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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome job sweety!!


Loved the first part!!!


Cant wait to read the next part!


Can u plzz pm me when u update!!


Thanks!


PLzz update soon!


Cant wait to find out wht will happen next!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb kali...
I cant wait for the next part...
Its soo hilarious especially musibat..
Haha.. And the beginnin reminded me of HumTum
I am going to read yaadein... Thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Kali

awesome Os..loved the starting..Prem is such a flirt.....reminded me of HumTum Movie.....Sorry for commenting late..Mere exams hai tu is liye....

Hope you continue sooon...

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Buddies!!! Thanks a bunch for such a great response. I really appreciate all your comments and encouragements! Here's the next part so I hope you enjoy it to the fullest! Love you all!!!
p.s. I love Hum Tum so beginning was inspired by that. But the rest might be a little different.
p.s. I love Jay Sean a lot. Totally crazy about "Do You Remember." The title went good with the story line so thought for using it!
p.s. So far, I have only posted the flashback. The present is still to come. Italics part is flashback. Un-italic part will be posted soon. This OS may be like a SS if I am not able to get the entire story though in III parts.
NOW enough bak bak. Read Part II for Do you Remember and DON'T FORGET to comment!!!!!
:: Do You Remember ::
( Part II )
The minute her hand left contact with his hand, he felt a burning desire build up inside him.

All Prem could do was stare at his lonely hand. But her soft voice brought him to his senses again.

"I'm sorry." Heer whispered.

When she looked up to see his reaction to her pardon, she was shocked to see him grinning at her like a goof ball.

"Don't be. I know I'm irresistible." Prem leaned closer towards her and said in a husky tone. He knew that this chick was a whole different story when it came to his flirting. But something about her had gotten into his system. And sadly to say, he was feeling attracted to this behenji.

Heer raised her eyes brows and slightly pushed him back. He was pissing her off now.

"Listen. I don't give a crap about you. Just stay away from me. Apni haad par mat karo." Heer warned him in a light but threatening tone.

And that did it. Prem Juneja shut up. Prem had to register what this girl had just threatened him. This is a first. A girl was able to choke Prem on his own words. Not just that, but Prem was enjoying this. This girl was straight off shunning him out and he was enjoying it.

He shut up for……………the next thirty seconds. And then he got back to annoying her. Something about her made him want to be close to her. And before he knew it, the unknown thought had registered in his mind.

"Is he in love with her?" Prem thought as he looked at her, staring out the window. Was it possible to fall in love at first sight?

::

The next eight to ten hour plane ride had been a disaster for Heer. Whatever she did, be it reading a magazine, drinking her juice, listening to her Ipod, ever single damn thing was interrupted by him.

He constantly made remarks on how pretty she looked. And the odd thing was that she knew that he was just flirting as in to cut the time. Heer didn't know why, but she didn't feel uncomfortable around him. Surprisingly, she felt as if he was shading her from the tortures of the outside world. Weird right? That's what she thought.

::

The flight was a direct flight from Mumbai to New York. Most of the time, the passengers had dozed off. Amongst those passengers included Prem and Heer.

When all the passengers were in deep slumber, a throttling shake from outside the plane woke up each and every passenger. In no time, there were air hostesses running around here and there.

The sudden sound and shake made Heer jerk her eyes open. She saw how the entire plane was shaking and wobbling. An unknown fear gripped upon her and she held onto Prem's hand once again.

Prem had woken up about the same time when Heer had. He has seen the chaotic commotion that had shuck up the entire plane. But what caught his attention the most was the feeling of warm, shivering fingers that were holding onto his wrist. Prem turned to his side to find a scared Heer looking at him. He didn't know why, but put his other hand over her hand and gently squeezed it.

"It's okay. Shayad koi toofan hoga." Prem said with a slight smile. But seeing the fear still present in her eyes, he decided to cheer her up a bit.

"Hey relax. Tumne hi kaha tha na ke tum Mussibat ho unke liye joh tumhare liye Mussibat hai, toh phir yeh daar kis baat ka?" Prem tried to calm her down. But he encountered two adorably angry eyes glaring back at him.

"Sorry. Joke tha." Prem said softly.

::

A minute later, an announcement by the pilot came up.

"Due to the severe threat of invisibility through the dangerous storm, we will have to make an emergency landing at Zurich, Switzerland." The pilot announced.

