Betrayed By Life: THE DEAL:UPDATE PG 65 - Page 30

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

awesome work ,thanks i was lost in the song and ya thx for this ak part, i am damm sure mahi know about kripa or she helping her lets see... but according 2 me Kripa is dead 4 sure ,anagad remember every momnet this was too lovley and then the pinch i love it thanks
and most surprise the lady was kripa ,is he dreaming or thats true wait & watch ,soon update i will

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

heyy- i like the idea of a musical fic thanks! looking forward to the nxt part ! hope not to dissapoint u

this part was reallyy fabbb ! =) thanks

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

nice part.......................

Originally posted by: simi2

hey adi hi

hi how r you hmm , hope fine ha gr8

anyways read the part , it was too tooo good ,hmm , angad in his thoughts of kripa and feeling uncomfortable seeing mahi and shabd , great going hmm that was the plan

and then that concep , cool haa , and he saw kripa ????????? , really , was she there , i m getting confused really want to read it ahead now , you mean kripa is also there ,wait & watch

waiting to read it ahead , please try and update with this soon and haa please more of ar as well , with sk 4 sure

till then take care and thanks for the pm u r welcome

lots of love

simi

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Well...am eagerly w8ing for the next part..... hope not to dissapoint u u c Sujal-Kashish's trip in memory lane...hehe. But I must say....this was a lovely parthanks t....the way u portrayed it was all the more awesum....and specially KYPH song....I love the unusual words me 2...u knw the ones which were played during the serial.....I knw got wat I want to say...hehe. I just loved it....and its a gud idea to keep it musicalthanks ....u c...KYPH was partially on music....and yes....this KK...I knw its a mystery n I need to w8 for that....pls continue soon. i will

Originally posted by: togepe30

Gr8 part ! thanks

Cant wait for the SK part of the story !! hope nto to diaaspoint u

Continue soon !! i will

Luv,

Vandu