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Many people might not know me, but I am the girl who post daily caps of KriYa in picture gallery also enjoy making new-sort of creations. Anyways I wanted to share a fan fiction that popped into my mind while I was watching DMG. Just made few changes in Pratigya's family and my story take - with saat phere of Krishna and Pratigya.
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Pratigya's Family
Pratigya Gupta/Singh (married to Krishna like the show & by career-wise she is intern in Sanjeevani Hospital) Portrayed by Pooja Gaur
Dr. Shashank Gupta (Naina's husband - Pratigya, Riddhima and Samrat's father) Portrayed by Mohnish Behl
Naina Gupta (Shashank's wife - Pratigya, Riddhima and Samrat's wife) Portrayed by Monika Singh
Riddhima Gupta (Pratigya's younger sister & Samrat's older sister also intern in Sanjeevani Hospital where she finds her prince charming Armaan Mallik, but hasn't confessed her feelings yet) Portrayed by Jennifer Winget
Samrat Gupta (Youngest member of the family, spoiled by both of his sisters but love them the most. Cool dude of Excel College) Portrayed by Mohit Sengal
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Armaan Mallik (Great friends of Pratigya and Samrat, enjoys bugging Riddhima directly because he loves her a-lot, but hasn't confessed his feelings yet) Portrayed by Karan Singh Grover
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Krishna's family is same like the show, but the difference is Krishna's character is sort of confused figure trapped in family tradition over his own thoughts.
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Chapter One
Kurbaani (Sacrifices)
Many people might not know me, but I am the girl who post daily caps of KriYa in picture gallery also enjoy making new-sort of creations. Anyways I wanted to share a fan fiction that popped into my mind while I was watching DMG. Just made few changes in Pratigya's family and my story take - with saat phere of Krishna and Pratigya.
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Pratigya's Family
Pratigya Gupta/Singh (married to Krishna like the show & by career-wise she is intern in Sanjeevani Hospital) Portrayed by Pooja Gaur
Dr. Shashank Gupta (Naina's husband - Pratigya, Riddhima and Samrat's father) Portrayed by Mohnish Behl
Naina Gupta (Shashank's wife - Pratigya, Riddhima and Samrat's wife) Portrayed by Monika Singh
Riddhima Gupta (Pratigya's younger sister & Samrat's older sister also intern in Sanjeevani Hospital where she finds her prince charming Armaan Mallik, but hasn't confessed her feelings yet) Portrayed by Jennifer Winget
Samrat Gupta (Youngest member of the family, spoiled by both of his sisters but love them the most. Cool dude of Excel College) Portrayed by Mohit Sengal
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Armaan Mallik (Great friends of Pratigya and Samrat, enjoys bugging Riddhima directly because he loves her a-lot, but hasn't confessed his feelings yet) Portrayed by Karan Singh Grover
***
Krishna's family is same like the show, but the difference is Krishna's character is sort of confused figure trapped in family tradition over his own thoughts.
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Chapter One
Kurbaani (Sacrifices)
I've always been perfect daughter and perfect sister in life, but sometimes life plays disgusting game with us and our emotions. I've never imagine I would get married like this (Pratigya closed her eyes while her mother stood behind her while she gets up for the saat pheres). Marriages always bring two people and their family together, but I've only seen fear in my parent's eyes. Half of the time - they are crying over my destiny, but for me its my pratigya to teach Krishna a lesson for messing with her family's legacy.
I snapped out my thoughts when I heard the priest clearing saying to Krishna "place sindoor in kanya's mang (forehead)". I closed my eyes after lowering my head.
Krishna watched his bride lower her head in order for him to place sindoor in her mang, but her eyes spoke different language which his eyes understood but not him clearly. Afterwards priest asked him to place mangalsutra around his bride.
Naina watched her daughter getting married in front of her eyes without any expression or nothing shown throughout the rituals, but hidden her pain somewhere deep down inside her.
