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Posted: 15 years ago
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its awesome.
👏 plz add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
add meee 2 pm list plz! x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: harshiitii

its awesome.

👏 plz add me to your pm list.

i will add u but

Originally posted by: Ayesha103

add meee 2 pm list plz! x

okie dokie u r added but
chindi chindi coments ni chalenge..........😆
soo coment a long.........😆
Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: meeshti.

i will add u but
okie dokie u r added but
chindi chindi coments ni chalenge..........😆
soo coment a long.........😆

u wont get chindi comments once u decide and update regularly😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: --pie--

u wont get chindi comments once u decide and update regularly😆

ok ok mehak ...
main tumhara ishara samaj gayii😆
i will update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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meeshti u know i suggested u the title and see another topic which is laqunched today is also using the ssame title

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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry i never saw d name of ur topic
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

meeshti u know i suggested u the title and see another topic which is laqunched today is also using the ssame title

yeah i saw ....................
just chill aishu ....

Originally posted by: ISBAHABBASI

sorry i never saw d name of ur topic

its okk ......
now can u pls change the nameeee
noo chating here
Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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,me and chatting hihihi and m cool bechari isha darr gayi lolz i know she didnt did it intentionally , she is a new one hihi now woh forum mein hume ignore karke chalegi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
hey guys ..............
i literally forgot about this ss........
sorry guys...........
i am a litle bit busy in my classes ........
well here is ur update

Prem ka game

Chapter-1

I closed my eyes while lying on the bed to get some sleep. I hold my teddy in my arms close to my heart. When I drifted to sleep I saw something that is not clear to my eyes , it is very black-grey. I saw someone is drinking alcohol in a very crowded place, his eyes were red. It can be seen that a person is suffering from a sharp pain. His eyes can explain his pain, agony and sorrows.

He moved out of that place and walk to the parking area. He moved to a red car and opened the door. He threw his black Armani coat in the car. But suddenly, it started raining. He broke down into tears and started crying his heart out with saying," why did you left me, I loved you so much, then what happened". He ran his hand through his dark brown silky velvety hairs. His brown chocolate eyes were red.

He got up from the ground and started walking to his car. He leaned to the car seat and started his car. He drove his car as fast as he can. His eyes were have the pain with too much frustration and anger. He moved his car steering left without noticing the wrong side board. But suddenly a truck came and hit his car with full force. His car crashed to a tree and he is lying in the car lifeless with his blood river around him. His face resembles mine.

I quickly opened my eyes and screamed," maa ! " I hugged my teddy close to me. I was feeling so scared that I couldn't able to switch on the lights. My throat was all dry, so I search for a glass of water but it fell on the floor that made me more scared.

I screamed." Maa! Preet !! bauji!!.

My room's door opened and a saw maa switching the lights on. She came near me and asked," what happened prem, why are you so scared beta.

I looked here and there and then answered," maa ! I saw that dream again. " Please maa, I don't want to die, I didn't drove a car in my whole life, then why all this is coming to my mind."

Gay3 point of view,

I saw my prem again horrified, I don't know why god this to my son. I touched his face and wipe his tears and made him drink water.

After he got relaxed , I asked him ," prem beta! Where is preet ? I told him to sleep with you na ! then where he is ?

Prem's point of view

I said," he told me that he is going to disco with his girl.............., " I stopped in the middle and thought what did I said just yet.

Then I said sweetly while blinking my eyes," he has gone to his friends house to study."

Mom gave me a stern look and said," prem tell me the truth! Don't act smart"

I quickly got up from the bed and said,"maa! I am saying the truth , he has gone to his friends home to study."

Maa gave me a no no look and said," ok! If you are saying this , then it must be truth.

But let me just talk to preet about his study." Saying this she walked out of the room and picked up the phone to call preet.

I understood that ," preet tu pitega aaj"

I walked behind maa to save preet," maa , maine aapko bataya na ki preet apne friend ke ghar gaya toh aap maan kyu ni leti, mujhe neend ni aa ri , please aap mujhe story heer ranjhe ki story sunao na!!!!

Maa turned and said," prem beta ! main abhi story sunati hun , ek baar preet se baat toh kar lene de".

3rd person's point of view

Prem understaood that maa not gonna listen him, so he ran to take the medicine box and walked to bauji and said, " bauji!! maa didn't took her medicines today."

he saw bauji walked to maa and started scolding her about the medicines and maaa put the phone down to take her medicines.

Seeing this he pick up the phone to call preet , the bell rings and preet pick up the phone , ha! Pb boliye ''

Prem said ," preet jaldi ghar aa !!"

He said," pb ! I m standing at the back door, please open the door for me.

Prem said," ok wait ! I am coming."

Here in the living room gay3 and lalit

Gay3 said," who told you about these medicines"

Lalit answered," your ladla prem ! "

Gay3 looked at lalit in curiousity and said, " now I got what is happening here and walked saw prem walking like a thief to the back door.

Prem is sneaking to the open the back door, he slowly opened the door without making noise.

Preet came in and shake hands with prem and said,"pb! You are great. Thanks for saving me from those oldies. U know na you dangerous they are. Specially maa- the Hitler , unset oh bauji bhi darte hai , hum toh sirf bache hai."

Prem said,"shut up preet! Maa ne sun liya na toh tu gaya"

Prem and preet turned to see gay3 and lalit fuming with anger.

Lalit glared and said, " we are oldies "

Stay tuned!!!!

Lot more to come......

do coment ................

Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago

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