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hey evryone i thot that we had enough kriya fans now so that we cn create a fan fiction.....
i dont know whether u will like it or nt bt i just made a small try...😊you people cn add more thngs.....😊
........this is a love story between a simple and beautiful dancer pratigya saxena(pooja gor) and a rich guy krishna thakur(arhaan behl).................where lust turns into love........
characters----------
krishna's family:
- ammaji(krishna's dadi)---kamalika guha thakurta
krishna thakur---arhaan behl
pratigya saxena---pooja gor
thakur sajjan singh(krishna's father)----anupam shyam
thakurayen meera singh(krishna's mom)---jaya bhattacharya
baldev thakur(krishna's big bro)----chetan hansraj
simran thakur(krishna's sister-in-law)---rashmi desai
pratigya's family
- heer saxena(pratigya's bhabi)---additi gupta
pratigya saxena-----pooja gor
aarushi saxena(pratigya's sis)--avantika hundal
shyam ji saxena(pratigya's dad)----shahab khan
antara saxena(pratigya's mom)----saakshi tanwar
kshitij saxena(pratigya's bro)---harshad chopra
others--------
- romeo---kunal karan kapoor
tunva----vinay rajput
chandu---jaydeep suri
raghu---kunal madhiadwala
kabhi ye na puchna.....
hum kitni mohabbat karte hain
part one
pratigya saxena,a simple yet beautiful grl of 23,with simple thots and simple approach towards life...she lives with her family in a small town of allahabad which is less crowded bt not vry peaceful. she has got a wonderful talent of dancing....and evrybody praises her.her parents are really vry fond of her and feels proud. she is requested to perform in all the small concerts and functions which take place in her town and she is well known to almost evrybody...
her family is somewat like a joint family bt nt vry big...
shyam ji saxena,her dad is a retired teacher...bt he still continues teaching young kids in his house.he is a man of principles and pratigya is the apple of his eye...
pratigya's mom,antara saxena has been a house wife all her life and she is really happy with it...all her responsibilities revolves around the family and its members....and she evn does nt hve to cope up with any in-laws and both of her in-laws died before her marriage....so she is happy and contented.
pratigya's bro,kshitij saxena,a dashing handsome young man is also a vry good person by heart.he loves his parents and his sisters a lot and feels responsible for them...he works in a bank and earns good money at it.he is married and has a vry beloved beautiful wife,heer saxena..whu is nt only gorgeous bt also a really good helping hand for his mother and a wonderful wife too...
last bt nt the least pratigya's sister aarushi saxena is a terribly cute and fun loving grl and the centre of fun and entertainment in the family.....she is still a student and she studies in college
thus the saxena family may nt be that much big bt its heart is huge and all the neighbours love and adore them....
now we come to krishna's family......
totally contrasting to that of pratigya's krishna family is the centre of all the notorious activities wich takes place in their town. krishna thakur,the spoilt youngest son of thakur sajjan singh is the most notorious guy in the whole town.although his father had sent him to london to study,he did nt like it and has returned back recently,creating prblm for the whole town...he roams about in his bike and creates prblm for anyone whu dares to question him...he runs into anybody bt if they dare to raise their voice krishna teaches him a lesson...evn the police respect him and listen to him as his father has a huge political grip and is a big political leader with a huge fan following....
in spite of all the wrong thngs krishna does have some positive qualities. he never insults or teases the grls of town..he does nt like these thngs as he thnks himself to be different frm evrybody and vry high in position...he solves prblms wen the local folks come to him to ask for his help in matters like love,fights,and quarrels....the local folks respect him a lot and calls him bhaiya...and flatters him a lot...he too,flattered by their responses..sits on the high stairs of an old,ruined temple on one corner of the town and plays cards with 4 of his frnds,raghu,tunva,chandu and romeo...
talking abt krishna's family,frst lets come to his father,thakur sajjan singh----with the appearance of a real dacoit,he is the second head of the thakur family the frst being his mother whum the whole town calls as AMMAJI,her actual name being thakurayan leelawati singh..sajjan singh listens to noone else except to his mother...he is an extreamely power hungry man whu believes in achieving power by hook or by crook..the whole town is afraid of the thakurs and looks up to them,careful of nt doing anythng which might displease them..
the thakurayan,wife of sajjan singh is a better human being by heart...she is caring and treats evn her servant with love and care...sajjan singh hates this attitude of hers and she has to face humiliations now and then becoz of this...
baldev singh,krishna's big brother is a terribly frightening man and he does nt evn wink once beforte killing anybody...his father has given him the duty to to see to the honour of their name and he fulfils evry command of him....
this is what actually krishna's family is wich is less family and more a lion's cave.....
