Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut
Ani 🤗 ,
Was studying and this was perfect to take a break!! I loved it, your description of the angst of lovers, their feeling of helplessness and uncertainty were perfectly captured by you in this piece.
You know in the beginning I was expecting a reason as to why they separated but your brilliant description of their feelings and the emotions did not leave any room for questions at the end I did not care as to why they spent 9 months apart, all I cared was for them to reunite!
You had me at, " For all the reasons I know, and the millions that I don't... For the woman that she is, and the man that she made me.. I love her".....now that you have some time to breathe I expect many more one shots from you.
Doc.. 🤗
love u for this... 😊
I know what u mean about the explanations... Thing is, when I thought of a one shot, I initially started thinking along the lines of how they would meet, and what they would say in terms of how the story is now.. But then I realized it wouldn't work... Mainly because i havent watched the show since september so it doesn't make much sense to me, and also because i cannot accept the way the story has turned out till now... So all i could work with was where dmg left in september.. I just picked armaan and riddhima who came close to facing death with together, only to live and be separated.. And that's what you have here... 😃
And you picked the right lines... they're, by far my fav too... 😃 😃
thanks hun... and we'll see about more one shots... 😆
love ya
ani