MN & SG FF Sirf Tum#2 Note: Sequel @ Page 50 - Page 27

Created

Last reply

Replies

396

Views

43.1k

Users

114

Likes

949

Frequent Posters

Senny thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
hey daksha, awwwwwwwww i am so sad that you are ending this ff soon, i am sure you will deal with the parts ahead very nicely. Keep it up and hoping for a positive twist man!
Rafa.LunaPotter thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
Wow..u almost scared me!!
LOL...but awesome ending!
Great going Dakshuu..
Continue soon!!!
bhavana92 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update Daksha! hope ur exam went well....Dia seems 2 have gone away 4 now....wonder if she will come back again....oho.....somebody seems 2 be preggy!😉 in fact, it seems 2 be a double bonanza!😆
shivangi278 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
aweome part daksha,
too gud,
phew....dia is gone...hope she never returns.... 🤢
omg....nups and gunji both are prego..😆
wow....double happiness... 😳
plzzzzzzz continue soon...

Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago
-SupriyaluvsMN- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update Daksha.👏...
Har jaga Good news hi hai... Gunur...being mothers & Dia...went 2 singapore..😃.
luvd it 2 d core...
sad dat d ff wud end soon....but still update it asap.🤗...
-supriya
-Destiny- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome awesome

Congo on becoming a goldie
koolgurl thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
superb cont soooooooon thanxs for PM !!!!
.Daksha. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
Yaah I am updating the last part......
Thank you for all your sweet comments guys....
.Daksha. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
Mayank was shocked to hear that........how can that happen.....he opened the door and entered into the ward......Nupur was resting on the bed........

She turned to see Mayank......and a drop of tear rolled down from her eyes to her cheeks.....both Mayank and Nupur are looking at each other......

Background Song: Tu Ne Jo Naa Kahaa (New York)

(It's the last para of the song..... I was just listening the song.....and it suited the situation so well...so used it)

Aaya woh phir nazar aise, baat chidne lagi phir se
Aankho mein chubhta kal ka dhuaan
Mmmm..mmm…mmm…
Hal tera na hum sa hai, iss khushi mein kyun gam sa hai…
Basne laga kuyn phir woh jahan….
Woh jahan dur jisse gaye the nikal…….
Phir se yaadon ne kar di hai jaise pehal…
Lamha beeta hua, dil dukhaata raha…..
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunta raha…..

Tune jo na kaha, mein woh sunta raha…
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha…
Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar…
Is shehar mein na apna tikana raha…
Durr chahat se mein apni chalta raha…
Bhuj gayi aag thi, dhaag jalta raha….

Mayank came closer to the bed…….his eyes filled with tears…..brimming up…..same is the condition of Nupur……only difference that her tears could not stop and they were flowing out…..Nupur slowly got up from up the bed…… Mayank stepped forward to make her at ease….He took the chair and sat beside her……..both are looking at each other…… Mayank took Nupur's hand in hers….

M (in a very mournful voice): main tumhein kuch nahin hone doonga…..kuch bhi nahin…..

And now the tears that were brimming up…..came out from his eyes down his cheeks….. Nupur removed her hand from Mayank's grip and wiped his tears off……

N (hers too is a mournful voice): Mujhe kuch nahin hoga…..

And tears rolling down her eyes…..but she smiles….

N: Itni aasaani se tumhaara peecha thodi na chodungi…….

M: Nupur…….

And he hugged her…..tightly….as if they don't want to leave each other……they cannot….they are two bodies but one soul…..two hearts beating with the single heart beat…..

But they are crying……

After sometime they break the hug…..both of them wiped each others tears…..

M: ab tum rona band karo……ab tumhein khush rehna chahiye…..hai na…..

And he smiled with his wet eyes…..Nupur shook her head in yes…..smiled…..

M: Main doctor se milkar aata hoon……tum yahin aaram karo…..

Mayank stood up…..turned his face wiped his tears…..took a deep breath…..and went out…..

Outside the ward….

Mrs. Gupta: ab toh khush hai na……

M: Ji…..aap ka bohot thank you…..aap nahin hote toh…..

Mrs. Gupta: Thank you ki koi baat nahin hai….tum log humaare bacchon jaise ho…..

M: ab aap log ghar jaaiye…..main hoon yahaan Nupur ke paas…..

After Mr. and Mrs. Gupta left……Mayank turned to go to Doctor's cabin…..