Priest asked them to seek blessing from their elders. Pratigya slowly walked by her father (Shashank stood like statue watching his angel take each step slowly recalling their good-old childhood memories) also (in the background plays Voh yaad aayenge, gupchup rulaayenge - 2) Pratigya stops in front of her father "Papa" Shashank looks at his daughter (Doli ke sang mere jab saath jaayenge) Shashank pulls Pratigya into his arms and silently cries along with her, but Pratigya isn't shedding any tears from her eyes only inside her heart (Baba ki rani hoon, aankhon ka paani hoon
Beh jaana hai jise do pal kahaani hoon)
Shashank just stared at Krishna with hatred written over his face but rudely told him "my daughters are my life and if I see signal scratch or tears in my angel's eyes than I won't spare you" Krishna just gave him a-smile assuring him that he will take good care of his Pratigya-ji
Pratigya finally drift apart from her father afterwards walk towards her mother. Naina stares at her angel looking dreadful in front of her. Hasn't cried since the day she agreed to marry Krishna only for the sake of them and today her angel going far away from them and yet she hasn't cried a-bit.
Naina opened her arms for Pratigya (Yeh Ladkiyaan To Maaon Ki Raaniyaan Hain - 2
Meethi Meethi Pyaari Pyaari Yeh Kahaaniyaan Hain) Pratigya hugged her mother - cried along with her inside her heart (Sab Ke Dil Ki Saare Ghar Ki Yeh Raaniyaan Hain - 2
Yeh Chidiyaan Ek Din Phur Se Ud Jaaniyaan Hain
Koi Inka Haath Na Chhode, Koi Inka Dil Na Tode
Te Sachche Rab Diyaan Meherbaaniyaan Hain
Yeh Betiyaan To Baabul Ki Raaniyaan Hain
Meethi Meethi Pyaari Pyaari Yeh Kahaaniyaan Hain)
Pratigya breaks apart from her mother "Maa ek baar main apna pura ghar dekna chati hoon before meri vidaai (Mom for last time I wanna see my house before I leave forever)"
Naina nods her head... Krishna take his scarf of and gives it to Pratigya. Pratigya just stared at him without showing any expression.
Naina walked with Pratigya inside their house. Pratigya recalls her sweet memories with her family members and mostly her siblings who aren't at the wedding due certain reasons. Pratigya remembers how she and Riddhima would fight for last spoonful of ice cream inside the kitchen. She slowly walks toward her younger brother's bedroom. She enters his room and stares at his picture recalling their mini pillow fights with each other or two against one. Tears wanna escape her eye lids but she controlled herself. Afterwards she stopped in front of her and Riddhima's room.
(Flashback)
"Riddhima I can't believe it?" Pratigya sounded excited over good news.
"Same here! It's hard to believe we are upcoming interns in Sanjeevani Hospital" Riddhima hugged her sister.
Pratigya wrapped her arms around Riddhima "I know, slowly each dreams of ours toward Papa is getting slowly accomplished"
Both girls smiled at each other
(End of Flashback)
"Beta, what are you thinking?" Naina asked her daughter after much courage she gathered inside her.
Pratigya looked at her mother "Nothing, just thinking about good times I spend with my family, but now" she takes deep breathe "it shall remain memories that can not be forgotten. Maa, promise me that once Ridzy and Samrat return from their mini vacation they shouldn't come to know about which condition my marriage took place or else they'll be shattered."
Naina read her daughter's eyes before promising "I promise beta" afterwards they hugged again before heading outside where everyone stood silently watching them exit out of Gupta Mansion.
Krishna looked at his wife coming out of her house with her mother, but in her hand she held two items (picture frame and cell phone) afterwards once again hugged her father than her mother for last time.
Background music: Bahena Re saseriya Jata jo jo Papan Na bhinjal dikari to parki thapan Kahevai Bahena re saseriye jata jo jo Papan na bhinjal dikari to parki thapan kahevai bahena re saseriye jata jo jo papan na bhinjai
Pratigya turns around before sitting inside the car with Krishna.
I snapped out my thoughts when I heard the priest clearing saying to Krishna "place sindoor in kanya's mang (forehead)". I closed my eyes after lowering my head.
Krishna watched his bride lower her head in order for him to place sindoor in her mang, but her eyes spoke different language which his eyes understood but not him clearly. Afterwards priest asked him to place mangalsutra around his bride.
