A Valentine Gift to all my friends

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Posted: 19 years ago
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To JP, Lash, and all others,

Beyond Today

The roses you gave me

Withered long back

Sweet nothings you whispered

Blended with other sounds

And the loving fragrance

Faded with time

And the soft touch of your lips

I feel no longer.

This moment swallows

All the charms.

Still,

I remember

That you gave me flowers

That you said you loved me

That you smelled of morning bliss

That It was you who kissed me

And,

It was me who loved you.

Memories, facts and dreams

All blend together

And time is no longer valid

For the notes on my violin

Generates sweet music

The flowers bloom with

The rising sun, and

Withers with twilight

And I remember you

Beyond today, Beyond time.

Have a great moment in love. It will last forever...........😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wooooooooowwwww.. that was so beautiful blue.. thank you so much for the wonderful V-day gift.. it is a real pleasure reading your poems.. do keep posting poems like these.. infact, u are my inspiration.. i simply adore the way words under ur expert guidance take an absolutely stunning form...AWESOME.👏
love ya and take care..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awww Blue...that was so wonderful. 👏 You gals are write so beautifully 😃 Thanks so much. Happy V-day
Take care
Mallika~ 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oh blue that is so sweet of you 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I was speechless in the above post!

Oh Blue

How effortlessly words together you sew

How oh how! I have no clue!

In this world, poets like you there are only few

Blue, I salute you!

Enigsssssssssssss🤗

Awwwww, I am so blessed…The queen of words and the queen of verses are in the same post…

Awwwww……..my lucky day!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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That was awesome Blue! 👏..such a beautiful poem... 😛 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww...that was so sweet 😛

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