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Mehak

@--Mehak--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen
hmm u always reserve and forgettttt mehakkk

AWWW....I am shoo sorry Ashu...I seriously forgot that I didnt unreserve it😆 *hold ears*

Coming to the update...it was fantastically written👏👏...u deserve five stars for that⭐️

Awww...it was such a sweet one...loved their cute little chair chaar😳😳😳

Sorry once again for being late but promise next time aisa nahin hoa😃

Love You, Mehak😳

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#212

Hey friends holi is coming so its something related to colors I know its saddy saddy but still I think u l enjoy it

****HOLI SPECIAL*****

COLOURS OF LOVE

It has been five years since we know each other and we are in love from the last three years and we are married since two years
Time is moving so speedily and life changes so fast
I enjoyed and seen each and every color of life as well as love but as I said life changes, now I can only feel the colors and that's only due to one special person
Every one doesn't have luck like me, I don't know what to say should I laugh or cry?

'

heer was standing near the window in a white churidaar and outside there were people shouting , laughing and now she cant be a part of that crowd as her life has changed , she is changed '

a small drop of tear flowed from her eyes and she remembered the days which were happiest of her life

LAST YEAR HOLI

Prem choooro please no see don't come closer , I l get allergies and will have skin diseases please prem noo

Prem

Rang rang mere rang rang mein rang jayegi tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi sang

Singing the song prem took a handful of red gulaal and came closer to her with a naughty look, heer tried to run away but he caught her from wrist and made her come closer to him by pulling her , he then left her wrist and slipped his one hand to her waist and then with a speed he suddenly brought his hand which was full of colors near heers face , heer in fear closed her eyes as she knows that he will apply all that to her
But heer felt a soft touch on her cheek and she opened the eyes to see him just applying a bit of color on her cheek and staring at her
She could feel his breath then he came closer to her making his gaze shift to her lips heer also moved closer and slowly closed her eyes but after a few minutes when she didn't felt his lips on her she opened her eyes to see once again his angelic face and he was giving he a naughty smile
Prem : hmm hmm {he cleared his throat } this is a public place sweetheart
And saying this he gave a slight kiss on her cheek and ran away flashing a big victory smile
And heer was all left embarrassed , how could she forget others presence and act so idiotically , lolz not her fault his husband is like gifted to make everyone do whatever he wants with just looking at the person , for that smile and look she can do anything or it will be more appropriate to say she have to do anything he wants because she is helpless in his arms

Heer
Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey
Rang rang mere rang rang mein rang jayega tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayega sang

But not this time he have to pay for his deed , heer too got some colors in her hand and went near prem
Heer: darling when u can be mine infront of everyone taking seven rounds around the fire , then we can we can we can '
She repeated those words and went closer to him
We can we can
Prem : say we can kiss each other say plz
Heer: we can we can give each other a tit for tat reaction
Hearing those words prems eyes popped open but in the next blink he was all in all messed up in different shades of colors
And there heer was giggling beside him

Prem
Rang sang mera mil jayega
Ang ang tera khil jayega
Rang sang mera mil jayega
Ang ang tera khil jayega

Heer
Rang sang mera mil jayega
Ang ang tera khil jayega
Rang sang mera mil jayega
Ang ang tera khil jayega

Prem
Ho ooohhh
Rang rang mere rang rang main rang jayegi tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi sang

Both ran after each other and poured the water colors as well as throwed balloons and gulalls at each other
Finally prem got a hold of her from back and twirled her around by swaying her up from the ground and tightening his hand around her waist

Heer
Rango mein hai ishq pyaar

Prem then kept her back to the ground but was not ready to leave her he made her turn slowly by making her hit his chest so that see can face him so heer shyly nudged her nose to his

Prem
Aankhon mein hai mast bahar

Prem bbrought his head down and hitted her forehead with it slowly and then looked into her eyes

Heer
Ho baahon mein hai pehle yaar

Heer hugged his gently and then made her arms move through his muscular body and made them rest at his back

Prem
Arre lamho mein hai intezaar

Prem slowly bent his head and rested it on her shoulder inhaling her sweet scent and murmured {I love u }exhaling his hot breath on her body

Heer
Hoton pe hai ye pukar
dil mein hai darde izhaar
Hoton pe hai ye pukar
dil mein hai darde izhaar

heer broke the hug and then made her hands move around his neck and then she left her hands freely around his neck and pressed a small kiss on his jawbone

prem
Rang rang mere rang rang mein rang jayegi tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi sang

They were so much busy in themselves that they didn't noticed their friends coming towards them with a large bucket full of water and that's it ,it was all splashed on them making them all wet and bringing them back to real life from all their fantasies and they got shocked to see all of them giggling and tthey in embarrasment made some lame excuses and left to be alone somewhere in the side