He is very sad…..he is just thinking…..

M (thinking): Ye ekdum se kaise ho gaya…..zaroor meri hi galti rahi hogi….. main kaise ye sab…..Nupur ki zindagi…..hey bhagwaan….ye kya ho gaya…..par main Nupur ko kuch nahin hone doonga……

And in the meanwhile he reached the reception…..

Mayank was asking the receptionist about the doctor……and then he entered into the doctor's room……

As he entered Samrat and Gunjan came from the path lab side……. Samrat opened the envelope…and he saw the result of the report as positive…..and he jumped with joy…..and hugged Gunjan in the corridor……

S: Yes…..its a baby…..

Gunjan smiled….but she saw everyone was looking at them…..She broke off the hug……

But samrat again pulled her and hugged her…….

G: samrat…..aap……..

S: Main papa banne waala hoon……

He broke off the hug……

S: Ab koi mujhe papa bulaayega……aur tumhein mummy……

Samrat is very happy……and Gunjan too……she is just looking at Samrat and his emotions…..his happiness……

Then he dragged her hand…..and starts moving……

S: jaldi chalo…..mom aur dad ye khabar sun kar kitne khush honge na……

And he started moving fastly…….but he then remebers something…….

S: Aaraam se haan…..aaraam se chalo tum….. (he is very happy…..but at the same time caring too)

They were moving out when Gunjan stopped in front of Nupur's ward…..she was shocked to see her…….

G: Samrat rukiye……Di….di….yahaan kaise…..

Samrat turned and looked back……

It was Nupur on the bed……she was with Anjali….. playing with her……

Samart and Gunjan turned and moved inside……

G: Di tum…..tum yahaan kaise…..sab theek toh hai na…..aur Jiju kahaan hai…… (all in one breath)

S: Mayank kahaan hai……

Nupur looked up….

N: Arre tum log yahaan kaise……sab theek toh hai na….

G: ye humein tumse poochna chahiye…..iss waqt bed par tum ho…..

N: Kuch nahin bas thode chakkar aa gayye the…….aur Mayank doctor se milne gaya hai……aur…..

G: Aur ye……

Gunjan gave the envelope of reports to Nupur…..

Gunjan was very happy…she wanted to share her happiness with Nupur…..but Nupur….she doesn't even know that she should be happy or sad…..she is having Mayank's baby….but would she be there to see him……

Nupur opened up the envelope and saw the reports…. A big smile came on her face…..

N: Ye toh bohot khushi ki baat hai……

And she hugged Gunjan…..

Scene: Doctor's Cabin

D: Jaisa ki maine kaha tha….iss case mein bohot complications hain…..aur upar se Nupur bohot weak hai…….

M: I know doctor…..par saare contraceptive measures liye the…..

D: Hota hai…..sometimes they fail too……

M: Toh main Nupur ko yoon nahin kho sakta…..

D: Its Ok Mr. Sharma….. medical science hai…… aapko bas itna khayal rakhna hai ki patient ko koi tension koi stress…..kuch na ho…..every week checkup ke liye laana padega…..bas….

M (smiled with assuagement): Thanks a lot Doctor…. Aapne meri saari pareshaani door kar di……

D: Of course Mr. Sharma….. par aapko Nupur ki bohot care karni padegi…..and yaah we will try our best ki koi complications naa aayein…..baaki toh upar waala hai….

M: Thank you doctor……and he gets up from the chair….

D: You're welcome and yaah…..congratulations…..

Mayank smiled and came out…..

He is very happy now……very much….opposite to what he felt while coming to the cabin…..

He entered into the ward…..he thought no one would be there and said in a bit loud voice "Everything is fine Nupur"

Samrat Gunjan and Nupur turned to see Mayank…….

G: Kyun kuch gadbad ho gaya tha kya……

Mayank smiled seeing Nupur and then picked up the box of sweets…….and placed a big piece of ladoo into Gunjan's mouth…..

M: Ab toh sab kuch accha hoga….Mausiji……arre aap mausi banne waali hain saali sahiba……

Nupur was happy to see Mayank happy…….

N: Aur aap mausaji……patidev……

M: arre waah…..bumper offer…..ek pe ek free…..

He went and gave a tight hug to Samrat…..

M: Congrats Samrat……

S: To you too Mayank……

After finishing the ladoo…..Gunjan spoke….

G: Arre waah Di….. I am very happy for you……

Nupur smiled…..

