SUHAANI/DRILABH'S CID STORIES - Page 2

Originally posted by: drilabh

Ya am not very comfortable in hindi and u are probably used to hindi of those who are good in it or maybe my way of writing hindi was confusing... anyway i will keep this in mind to try and keep the length short and d dialogues less confusing... also wen i tried to post this in one post my net wasnt working properly. so with great difficulty i posted it. maybe d size didnt suit it so d net conked off...
and thanx!!

And i didnt get u regarding 1 word doc thing... i mean i did type it on ms word...

CIDians... do u want me to gv my next stories in less hindi and more in english? my hindi still needs brushing up!😆

Originally posted by: drilabh

CIDians... do u want me to gv my next stories in less hindi and more in english? my hindi still needs brushing up!😆

Use whichever language you are comfortable in. There should be clarity in the dialogues. That's the only requirement.

did u ppl find anything negative? were the new characters good? was asha's comeback a kind of happiness?

Hey dude I like your story very much nice and well articulated....

Hindi problem hai but over all for me it was good

Originally posted by: drilabh

CIDians... do u want me to gv my next stories in less hindi and more in english? my hindi still needs brushing up!😆

Honestly we find it more realistic if the dialogues are in Hindi....you can improve your Hindi this way. Write the story in MS word, ask someone who knows Hindi to make corrections. You can use www.shabdkosh.com to get Hindi words. Then post it here.

Originally posted by: visrom

Honestly we find it more realistic if the dialogues are in Hindi....you can improve your Hindi this way. Write the story in MS word, ask someone who knows Hindi to make corrections. You can use www.shabdkosh.com to get Hindi words. Then post it here.

thanx but at tyms its still difficult for me... i even use google translator and other online tools but somehow d hindi letters are mindboggling. i mean i know d simple letters like ka, kha etc but not complex like sthr or something...

i am trying to keep my next story shorter, tighter and i am using english where i dont feel comfortable using hindi... i love hindi btw... d sound of hindi--aah!

Originally posted by: drilabh

thanx but at tyms its still difficult for me... i even use google translator and other online tools but somehow d hindi letters are mindboggling. i mean i know d simple letters like ka, kha etc but not complex like sthr or something...

i am trying to keep my next story shorter, tighter and i am using english where i dont feel comfortable using hindi... i love hindi btw... d sound of hindi--aah!

No offence to anyone, but quite surprising that even North Indians have trouble with Hindi. I hope you are comfortable with Bengali.

Short????