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Now this is my entry.....
it is Ranveer as a guy hu speaks shudh hindi and Tia as just keep gesdsing......ok.....u might find some dialogues...d way they say it a bit different.....this is a lil noet b4 u read it......
It is a hot summer morning in Maurya.....In a far corner in a room...a girl is in her room looking at her wardrobe and terrefied by the thought that she left her Armani dress at her papa's house.....
d girl has been goin crazy at d thought of it and this is wat she has tosay.....
Tia ne yeh kya kar diya.......Tia to papa ke yahaan njoy karne gayi thi....par Tia ne id trip ko nightmare bana diya.....OH Tia's Bhagwaan(a lil turn).......plzzz Tia ki maddat kijiye
In another room.....there is a young and handsome guy thinking abt d way he will proppose to his lady love....
hum shayad tia ko ek prem khat likh sakte hai.....to hume bina unke naa ka saamna nahi karna padega...bhagwan.....humari naiya par kara do....hum aapke charano mein 11 rupayo ka prasad chadayega....
The boy....Ranveer is so tensed dat he is walking in d corridor and can think abt no one but his love.....Tia...
he thinks of taknig Tia somewhere alone and then very romantically asking her.......but how will he manage to take her out of the skool....but b4 dat he will hav to get Tia's permission...
Hey bhagwan......aap humari baat baat mein pariksha kyon le rahe hai...humne un firangiyon ko to us match mein harra diya tha....to hume itni shakti bhi dijiye ki hum Tia ko apne pyar ka izhaar kar sake....
Ranveer is thinking of his priyatama........wen he dashes into her.....
Tia-ohhhh Tia's bhagwan.....wat has Tia done...adt 2day Tia ne apna priceless Armani dress papa ke yahan chod diya aur ab tia ko is camel de takraana tha.....
Ranveer just cant stop admiring the girl wen he realises dat tia is staring at him in disgust....
Tia-Tia ne socha tha ki tum camel bus thode irritating ho....lekin tum to.......urghhhhhhhhh*angrily*
Ranveer-Tia.....hum maafi chahte hai...humari is gustakhi ke liye parantu hum yeh nahi karna chahte the....hum to apse poochne aaye the ki....
Tia-kya camel.....??tum kya samajhte ho....ki tia tumse impress ho jaayegi........nooooo....tumhari is hindi ke wajah se tia ko apna eye make-up din mein itni baar karna padta hai.....kyonki tumhari wajah se tia ko neend aa jaati hai aur tia ka make-up kharab ho jaata hai....
Ranveer-Tia hume shama kijiye.....hum nahi jante the ki humari maujudgi aapko itni takleef deti hai*disappointed*....hum chalte hai Tia....hum aapko aur takleef nahi de sakte...
Tia-ruko camel.......*in guilt*....Tia tumko sorry kehna chahti hai....Tia ne nahi socha tha ki tia kissi ko itna hurt kar sakti hai...par tia kya kare aaj ka din hi itna bura tha*going on and on and on*......
Ranveer-rukiye tia....hum aapko tabhi maaf karenge agar aap humare saath ek din bitayengi....
Tia-one whole day.......oh Tia's bhagwan...tia kya kare....aaj to tia ko apne hair dresser ke paas jaana hai...
Ranveer-Kripya tia.......hume ek mauka to dijiye....
Tia-fine camel.....one day....
Tia n Ranveer leave d skool n go to a garden withh a nearby lake....
Tia-wow camel.....nice place
Ranveer-shukriya tia.......
now.....tia loves this place soo much dat she starts walking around and lukin at d place....
wen she sudenly trips and falls down.....
ranveer comes to her aid..
Tia-oh tia's bhagwan.....yeh aapne tia ke saath kya kiya....tia ka ankle.......tia ka ankle sprain ho gaya hai.....
Ranveer-tia chup ho jaiye.....hume dekhne deejiye....
Ranveer taked tia's feet in his hands and presses a point somewhere near her ankles....
Tia-oh wow.....ranveer u r a genius...