N: Main bhi…..

After some talks Samrat and Gunjan left……

Mayank looked at Nupur……he was very happy…..

He came and sat beside Nupur….. holded her hands……

M: ab sab theek hai…..doctor ne kahaa ki koi problem nahin hai……

N: Par pehle toh bola tha ki……

M: Mujhe pata hai…..par unhone kahaa jo complications honge…. Wo dekh lenge……

Toh ab tum apne maathe se ye shikan hataao…..aur ek badi si smile dikhaao……maine kahaa tha na……main tumhein kuch nahin hone doonga…….ab ghar chalein….

Scene: Sehgal House

Samrat and Gunjan enter into the house……

Samrat is extremely happy……he shouted……Mom….and goes to her bedroom….

Samrat's mom was coming out of the room……

Samrat went directly and hugged his mom…..

S: Mom….main papa banne waala hoon…..

Breaks the hug…..

S: Can you believe it……I am very happy…….

Samrat's mom caresses his hairs and smiles…..

SM: Mujhe lag raha tha…..main bohot khush hoon beta…..

Then she goes to Gunjan…..and kissed on her forehead….

SM: Jeeti rahe meri bacchi…..khoob khush reh….

Samrat was standing there and looking at them……

He then goes and gave the news to his Dad who was resting on the bed…..

S: Dad main dad banne waala hoon……huff I can't believe it…..main bohot khush hoon….

D: Haan beta…..ab main bhi apne pote ka chehra dekhna chahta hoon…..

Now everywhere is happiness…..

Five months later……

Scene: Mayank's House

Nupur is resting on the bed…….. Mayank enters wearing aprin and chef's hat……

Forwards a bowl in front of Nupur……

M: Ye rahi aapka favourite Gajar ka halwa…….

Nupur was looking at the bowl very wickedly……

M: arre aise mat dekho…..accha bana hai…..maine taste kar liya hai……

He then takes the spoon and feeds her……

M: Kaisa bana hai…….

Nupur enjoying the delicacy…….

N: Yummy…..bohot accha hai…..

Aur mere chote ustaad kaisa hai……batao….. He puts his hand over her stomach…..

M: Ye laat bohot maarta hai…..

N: Khaani toh mujhe padti hain na……aur tum isse chote ustaad mat bulaaya karo…..isska naam hoga…..

M: Ansh…..

N: nahin….

M: Vansh….

N: nahin….

M: Toh kya kans……

N: Bilkul nahin…..isska naam hoga……MAYUR…..Mayank ka MAY……aur Nupur ka UR…..hamaara Mayur…….

M: Toh tum pakka ho ladka hoga……

N: aur kya….. tumhein bhi toh yahi lagta hai……

M: aur ladki hui toh…..

N: Toh usska naam Mayuri…….

M: Aur meri Angel kahaan hai……

N: Yahin toh thi……khelte khelte pata nahin kahaan chali gayi…….

Mayank gets up from the bed and looks down……

M: Mujhe pata hai…..koi bed ke neeche hai……..pakad liya……

He picks up Anjali…..

M: Aur humaari angel kya khel rahi thi……

A: Meli…..doll……

And shows it to Mayank……

N: Phir ek doll tod di…..

M: Koi baat nahin….hum apni Angel ke liye bilkul ek Angel jaisi doll laayenge…….OK….

Anjali smiles and again runs out from his lap……

Scene: Sehgal House

Samart was standing outside the washroom……

S: Gunjan sab theek toh hai na……

G: Kya theek hai…….kabhi pregnant huye ho????

She is vomitting inside the washroom……

After a while she comes out……

S: Tum theek toh ho na….. main abhi doctor ko bulaata hoon…..

G: Ab issmein doctor ko bulaane ki kya zaroorat hai……aise samay mein ulti aati hai……ye doctor ne hi kaha tha…..

S: Accha pehle ye dawaai kha lo…. (giving her some tablets)

G (making a face): Mujhe nahin khaani…..bohot kadvi hai…..

S: Bacchon ki tarah zid mat karo…..aur ye lo…..

Gunjan swallows it…..

S: Ab tum yahaan aaram se baitho….. humaari little princess ko aaram karne do……

G: accha…..aur princess ki mummy ko aaraam nahin chahiye…..

S: Maine kab mana kiya……sab cheez toh mummy hi decide karti hai……princess badi ho kar kya karegi….kya kahegi…..usska naam bhi….

