'Whole again'- An AR one shot - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@krazyboutkaran- thanks.. yea, this is not where the story is poised right now, so lets see what happens
@cezzuprerna- thanks.. Yes AR need justice in terms of story
@Ankita.. Thanks a lot.. 😊
@Yattri- thanks
@coolgal96- thanks . will do
@meghzz- thanks
@anuja92- thanks.. don't be so sure.. who knows? kuch bhi ho sakta hai.. 😉
@ farzanairani- thanks a lot.. i hoped for it to reached the reader's heart and im so glad it happened
@chahat_i- thanks
@saniya- thanks
@srkbest- thanks
@ jyothi_misri- thanks a lot
@siddhika_ksg- thank you so much...
@k_anjali12- thank u so much hun.. means a lot
@shipraP - thanks, will do
@moni- will definitely write more.. thanks
@ arushi- thank you so much... for your words
@ znbhusain- thanks a lot..... Arish... that's perfect..
@akufull2mad- thank you so much..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ani 🤗 ,
Was studying and this was perfect to take a break!! I loved it, your description of the angst of lovers, their feeling of helplessness and uncertainty were perfectly captured by you in this piece.
You know in the beginning I was expecting a reason as to why they separated but your brilliant description of their feelings and the emotions did not leave any room for questions at the end I did not care as to why they spent 9 months apart, all I cared was for them to reunite!

You had me at, " For all the reasons I know, and the millions that I don't... For the woman that she is, and the man that she made me.. I love her".....now that you have some time to breathe I expect many more one shots from you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

Ani 🤗 ,
Was studying and this was perfect to take a break!! I loved it, your description of the angst of lovers, their feeling of helplessness and uncertainty were perfectly captured by you in this piece.
You know in the beginning I was expecting a reason as to why they separated but your brilliant description of their feelings and the emotions did not leave any room for questions at the end I did not care as to why they spent 9 months apart, all I cared was for them to reunite!

You had me at, " For all the reasons I know, and the millions that I don't... For the woman that she is, and the man that she made me.. I love her".....now that you have some time to breathe I expect many more one shots from you.



Doc.. 🤗
love u for this... 😊
I know what u mean about the explanations... Thing is, when I thought of a one shot, I initially started thinking along the lines of how they would meet, and what they would say in terms of how the story is now.. But then I realized it wouldn't work... Mainly because i havent watched the show since september so it doesn't make much sense to me, and also because i cannot accept the way the story has turned out till now... So all i could work with was where dmg left in september.. I just picked armaan and riddhima who came close to facing death with together, only to live and be separated.. And that's what you have here... 😃

And you picked the right lines... they're, by far my fav too... 😃 😃
thanks hun... and we'll see about more one shots... 😆
love ya
ani
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aniiii....!!! 🤗
And I am RESERVING this spot before anyone else takes it...I'm pretty late as it is, SORRY!
Got last minute assignments swinging milimetres above my head like lethal swords...once those're done, this box'll be nice and full...😎
Loads of love, and yayyyyy you finally wrote your one-shot!! lol...
Nandini 😃

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