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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Hi mera bachcha......

Mai tu bhool he gaye thi......thanks for reminding....😳😳....Tum samajthi hona,,tumhare
papa mujhe chorte he nahii hai ☺️........

Beautiful Update..Prem is so naughty...😍 and Cute "pulling cheeks" Lovely 😃........
Nice concept..... thats Good taht preet's behavior is good toward his Pb....😃

Continue soon..........ab tu maine Unreserve bhii kar diya....😳

With Lots of Love
Your mommy
Neha🤗

Edited by Additi... - 15 years ago

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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

res.

Finally I am here, look my baccha today I read properly and i m here with my precious comment😳😳.
Anyways towards the update, it was amazingly done, I mean what starting I loved it, so it was the reason why Prem is like this, he had an accident and that accident hover his every night, it was not his nightmare but fatal reality but still I wonder who is the girl for whom Prem was so gloomy n upset and a reason for his accident, it can't be Heer since you mentioned in prologue that she got married to him and later found out that he was mentally challenged or maybe she is but unaware what her love made him to cost, anyways too many predictions and assumptions but no answers😡. And then for present awww Prem's condition was so bad, I feel pity for him, one thing made his life worse
I am so waiting for his angel to arrived and ahhh even in this phase he is still Preet's loving PB who always saves him from his bauji but this time his maa and same old Preet

Nice work, Am waiting for Heer's entry and then no meher, I m tired of meet

Ashlesha

Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago

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sonia7

@sonia7

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

awesome update

preet is so naughty gone to disco

prem is so sweet

i wonder waht will preet get from lalit and gayatri

it was funny when he called gayatri hitler😛

thanks for the pm

update soon

Edited by sonia7 - 15 years ago

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Mehak

@--Mehak--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Sorry Meeshti I totally forgot to unreserve😆was so busy with tests and assignments but as promised, here I am to comment😃 The update was very nicely written!!⭐️⭐️I ma liking how the story if flowing naturally,,,smooth!!👏 Whats up with this dream of Heer??😕Though I got distracted their a little, but it seems as if she has been hurt badly!!lets see what unfolds in the story later😃 I am loving this cutee Prem..He is so childish and I liked how he saved Preet😆😆 The whole family is great!!Even Lalit and Gayatri surprisingly!!😆 Update soon..

Love You,
Mehak😃

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greeshma

@Greeshma....

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

me

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hii meeshti......................

that was awesome update..................... just loved it......................

i couldn't understand the meaning of the dream......................

about the dream i feels like heer is leaving him ( future )......................

may be because of his game he is going to play in the future....................

loved preet's naughtiness and the way prem tries to support him....................

anyway............ great start................ both lovely and suspecious.................

love
greeshu

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Anisha Jayakumar

@anishajk99

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

GREAT UPDATE....OMG PREET IS SOO NAUGHTY.......G3 IS HITLER 😆 ......LOVED PREM'S CARE...........WONDER WAT THESE OLDIES WILL DO TO PREET 😛 .......PLS DO CONT ASAP......