MN & SG FF Sirf Tum#2 Note: Sequel @ Page 50 - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
haay Daksha !! Vaari jawa is update pe. This was amazing. I loved it. Its so good to see tht Adhiraj is sucha nice guy and is Dia ki to mai......😡😡😡😡 Uski itni himmat.

Awwwww.the Sajan hug was heavenly. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

thanks for the pm

loads of love

vinu
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Posted: 15 years ago
dia is so mean
i hate her
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice one............
Ohhh!!!!..........Dia is juss too much
bt anywayzz nice update
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazin part dear👏....
luvd Mayur & Sajan dance part.....
really scared 4 Nupur.....
luvd it 2 d core...
Pls update soon...🤗.
-supriya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Next Morning

Scene: Adhiraj House

Whole house silent.......

Dia is moving out of her room with her suitcase and bags........

Adhiraj's arms folded......he is standing quietly.......just staring at her........

A (to the servant): Driver se kaho gaadi nikaale.......

Outside the house.......

Servant puts Dia's bags into the car.......

Adhiraj takes keys from driver and sits on the driving seat........Dia comes and sits beside him on the passenger seat........

Dia thinking about last night........

Dia was crying when they enter into the house.........

A (voice very loud....echoing in the empty house): Mujhe tumse bilkul ye umeed nahin thi........ mujhe sharm aati hai tumhein apni behen kehte huye...... kya haan....kya soch kar tumne ye sab bola...... mujhe tumhaari shakal bhi nahin dekhni hai ab.......

Adhirraj is very angry......he picks up the phone.....and dials his travel agent's number.....

A: Singapore ki ab jo bhi pehli flght ho usski tickets chahiye.......immediately.......

He just says this and switches off the phone very hardly.......

He goes up to his room.......bangs the door very hard.......

Dia is crying sitting on the couch.......

After few minutes Adhiraj comes out.......

A: apna bag pack kar lo.......kal subah 7 baje flight hai........

And he again goes into the room.......

They have reached the airport......

A: airport aa gaya hai.......flight time par hai......ye rahi tumhaari tickets.......

He handed over the tickets to her.......Dia steps out of the car.......

A: I hope ki tum Singapore mein zyaada aaram se rahogi.......

He just says these lines and drives away the car........

Dia with her bags standing outside the airport.......her eyes are wet......she kept looking at the car until it moved out of her sight.......she then takes her bags and goes inside the airport......Flight took off for Singapore.......and Dia too.......

Few weeks later........

Scene: Sehgal House

Gunjan is serving the breakfast to Samrat and his mom....... suddenly she felt some uneasiness and runs away......

S: Kya hua Gunjan......

Samrat gets up from his chair.......

Samrat's mom: Tu baith.....main dekhti hoon......

Gunjan vomited and was coming back........

SM: Kya hua beta.....sab theek toh hai na......

G: pata nahin ekdum se ulti aa gayi......

Samrat's mom smiled.......

Then both of them come back to dining area......

SM: Aaj ka saara kaam ek taraf rakh kar......pehla kaam Gunjan ko hospital le jaa......

S: haan zaroor......

G: Main theek hoon.....

SM: Mujhe pata hai sab theek hai issliye keh rahi hoon.......

Scene: Office

Mayank is working in his cabin......

Phone rings.......

M: Hello..........(shocked) kya......kaise......main abhi aata hoon.......haan bas aa raha hoon......

Mayank comes out of his office......sits in his car....speeds up very fast.......and.....reaches the hospital.......

He saw Mr. Gupta......his neighbour......

M: Kya hua......

G: Main jab flat se bahar aaya.....toh Nupur behosh padi huyi thi......andar chalo....meri patni Nupur ke paas hi hain........

Mayank is very tensed......sweating badly.......

They reach near the ward..... Mrs. Gupta come outside and puts a big ladoo into Mayank's mouth.....

Mrs. Gupta: Le Mayank.......

Mayank was looking at her in a big amazement.......

Mrs. Gupta: Aise kya dekh raha hai ? Papa ban ne ki khushi mein ek laddo nahin kha sakta.....

Mayank was shocked to hear that........how can that happen.....he opened the door and entered into the ward......Nupur was resting on the bed........

She turned to see Mayank......and a drop of tear rolled down from her eyes to her cheeks.....both Mayank and Nupur are looking at each other......

Background Song: Tu Ne Jo Naa Kahaa (New York)

(It's the last para of the song..... I was just listening the song.....and it suited the situation so well...so used it)

Aaya woh phir nazar aise, baat chidne lagi phir se
Aankho mein chubhta kal ka dhuaan
Mmmm..mmm…mmm…

Hal tera na hum sa hai, iss khushi mein kyun gam sa hai…
Basne laga kuyn phir woh jahan….
Woh jahan dur jisse gaye the nikal…….
Phir se yaadon ne kar di hai jaise pehal…
Lamha beeta hua, dil dukhaata raha…..
Khamaka bewaja khwaab bunta raha…..

Tune jo na kaha, mein woh sunta raha…
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha…
Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar…
Is shehar mein na apna tikana raha…
Durr chahat se mein apni chalta raha…
Bhuj gayi aag thi, dhaag jalta raha….

I know its short.......par abhi paper de kar aayi.....phir likha......thak rahi hoon....issliye chota hai......
Aur mera paper bohot accha hua.......
Story mein phir se twist.....but don't worry....ab Nupur zyaada pareshaan nahin rahegi aur aap bhi kyunki Nupur ke saath kya hoga.....ye toh pata nahin par ab iss FF ka end time near aa raha hai........socha aap ko bataa doon.......gussa mat karna.....okies
Arre comment toh karo......ye bhoolne ki cheez nahin hai......aur ye mera original dialouge hai.....😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
hun initial part was scary.but u ended it in an amazing way...loved it to the core.continue soon.😊 lolz.this was my comment 4 the ur last update.and while reading it another update?wowww.let me read it 1st.then i wil get back to comment on it.
Edited by ghtk1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey daksha

arre

what was this

im soooooo happy that

dia is thrown out

by adhi raj himself

shayad sajan ke ghar bhi.............😉

im sooooooooooooo hppy for mayur yaar

im really ver happy

par yeh hua kaise?????

any way loved the song

its ok i understand it short

even i hate exams

but yet u gave

love ya

pebbzzii
Edited by ..pebo.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
i loved it
and loved ki mayank ki jindagi me ek aur khushi aane wali hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow both gunur have a good news can't wait for next part update soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Ohhh Awesome Awesome i hope to see like this in mjht but Nooo how can:)))

Amazing Daksha loved the MayUr part looking into each others eye and the song:)))

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