Prem
Gora sa badan sharmaya

Heer was all wet and her white dress was making her body visible because of its transparency
Prem went to her and moved her hair from her back making her back visible and then placed a soft kiss on her back

Heer
Arre gora sa ye ang khil jaye

Heer got a tingling sensation so she moved away with a half smile and shy look

Prem
Masti bhara mann muskaye

Prem moves his hand through his hair and moves to come to heer but he falls suddenly slipping on the water

Heer
Haste haste hum kho jaye

Heer saw that and started laughing and then she came ahead and gave a hand to prem to make him get up

Prem
Yaadon ko hum sambhale waadon ko hum na bhule
Yaadon ko hum sambhale waadon ko hum na bhule

But prem naughtily holded her hand and pulled her and she too fell on the ground with all her weight on him laying above him

Heer
Rang rang mere rang rang main rang jayega tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayega tu sang

Heer gave him a hit on his chest and got up showing that she is angry

Prem
Heyyy Rang rang mere rang rang main rang jayegi tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi sang

Prem too gets up after her and holded her wrist and dragged her to a place where all colors were kept and he took a pinch of color this time which was red and filled the place where her hair was parted in partition

Heer
Rang sang mera mil jayega ang ang tera khil jayega
Rang sang mera mil jayega ang ang tera khil jayega

Prem
Rang sang mera mil jayega ang ang tera khil jayega
Rang sang mera mil jayega ang ang tera khil jayega
Rang rang mere rang rang main rang jayegi tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi sang
Premeer
Rang rang mere rang rang mein rang jayegi jayega tu rang
Sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi aayega tu sang

And they hugged each other again

'

life was full of colors for them even a year ago but now everything has changed a sudden accident changed everything of her life
it was a Friday night they were coming from a part and it was not even theirs fault the car coming from other side was drove by a drunk driver as per the police report
their car got hitted by that car and everything changed in a moment she don't have colors anymore left for her
she cant see his face , his angelic smile which she knows he doesn't have anymore
well he tries but he is in more pain than her , she cant see the sindoor in her maang anymore

her life is just darkness because that small accident took her sight from her , she cant see anymore

but that doesn't means her life have no colors
its only the way people look her sight has no colors but her life is full of it
he tries everything to make her happy and he is there and till he is there she doesn't want anything else
and she now has another life in her , she Is pregnant and that's another color added to her life
I have every color of love as well as life

her thoughts were broken by the sudden sound of her door opening

and she can surely tell it was him prem coming towards her , his sweet scent , his footsteps she knows every thing about him
she can get wrong in any other case but not when he is coming

prem : heer so u r up ? I was outside, I thought u l be sleeping late as nowadays the sweetheart inside u is making u a sleepy head

heer went ahead and hugged him tightly shading her tears

prem : hey what happened ? come on today is a gr8 day don't cry

heer: I am sorry I cant give u all u should get from life I am sorry

prem : hey don't ever say that u r there for me and that's all I need so plz don't spoil my mood

saying that he placed a pinch of gullal on he maang and then som on her cheek

prem : happy holi darling

then he took heers hand and made her apply some gulaal on his cheek

heer: happy holi

that's all
love aishwarya gayen

I hope u l like it and wont come with bellans , well u r most invited with ballons water filled ones as BURA NA MANO HOLI HAI

Edited by aishwaryagayen - 15 years ago

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#213

hiiiiii aishu ...........

i m the first to coment as usual ...........................😳

see i m ur good reader............😆

awesome os...................

beautifully written................⭐️

loved the flashback .........😊

its shows soo much of loveeee and happiness between prem heer ..........

and offcourse romancee tooo...........😉

keep it writing......................⭐️

Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: --pie--
AWWW....I am shoo sorry Ashu...I seriously forgot that I didnt unreserve it😆*hold ears*
Coming to the update...it was fantastically written👏👏...u deserve five stars for that⭐️
Awww...it was such a sweet one...loved their cute little chair chaar😳😳😳
Sorry once again for being late but promise next time aisa nahin hoa😃
Love You, Mehak😳

awww hey mehak dont be sorry i know u are busy its okkk yaar

aww but u look cute holding ears hihihihih

aww kaash prem juneja mujhe cheertaaa okk ok lets see u keep ur promise or not ??

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Mehak

@--Mehak--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#215

Look I am back to comment...How obedient I am 😆

It was such a cuuttteee update....loved the song u put in, loved their scenes...the last scenee was tooo cute...overall adorable update⭐️

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#216

Lovely OS !

Very beautifully expressed !

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saba khan

@premeeristry

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#217

Buraa na manoh yeh aishu toh houli hai 😆
very good revenge aishu heer ko andha hi kar diyaa.😆
come on yar this is the time of happiness aur tu hai ki vamp bani baithi hai.see for both of us its a nice festival coming on ryt so achaa update dey sakti thi.qair it was masti bhara update.and happy holi to you dear 🤗

love
saba