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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: visrom
Short????

If we go by CID is shown for 60 minutes and we write dialogues we will get this much lengthy story only. Minimum to Minimum for good CID story 12-13 Scenes have to be there. I think he took for this story 16 scenes were used if I am not wrong.
For CID story to watch 60 minutes then to read also it has to be same or around it if one starts imagining

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 years ago

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

If we go by CID is shown for 60 minutes and we write dialogues we will get this much lengthy story only. Minimum to Minimum for good CID story 12-13 Scenes have to be there. I think he took for this story 16 scenes were used if I am not wrong.
For CID story to watch 60 minutes then to read also it has to be same or around it if one starts imagining
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arre i meant shorter than d previous one re!! read naa!!! 😆😛

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

You have Daya-Abhi love interests here? 😕

Edited by prabhanarayan - 15 years ago

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: prabhanarayan
You have Daya-Abhi love interests here? 😕

only in 1 scene

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Just finished reading nice one and yes improvement is there from last story one suggestion just put spaces in between and dialogues spoken by person in bold so that it become easy reading and doesn't put strain on eyes as with long scenes where we are reading just looses up if spaces are not there.

For eg:-

Vivek- Jab tum wahaa khare khare Acp sir ko Colaba mein bulaane ke liye phone kiya tha, tab hum sab Madh island mein aaya tha!

Tasha- Aur toh aur! Godown ki aas paas jo sab masked waalon aadmi tha woh sab humaare aadmi tha.

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 years ago

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

okay people... 22 to 26 is my exams so will be really busy...

i had an idea... i will form a plot for my next story... but those who want any type of scene / plot / setting / storyline / characters etc etc but cannot express imaginatively here. or, want me to write with that included, please feel free to pm me. only 1 pm per request btw. i will try to abide by ure request while writing my stories!!! i will try my best too, what with my bad hindi and not much of sense of humour....

drilabh

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prabha.

@prabha.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

@drilabh ALL THE BEST for your exams. I hope you really do well

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: drilabh
okay people... 22 to 26 is my exams so will be really busy...

i had an idea... i will form a plot for my next story... but those who want any type of scene / plot / setting / storyline / characters etc etc but cannot express imaginatively here. or, want me to write with that included, please feel free to pm me. only 1 pm per request btw. i will try to abide by ure request while writing my stories!!! i will try my best too, what with my bad hindi and not much of sense of humour....

drilabh

Why did you bring Purvi? I just hate her....

Story was good.

And all the best for your exams.

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago