prt 2 pg 1ff:baytab dilmera khata hai: tum mera ho

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pratigya and kkrishna are married and it is thier suhaag raat time!... sori i dont kwn wot happens wen they were getting married... as i still havent seen becuz pratigya gets aried late in canada as i said b4....., and plz ever1 listen to this song, it is a famous song which will nt be played in todays part bt will soon be playingg in cuming up parts.. here is the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r0PRZn7i0oM

Pratigya siting on bed feeling nervous, tensed and still happy thinking that finally nw no one will bug my family, and they can live in a happy, bt still my poor adrash bhaiya wil hve to live wid komal becuz of her--

juz as pratigya was thinking all this the door opened and she could hear sum1 looking the door, pratigya got chills going down her spinee veri scared and nervously she looked up 2c dat it was none other then krishnaa

Krishna: pratigya aj hum bhoot kushh, jo hum chata ta woh humhai mil gaya-- gives a evil laugh

krishna cums and sits on the bed and picks pratigya's gongat(her viel) up to look at pratigya

krishna: u look reali beauitfull, oh pratigya g hum apsa bhoot pyar karta hain... pratiyga g i love you

Pratigya: krishna--: krishna puts his finger on pratigya lips and says: plz dont talk tonite... as tonite should be a memorable nite for us to chress all our life

Pratigya moves krishnas finger and get off the bedd

Pratigya: hum apsa pyar nhai karta... my marriage to you was juz a comprise juz so my family could live a better life,, bt saldy my adrah bro got stuck wid ur sister for the rest of his life

Krishna: likann-- all those times

Pratigya: wot times?? tricking me into drinking tea with you... and onli i wore that saree was becuz i wanted to c who u were... i did not even nw how u used to look

Krishna: pratigya g likan hum apsa pyar karta hain

Pratigya: pyar! pyar ka mutlub pata hain tum hey?? pyar means giving ur life for sum1, it means scarficing ur happyness for sum1 elses, love... u dont nw the meaning of love... love juz dose nt happen on bed, and after wot you did...shahid mein tumhe maaf kar dayti likan tumne jo mujhai kid--- forget it i feel ashmed even saying itt

Krishna: bt pratigya g

pratigya: juz bequite u made my life a living hell for me and my parents

Krishna: bt i was juz saying...

Pratigya: you have said and done alot so juz stoppp

Krishna: no pratigya g u will have to listen to me... if u could hve juz told me den i would hve neva married yew

Pratigya: wen should i hve told yew, the time wen u treatened at the time i was at my ex- finacnes house... where u said dat if i dont agree wid u, u'll beat him up... which u still did, or should have told you wen we were drinking tea-- the time i neva knew dat u egizted?? or the time wen u kid--

Krishna: pratiyga g i was in love wid you.... infact im still in love wid u... and isnt dat wot girls want juz a man who can love his wife and make her feel specail

Pratiyga: you got that rite makiing me feel specail... you did that by telling the whole world, in my nieghbourhood i was badmaan sirf tumhare wajaah see,,, likan tum to were juz in lovee.. a women juz doesnt need love she need respect as well, which u neva gave mee

Krishna: pratigya g

Pratigya: i said be quite and listen... im married to you and there is nuthing that i can do about that, bt i promise yew that i'll make ur life a living hell da way u made my life a hellingg

Krishna looks stunnedd and sad, and a tear gose down his faceee :(

okayy guyz plz comment gud or bad...idc so i'll nw form where to improve.. and i hve gr8 ideas cuming up in the next part... so plz deal wid even u didnt like the first... which i doubt alot!! hahahaa-- i'll update soon PLZZ COMMENT i'll be waiting to c ur replyz! and plz forgove any of my spelling mistakes!

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Mina H thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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for sum reason pratigya is in the link... plz delete the name of pratigya... and then u will be able to listen to it! sori
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great Beginning! Update soon 😊
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Pls continue! It was nice 😊
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PART 2
komal and adrash's first nite, i was wondering like kriya... wots komals and adrashs name?? amal or ala or korash,, like wot are they calledd...

so in the room of adrashs and komal

adrash cums in thinking wot he has done is gud and is for her sister

komal siting on the bed under her viel thinking krishna bhai i'll neva forgive u made me stuck wid this freakkk goddd help meeee

Adrash: look komal i want to make things clear as i dont love u or like yew, and i neva will, i juz married for the sake of my sister as i love pratigya alott

komal takes off her viel 4om her head and says: THANK GOD u said dat or i was abou to say dat, i juz married to you cuz of krishna bhaiiya, as for sum odd reason he likes ur sister

adrash goes and sits down on his chair and closes his eyes... when he is all of a sudden awaken form sum1 tapping on his shoulder

adrash: wot komal

Komal: where is ur bathroom

adrash for the 1st time looks close at komal and thinks she is nt bad looking infact she is preatyy--

Komal: oyee, i asked u where the hell is ur bathroom? i hve to change these clothes and jewlry is realiii heavyy

adrash: yea i'll show you

komal looks at the bathrooom and turns back to her suitcase to take her clothes out, and adrash goes bac to his chair and closes his eyes

adrash galnces a look towards komal who is strugling to open her suitcase as the zip seems to be stack, adrash closes his eyes bt cant sleep as komal's bangles are going back and fourth back and foruth and zip is making weriod noises adrash gets up to help komal

adrash: her let me help you

komal: why, wot do u thing i cant open a suitcase

adrash: no i juz think that u cant open this 1 cuz it seems to be stack

komal: look there is no need being a hero in my life okay... go back to sleep you basstraa

komal bequites

adrash: wot were u saying...??

komal: i said nuthingg

adrash: tell me wot were u saying??

komal: i was saying bastradd bastrad bas***d

adrash x-cuz me

komal: look go and sit on ur bloody chair...gooo

adrash gets realii mad and and as komal was taking he puts his hand on her mouth to make her shut-up

adrash: i dont nw how u talk at ur home bt her no1 swears so mmind it...

komal get stunned and scaredd

adrash lets go and opens her bag for her and gose back to sit on his chair

komal thinking: wot the hell he thinks about him how dare he touch mee...me KOMAL ohh i'll get bac at him... she takes out her clothes and is going towards the bathroom and veri quitly, bt enough loud so that adrash can hear her say bas***d and runs to the bathroom

adrash thinking: i thot she looked beautiful bt i guess inner beauty means alot then outter, and goes to sleep

komal in the bathroom thinking: godd help me, i guess bhaiiya is having fun as he got married by his own choice

sences shift to kriya

krishna looks sad and stunned after hearing wot pratiyga has to say about him

krishna gose to the door and is abou to open it wen he is stoped

pratigya: where do u think ur going

krishna: since u dont feel the same about me then i guess i shall leave

pratigya: i wish u could leave, bt listen we have to show the world dat we r a happy married couple dat r madly in love wid 1 another, so u'll hve to stay here

krishna: bt where will i sleep??

pratiyga: nt on the bed for sure, why dont u sleep on the floor or the sofa

saying that she finds the bathroom and gose to change her clothes and poor krishna lays down on the bed

back to komal and adrash

komal cums out of the bathroom and lays down on the bed, wen she hears sum weriod tpyes of sound, she looks aorund and it is adrash, shivering form cold

komal: gose to the closet and takes out a blanket for him and then thinks should i give it to him or nt???

she hears him shivering alot, so she dicides to give the blanket on him and goes back to sleep

back to kriya

pratigya cums out and sees dat krishna has fallen a sleep, and sees him shivering as well

pratigya thinks: wot should i do should i give him the blanket or...

pratiyga sees and remote to the A.C and turns the ac speed at the highest speed posible, leaving krishna alone and cold... pratigya goes to the bed and sleeps in the blnaket comfortable

and the nite endss.... hope u guyzz like it plz commentss gud or bad...thanks to evr1 who commented for part 1... thank you!

Edited by Mina H - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Plzz Continue :) Really Liking It
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Pratigya is kinda mean in this one.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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pratigya is so mean :( nice updates
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanksss guyzz, dont wori pratigya will turn lovely dovely wid krishna sooon

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