[its the month of month of december and a season of melas and concerts and all types of entertainment....all the members of the entertainment club hve requested pratigya to perform in their annual function and she has agreed happily.it was a sunday afternoon,three days before the performance wen pratigya suddenly found out that she does nt have a suitable dress for her performance....she needed to buy a new lehenga and quickly came to her father to flatter him. her father was then trying to mend his shirt button which had tore off]
pratigya----"papa ye aap kya kar rahe hain...ye sab aapko nhi karna chahiye,chodiye aap". she took the shirt frm his hand and tried to mend the button bt as she was nt used to such household wrk she pricked her finger..
pratigya--"oooff,main bhi na..."
her father smiled--"jise jo kam nhi aata use woh kam karni bhi nhi chahiye..samjhe beta? aap ye chodiye aur hume bataiye ke aaj aapka dil kam par kaise aa gaya...kyu papa ko khush karne ki aur koi rasta nhi hain kya?"
pratigya----kya papa aap hamesha mere kiye karaye pe aise pani kyun dal dete ho...? jaiye mujhe aapse baat nhi karni". she turned away,pretending to be angry...
her father continued laughing ----"kyu beta? thk hai thk hai agar papa ko khush karna chahti ho to jao jakar papa ke liye garam garam pakore banakar khilao...."
pratigya smiled---"abhi layi,par ek shart par"
shyam ji--"shart? kaisi shart?"
pratigya smiled--"agar pakore acchi bani to aap mujhe wohi denge jo main chahti hu,thk hai"
shyam ji---"okay...dun"
she ran into the kitchen where her mom and her bhabi where busy cooking...she ran so fast that at frst she collided with her bhabi,whu was cutting vegetables and knocked the knife of her hands...she turned towards her,and shouted--"kya karti hain??? aur kyun karti hain ? aise tufan ki tarah aane ki waja kya hai?"she stopped prartigya---aur tu kitchen mein kar kya rahi hai?"
pratigya was too excited to speak properly bt she managed---are bhabi bhabi kuch nhi,papa se naya lehenga ke liye paise chaiye...isiliye papa ko makhan lagane ki kimat chuka rahi hu"
heer--matlab?
pratigya--are papa ko pakode bht pasand hain na? isiliye pakore banaungi unke liye
heer--tujhe pakore banani aati hai?
pratigya---nhi.....par main koshish karungi shayad accha ban jaye?
heer pushed her outside the kitchen and said---tu ruk...bahar hi ruk..koi zaroorat nhi hain pakore wakore banane ki...
pratigya cried out---par bhabi........
heer---chup kar aur meri baat sun...main tere liye pakore bana deti hu..tu papa ko bolna ki tune banayi hain..thk hain?
pratigya came and threw her arms aroung her bhabi----i love u bhabi ...u r gret...
she smiled---chal aab zyaada maska mat laga
pratigya's father was vry happy after eating those pakoras and gave her wat she wanted...she went to her room,jumping in joy and strted to get ready to go for shopping..
meanwhile shyamji asked heer---beta ek baat puchu? sach sach batana....
heer--ha bauji puchiye na?
shyam ji smiled---beta ye pakore tumne banayi hain na?
heer couldnt answer,she lowered her eyes.
shyam ji said in a warm voice---mujhe sab pata hain beta aur main tumhri bhavnao ka kadar bhi karta hun par beta pratigya ko ye sab aab se sikhna shuru kar leni chahiye..shaadi ki umar ho gayi hain iski agar ye sab na janegi to sasural mein kya karegi ye ladki?
heer smiled--bauji aap bilkul fikar mat kijie..mai aur ma ise sabkuch sikha denge..sasural wale koi shikayat nhi karenge...waise aapne koi ladka dekha pratigya ke liye?
shyam ji---nhi beta..kahan dekha...par aab soch raha hu antara ji se baat karke pratigya ke liye koi accha rishta dhundna shuru karni padegi...
[the scene ends with heer and shyam ji discussing abt pratigya,pratigya busy getting ready to go for shopping and pratigya's mom busy in the kitchen,unaware of all these thngs...]
the next part is given on the next page
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