Load groans spread throughout the plane upon hearing about the sudden change.

Heer couldn't believe it.

"Stupid storm! Isse bhi abhi hi anna tha!" Heer gritted out angrily. Hearing a soft chuckle come out from the person sitting next to her, she noticed her hand.

Once again, she took her hand away from him and whispered back a sorry.

"It's okay. Are you alright?" Prem asked coming back to his true self.

Heer noticed the seriousness in his voice for the first time.

Seeing the surprised look on her face, Prem decided to end his flirting drama in front of her. She had already proven to him that she was not one of those girls who would fall for anyone through just flirting.

"I'm sorry. Mai kuch zyada hi batameez tha." Prem accepted. Heer smiled at the sudden change in his behavior. But that didn't mean that she trusted him. Who was he? A stranger who had been flirting with her?

"Accha. Toh jab flirting se nahi patti toh aab yeh sharif banne ka natak karna hai?" Heer smirked at him.

Hearing her say that, Prem fell into a light chuckle.

"Nahi. Abb koi natak nahi. Mujhe pata chal gaya hai ke Mussibat se panga nahi leena chahiye." Prem grinned at her glowing face.

She smiled at him. But when her glance fell outside the window, he noticed her smile vanish and a frown overcome her face.

The descending flight was freaking her out. Not because she was scared. But because this was delaying her arrival at New York. Even though she was aware of the importance for the delay, she was scared to put foot into a place which she was alien to.

The announcement came on once again and announced that they had landed in Zurich. After another 30 minutes, the plane stopped on land. One by one, passengers were escorted out of the plane and guided into the International Airport of Zurich.

::

Heer sat down on a seat in the airport, near the large glass windows. Fear and sadness was clearly aware on her face.

Why did this have to happen to her? Stupid Plane! Stupid Weather! She kept on mumbling to herself.

But the very next second, she noticed a few men who were sitting across from her. Each one had a disgusting smirk on their face and she could clearly see them checking her out. She took her thin black shawl and wrapped it around her delicate figure. For the next few seconds she tried to ignored their gaze, but then the fact hit her.

She was alone! Alone in an unknown place, surrounded by unknown people.

All she could do was pray. Pray to God to protect her. Pray to him to do something or send someone to help her out. And before she knew it, she felt a familiar warmth brush her left arm.

Her gaze instantly flew up to see the person. Prem. He was sitting next to her. A grin was plastered on his face and he was looking straight at her.

::

Only God knew how he had stopped himself from beating the life out of those freaks. He wanted to pull and twist their eyes into uncountable knots for doing the mistake of laying their eyes on her. He wanted to deform their jaw in such a way that they are never able to form that dirty grin on their face ever again.

But his eyes instantly softened when they fell on her. She was sitting all alone, covering herself with a black shawl. He knew that she was making sure that no one was able to see even a millimeter of her skin.

Prem had never come across such a girl. Every girl that he has seen, of the 21st century, had acted like a complete slut in front of him. And this "Mussibat," was just the total opposite of that.

His mom had always taught him to do what is right and respect everyone. Respecting all women was always top on the list. But Prem never felt the necessity to give his respect. He had never come across a girl who deserved this respect of his.

But Ms. Mussibat deserved it for sure! And he would do everything he can to bring a smile onto her face. The fear and sadness on the face was pricking him. He didn't know why, but his heart told him to do this for her. And for sure, he would.

Don't forget to comment!!! Love ya!

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Posted: 15 years ago
That was such a wonderful part Kali 👏
Love the two sides of Prem's character
Glad Prem is changing the way he thinks after meeting Heer
Thanx for the PM

Look forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
Roking update!!!
Meine mann liya tht ur OS is not like humtum...lol..
A totally different but cool story is coming out of ur genius mind
And i loved the scenes n the feelin tht u descriped
Very good... Thnks
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh!!! awesome update.I love this story.please update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update......really like this true prem
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Posted: 15 years ago
hayee that was a so mixed updt
i found it pretty funny when premeer were in the plane giving kada mukabla to each other llzzz prem is so chweet hahahah and heer is ver annoying really how can she resist him ...
wooh and really jab hero heroine satah hote hai then why the hell this storm interefared i know the reason to bring them more closer ...
wooh and he is even possesive my godddd !!!!


awesum updttt

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