G: Aur kya…… wo meri little princess aur uska naam hoga Neha…..

S: Isska proof toh khud princess de chuki hai…..pichli baar….usse naam pasand bhi tha aur ussne kick bhi kiya tha….

After three months……

Scene: Hospital

Mayank and samrat are waiting outside the Operation Theatre……

Firstly the doctor comes out from Gunjan's OT…….

S: doctor…..

D: aapko ladki huyi hai……

Samrat hugged Mayank…..

S: Main papa ban gaya…..

M: Congats Samrat…..

S: Main Gunjan se mil kar aata hoon……

After that Samrat goes from there…… Mayank is still waiting after two hours….

Anjali: Mummy…..mummy…..

M: Haan beta…..main bhi mummy ka hi intezaar kar raha hoon…..hey bhagwaan sab theek kar dena……

Doctor comes out of the OT…..

M: Nupur theek toh hai na…….

D: Congratulatios it's a boy…… patient ko operate kiya hai….aap unse thodi der mein mil sakte hain…….

Mayank looked up……thanked god……relieved from tension…..happy……

In Gunjan's ward…..

Samrat eneterd….. he was very happy……his eyes were wet…..Gunjan resting on the bed smiled seeing him…..samrat went and picked up the baby…..very gently….

S: My princess……humaari princess…..dekho kitni choti si hai….chote chote haath….main bohot khush hoon……

G: haan Samrat……bilkul aap par gayi hai…..dekhiye wohi smile hai…..

Samrat placed the baby back……and came and hugged Gunjan…..

S: I am feeling on top of the world Gunjan….thank you……

G: Main bhi bohot khush hoon……

In Nupur's ward……

Nupur was still under the effect of anesthesia…..Mayank entered quietly…..

He places Angel on the sofa who slept in the meanwhile……He goes and picks up the baby….. Mayank is very happy……his eyes are wet……

M (to the baby): Aankhein bilkul Nupur ki tarah hain…..badi badi…..

In the meanwhile Nupur gains consciousness…..

Mayank turns and sees Nupur…..

M: ab kaisa lag raha hai Nupur…..

N: Hmm….

She tries to get up…..

M: Tum aaraam karo…..doctor ne tumhein rest karne ko kaha hai…..

He shows the baby to Nupur

M: Ye dekho….humaara Mayur……hain na aankhein tumhaare jaisi bilkul badi badi…..

N: Hmm….aur ye dekho….dekho…mujhe pata tha isske dimples bilkul tumhaari honge….dekho dekho he is smiling……aww…..

Mayank placed the baby back…..and comes and sits beside Nupur…..

M: Main bohot darr gaya tha Nupur…..

N: Kyun….

M: Kuch nahin……

And he hugged her…..

M: Thank you Nupur…..thanks….. (and his eyes are brimming up with tears)

N: Thanks kis baat ka…..aur agar ab aap roye toh na……

Mayank wipes his eyes and breaks the hug…..

M: Main kyun rounga…..

N: Thanks Mayank……wo "Sirf Tum" the jisski wajah se main aaj hoon…..muskura rahi hoon….khush hoon…..

And she hugs him again…..

Khatam ho gaya....haan sach mein.....kal issliye nahin kiya tha warna sab kehte April Fool bana rahi ho......

Ab na mujhe bohot bade..... bohot bade comments chahiye......

Accha Mayur naam kaisa laga..... I want this name in the show too (if it happens)

Aur jo mann kare wo comment karo.....ab tak ka safar kaisa raha "SIRF TUM" ka.....
.Rabia. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
yay first to comment on last part
fabulous update
loved it
nothing bad happens
and loved both mn and sg parts
loved the gajar ka halwa scene
and mayur name is also sweet
and neha is also good
loved the last scene of both the couples
but you ended it 😭
but ending was perfect,mindblowing and fabulous
thanks for pm

hope my comment is longer than usual
Edited by fanofmjht - 15 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

4 months ago

Punishment sequel to destiny of love ( Climax))

Hey there, readers , Just a quick note: I wanted to let you know that since the old module is now locked, I've created a new one for you. You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

6 months ago

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love) Veer Zara SS

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love)Part 1 Thank you my dearest friend Sydell for the beautiful cover page. I dedicate this SS to mili_ai who...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

8 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

9 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

3 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #13 updated episode 971 page 155

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".