I Love You More--Ridz to Armaan

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Posted: 15 years ago
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A letter from Ridhima to Armaan after they have met and she chose to go back to her husband (atleast for now) and armaan knows that Ridhima is married and is heartbroken.


I LOVE YOU MORE

In words, I try to speak tonight,
I speak, through the words I write,

You are my million dreams come true,
I have many friends, but none like you.

Your voice, your touch, your kiss,
I miss them all.
In your arms, I let go,
Yet I don't fall.

You love me, I know
And I you,
But for us, fate had something else in store,

I'm sorry for all the pain I gave you.
When I broke your heart, know that mine broke too.

As I walk through fate's door,
Your hand I'll have to let go.

But one promise I want you to make me too,
Take care of my heart , cause I'm leaving it with you .

I want you to move on , to live, to be happy , to let go,
But always remember, I love you more.


This is a poem that I wrote inspired from a poem that my friend wrote. I wrote this to express what Ridz as a character would want to tell Armaan after she makes "the decision to stick with what her fate has in store for her".

PS: I am a die hard AR fan and want them to end up together. But its pretty obvious that right now Ridz will choose Sid because of obligation and duty etc. So this poem is only pertaining to the current scenario. In the future it will always be AR 4eva.

Pls reply and let me know what you think.


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FarzuIrani thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i loved it
a brillant post with brillant meaning of love and emotion of Armaan
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetshruti

As I walk through fate's door,
Your hand I'll have to let go.

But one promise I want you to make me too,
Take care of my heart , cause I'm leaving it with you .

I want you to move on , to live, to be happy , to let go,
But always remember, I love you more.

Love the poem....👏👏👏 These quoted words are just perfect fit for what is happeneing.. Ridz is leaving her heart with Armaan.. and yes she will love him more.. regardless of the situation.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome poem but i truely hope Ridz never says this to Armaan...AR have to be together!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: farzanairani

i loved it

a brillant post with brillant meaning of love and emotion of Armaan



Thanks a lot. Though I wrote it as Ridz saying to armaan I think this poem can be reversed as Armaan to Ridz too
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Veena-

Love the poem....👏👏👏 These quoted words are just perfect fit for what is happeneing.. Ridz is leaving her heart with Armaan.. and yes she will love him more.. regardless of the situation.



Thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelTeen

awesome poem but i truely hope Ridz never says this to Armaan...AR have to be together!



AR have to be together at the end.
And you know what my sixth sense tells me that they will
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow, its superb.. I mean SUPERB !! While reading it, my eyes litreally went numb, no amount of words can convey what you conveyed through the poem. I loved it. As for the current scenario, I agree Riddhimma will try to fulfill her duties, but eventually it has to be Armaan and Riddhimma. 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I have no words to express how heartfelt your post is:)
Riddhima loved Only one man in her life and her heart is with him for safekeeping!
Love such posts that understand the underlying essence of AR
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Brilliantly written..

Loved it!!! 👏

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