder and looks into his eyes and tells him, "If our daughter was alive you would have done the same for her also." DM stares at her with no expression. He asks, beti thi? Santu slowly nods yes. He pulls her to him with one hand and holds her tight and says, " Don't worry, our daughter was snatched from you, she wouldn't have wanted to go. Trust me now you will see, our daughter will be back with us very soon." He put his both hands around her.

PART 2

Days are passing. Santu is taking care of Toral and Birwa also came back from hospital. Suraj entertain everyone with his occasional shararats. He never misses an opportunity to tease Birwa and to annoy Toral. Hiten is managing the business well with the best guidance of DM. All are happy, except DM because he don't get sweet chai. Birwa tells DM that she wishes to complete her studies. DM feels happy that she is back to herself and he admits her to the best college in Gujrat. Santu is doing all her duties but DM realises her worry. Later Toral gives birth to a baby boy and he is named Aditya Mahiyavanshi. One day Baa notices that Santu looks so weak and tired. Baa asks her to take some rest, but Santu says she is alright. A few days later Santu comes to Baa in her room. Santu sits besides her but doesn't say anything. Baa asks her whats the matter. Santu is confused what to say, but smiling. She looks at Baa and is shy and smiling. Baa makes out the matter and ask her Sach?? Santu says she thinks so. Baa asks if she informed Dharamraj. Santu says no its not yet confirmed. Baa gets up and says come on lets go to the doctor and confirm it. Santu asks NOW!!. Baa says now and holds Santu hands and walks out of the room. She see Suraj playing guitar, she asks him to come with them. He asks where? Baa tells him to come she will tell.

PART 3

Later in the night Baa and babuji are waiting for DM, it was too late and he is not back yet. DM comes there and greets them. Baa asks him if he had food, DM replies yes. Before leaving, Baa says she didn't expect this from him and BB leaves with a cunning smile. DM is confused. He go to his room and see Suraj there. Suraj looks at DM angry. He turns to Santu to say Takec are and he leaves, he turns back and says "Papa you shouldn't have done this to me. DM get more confused and says whats wrong with him. Santu smiles and gets up to take his clothes out. She asks him to go freshen up. Later DM comes out and asks what was Suraj telling. Santu smiles and go to switch on the Subhi music. She says Suraj is angry because he became a chacha first and then a bada-bhai. DM is surprised and he comes to her and asks her if its true, she says yes. DM gives a sigh of relief and he is all smiling and he hugs her. He tells her, it will be a DAUGHTER. They remain embraced for a while and tears of joy running down their cheeks.

*****THE END*****
Edited by ammoos - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hello all,

My story Bandini bani Sherni is finished now. Hope you all would like it😳
I apologise for any offensive matters found in my work, it was totally unintentional.
Thank you so much for all your support and appreciation🤗Never thought that I could write any fiction😆 thnaks for the inspiration also😃
Its a great feeling to be appreciated😉...
Thanks once again
With loads of love
UMA😊
Edited by ammoos - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Beautiful Uma,
Finally Sanraj are gonna get theirAngel and I hope they will stay happily everafter ...
p.s will miss reading your FF...please write soon...
thank you for the brilliant FF... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Be Blessed
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Posted: 15 years ago
Uma just read all 3 of your ffs and all I can say each one was perfect and beautiful. Am really glad that at the end Sanraj are united together forever and get their long deserved and awaited baby 😳 Ah feeling really sad now, feels like an end of an era 😭 but you ended your ffs beautifully and big hugs to you for your wise and brilliant ideas 🤗will miss coming on to the forum and not seeing your ffs, sad times, good time, fun times,laughs, high drama, I hv this strange feeling cant explain it? But this is for you 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow uma good writings they went so fast it was without a trace but i liked all of them very much... i dont understand y ur endin it but the choice is urs.. i wish we cud've get to read abt sanraj Daughter... choo chweet good job dear Muahzzz....
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Posted: 15 years ago
AWWWWWW Uma....read all three of ur FF's together..ur fast..LOVED each an every section, the way the progression of the relationship was shown was just simply beautiful. I couldnt ask for a better ending, sanraj finally having their own bundle of joy...SOOOOO SHWEETT...gonna miss ur FF's...DEY WER AWESOME!!! 👏 🤗
Edited by azna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: anna44

Beautiful Uma,

Finally Sanraj are gonna get theirAngel and I hope they will stay happily everafter ...
p.s will miss reading your FF...please write soon...
thank you for the brilliant FF... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Be Blessed

Hopefully.. Santu deserves her OWN angel baby doll😳
I dont think I'll write again.. am done with my creativity and its empty now😆
Thanks for the encouragement🤗

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