Ranveer-shukriya tia...
ranveer picka tia up and they luk into each others eyes...
there is a sweet moment and then ranveer n tia break into a song.......
ore tia...maan bhi le baat mori.........mohe pyaar sirf tujhse....tere bin jeeyu to kya jeeyu.....tere neno mein jo kaajal hai....tere bin jeya main hulchul hai.....
Tia-im in love....(luks at ranveer),.........yes im in love.....(shyes away)....
tia n ranveer hug each other...
Ranveer-shukriya tia........hume apnane ke liye........hume aapse beinteha mohabbat hai....aur hum aapko apni chachat ki kasam dete hai ki hum aapse hamesha pyaar karte rahenge.....
Tia-oh ranveer........tum kitne sweet ho.....ranveer tum tia ko bahut pyaar karte ho naa....
ranveer-koi shak tia...
now.......ranveer goes towards tia and slips a ring in her finger.....tia luks at him with tears in her eyes and says...
Tia-ranveer.....u r d best thing dat happened to tia and never leave tia.....tia tumhare bina nahi reh sakegi.....
ranveer-tia....aap humari chahat hai aur aapke pas humara dil hai.......woh dil jo sirf aapke liye dhadhakta hai.....aur aapko ko to hum apni maut ke baad bhi nahi chodenge....
Tia-ranveer.......aisi baatein mat karo....
ranveer-tia.....hum jaante hai ki yeh sab aapke liye bahut chotti si baat hai aur hum aapko woh sab tofein nahi de payenge jiski aap hukdaar hai.....lekin hum aapko abhi is angudhi ke saath sirf yeh de sakte hai....
ranveer gives tia an orchid....
tia-ranveer.....yeh bahut beautiful hai.....and tia ko gifts ki zarurat nahi hai........tia ko sirf tumhari aur tumhare pyaar ki zarurat hai...
and they hug each other.......
ok.......now i know it was baddd.......and kind of "filmi" but i wanted to giv an entry and after my xams n stuff.......alll i had in my head was physics n chemistry and maths........so cud think of nothin better....
it is Ranveer as a guy hu speaks shudh hindi and Tia as just keep gesdsing......ok.....u might find some dialogues...d way they say it a bit different.....this is a lil noet b4 u read it......
It is a hot summer morning in Maurya.....In a far corner in a room...a girl is in her room looking at her wardrobe and terrefied by the thought that she left her Armani dress at her papa's house.....
d girl has been goin crazy at d thought of it and this is wat she has tosay.....
Tia ne yeh kya kar diya.......Tia to papa ke yahaan njoy karne gayi thi....par Tia ne id trip ko nightmare bana diya.....OH Tia's Bhagwaan(a lil turn).......plzzz Tia ki maddat kijiye
In another room.....there is a young and handsome guy thinking abt d way he will proppose to his lady love....
hum shayad tia ko ek prem khat likh sakte hai.....to hume bina unke naa ka saamna nahi karna padega...bhagwan.....humari naiya par kara do....hum aapke charano mein 11 rupayo ka prasad chadayega....
The boy....Ranveer is so tensed dat he is walking in d corridor and can think abt no one but his love.....Tia...
he thinks of taknig Tia somewhere alone and then very romantically asking her.......but how will he manage to take her out of the skool....but b4 dat he will hav to get Tia's permission...
Hey bhagwan......aap humari baat baat mein pariksha kyon le rahe hai...humne un firangiyon ko to us match mein harra diya tha....to hume itni shakti bhi dijiye ki hum Tia ko apne pyar ka izhaar kar sake....
Ranveer is thinking of his priyatama........wen he dashes into her.....
Tia-ohhhh Tia's bhagwan.....wat has Tia done...adt 2day Tia ne apna priceless Armani dress papa ke yahan chod diya aur ab tia ko is camel de takraana tha.....
Ranveer just cant stop admiring the girl wen he realises dat tia is staring at him in disgust....
Tia-Tia ne socha tha ki tum camel bus thode irritating ho....lekin tum to.......urghhhhhhhhh*angrily*
Ranveer-Tia.....hum maafi chahte hai...humari is gustakhi ke liye parantu hum yeh nahi karna chahte the....hum to apse poochne aaye the ki....
Tia-kya camel.....??tum kya samajhte ho....ki tia tumse impress ho jaayegi........nooooo....tumhari is hindi ke wajah se tia ko apna eye make-up din mein itni baar karna padta hai.....kyonki tumhari wajah se tia ko neend aa jaati hai aur tia ka make-up kharab ho jaata hai....
Ranveer-Tia hume shama kijiye.....hum nahi jante the ki humari maujudgi aapko itni takleef deti hai*disappointed*....hum chalte hai Tia....hum aapko aur takleef nahi de sakte...
Tia-ruko camel.......*in guilt*....Tia tumko sorry kehna chahti hai....Tia ne nahi socha tha ki tia kissi ko itna hurt kar sakti hai...par tia kya kare aaj ka din hi itna bura tha*going on and on and on*......
Ranveer-rukiye tia....hum aapko tabhi maaf karenge agar aap humare saath ek din bitayengi....
Tia-one whole day.......oh Tia's bhagwan...tia kya kare....aaj to tia ko apne hair dresser ke paas jaana hai...
Ranveer-Kripya tia.......hume ek mauka to dijiye....
Tia-fine camel.....one day....
Tia n Ranveer leave d skool n go to a garden withh a nearby lake....
Tia-wow camel.....nice place
Ranveer-shukriya tia.......
now.....tia loves this place soo much dat she starts walking around and lukin at d place....
wen she sudenly trips and falls down.....
ranveer comes to her aid..
Tia-oh tia's bhagwan.....yeh aapne tia ke saath kya kiya....tia ka ankle.......tia ka ankle sprain ho gaya hai.....
Ranveer-tia chup ho jaiye.....hume dekhne deejiye....
Ranveer taked tia's feet in his hands and presses a point somewhere near her ankles....
Tia-oh wow.....ranveer u r a genius...
Ranveer-shukriya tia...
ranveer picka tia up and they luk into each others eyes...
there is a sweet moment and then ranveer n tia break into a song.......
ore tia...maan bhi le baat mori.........mohe pyaar sirf tujhse....tere bin jeeyu to kya jeeyu.....tere neno mein jo kaajal hai....tere bin jeya main hulchul hai.....
Tia-im in love....(luks at ranveer),.........yes im in love.....(shyes away)....
tia n ranveer hug each other...
Ranveer-shukriya tia........hume apnane ke liye........hume aapse beinteha mohabbat hai....aur hum aapko apni chachat ki kasam dete hai ki hum aapse hamesha pyaar karte rahenge.....
Tia-oh ranveer........tum kitne sweet ho.....ranveer tum tia ko bahut pyaar karte ho naa....
ranveer-koi shak tia...
now.......ranveer goes towards tia and slips a ring in her finger.....tia luks at him with tears in her eyes and says...
Tia-ranveer.....u r d best thing dat happened to tia and never leave tia.....tia tumhare bina nahi reh sakegi.....
ranveer-tia....aap humari chahat hai aur aapke pas humara dil hai.......woh dil jo sirf aapke liye dhadhakta hai.....aur aapko ko to hum apni maut ke baad bhi nahi chodenge....
Tia-ranveer.......aisi baatein mat karo....
ranveer-tia.....hum jaante hai ki yeh sab aapke liye bahut chotti si baat hai aur hum aapko woh sab tofein nahi de payenge jiski aap hukdaar hai.....lekin hum aapko abhi is angudhi ke saath sirf yeh de sakte hai....
ranveer gives tia an orchid....
tia-ranveer.....yeh bahut beautiful hai.....and tia ko gifts ki zarurat nahi hai........tia ko sirf tumhari aur tumhare pyaar ki zarurat hai...
and they hug each other.......
ok.......now i know it was baddd.......and kind of "filmi" but i wanted to giv an entry and after my xams n stuff.......alll i had in my head was physics n chemistry and maths........so cud think of nothin better....
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