Naina watched her daughter getting married in front of her eyes without any expression or nothing shown throughout the rituals, but hidden her pain somewhere deep down inside her.
Priest asked them to seek blessing from their elders. Pratigya slowly walked by her father (Shashank stood like statue watching his angel take each step slowly recalling their good-old childhood memories) also (in the background plays Voh yaad aayenge, gupchup rulaayenge - 2) Pratigya stops in front of her father "Papa" Shashank looks at his daughter (Doli ke sang mere jab saath jaayenge) Shashank pulls Pratigya into his arms and silently cries along with her, but Pratigya isn't shedding any tears from her eyes only inside her heart (Baba ki rani hoon, aankhon ka paani hoon
Beh jaana hai jise do pal kahaani hoon)
Shashank just stared at Krishna with hatred written over his face but rudely told him "my daughters are my life and if I see signal scratch or tears in my angel's eyes than I won't spare you" Krishna just gave him a-smile assuring him that he will take good care of his Pratigya-ji
Pratigya finally drift apart from her father afterwards walk towards her mother. Naina stares at her angel looking dreadful in front of her. Hasn't cried since the day she agreed to marry Krishna only for the sake of them and today her angel going far away from them and yet she hasn't cried a-bit.
Naina opened her arms for Pratigya (Yeh Ladkiyaan To Maaon Ki Raaniyaan Hain - 2
Meethi Meethi Pyaari Pyaari Yeh Kahaaniyaan Hain) Pratigya hugged her mother - cried along with her inside her heart (Sab Ke Dil Ki Saare Ghar Ki Yeh Raaniyaan Hain - 2
Yeh Chidiyaan Ek Din Phur Se Ud Jaaniyaan Hain
Koi Inka Haath Na Chhode, Koi Inka Dil Na Tode
Te Sachche Rab Diyaan Meherbaaniyaan Hain
Yeh Betiyaan To Baabul Ki Raaniyaan Hain
Meethi Meethi Pyaari Pyaari Yeh Kahaaniyaan Hain)
Pratigya breaks apart from her mother "Maa ek baar main apna pura ghar dekna chati hoon before meri vidaai (Mom for last time I wanna see my house before I leave forever)"
Naina nods her head... Krishna take his scarf of and gives it to Pratigya. Pratigya just stared at him without showing any expression.
Naina walked with Pratigya inside their house. Pratigya recalls her sweet memories with her family members and mostly her siblings who aren't at the wedding due certain reasons. Pratigya remembers how she and Riddhima would fight for last spoonful of ice cream inside the kitchen. She slowly walks toward her younger brother's bedroom. She enters his room and stares at his picture recalling their mini pillow fights with each other or two against one. Tears wanna escape her eye lids but she controlled herself. Afterwards she stopped in front of her and Riddhima's room.
(Flashback)
"Riddhima I can't believe it?" Pratigya sounded excited over good news.
"Same here! It's hard to believe we are upcoming interns in Sanjeevani Hospital" Riddhima hugged her sister.
Pratigya wrapped her arms around Riddhima "I know, slowly each dreams of ours toward Papa is getting slowly accomplished"
Both girls smiled at each other
(End of Flashback)
"Beta, what are you thinking?" Naina asked her daughter after much courage she gathered inside her.
Pratigya looked at her mother "Nothing, just thinking about good times I spend with my family, but now" she takes deep breathe "it shall remain memories that can not be forgotten. Maa, promise me that once Ridzy and Samrat return from their mini vacation they shouldn't come to know about which condition my marriage took place or else they'll be shattered."
Naina read her daughter's eyes before promising "I promise beta" afterwards they hugged again before heading outside where everyone stood silently watching them exit out of Gupta Mansion.
Krishna looked at his wife coming out of her house with her mother, but in her hand she held two items (picture frame and cell phone) afterwards once again hugged her father than her mother for last time.
Background music: Bahena Re saseriya Jata jo jo Papan Na bhinjal dikari to parki thapan Kahevai Bahena re saseriye jata jo jo Papan na bhinjal dikari to parki thapan kahevai bahena re saseriye jata jo jo papan na bhinjai
Pratigya turns around before sitting inside the car with Krishna.
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