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Angle.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#461

NIce os
waiting for the next part

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Ayesha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#462

Mayank Chandu Sharma !! ......gosh dis name cracked me up 😆

very well written !!

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princess52

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Posted: 15 years ago

#463

hey sanam

amazing ....

simply outsnding

ur really an amazing writer

poor nupur i could feel her pain....n mayank i hope hje realises too soon

n plus he says he says thy r bestfreidb

buti dnt think so coz he cant evn see the tears in her eyes

plzz do update soon

love

habs

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399703

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Posted: 15 years ago

#464

Amazing one!

This is the one you told me init?

Story of millions who hide the love in their heart!

Absolute loved it

x x

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..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#465

hey sanu........

too good os!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it yaar

nupur a tomboy

and mayu a flirt arre wah

best friends forever too cool

oh ijus loved it when sam came back

waiting for nxt part

love ya

pebbzzii

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Rabia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#466

great part
looking forward to next
do cont soon

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Bhavana Bhaskar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#467

wow!the tomboy-flirt love story .....this reminds me of the Taylor Swift song "you belong with me" except that the gal in the song is a geek instead of tomboy.....so it seems like Sam's gonna help Nupur....i'm curious 2 read how he does that.....continue soon sanu....

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@-Ishita-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#468

awesome o.s

really liked it

thanx for the pm

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#469

hey sanam di..sweet OS..it sorta reminded me of Kuch Kuch Hota Hai, which i loved!..

Mayank is a major flirt..n Nupur always dreamt that he loved her..but sad, thats not true..they were best friends..n Nupur acted in front of his GF just to make her jealous..lol..

their banter was silly but sweet!..their friendship is unique and really cutee..

She cried in the washroom bcuz she could neva get him..aww!..n she never said no to him..thats sweet..but maybe he's doin the wrong stuff bcuz of that..

Nupur was fighting with herself..n got hurt..how had she sent SaJan away?..when she went out..n couldn't drive..Sam came to her to console her?..wow..thats nice..

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish